MY FF~ ATUT BANDHAN~ part 7 on pg 5 ud on 4 nov - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
hey moony
lovely update
the way u have wrote the starting ...well i am word less
the update is fabulous
aur ye kya tumne apna update mein suspense dhaal diya
plzz continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
lovely dear...I am adding this Fanfic in the Creative Fanclub thread page 1⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
part3


after 2 years a day before rajat's and vikrant's birthday

Mr Roy was sitting in his office when someone knocks on his door

Mr Roy: yes come inside

Mr Malhotra enter the room

Mr Roy stands up

Mr Roy:o Mr Malhotra aaj aap galat office me aa gaye lagta hai

Mr Malhotra:kyon ye aapka office nahi hai

Mr Roy:nahi mujhe laga aap galti se apne office ki jagah yahaan aa gaye

both laughs

Mr Roy:aur sunaiye yahaan kaise aana hua

Mr Malhotra:ji hum yahaan aapko invite karne aaye hai

Mr Roy:invite?????

(Mr Roy amd Mr Malhotra never had formal talks)

Mr Malhotra:ji kal humari betiyon ka birthday hai to humne ek party rakhi hai usi ke liye...

Mr Roy:i am so sorry but i won't be able to come as we also hav a party at our home

Mr Malhotra giving a confused look

Mr Roy:actually kal mere bhi dono beto ka birthday hai

Mr Malhotra:ye to bahut achi baat hai ........well me soch raha hu kyon na hum humare bacho ka birthday ek saath celebrate kar le ........ A GRAND PARTY

Mr Roy:thats a great idea

and the conversation went on like this

next day at the parties venue

Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra were standing with thier wives

Mr Malhotra:aapke bete kahin nazar nahi aa rahe akhir kahaan hai dono

Mrs Roy:vo dono aapko pary me jahaan bhi gadbad nazar aaye samjh lijiyega wahin hai dono....

everyone laughs

Mr Roy:bhai aapne apni pariyon ko kahaan chupa rakha hai hume bhi to milwaiye unse .......

Mr Malhotra:vo dono bhi yahin kahin party me masti kar rahi hongi....

then suddenly hears the voice of childrens fighting all of them moved in that direction and saw all four of them fighting there

rajat:galti meri nahi tumhari hai samjhi tum

sunaina:ji nahi dekh kar tum nahi chal rahe the

vikrant:ji nahi tum andho ki tarah chal rahi thi

sanaya:meri behen ki koi galti nahi hai saari galti tumhare bhai ki hai samjhe tum

they all tried their best to stop them but failed

sanaya:tum dono bandar na jaane kahaan se aa gaye humari bday party me

rajat:tum dono bandariyan

finally Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra stopped them

Mr Roy:jagada baad me kar lena pehle cake kaat lo

two very big choclate cakes were brought

rajat:ye do cake kyon hai yahaan hum to har baar ek hi kaat te hai

vikrant:pata nahi....

Mrs Roy:beta aaj in dono ka bhi bday hai isliye ye dusra cake inke liye hai

sanaya hears this and says" in dono budhuo ko to ye bhi nahi pata ki ye aakhir kiski bday party me aaye hai .......

sunaina:pagal to aise hi hote hai

rajat as he hears this gets very angry as he was very short tempered

rajat:kya kahaan tumne....

sunaina:pagal

rajat:tumhari itni himmat tumne mujhe pagal kaha tum ruko abhi... he looked here and there and then took a piece of cake and throwed it on sunaina but unfortunately it went directly on sanaya's face she also takes a piece and throws it but this tym it hits vikrant and like this they started fighting and everyone there was laughing badly....

some how Mrs Roy and Mrs Malhotra stopped them and takes them to their houses
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: sinnie

part3


after 2 years a day before rajat's and vikrant's birthday

Mr Roy was sitting in his office when someone knocks on his door

Mr Roy: yes come inside

Mr Malhotra enter the room

Mr Roy stands up

Mr Roy:o Mr Malhotra aaj aap galat office me aa gaye lagta hai

Mr Malhotra:kyon ye aapka office nahi hai

Mr Roy:nahi mujhe laga aap galti se apne office ki jagah yahaan aa gaye

both laughs

Mr Roy:aur sunaiye yahaan kaise aana hua

Mr Malhotra:ji hum yahaan aapko invite karne aaye hai

Mr Roy:invite?????

(Mr Roy amd Mr Malhotra never had formal talks)

Mr Malhotra:ji kal humari betiyon ka birthday hai to humne ek party rakhi hai usi ke liye...

Mr Roy:i am so sorry but i won't be able to come as we also hav a party at our home

Mr Malhotra giving a confused look

Mr Roy:actually kal mere bhi dono beto ka birthday hai

Mr Malhotra:ye to bahut achi baat hai ........well me soch raha hu kyon na hum humare bacho ka birthday ek saath celebrate kar le ........ A GRAND PARTY

Mr Roy:thats a great idea

and the conversation went on like this

next day at the parties venue

Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra were standing with thier wives

Mr Malhotra:aapke bete kahin nazar nahi aa rahe akhir kahaan hai dono

Mrs Roy:vo dono aapko pary me jahaan bhi gadbad nazar aaye samjh lijiyega wahin hai dono....

everyone laughs

Mr Roy:bhai aapne apni pariyon ko kahaan chupa rakha hai hume bhi to milwaiye unse .......

Mr Malhotra:vo dono bhi yahin kahin party me masti kar rahi hongi....

then suddenly hears the voice of childrens fighting all of them moved in that direction and saw all four of them fighting there

rajat:galti meri nahi tumhari hai samjhi tum

sunaina:ji nahi dekh kar tum nahi chal rahe the

vikrant:ji nahi tum andho ki tarah chal rahi thi

sanaya:meri behen ki koi galti nahi hai saari galti tumhare bhai ki hai samjhe tum

they all tried their best to stop them but failed

sanaya:tum dono bandar na jaane kahaan se aa gaye humari bday party me

rajat:tum dono bandariyan

finally Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra stopped them

Mr Roy:jagada baad me kar lena pehle cake kaat lo

two very big choclate cakes were brought

rajat:ye do cake kyon hai yahaan hum to har baar ek hi kaat te hai

vikrant:pata nahi....

Mrs Roy:beta aaj in dono ka bhi bday hai isliye ye dusra cake inke liye hai

sanaya hears this and says" in dono budhuo ko to ye bhi nahi pata ki ye aakhir kiski bday party me aaye hai .......

sunaina:pagal to aise hi hote hai

rajat as he hears this gets very angry as he was very short tempered

rajat:kya kahaan tumne....

sunaina:pagal

rajat:tumhari itni himmat tumne mujhe pagal kaha tum ruko abhi... he looked here and there and then took a piece of cake and throwed it on sunaina but unfortunately it went directly on sanaya's face she also takes a piece and throws it but this tym it hits vikrant and like this they started fighting and everyone there was laughing badly....

some how Mrs Roy and Mrs Malhotra stopped them and takes them to their houses

wow dear, very lovely part.Iye aaj kal ke bacche ,They are too naughty😆.Koi kisi se kam nehi hain.
Waiting for the next part dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
wow moony...fab...jaldi update karo please
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: sinnie

part3


after 2 years a day before rajat's and vikrant's birthday

Mr Roy was sitting in his office when someone knocks on his door

Mr Roy: yes come inside

Mr Malhotra enter the room

Mr Roy stands up

Mr Roy:o Mr Malhotra aaj aap galat office me aa gaye lagta hai

Mr Malhotra:kyon ye aapka office nahi hai

Mr Roy:nahi mujhe laga aap galti se apne office ki jagah yahaan aa gaye

both laughs

Mr Roy:aur sunaiye yahaan kaise aana hua

Mr Malhotra:ji hum yahaan aapko invite karne aaye hai

Mr Roy:invite?????

(Mr Roy amd Mr Malhotra never had formal talks)

Mr Malhotra:ji kal humari betiyon ka birthday hai to humne ek party rakhi hai usi ke liye...

Mr Roy:i am so sorry but i won't be able to come as we also hav a party at our home

Mr Malhotra giving a confused look

Mr Roy:actually kal mere bhi dono beto ka birthday hai

Mr Malhotra:ye to bahut achi baat hai ........well me soch raha hu kyon na hum humare bacho ka birthday ek saath celebrate kar le ........ A GRAND PARTY

Mr Roy:thats a great idea

and the conversation went on like this

next day at the parties venue

Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra were standing with thier wives

Mr Malhotra:aapke bete kahin nazar nahi aa rahe akhir kahaan hai dono

Mrs Roy:vo dono aapko pary me jahaan bhi gadbad nazar aaye samjh lijiyega wahin hai dono....

everyone laughs

Mr Roy:bhai aapne apni pariyon ko kahaan chupa rakha hai hume bhi to milwaiye unse .......

Mr Malhotra:vo dono bhi yahin kahin party me masti kar rahi hongi....

then suddenly hears the voice of childrens fighting all of them moved in that direction and saw all four of them fighting there

rajat:galti meri nahi tumhari hai samjhi tum

sunaina:ji nahi dekh kar tum nahi chal rahe the

vikrant:ji nahi tum andho ki tarah chal rahi thi

sanaya:meri behen ki koi galti nahi hai saari galti tumhare bhai ki hai samjhe tum

they all tried their best to stop them but failed

sanaya:tum dono bandar na jaane kahaan se aa gaye humari bday party me

rajat:tum dono bandariyan

finally Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra stopped them

Mr Roy:jagada baad me kar lena pehle cake kaat lo

two very big choclate cakes were brought

rajat:ye do cake kyon hai yahaan hum to har baar ek hi kaat te hai

vikrant:pata nahi....

Mrs Roy:beta aaj in dono ka bhi bday hai isliye ye dusra cake inke liye hai

sanaya hears this and says" in dono budhuo ko to ye bhi nahi pata ki ye aakhir kiski bday party me aaye hai .......

sunaina:pagal to aise hi hote hai

rajat as he hears this gets very angry as he was very short tempered

rajat:kya kahaan tumne....

sunaina:pagal

rajat:tumhari itni himmat tumne mujhe pagal kaha tum ruko abhi... he looked here and there and then took a piece of cake and throwed it on sunaina but unfortunately it went directly on sanaya's face she also takes a piece and throws it but this tym it hits vikrant and like this they started fighting and everyone there was laughing badly....

some how Mrs Roy and Mrs Malhotra stopped them and takes them to their houses



Wow awesome update sinnie dear....I really enjoyed reading it dear...Thanks a Ton!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
part 4

At Nandini mansion

rajat and vikrant were sitting on the sofa with their heads down and Mrs Roy was standing in front of them with her hands fold and was giving a very angry look to rajat and vikrant while Mr Roy was standing Quite

Mrs Roy:ye kya kiya hai tum dono ne aaj tum dono ko itna bhi nahi pata ki parties me kaise behave karte hai...... >:(

Vikrant:maa humne ku6 nahi kiya vo to un dono ne pehle jhagda shuru kiya tha..........

Rajat:haan maa un dono ne hi shuru kiya tha....

Mrs Roy:mujhe pata hai jhagada kisne shuru kiya hoga aur vese bhi tum dono itne bhi seedhe nahi ho jitna banane ki koshish kar rahe ho........

Mr Roy:ab rehne bhi dijiye na bache hai galti ho gayi ...... jane dijiye

Mrs Roy:aap to chup hi rahiye aaphi ne in dono ko sar par chada rakha hai ........

Mr Roy places a fingure on his lips

Rajat:maa usne pehle mujhe pagal kahaa tha

Mrs Roy:aur tumne cake udha kar fake diya haina........

Rajat:maa vo gussa aa gaya tha

Mrs Roy:(becoming a bit polite)beta apne gusse par control karna sikho.......

Rajat:sorry ma aage se nahi hoga....

vikrant:haan ma sorry aur hum sanaya aur sunaina se bhi sorry maang lenge

Rajat:hum kyon mangenge galti unki thi vo mangengi

Mrs Roy bends down on her knees just too come to rajat's level

Mrs Roy:(in a very polite tone)beta agar hum sorry maang lenge to hum chote nahi ho jaenge mana galti unki thi par thodi to aapki bhi thi na

Rajat:theek hai me sorry maang loonga

same was happening at Mr Malhotra's house

*******************************************************

next day

Mr Malhotra was sitting in his drawing room then the door bell rings

Mr Malhotra:thomas see who's there on the door

A servant comes out and opens the door and Mr Roy with his family was standing

Mr malhotra:thomas who's there

servant:sir its Mr Roy and his Family.............(turns to mr roy)sir plz come inside

Mr Malhotra: Mr Roy welcome... welcome......

Mr Roy comes inside

Mr malhotra:hav a seat..........(turns towards thomas)thomas go and call your mam

thomas goes upstairs and call Mrs Malhotra

Mrs Malhotra:namaste....

Mr malhotra:to aaj yahaan kaise aana hua

Mr Roy:kyon kya hum yahaan nahi aa sakte

Mr Malhotra:aa sakte hai kyon nahi aa sakte......

Mrs:ji bhai saabvo hum kal ke liye maafi mangne aaye hai kal rajat aur vikrant ki wajah se saari party bigad gayi to.......

Mrs M:are aap kyon maafi maang rahi hai isme in dono ki kya galti hai abhi bache to jhgada kar liya aur vese bhi aap un dono ko jitna seedha samjh rahi hai utni vo dono hai nahi....

Mr R:are par vo dono hai kahaan....

Mr M:ji vo dono apne room me hongi......... me abhi bula deta hu...............

Mr M calls out their name and both of them comes running out from their rooms

Mrs M:sanaya sunaina say hi to rajat and vikrant....

sanaya& sunaina(flately):hi

Rajat and vikrant:hi... :)

rajat:kal ke liye sorry...

sunaina:meri taraf se bhi sorry...

sanaya and vikranr also says sorry to each other

rajat & vikrant:frnds...

sunaina & sanaya:ok............ frnds

and their parents were looking at them and smiling

Mr M:chalo ab aap charo bahar jaakar garden me khelo..

all four of them rushes out from the door as if they were waiting for someone to say this

*******************************************************



Edited by sinnie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sinnie

part 4

At Nandini mansion

rajat and vikrant were sitting on the sofa with their heads down and Mrs Roy was standing in front of them with her hands fold and was giving a very angry look to rajat and vikrant while Mr Roy was standing Quite

Mrs Roy:ye kya kiya hai tum dono ne aaj tum dono ko itna bhi nahi pata ki parties me kaise behave karte hai...... >:(

Vikrant:maa humne ku6 nahi kiya vo to un dono ne pehle jhagda shuru kiya tha..........

Rajat:haan maa un dono ne hi shuru kiya tha....

Mrs Roy:mujhe pata hai jhagada kisne shuru kiya hoga aur vese bhi tum dono itne bhi seedhe nahi ho jitna banane ki koshish kar rahe ho........

Mr Roy:ab rehne bhi dijiye na bache hai galti ho gayi ...... jane dijiye

Mrs Roy:aap to chup hi rahiye aaphi ne in dono ko sar par chada rakha hai ........

Mr Roy places a fingure on his lips

Rajat:maa usne pehle mujhe pagal kahaa tha

Mrs Roy:aur tumne cake udha kar fake diya haina........

Rajat:maa vo gussa aa gaya tha

Mrs Roy:(becoming a bit polite)beta apne gusse par control karna sikho.......

Rajat:sorry ma aage se nahi hoga....

vikrant:haan ma sorry aur hum sanaya aur sunaina se bhi sorry maang lenge

Rajat:hum kyon mangenge galti unki thi vo mangengi

Mrs Roy bends down on her knees just too come to rajat's level

Mrs Roy:(in a very polite tone)beta agar hum sorry maang lenge to hum chote nahi ho jaenge mana galti unki thi par thodi to aapki bhi thi na

Rajat:theek hai me sorry maang loonga

same was happening at Mr Malhotra's house

*******************************************************

next day

Mr Malhotra was sitting in his drawing room then the door bell rings

Mr Malhotra:thomas see who's there on the door

A servant comes out and opens the door and Mr Roy with his family was standing

Mr malhotra:thomas who's there

servant:sir its Mr Roy and his Family.............(turns to mr roy)sir plz come inside

Mr Malhotra: Mr Roy welcome... welcome......

Mr Roy comes inside

Mr malhotra:hav a seat..........(turns towards thomas)thomas go and call your mam

thomas goes upstairs and call Mrs Malhotra

Mrs Malhotra:namaste....

Mr malhotra:to aaj yahaan kaise aana hua

Mr Roy:kyon kya hum yahaan nahi aa sakte

Mr Malhotra:aa sakte hai kyon nahi aa sakte......

Mrs:ji bhai saabvo hum kal ke liye maafi mangne aaye hai kal rajat aur vikrant ki wajah se saari party bigad gayi to.......

Mrs M:are aap kyon maafi maang rahi hai isme in dono ki kya galti hai abhi bache to jhgada kar liya aur vese bhi aap un dono ko jitna seedha samjh rahi hai utni vo dono hai nahi....

Mr R:are par vo dono hai kahaan....

Mr M:ji vo dono apne room me hongi......... me abhi bula deta hu...............

Mr M calls out their name and both of them comes running out from their rooms

Mrs M:sanaya sunaina say hi to rajat and vikrant....

sanaya& sunaina(flately):hi

Rajat and vikrant:hi... :)

rajat:kal ke liye sorry...

sunaina:meri taraf se bhi sorry...

sanaya and vikranr also says sorry to each other

rajat & vikrant:frnds...

sunaina & sanaya:ok............ frnds

and their parents were looking at them and smiling

Mr M:chalo ab aap charo bahar jaakar garden me khelo..

all four of them rushes out from the door as if they were waiting for someone to say this

*******************************************************



Wow, wonderful part👏😳.Very nice dear😃😊.Childrens are too cute dear😳😆😊.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: sinnie

part 4

At Nandini mansion

rajat and vikrant were sitting on the sofa with their heads down and Mrs Roy was standing in front of them with her hands fold and was giving a very angry look to rajat and vikrant while Mr Roy was standing Quite

Mrs Roy:ye kya kiya hai tum dono ne aaj tum dono ko itna bhi nahi pata ki parties me kaise behave karte hai...... >:(

Vikrant:maa humne ku6 nahi kiya vo to un dono ne pehle jhagda shuru kiya tha..........

Rajat:haan maa un dono ne hi shuru kiya tha....

Mrs Roy:mujhe pata hai jhagada kisne shuru kiya hoga aur vese bhi tum dono itne bhi seedhe nahi ho jitna banane ki koshish kar rahe ho........

Mr Roy:ab rehne bhi dijiye na bache hai galti ho gayi ...... jane dijiye

Mrs Roy:aap to chup hi rahiye aaphi ne in dono ko sar par chada rakha hai ........

Mr Roy places a fingure on his lips

Rajat:maa usne pehle mujhe pagal kahaa tha

Mrs Roy:aur tumne cake udha kar fake diya haina........

Rajat:maa vo gussa aa gaya tha

Mrs Roy:(becoming a bit polite)beta apne gusse par control karna sikho.......

Rajat:sorry ma aage se nahi hoga....

vikrant:haan ma sorry aur hum sanaya aur sunaina se bhi sorry maang lenge

Rajat:hum kyon mangenge galti unki thi vo mangengi

Mrs Roy bends down on her knees just too come to rajat's level

Mrs Roy:(in a very polite tone)beta agar hum sorry maang lenge to hum chote nahi ho jaenge mana galti unki thi par thodi to aapki bhi thi na

Rajat:theek hai me sorry maang loonga

same was happening at Mr Malhotra's house

*******************************************************

next day

Mr Malhotra was sitting in his drawing room then the door bell rings

Mr Malhotra:thomas see who's there on the door

A servant comes out and opens the door and Mr Roy with his family was standing

Mr malhotra:thomas who's there

servant:sir its Mr Roy and his Family.............(turns to mr roy)sir plz come inside

Mr Malhotra: Mr Roy welcome... welcome......

Mr Roy comes inside

Mr malhotra:hav a seat..........(turns towards thomas)thomas go and call your mam

thomas goes upstairs and call Mrs Malhotra

Mrs Malhotra:namaste....

Mr malhotra:to aaj yahaan kaise aana hua

Mr Roy:kyon kya hum yahaan nahi aa sakte

Mr Malhotra:aa sakte hai kyon nahi aa sakte......

Mrs:ji bhai saabvo hum kal ke liye maafi mangne aaye hai kal rajat aur vikrant ki wajah se saari party bigad gayi to.......

Mrs M:are aap kyon maafi maang rahi hai isme in dono ki kya galti hai abhi bache to jhgada kar liya aur vese bhi aap un dono ko jitna seedha samjh rahi hai utni vo dono hai nahi....

Mr R:are par vo dono hai kahaan....

Mr M:ji vo dono apne room me hongi......... me abhi bula deta hu...............

Mr M calls out their name and both of them comes running out from their rooms

Mrs M:sanaya sunaina say hi to rajat and vikrant....

sanaya& sunaina(flately):hi

Rajat and vikrant:hi... :)

rajat:kal ke liye sorry...

sunaina:meri taraf se bhi sorry...

sanaya and vikranr also says sorry to each other

rajat & vikrant:frnds...

sunaina & sanaya:ok............ frnds

and their parents were looking at them and smiling

Mr M:chalo ab aap charo bahar jaakar garden me khelo..

all four of them rushes out from the door as if they were waiting for someone to say this

*******************************************************





Thanks for the update sinnie...the update was lovely dear...Post the next part soon sweetie!😳😃 😉 👏⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
wow yaar..
hii hello..sorry..ho gaya..heheh....nice ud...

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