Pyaar Ki Nishaniyaan! Part 5: Pg 20! - Page 8

Originally posted by: siya..

hi zoah! i read the updates and now m totally in love with this! the suspense really is very intriguing...i really want to know wat that stupid contract was that made prithvi and sanyo to be apart for such long timee...5 years?! and prithvi is not even aware of that?! hope he gets to know soon

update wen can...ramazan mubarak🤗

Hey Zoah!

jus read ur update!

part 1 is pretty sad n full of suspense... i liked the charachs and wanna know wat happens further........

i know Ramadhan is tough bcoz of the fasts n all the extra work as m going thru the same... but in case u hv time...plz do update.... waiting for ur update n plzzz PM if possible...

luv,

Tia

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Hey Zoah!

jus read ur update!

part 1 is pretty sad n full of suspense... i liked the charachs and wanna know wat happens further........

i know Ramadhan is tough bcoz of the fasts n all the extra work as m going thru the same... but in case u hv time...plz do update.... waiting for ur update n plzzz PM if possible...

luv,

Tia

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 1

Rome, Italy! (present days)

A lady standing near the balcony wearing green salwaar kameez! she is holiding the most shocking news of her life! her eyes turned red as she is been crying all night! yes, She is Sanyogita Singhaniya, the successful fashion designer! she is thinking that what is going happen to her when she will be no more! the thought about it, scares her to the death already!

suddenly, a little girl enters the room and is looking for Sanyo! she looks everywhere in the room but there is no sign of sanyo! then, she goes near balcony, and finds sanyo standing there with red teary eyes! she goes near her and pulls sanyo's dupatta with her soft fingers! sanyo turns around wiping her tears!

new entry: Chahat Singhania (Daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Prithvi Singhania!

Sanyo: good morning baccha! aap kab aaye?

Chahat: abhi abhi! aap itni subah yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Sanyo: kuch nahin! bas aise hi!

Chahat: mamma , aap ro rahi thi na? (Chahat asks in her sweet yet concern tone)

Sanyo: nahin to beta! aapko kyu aisa laga?

Chahat: mamma, ur eyes are all red!

Sanyo: nahin beta! woh bas kuch dust chala gaya tha aankhon mein! isliye! (looking at the wall clock) are baccha delho ,kitna waqt ho gaya! aapko school nahin jana kya?

Chahat: yes mamma!

Sanyo: good girl! go and have a shower huni! i will make ur breakfast ok?

Chahat: ok mamma!

Chahat goes to the shower and sanyo enters kitchen! even though she was really successful, she preffered doing her housework on her own! she likes cooking for her daughter and y wouldnt she? Chahat is her only family! she loves her the most in this world, but she is scared that what is going to happen to her when she left! this thought makes her restless day and nights! yes, she is suffering from Brain Tumour! She has not got much time left! The only thing she is worried about now is Chahat! what will she do after Sanyo? Who will look after her? Where will she stay? and the only answer came out from her mind and heart was Prithvi! yes Prithvi, Sanyogita's Husband! but she did not know where he is now?

sanyo comes out of her thoughts! she makes breakfast for chahat!

the phone rings, sanyo goes to pick it up!

Sanyo: hello

person: hi sanyo, nupur here!

Sanyo: hi nupur, kaisi ho?

Nupur: im fine! tu bata?

Sanyo: im fine too!

Nupur: chahat kaisi hai?

Sanyo :woh bhi theek hai! accha bata tu india kab aa rahi hai/

Nupur: agle hafte

Sanyo: really? thats great!

Nupur: haan woh, mayank aur mein holidays kel iye aa rahe hai

Sanyo: ye toh acchi baat hai!

Nupur: i know!

Sanyo: theek hai! i'll come to pick u up at airport k? just email me ur flight details!

Nupur: theek hai! chal bye

Sanyo: bye!

they both hangs up the phone!

here in london:

Nupur hangs up the phone and makes her way towards kitchen! while walking she is lost in her own thoughts!

Nupur (to herself): everything has changed! sanyo badal gayi, prithvi badal gaya! sab kuch badal gaya! kash jo 5 saal pehle huwa woh na hota? us ek toofan ne sab kuch barbaad kar diya! meri best friend ki life destroy ho gayi aur mein kuch bhi nahin kar saki?

she curses herself for supporting sanyo 5 years ago! Sanyo is being punished of living on her daughter away from her family, her parents just because of stupid Contract! just one contract, changed everyone's lives including Sanyo, Prithvi, Nupur, Mayank, Anjali, Rahul and most importantly Chahat! Chahat stayed away from her own father as her father is not even aware of the fact that he has a daughter! Sanyo tries her level best to give Chahat the father's love, but some where she did not succeeded!

Nupur recalls the day when she met Chahat for the first time, 2 years ago!

Falshback:

Nupur comes to Rome to visit Sanyo and especailly Chahat! Nupur enters sanyo's house and sees a little angel playing in the hall with her toys! she goes near chahat and takes her in her arms!

Nupur: hello beta!

Chahat: (in her sweet tone) hello aunty! ( she turns to sanyo and asks) mamma ye kaun hai?

Sanyo: baccha ye aapki mamma ki best friend hai yani aapki masi!

Chahat: hello masi, aap kaha se aaye?

Nupur: hello best! mein london se aayi!

Chahat: aapke saath dada (dad) nahin aaye?

Nupur gets shock hearing this and she turns to sanyo, who is weeping! sanyo told chahat once that her dad is in london for some important work and he will return as soon as he finished his work! Nupur stares at sanyo who is hiding her tears!

Sanyo: (controlling her tears) baccha aapke khane ka time ho gaya! go and eat ur food!

chahat goes from there and sanyo shatters in tears! she hugs nupur tightly and cries her heart out! to her!

Nupur: sambhal apne aapko! (with tears in her eyes0

Sanyo: (still crying) (sobbing) kaise? tu bata mein kaise use batao ki uske dada ko ye bhi nahin pata ki uski ek beti bhi hai?

Nupur makes her sit on the sofa and rests sanyo's head on her shoulder! sanyo calms down after sometimes!

Present:

Nupur: kash ki sab kuch pehle ki tarah ho jata!

suddenly, the phone rings!

so this is the intro part!

hope u like it!

plz do comment!

love Zoah

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

hey zoah...first of all sorry for the late comment

and second ur ff is great and awesome....the way u hav described everything and the way u hav put suspense at the end is fab..the ff is lovely ....and the name chahat...kya baat hai...nice name... plzz update karo...everyone is eagerly waiting for ur wonderful update..and plzzz pm me wen u have updatedd the nxt part

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

aur humara prithvi kaha hai...plz answer...ab aur intezaar nahi hota

(scene changes to Mumbai, India)

a lady running around a little boy in the main hall of Singaniya Mansion! finally after a hard running, she manage to catch him! she makes sit on the black leather sofa! she is Anjali Singhaniya!, the elder daughter in law of Singhaniya family! the 7 years little boy is the only liveliness of this house, Raj, the son of Rahul and Anjali! Raj is the person, because of whom this house is home, otherwise this house is just 4 walls and a roof! beause of him, everyone began to enjoy their lives, after the incident 5 years ago!

Anjali gives him a glass of milk to drink and he refuses saying, its bitter!

Raj: maa, its tooooooooooo bitter! im not having this!
Anjali: shut up and drink it! otherwise u going to be late for the school!
Raj: ok then, mein ready hone ke liye ja raha hoon! (about to get up from the sofa, but anjali gets hold him from the wrist)
Anjali: no my dear! u r not going anywhere until u finish ur milk! get that? (annoyed tone)
Raj: no way mom! plz ab mein bada ho gaya hoon! (acting like a big one)
Anjali: whatever! just finish this plz babes!

a man arrives there, wearing black armani suit and black shinisg boots! he comes and sits next to Raj! he is Rahul Singhaniya!

Rahul: wts up big boy?
Raj: nothing dad, dekho na mom mujhe milk pila rahi hai? (says this making face)