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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mirchy

yes darlg tumne meri muh ki baat chinli...i want u 2 show indravati n vikram 2 gther.... n 1 mre suggestion how abt showg arjun hvng kids...actually i thought of tis thng in my fanfic...bt prc has newphews ok sme 2 kids or so.....n thy r vry close 2 prc!!!!n yes i want tat scheming chahchaji back...😆😆😆 n yup darlg i read ur update n im side by side commentg on it!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehraan



hihi..Thankz diii😳😳😳......Diii...nw tht evry1 is romancing...n somppl hav 2 start romancing..lol....is it fair if i say tht Arjun baba is wid kidzz....😆.....wot abt Showing Arjun- Maya chemistry 4 nww....n we can Com up wid an EKTA KAPOOR style leap n thn show evry1z children 2gthr!!!😉...hw abt tht?😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

mirchy...i love u!!where r ur hands... i wud kiss u 4 writg such a wonderful update...OMG i cnt beive it...tis luks so realistic!!how do u manage 2 do it gal????everythg is written so precise n the situations r xplained so nicely as i said b4 im not readg im watchg...it so much xcitement,fun ,drama n romance.

PRC:-
(2 Kana n Sikkandar).
..Sikkandar aur Kana....aap donon
Samar ke sath jao....Usse aap logon ka madad ki zaroorat hogi!😳...Jaayiye!😊
Kana:- Par Maharajjjj....
(Stopz in d middle as PRC Showed a 'STOP' pluckcard wid his handzz!!)😆😉...[Yeh Maharaj Bhi na?....R u tryin 2 make Kana Faint by showing ur 'Galy typ Fingerz'?😲..Hey galzz...hav u eva noticed?...PRC(talkin abt A) has Got nice fingerzz....I mean really long 1zz!!!😳☺️..ahem!ahem! 😳Khabardar.....if som1 stares @ Sanyo's PRC....😳....well..I'm not gonna do nathin wid ppl who stares @ him...I'll definitely make em eat 'Teeki Mirchiezz'....'Hw dare he luk soo smokin Hott n sexy'?😆)
PRC:- Jao Kana.....Meri Fikar mat karo..Arjun aur Pundir mere sath hey
😳
absolutely great!!!tis scene is worth watchg...prc had sme style of ordering n mkng his orders 2 b heard...wow !!i luv him a lot! sheras concern 4 his maharaj ...jus no words even small dialogues conveys a lot...wat i loved most is ur description on prcs hand...haila i was laughng mirchy...i nvr noticed prcs long galy fingers🤣 i shud probaly watch sme videos in utube🤣i wud want him 2 use his long elegant fingers 2 stroke sanyos cheek smetime in ur updatte...promise me tat🤣
Chand:- Heeyy Bhagwan...Mein tho gaye kaam se!!😭😭😭..Ab mein kya karoon?😲..Mujhe tho koi Mantra nahi aata...sivayi kavitaayein!!!😭😭..Meri madat karo ,Mahadev!!😭😭😭.....Warna apne baaki ke zindgi iss Jaichand ke khedkhane mein jeena padega!!😭😭😭......Agar mujhe khed-khane mein daala gaya..tho Karnataki kissi aur ke sath shadi karegi!!!😆(Ohh God.....Kaviraaj...aap bhi na?......U wer concerned abt bein in khedkhana na? nw..beech mein wer did Karnataki's shadi com frm😆..U r Impossible,love!!😛)....(n Chand startz imagining Karnataki's Shadi wid som Random guy!!!!....N jst 4getz tat
chand is such a cutey puupy lover...i can imagine.. are yaar...chand is a brainy guy though he is supposed 2 b mre literate n mre knowledgeble...he must kno smethg...n in tis tense situation hes thnkg abt karnataki...hes 2 much....im waitg 4 him 2 propose soon!
Humara matlab hey....Agle pooranmasi ke din...Koteshwar Mandir ke yatra shuri hota hey...aur Rajkumari ji par aanewali vipti ko..talne keliye...usse Koteshwar mandir akele jaana zaroori heyyy😉.....Aap chahte tho....uss ki doston ko bhi uski sath bhej sakte hoo😃.....Aap mehel mein Hawan karwa deejiye!😳...Shadi se pehle usse wahan jaakar Shiv-Parvati mandir mei Pooja karna hi padegi!!! warnaaaaa....Honii koo..Koooi nahii Taal saktaaa!!!😉
i knew it....i knew it koteshwar yatra will cme smewhere in ur ff...actually im mre intersted 2 kno as 2 wat will happen..tis is one of the best highlight of tis update...wow u hve bought a gud twist 2 tis romance....koteshwar yatra b4 geetg elopement!
Chand:- (Goes near Karnataki ....places his handz on her shoulderz n lukz straight in2 her eyez n tellzzz)....Karnatakii,Prithvi aur Sanyogita ki Prem kahani issi Yatra se shuru hogaya tha...Aur mein chahta hoon ki un donon..Shadi se pehle ek aur baar...Koteshwar Mandir ke Yatra mein Shamil hojaye....Log kehte hey.....agar Pyar karnewalon iss yatra mein Shadi se pehle 3 baar jaaye tho....unke janam janam ka Rishta Pakki hojata hey....Shadi ke 7 phere se 7 janam ka rishta juda jata heyy...Par...Koteshwar Mandir mein 3 baar shadi se pehle jaaoge tho har ek janam mein wo donon ek dusre keliye janam lenge!!!😳..Mein apne saare doston keliye ithna tho kar sakta hoon na?😳...Kyunki Prithvi ki khushiyaan,Sanyogita ke sath rehne se heyy aur Hum doston ki Khushiyan Prithvi ki Khushi mein hey!😳....(Ohh My God....Chand.....U r such chweet heart...hw sweet!!!😳😳😳...How can u b soooo sweeet Chand?😲)...Karnatakiii, Tum bas ek bath ka Dhyan rakhna..Bhabhi ko yeh sab nahi pata chalna chahiye.....na hi Prithvi ko..Kyunki mein yeh ab Mandir pahunchne ke baad unse Batana chahta hoon😃, Kya tum mera sath doge?
oh chand such a sweethart..jus loved tis dialogue a lot....hes doin so much 4 his frend prc n if frends r like him .punder n arjun definately who will not cherish such bond forever...koteshwar yatra is one of my favouraites n i will b happy 2 c the couple spendg time 2ther thre wid all the physics present...isme bi maza hai!!! so chand not informg prc n sanyo...wat a surprise it will b...wish we cud see all tis!!!
Narthki:- Achaaa...Aap ke Sultan Shetan dusra naam hey kya? Sheythani chale koi usse seekhen!!!😳😳😳.....😳Hum abhi aate heyy...aap ethar Rukiyee!!!😳😳😳.....Hum aap keliye Khana lekar aate hey!!!😳😳😳

'SHE ' goez frm thr n straight away goez 2 Prithvi...n takez off 'HER' ghoonghat n we see 'HER ' face'..itz Non other than Mr.Funny Arjun!!!😆Seeing Arjun in a Narthki's Choli n all tht Pundir Burstz out laughing!!😆

Pundir:-
Arjun......Tum bahuth Khubsoorat lag rehe ho!!
Arjun:- Mujhe pata hey..Tumhe kehne ki Koi zaroorat nahi hey!!
i nvr xpected tis...hahha🤣 arjun doin all tis..smewhere the masti of such charcaters went missing post prc leap...arjun the mastikhor n the irritated punder...bt i liked punders laugh...wow i miss all of them...gud job mirchy... i liked tis scene convo of narataki n tadarkhan...how mean tat guy is!!!
PRC getz 😡😡😡....n shoutzzz

PRC:- BAS!!!...ab yeh Chhoohe-billi ka khel mujhse bardasht nahi hotaa....Uss Ghori ko mein maar daaloonga..Maa ko mein aazad karwahi doonga!!!
awwww i miss his shouts...tis is prc...no chuchi billi khel; seedha attack......mirchy well dne ur rightfully doin the justice 2 the characters
Indravati:- Hum thek hey...Hum apni honewali 'Bahan- sasural' se uhi milne chali aayi!!😳😳😳
wat is tis gal up2???its like MAN NA MAN MAI TERA MEHMAN...TIS GOES 4 TAT SCHEMING INDRAVATI!!
well dne mirchy loved the part a lot as it had lot of masala n xcitement...im waitg 4 the nxt update as it luks mre interstg prc teasng arjun...luv u dear..keep it up!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehraan

mirchy...i love u!!where r ur hands... i wud kiss u 4 writg such a wonderful update...OMG i cnt beive it...tis luks so realistic!!how do u manage 2 do it gal????everythg is written so precise n the situations r xplained so nicely as i said b4 im not readg im watchg...it so much xcitement,fun ,drama n romance......aww Thankz a lott diiii....Itz all coz f d reviews u ppl gimme😳😳😳..i jst lve u all soo much!!!😳

PRC:-(2 Kana n Sikkandar)...Sikkandar aur Kana....aap donon
Samar ke sath jao....Usse aap logon ka madad ki zaroorat hogi!😳...Jaayiye!😊
Kana:- Par Maharajjjj....
(Stopz in d middle as PRC Showed a 'STOP' pluckcard wid his handzz!!)😆😉...[Yeh Maharaj Bhi na?....R u tryin 2 make Kana Faint by showing ur 'Galy typ Fingerz'?😲..Hey galzz...hav u eva noticed?...PRC(talkin abt A) has Got nice fingerzz....I mean really long 1zz!!!😳☺️..ahem!ahem! 😳Khabardar.....if som1 stares @ Sanyo's PRC....😳....well..I'm not gonna do nathin wid ppl who stares @ him...I'll definitely make em eat 'Teeki Mirchiezz'....'Hw dare he luk soo smokin Hott n sexy'?😆)
PRC:- Jao Kana.....Meri Fikar mat karo..Arjun aur Pundir mere sath hey
😳
absolutely great!!!tis scene is worth watchg...prc had sme style of ordering n mkng his orders 2 b heard...wow !!i luv him a lot! sheras concern 4 his maharaj ...jus no words even small dialogues conveys a lot...wat i loved most is ur description on prcs hand...haila i was laughng mirchy...i nvr noticed prcs long galy fingers🤣 i shud probaly watch sme videos in utube🤣i wud want him 2 use his long elegant fingers 2 stroke sanyos cheek smetime in ur updatte...promise me tat🤣.....Hihi yaa...evn his handz speak a lott..i mean Gr8 Timing n Body language😳😳😳....I want my charcter PRC 2 b a mixture f Rajjy n Anaz😳😳😳...THtz a perfect Big PRC!!😳😳😳...well..Dii..if u want, i cld provide u wid som vidz!!!😆...Ohh yaa..PROMISE..will com up wid somthin...anywayzz..Yatra is coming!!😉😉😉
Chand:- Heeyy Bhagwan...Mein tho gaye kaam se!!😭😭😭..Ab mein kya karoon?😲..Mujhe tho koi Mantra nahi aata...sivayi kavitaayein!!!😭😭..Meri madat karo ,Mahadev!!😭😭😭.....Warna apne baaki ke zindgi iss Jaichand ke khedkhane mein jeena padega!!😭😭😭......Agar mujhe khed-khane mein daala gaya..tho Karnataki kissi aur ke sath shadi karegi!!!😆(Ohh God.....Kaviraaj...aap bhi na?......U wer concerned abt bein in khedkhana na? nw..beech mein wer did Karnataki's shadi com frm😆..U r Impossible,love!!😛)....(n Chand startz imagining Karnataki's Shadi wid som Random guy!!!!....N jst 4getz tat
chand is such a cutey puupy lover...i can imagine.. are yaar...chand is a brainy guy though he is supposed 2 b mre literate n mre knowledgeble...he must kno smethg...n in tis tense situation hes thnkg abt karnataki...hes 2 much....im waitg 4 him 2 propose soon!....wellll..Hez def intelligent n all tht..itz jst @ tymz he goez hyper!!😆😆😆...Dii...PROPOSE tho door ki bath hey..Chand no tht he gt som feelingz 4 her....but he cant accept..i mean his ego is nt allowing him 2 accept d fact tht he loves her!😉😛
Humara matlab hey....Agle pooranmasi ke din...Koteshwar Mandir ke yatra shuri hota hey...aur Rajkumari ji par aanewali vipti ko..talne keliye...usse Koteshwar mandir akele jaana zaroori heyyy😉.....Aap chahte tho....uss ki doston ko bhi uski sath bhej sakte hoo😃.....Aap mehel mein Hawan karwa deejiye!😳...Shadi se pehle usse wahan jaakar Shiv-Parvati mandir mei Pooja karna hi padegi!!! warnaaaaa....Honii koo..Koooi nahii Taal saktaaa!!!😉
i knew it....i knew it koteshwar yatra will cme smewhere in ur ff...actually im mre intersted 2 kno as 2 wat will happen..tis is one of the best highlight of tis update...wow u hve bought a gud twist 2 tis romance....koteshwar yatra b4 geetg elopement!....Yaaa.....let em hav som fun Sanyo is 24* 7 in mehel na? let her go n njoy!!!😳😳😳..Hawa mein udne ka bahuth shok hey na ,bichari ko?😉
Chand:- (Goes near Karnataki ....places his handz on her shoulderz n lukz straight in2 her eyez n tellzzz)....Karnatakii,Prithvi aur Sanyogita ki Prem kahani issi Yatra se shuru hogaya tha...Aur mein chahta hoon ki un donon..Shadi se pehle ek aur baar...Koteshwar Mandir ke Yatra mein Shamil hojaye....Log kehte hey.....agar Pyar karnewalon iss yatra mein Shadi se pehle 3 baar jaaye tho....unke janam janam ka Rishta Pakki hojata hey....Shadi ke 7 phere se 7 janam ka rishta juda jata heyy...Par...Koteshwar Mandir mein 3 baar shadi se pehle jaaoge tho har ek janam mein wo donon ek dusre keliye janam lenge!!!😳..Mein apne saare doston keliye ithna tho kar sakta hoon na?😳...Kyunki Prithvi ki khushiyaan,Sanyogita ke sath rehne se heyy aur Hum doston ki Khushiyan Prithvi ki Khushi mein hey!😳....(Ohh My God....Chand.....U r such chweet heart...hw sweet!!!😳😳😳...How can u b soooo sweeet Chand?😲)...Karnatakiii, Tum bas ek bath ka Dhyan rakhna..Bhabhi ko yeh sab nahi pata chalna chahiye.....na hi Prithvi ko..Kyunki mein yeh ab Mandir pahunchne ke baad unse Batana chahta hoon😃, Kya tum mera sath doge?
oh chand such a sweethart..jus loved tis dialogue a lot....hes doin so much 4 his frend prc n if frends r like him .punder n arjun definately who will not cherish such bond forever...koteshwar yatra is one of my favouraites n i will b happy 2 c the couple spendg time 2ther thre wid all the physics present...isme bi maza hai!!! so chand not informg prc n sanyo...wat a surprise it will b...wish we cud see all tis!!!...yaa..Chand is choo chweett....i think thiz is d bst dialogue i hav ritten eva!😛..i mean i personally loved Chand thr😳😳😳
Narthki:- Achaaa...Aap ke Sultan Shetan ke dusra naam hey kya? Sheythani chale koi usse seekhen!!!😳😳😳.....😳Hum abhi aate heyy...aap ethar Rukiyee!!!😳😳😳.....Hum aap keliye Khana lekar aate hey!!!😳😳😳

'SHE ' goez frm thr n straight away goez 2 Prithvi...n takez off 'HER' ghoonghat n we see 'HER ' face'..itz Non other than Mr.Funny Arjun!!!😆Seeing Arjun in a Narthki's Choli n all tht Pundir Burstz out laughing!!😆

Pundir:-
Arjun......Tum bahuth Khubsoorat lag rehe ho!!
Arjun:- Mujhe pata hey..Tumhe kehne ki Koi zaroorat nahi hey!!
i nvr xpected tis...hahha🤣 arjun doin all tis..smewhere the masti of such charcaters went missing post prc leap...arjun the mastikhor n the irritated punder...bt i liked punders laugh...wow i miss all of them...gud job mirchy... i liked tis scene convo of narataki n tadarkhan...how mean tat guy is!!!...Yaaa..thtz true...i mean Pundir bcame dead seriouz aftr d leap n Arjun did masti-- but not 2 tht extent....wch old 1 managed 2 do!!😭😭😭..Nw i hope i would b able 2 make em com back thru my script...weellll..i Hope!😳😊
PRC getz 😡😡😡....n shoutzzz

PRC:- BAS!!!...ab yeh Chhoohe-billi ka khel mujhse bardasht nahi hotaa....Uss Ghori ko mein maar daaloonga..Maa ko mein aazad karwahi doonga!!!
awwww i miss his shouts...tis is prc...no chuchi billi khel; seedha attack......mirchy well dne ur rightfully doin the justice 2 the characters....Seedha attaackkkkkk..loved tht word!!!😳😳😳
Indravati:- Hum thek hey...Hum apni honewali 'Bahan- sasural' se uhi milne chali aayi!!😳😳😳
wat is tis gal up2???its like MAN NA MAN MAI TERA MEHMAN...TIS GOES 4 TAT SCHEMING INDRAVATI!!
well dne mirchy loved the part a lot as it had lot of masala n xcitement...im waitg 4 the nxt update as it luks mre interstg prc teasng arjun...luv u dear..keep it up!



INDRAVATI is gonna b irritating!!😉...n Arjunz leg will b pulled by almost evry1!!!😉😉😉..May b Kamlavati aswell!!!😉...well diii..i jst love d way u gimme me review....🤗 Thiz helpz me a lottt..mwaaaaaaaaahhhh...lve ya lodzz diiiii😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Scene 7:- Pyar ke Do naam:ek 'Arjun- Maha Narthki' ek 'Ungli baba'

Recap:- Prithvi became shocked wen he came 2 no tht Ghori has already Ntered Mehel!!!😭...But he neva loses hope. In Kannaujh Unglii baba in4ms Jaichand tht B4 Shadi, Sanyogita has 2 go o hwr own 2 Koteshwar Mandir ke yatra. N He even tellz JC tht he cld sent herBeti wid him...on next Pooranmasi day!!😉...Arjun manages 2 find out d MAKSAT f Ghori wd d help f his prankz!!😳....n @ d same tym, Rajkumari Indravati payz a visit 2 Pritha!!😉

Pritha:-Namaste Rajkumarijii😊....aap yahan kaise?😕...aap theek tho hey na?😊
Indravati:- Hum theek hey...Hum apni honewali 'Bahan-sasural' se Uhi milne chali aayi!😊
Pritha:- 😲kya?😲AAAP...Meri Honne wali..BHa,..BHABHIII?😕..yehh..yeh Kaise?😕
Indravati:- Kya Prithvi ne tumse Kuch bhi nahikaha?😳
Pritha:- Bhaiya....Nahi thoo...kyun...kya hua?😕😕😕
Indravati:- woo..Prithvi humse bahuth pyar karte hey😳😳😳...aur hamse milne Mayamaa ke aashram mein aaya karte they!!😳

(Pritha actually wanted 2 burst out in2 laughter hearing this 'BAKWAZ'..but neva wanted 2 insult er Mehmaan....so she didn't 😉)


Pritha:- acha!!!...Bhaiya hamse ek PARI jaise Rajkumariji ke baare mein bataya thaa...Par wo thooo....ek NANDANI naam k Rajkumari hey😳😳😳...aapka naam tho 'INDRAVATI' hey na?😉
Indravati:- wooo....Yeh sab...yeh sab mein baad mein bataoongi Pritha.....ab mein bas yeh poochne aaya ki is waqt.....Prithvii Dilli mein heyy..ya phir Ajmeer mein?😕
Pritha:- arre.e.yeh kaisa sawaal pooch rahi hey aap?😲...aap hi ne tho kaha tha na ki Bhaiya aap se bahuth pyar karta hey....😉...aur aap ko yeh bhi nahi pata ki..is waqt Bhaiya kahan hey...aur kya kar raha hey?😲😲😲
Indravati:- wooo.........wooo...woo hum...hum...hummmm.....Ujjein se bahar gayi thi..tho ...Prithvi se mil nahi paya!!!😭..Issiliye hum yehan chali aayi!!!😊
Pritha:- Acha...Is waqt Bhaiya...Kissi se nahi mil sakte...wo M.Ghori ke sath Yudh par gaya hey...😊....aap apna Mehel wapis jaayiye......Jab bhaiya aavoge, tab hum usse aap ke baare mein bataoongi!!!.
Indravati:- Nahii...Nahii......Hum....baad mein aakar unse milenge!!!😃...ab hum chelte hey!!!😊
Pritha:- theek hey

Indravati leaves....Pritha couldn't control her laughter n she burst out 😆


Pritha:- ( In her Mind)...Lagta heyy..saare ke saare desh ke Raajkumariiyan mere Bhaiya par FIDA ho rahi hey!!😆😆😆...Badi aayi Bhaiya se Pyar karnewali!!😆..Kash Bhaiya ethar hota....tho aur maza aata!!😆😆😆......Rajkumari Indravati.....Sanyogita theek keh rahi thi...ithni Khamandi Rajkumari ko mein ne apni zindgi mein pehli baar dekh rahi hoon😡😡😡...'Hmm..Honee waaliiii Behan-Sasaurraaalll'😡😡😡...Yeh aur meri Bhabhi?😲..KABHI NAHIII!!!😡

The scene shiftz 2 Ajmeer...Rajmata's Kamra...Ghori is stll w8tin 4 Prc 2 bring Ajmeer's taj n Rajsi Mohr!!😉...Tadduuuu is still w8ting desperately 4 Narthki 2 bring Fud 4 em!!😉[ lol..renamed TAADAR kHAN 2 tADUUUUU😉]

Tadu:- Suu..Sultaan....Mujhe thoda pani chahiye..mein abi aata hoon😆😆😆
Ghori:- KHABARDAR Tadar KHan!!!😡😡😡 Hum ethar PANI peene nahiii...PANI pilane aaye hey!!!!😡😡😡
Tadu:- wahi thoo Sultan...😃...Pani pilana hey tho...... uss Narthki ko aana chahiye na?😳😳😳
Ghori:- Kon si Narthki ,TADR KHAN?😡..aur tumhe usse kya lena-dena hey?😡😡😡
Tadu:- wo...Koi bhi nahi sultan..Koi bhi nahi!!😊(bechara got soooo scared!!!😉)
Ghori:- ( 2 PRC..whoz nw disguised as his soldier)....Suno...wo Prithviraj Chauhan ka koi khabar hey?😕
PRC:- Jii Sultan..Khabar mila hey ki....wo Ajmeer pahunch gaya hey!😊...aur unhone kaha hey ki...aaj aap ko Khatam kar ke hi rahega!!!😡
Ghori:- KHAMOSHHHHHHH........Tum Uss Prithvi ke tareef mere saamne kar rehe ho?😡...iski saza maut hogii...sirf Aur siRF maut!!!😡
PRC:- mein bhi wahi kaha Ghoriiiiiiii😡😡
Takez f his mukotta😡😡😡
Ghori:- Prithvii.....😲...Sainnikon..isse maar dalo....(No1 comz),,.....Tum sab kahan mar gaye ho?😡
PRC:- Sabhi mere hathon mara gaya, Ghori......aur ab tumhari baari hey!!!😡..Tumne Ajmeer ke..Aan,Shaan aur sab se Keempti cheez...'meri maa' par Hath udhane ki koshish kiiii😡......Aur ab mein tumhe batatha hoon ki iska anjaam kya hota hey!!!😡

n they starz Talwar bazi (Di..eha ha ha..din...do u guyz rem tht BGS? thtz beein played while d Talwar bazi thing is gng on!!)...@ d same tym, 1 mre tukdi f Ghori comz n they startz fighting wid Prc's frndz.........N Prithvi s abt 2 Stab Ghori thn som1 throwz sand o his face......😭😭😭..it was Taddu😭😭😭[Dnt ask me wer he got tht sand frm!!!]....😉.....N they both escape frm thr😭😭😭

PRC:- Ghorrriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😡

Evry1 reachez thr n they console Prithvi!!!😭

Pundir:- Aaj ke baad..Aaj ke baad wo kabhi bhi Prithviraj Chauhan ke aur aankh bhi udhakar dekkhne ki himmat nahi karega!!!😊..Shanth ho jao Prithviiiii😊
Kana:-Hah...Pundir theek keh raha hey ,Maharaj..Shanth ho jayiye...Agli baar mein usse zinda nahi chodooonga!!!😊
Sikkandar:- Jii Maharaj.....Kana sahi keh raha hey!!😳😳😳
Kamlavati:- Itha bhi gussa acha nahi hey,Prithviiii....Dekhoo..shanth ho jao!!!😊...(She hugs him n gives em a kiss on his forehead!!😳)...Ajmeer ke Maharaj ne aaj Ajmeer ke aan aur Shaan ko bachaya hey....tumhare Pitaji ko bahuth kushi ho raha haoga.....Kyunki unka beta apna farz ache taraf se nibha raha hey!!!😳😳😳...Aaj tum aur Tumhare in doston ne Chauhan vansh ke naam Garv se ooncha kar diya hey!!!😳😳😳.....Aur mujhe is bath ka bhi Garv hey..ki ..Bhagwan ne mujhe tum jaise beta diya!!!😳(Kitne pyare man ki bandhan in d BG😳)

Thiz anmol moment between Son n Mother made evry'1 eye fill with Khushi ke aansoo😭😭😭.....n thn they realises tht Arjun is missing!!!!😉

Prc:- Pundir....woo..Arjun kahan gaya?😲😲😲
Pundir:- Pata nahi ,Prithviiii😭

Thn d camera focusses on a Person's Payal n evry gives d person attention as 'SHE' moves 2wardz Prithvi n his gang!!!😉.......N evry1 😆 seeing d person's face!!!😉..itz Arjun😉

Arjun:-...mein ethar hi hoon Prithvi😊...uss Thadar khan ne mera peecha hi nahi choda!!!😡...Mein talwar lene gaya taa..Par wo mera peecha peecha kar ke aagya...tho Kapda badalne ka waqt hi nahi mila!!!
Pundir:- 😆
Arjun:- Tum ithna has kyun rahe ho,Pundir?😡..Yehan koi Thamasha chal raha hey kya?😲
Pundir:- 😆
Sikkandar:- (who is tryin hard 2 stop himself frm Laughing ).....Pundirrrr....is meinn..Hasss😆.....
Kana:-...Hasne ki kya bath hey?😉
Pundir:- wo...Arjunnnn.....ek aur baar...ek aur baar nachooonaaaaa...mein bhi tho dekhoon ....Tum ne uss Tadar khan ko kaise Pataya, Kyun doston?😉
Prc:- Pundir..heek keh raha heyyyy😉
Samar:- Arree Jaldi nachonaaa,Arjun...hum sab intezaar kar rehe hey!!!😳😳😳
Kamlavati:- arree..Arjun..Nachonaa..Hum bhi bahuth bechen ho rehe hey..tumhare nach dekhne keliye!!!😉

At last.....Arjun started dancing as all f them wer driving him crazy!!!😉....n he did som kinda stepz n evry1 was laughing seeing 'Arjun's Harkathein'..n he finishes his dance....he can't take tht no more lol😆

Pundir:- aaj se tum hi Dilli ke Khas Nartak.....mera matlab heyy...Narthki ho,kyun Prithviiii😆

Som1 enterz hearing thizzz...n d person goes luk

Person:- KYA?😲,,...Naye Narthkiii😲😲😲...Tumne mujhse kaha kyun nahi,Prithvi?😲...Wo karna..Karnatakii tho wapis Dilli aana chahthi thi..aur Tum usse ek moka tho dey sakte they na?😆😆😆😆😉
PRC:-
Chand....😲...Tum yeh kya Baba ke vesh mein?😆....(Chand is actually checking up on Arjun whoz nw wearing a Dancerz choli n all tht...he cant see his face as he got Ghoonghat!!!😆😆😆...PRC thot f playin a prank ...sooo..he goes lyk....

PRC:- Pundir...Tum theek keh rehe hooo!!!😳...Aaj se yeh hiii...Dilli ke Khas Narthkiiii😳😳😳....aur mein kehta hoon ki..agar Sanyogita se pyar karne se pehle isse mila hotaa... Tho ...ab tak...yeh Dilli ke Maharani hoti😳.....(n goes near Arjunn n is lyk )...'Hey Pari, aap ko nirthya ki abhyas kisne diya?😲..Hum bhi usi se milna chahte hey!!!!😉
Chand:- Prithvii..Tum yahan Nrithya ka abhyas akar rehe ho?...wo M.Ghori kahan hey?😲...aur Yudh ka kya...?😲..Samar..Tum kuch tho batao!!!😳😳
Samar:- (felt sry 4 Chand..as he knew tht Chand will b soo worried...so tellz em d truth)...Hum yudh ke shuru hone se pehle hi....Ghori ke saare takat khatam kar dii....Par...Ghori ko nahi maar saka....wo bach gaya!!!😳😳😳......par is Nirthya..aur Narthki ke baare mein tum kuch mat poochoo....n started 😆
Chand:- ( 2 Narthki)...arre ooo....Ladkii..... jao...apne ghar jao....bas karo...aaj ka ithna abhyas kafi hey!!!😡
Narthki:- (Takez f d Ghoonghat n goes lyk)...Kyun? Baki ka abhyas, Prithvi ko, Karnataki sikhayegi?😆😆😆😉
Chand:-
😲.....Arjunnnnnn😲...Tum yehan..Narthki e vesh mein?😕😕😕...Yeh sab kya ho raha hey?😕
Pundir:- 😆 n tellz em d whole story!!!😆😉
Chand:- ek bath Bathaoon,Arjun?😉...Tum aaj se issi kapde pehenlo...Tum par bahuth acha lag raha heyy!!!😆

The scene Shiftz again 2 Chittor...we see Mahamantri Rajaraj witha sandesh 4 Pritha😳😳😳

Rajaram:- Maharani ki jao ho...Ajmeer se Maharaj ka sandesh aayaa hey!!!😳😳😳
Pritha:- acha..Kya likha hey us mein?😳
Rajaram:- Maharanijii..Hum yudh jeeth gaye!!😳😳...sabhi theek hey....Khushi ki bath yeh hey ki..Hum yudh shuru hone se pehle hii jeeth gaye!!!😳😳😳
Pritha:- Yeh tho bahuth khushi ki bath hey....😳😳😳.....Aap jaayiye aur Maharaj ka swagat karne ka intezaam keejiye...Hum Devi maa ke Mandir jaa rehe hey!😳😳😳

The scene nw shiftz 2 Kannauj n itz Sanyo's room😳😳😳...we see Sanyo sleeping in d cot ....n Vaishali enterz d room orderz evry1 2 leav d room n thn callz sanyo!!😉


Vaishai:- Rajkumari Sanyogitaaaa......Udhiye...ekkhush khabri heyyy!!!😳😳😳....Darasal...ek nahiii 2 khush khabri heyyy!!!😳😳😳
Sanyo:- Kya hey,Vaishali..bataonaaa😳😳😳.....
Vaishali:- Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan yudh jeeth gaya...😳😳.....aur....Maharaj ne aapke Swayamwarr talne ko thayyar ho gaya😳😳😳
Sanyo:- Lagtha hey aakhir ungli baba apne chamatkari dikhayi diya!!😆😆😆
Vaishali:- agle Pooranmasi ke din, aapki lambi umar keliye Mehel mein pooja shuru honewala hey....aur sath mein.....😉.....aap ko Koteshwar Mandir ke yatra mein bhi jaanaa hey😉😳
Sanyo:- SACH?😲...Hum bahuth khush hey ,Vaishalii.....😃...is baar bhi hum Yaatra par jaana chahti thi😳😳😳.....ab yeh sapna bhi poora hojayega!!😳....(n startz recalling her 1st n 2nd yatra momentzz!!!))...'ninini sasasa ririrri..in d BG)..n thn she Blushezz😳 wen she was recalling Prithvi's n herz silly fightz,Suryz falling in Gobar, Nandini ke khane mein namak😆😆😆...n so on.....

The scene again shiftz 2 Chittor😳...we see Pritha in a Normal Dasi's kapde😉😉( Lukz lyk shez tryin 2 b lyk her Bhaiya...alwayz in som disguisezz!!😉)....N is giving her sahelis som orderz....n they all r in Devi maa's Mandir!!!😳

Pritha:- Dekho..humhe koi bhi Maharani nahi bulayegi!!😉..Hum bas ek sadharan ladki hey ab😳...
Saheli's :- Jiii..par hum aapko kaise bulaayenge?😕
Pritha:-.Tum sab humae.....hmm hah...'SURALI' bulaoge😳😳😳
Saheli's:- hmm..Suraaliii😳

They all are dng aarti n then d camera focuses on a person...with well built body....😉.....has got talwar on his handz...he gives his talwar 2 his sevak..n goes 2 do aarti....n thn d camera focuses on his handz with aarthi ke thali....n wen he shoutz out 'Jai mata di' the cam focuses on his lipzz..n thn his eyezzz....realli lovely hazal eyezzz😳😳😳...n d main pandit callz out his name....

Pandit:- aayiye Kuwar Vanraaaj😳😳😳
Vanraj:- ji pandit jii..Hum humare pitaaji ke naam ek...hawan karwana chahte heyyy..issliye aapko mehel mein swagat karne ko hum khud ethar chale aaye!😳😳😳
Pandit:- aap ne taqleef kyun li Kuwarjiii😳😳...agar aap ek sandesh bhijwadete, hum khud chake aate😳😳😳
Vanraj:-
Koi bath nahi Panditjii...aap aaj hi Gujrat nikalne ka thayyari keejiye....Devi maa ke darshan karne ke baad hum nikalenge..sath mein aap bhi!😳😳😳

Vanraaj turnz around soo quickly n bumpz on 2 Prithaa...n she fallz down!!😉.....she luked realli beautiful in d Pink lengha she was wearing n d soundz f her paayal n kankan simply created a musiq along wid d sound f d cold breeze...N Vanraj jst Stared @ her......as if thrz no 2mrw in his lyf
( hellooww Mr.Akdooo...apne aap ko kya samachta hey....Xcuse me....helloowwwww.....r u lost somwer.....ahem!ahem! Nathin is working on him guyzzz)😆

Pritha's Saheli's com ovr thr n liftz her up...Shez very angry wid Vanraj😡..hez still standing thr .....n is staring @ her!!!😉

Saheli's :- Suraalii..tum theek tho ho na?
Pritha:- hah..hum theek hey
Pritha:- Aap andhe ho kya?😡....Humare khapde kharaab kar diya!!!😡😡😡
Vanraj:-......wo..Hum aap ko dekha nahi
Pritha:- 😡😡😡 Chalo....(n goes frm thr!!!)
Vanraj:- (2 himself)...wo Ladki kon ho sakta hey?😲...Kitni khubsoorat lag rahi thi woo😳.....wo inzaan hey..ya koi Pari?😳( U confused.com.....Kitne saare sawal poochoge?😡.....lev her aloneeeeeeeeee😡😡😉)

The scene again shiftz 2 Ajmeer.....we see Samar getting ready 2 go n meet Prithvi in d Darbar...n hez fixing his 'Pagdi'😉..n is struggling 2 do it properly.....n he calls out

Samar:- Maharani Prithaaa.....aap zara ethar...(Thnn he realises tht hez not in Chittor...n sayz 2 himself)
aap ki bahuth yaad aa rahi hey,Pritha😭..(.n he rem d scene wer Pritha tyez his pagdi b4 shadi....n a tear fallz down his cheekz...Chand reachez thr thn)
Chand:- Kya bath heySamar?😕...ithne udaas kyun ho? Pritha ki bahuth yaad aa rahi heyyy?😉
Samar:- Hah,Chand....😭
Chand:- Udaas mat hona ,Samar....😃Kal wo ethar aayegi😳...Agar ek din usse juda ho kar tumhe ethne gham aate hey..tho hamare baare mein socho?😭...Pritha humari choti behen hey....uski Gudiya ke shadi ke bath lekar wo Prithvi ko bachpan mein bahuth pareshan kartthi thi😆....tab mein us ke sath khela karta tha...😳....Aaj wo kitni badi hogayi na?....wo aaj ek Patni hey😳😳😳...Meri bahan bahuth badi hogayi....😳😳😳......(he breakz down hugz Samar😳)
Samar:- Tum sab usse bahuth pyar karte ho na?😳😳😳
Prithvi, Pundir n Arjun:- Humare jaan se bhi zyada,Samar😳😳😳...Kya tum usse pyar nahi karta?😉😉😉
Samar:- ☺️
Pundir:- waise bhii...Chand...tum ek baba ke vesh mein kyun ho?
Chand:- Yeh thio bahuth badi kahani heyy,Pundir!!!😆😆😆...Prithvi ke Sasurji ko manane keliye yeh sab karna padega na?😆😆😆...(n he tellz d whole story 2 Prithvi n otherz)😉
Arjun:- Thoo...Unglii baabaa..Honiii...ko..koiii nahii...Taal saktha....hey na?😉
Evry1:- 😆

n @ same tym Indravati headz 2wardz Ajmeer Mehel along wid her Pitaajiii😉...(Dekha?,Honi ko Koi nahi Taal sakta)..n d epii endz!!!😉😉😉

PRECAP:- Indravati:- (2 herself)...Dekhte hey...uss Sanyogita...MERI Prithvi se Shadi kaise karti hey!!!😡😡😡

So thtz it 4 2day guyz...i think thiz was an xtra long part...But....thrz nathin khas i felt abt thiz update 😭...plzz bear wid my mistakezz...n do comment on my upd8..lve ya all😳

-Prc's Sanyo😳

Edited by mirchy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ur rite dear bt romance can happen even if the kid is around no prob dear its up2 u...u kno better as how ur ff will flow...dnt bother n write as wat u feel...arjun n maya married 5 yrs bac so i inputed in bt then as i said do it as u feel....jus kno tat i wud read it watever u write n rite now ur goin great!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehraan

ur rite dear bt romance can happen even if the kid is around no prob dear its up2 u...u kno better as how ur ff will flow...dnt bother n write as wat u feel...arjun n maya married 5 yrs bac so i inputed in bt then as i said do it as u feel....jus kno tat i wud read it watever u write n rite now ur goin great!



Hihi😳..Thankz diiiii ...u r helping me a lottttt😳😳😳...Letz see hw it goezz!!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys
where is sanyogita?
story mein dikhai nahi di
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

hey guys
where is sanyogita?
story mein dikhai nahi di




shez thr in Story,dear...do chk it 1ce mre!!!😳
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Thankq Sweetheart!😳

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