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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

bohat achcha update hai shona 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
Wow shona👏.Full of emotion.Wonderful part.Next part ke liye wait nehi ho raha.Keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
very nice update shona...........my god........Sanyo is playing negative type of role I think in ur story dear!!!!!!!!...............she only did not wanted well-being between Kannauj n delhi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: urooj101

bohat achcha update hai shona 😊



thanks huni
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

very nice update shona...........my god........Sanyo is playing negative type of role I think in ur story dear!!!!!!!!...............she only did not wanted well-being between Kannauj n delhi.



thanks kali di for liking the update, and now sawal ye hai sanyo has a negative roloe or not, yeh abhi nahi pata chale ga
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Wow shona👏.Full of emotion.Wonderful part.Next part ke liye wait nehi ho raha.Keep it up.



thanks rakhi for liking the update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

so emotional and sad.i can imagine prithvi, poor prithvi,

love ya loadzzzzzzzz shona di for this wonderful update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

so emotional and sad.i can imagine prithvi, poor prithvi,

love ya loadzzzzzzzz shona di for this wonderful update



love u too, ma sweetu, thanks for liking the update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Part 2

Prithvi is looking at Sanyo's earring and at the beautiful everlasting moon out of his window, as the sainik comes in and informs him that Kamalavati and Rajkumari Pratha are heading towards his bedroom. Prithvi puts Sanyo's earring underneath the corner of the duvet of his bed and waits eagerly to greet his little sister Pratha.

Prithvi who is facing his window starts to remember when he left Pratha, how naive she was, and all the moments he spent with her. Rajmata Kamalvati enters Prithvi's bedroom.

Kamalvati : Prithvi, humara beta, aap ke liye hum ne dhood laya hai. Jaldi se ise piye warna tandha hojaye ga

Prithvi turns around and looks at his mother.

Prithvi : Maa, Pratha kaha hai? Ab tho wo bahot bari hogi na? Kaisi hai woh, aur mujh se milne bi nahi aaye.

Kamalavati just continues to smile at Prithvi and his love towards his sister. Prithvi notices that there is something behind Kamalavti and wonders what it can be. He walks towards his mother, and says... "Pratha, tho aap maa ke piche chupi huwi hai, jaldi se humare saamne aye ye, apne bhaiya se nahi mile gi."

Pratha who has tears in her eyes moves from Kamalavati and runs to Prithvi. Prithvi hugs Pratha. Kamalavati is very happy to see the love between the sister and the brother.

Kamalavati : chalo,... behen aur bhai.....agar mil ge hoge tho maa chalti hai,.... aur Prithvi dhood tandha horaha hai, aur Pratha jaldi karna kyu ke Payal tumhara intezaar kar rahi hogi, chalo hum yaha se jathe hai.

Prithvi who breaks down from the hug looks at Pratha.

Prithvi : meri Pratha, itni bari ho chuki hai

Pratha : bhaiya, hum ne aap ko bahot miss kiya

Prithvi : arre paglii, mein ne bhi, waise kaisi ho tum?

Pratha : hum teek hai

Pratha who was looking at Prithvi, suddenly so a glimpse of something daggling down from Prithvi's duvet. She walked towards Prithvi's duvet and so an earring, which she saw 5 years before when Prithvi had come from the koteshwar yatra and was completely changed. She picked up the earring and sed..."itna khoobsurat earring, kisi khoobsurat larki ka hi hoga"

She turned around to Prithvi. Prithvi who was looking at Pratha's actions was about to say something when Pratha cut him off/

Pratha : bhaiya, nandini kaisi hai, aap use mile kya, ab sab kuch teek ho chukka hai, ya phir........

Prithvi had tears in his eyes and started to remember that day when Sanyo left him heartbroken. He then came to his senses when Pratha shook him by his arm.

Pratha : bhaiya, aap aaj bhi use se bahot pyaar karte hai,...hai naa? Aap apni Pratha se kuch nahi chupa sakte......Aaj agar Delhi aur Kannauj mein sab teek hai, tho phir aap usse le kyu nahi athe.

As Pratha was about to say something to Prithvi, Roospundari walked in with Payal and sed.........."us ka koi faida nahi"

Payal who was standing near Roospundari, spoke up....":yeh aap kya kai rahi hai, aap hosh mein tho hai, aap hi chati thi ke Prithvi aur Sanyo ek hojaye

Roospundari : chaati thi..... likin ab nahi,

Payal shayad aap bhool chuki ho....jis ke bare mein aap baath kar rahi hai.... usse 5 saal hogaye Hindustan chore huwe. Aur aap ye bhi janti hai ke kin circumstances mein unu ne ye faisala kiya tha.....bhool jaiye unhe

Prithvi and Pratha look at each other wid Prithvi shocked to what Roospundari had sed. Payal who was standing near Roospundari walked to Pratha. Payal was very angry wid Roospundari.

Roospundari : raat bahot ho chuki hai Pratha aur Payal ...apne kamre mein jakar sleep kariye. Prithvi bahot tak chukka hoga, usse araam karne di jiye...

Roospundari walks towards Prithvi's bedroom door when Payal speaks loudly....... "kya aap usse bhool chuki hai?"

Roospunari, Pratha and Prithvi look at Payal and are very shocked to see the way Payal is speaking.

Payal : bholiye... jawab dijiye...... kya aap usse bhool chuki hai,........kya aaj bhi aap usse yaad nahi karthi.

Pratha : Payal... bhagwan ke waaste chup ho jao

Payal : jawaab dijiye Roospundari Devi, kya aap usse se pyaar nahi karthi. Aap ki waja se meri choti bahen hum sab ko chor kar giaye thi, aap logu ki ek galti ki waja se, jis bahen ka saath mein ne diya khushi aur gham mein, wo tho mujhe chor kar chali gaye,

Payal who was in tears and was crying sed ..... "bholiye, kya aap usse yaad nahi karthe, aap janti hai ke Maharaj Jaichand apni beti ke bina nahi re sakte, aisa ek bhi din nahi hai ke unnu ne Sanyogita ko yaad nahi kiya, haan wo usse bahot naraaz hai, likin usse wo bahot pyaar karte hai, aur Maharani Nayantra, Sanyogita tho unki zindagi thi, dadi ma hum aap ke saamne haath jaur the hai Sanyogita ko wapaas bulaye. Aap janti hai, chamki Sanyo se kitni nafrat karthi hai, uss Sanyo se ...jis ki wo best frend thi aur.......

Roospundari who was in tears continued ....... "aur kya Rajkumari Payal....... aur ye ...ke jis sanyo ki aap baath kar rahi hai, wo humse aur humare pariwar se nafrat karthi hai, jana chati hai kyu........

Payal knew why Sanyo left them but never knew why Sanyo had so many hatred towards Roospundari and Jaichand and her family. Pratha who was shocked to hear Payal expressing her sorrows today was very upset on hearing Payal's sorrows which Pratha never knew about even though they were best frends. And Prithvi who was standing near Pratha wanted to know why Sanyo hated her family and was looking at Payal and Roospundari.

Roospundari continued....... Rajkumari Payal jis sanyo ki aap baath kar rahi hai, wo ye kabhi nahi chati thi ke kannauj aur Delhi ek ho, ab kyu ke ,,,, ye bhi aap suna chati hai tho suniye ..... Kyu ke Udaipur ke Maharaj Yash nahi chaathe isliye.... Sanyo ne unka saath diya...apne pita ke dushman ka..... suna aap ne... ab hum aap se kuch nahi kehna chaate... ainda se hum Sanyo ka naam hi nahi suna chate.... aur galti se agar unka naam Jaichand suna tho... tho aap janti hai, age kya hoga

Roospundari who had tears in her eyes left Prithvi's room. Payal who was emotionally broken started to cry her eyes out. Prithvi was very taken aback to what he heard from Roospundari. Pratha was consoling Payal, when Payal sed...."tum hi batao Pratha ...kya sanyo galat hai, usne sab ki khushi ke liye hum sab ko chor diya, wo galat nahi hai, warna ... kis se chunti wo Maharani Nayantra ko... yaa Mahrani Nandini ko

Pratha : chup ho jao Payal.

Pratha took Payal from Prithvi's bedroom leaving Prithvi shocked and more heartbroken.


Lovely shona dear..really nicely written update!😳👏⭐️ I liked payal's guts in this part & I am very enquisitive to know as to why Sanyo turned against Jaichand & left Hindustan & tried creating a rift between Delhi & Kannauj..post the next part soon buddy can't wait any longer!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
Yup megha di agreed with u..........I also not understanding as to why sanyo did not like well being of kannauj n delhi n why she has left india............anyways shona ne apni story mein suspense accha create kiya hain😃

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