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Shona u wrote brilliantly👏.Wonderful👏.Pls continue soon.
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Ek Lambhi Judaai Aur PRC Sanyo ka Milan"

Introduction

5 saal hogaye aur in 5 saalo mein sab kuch badhal giya, Delhi ke singhasan ko lekar jo arguments thi wo sab clear hogaye hai. Delhi, ajmer aur kannauj ek ho chukka hai. Maharaj Jaichand aur Maharaj prithviraj mein jo be misunderstandings thi, wo sab clear hogaye, wo bhi Rajmata roospundari aur kamalavati ki waja se. Maharaj anagpal,...prithvi aur jaichand ke nana ji, bahot khush hai ke ab sab kuch teek hogaya hai, kannauj aur delhi ke darmayan koi mushkil ya problems nahi hai.

Ab jab koi yudh hotha hai tho delhi aur kannauj ek saath jaate hai. Kannauj par koi mushkil athi hai tho delhi us ka saath deti hai. Sab kuch teek hogaya. Maharaj Anagpal apni biwi ke saath khushi se apni baki ki zindagi guzar rahe hai.

Rajmata Roospundari kabhi kabhi ajmer, delhi, ya kannauj mein rehti, is se unka dil bahel jata hai, aur apne pariwar ko ek dekh kar unhe bahot khushi milthi hai. Jaichand aur nayantra abhi kannauj mein hothe hai, unke saath rehti hai nayantra ki bahen maharani naina jo nayantra se bahot pyaar karthi hai, us ki ek beti bhi hai, woh 3 saal nayantra ki beti sanyogita se bari hai aur us ka naam rajkumari Payal hai. Payal ek khubsurat larki hai jo ajmer ki rajkumari ki best saheli hai, aur sanyogita ki bari bahen jaisi, woh pratha ke saath ajmer mein rehti hai. Aur ajmer mein, ........Ajmer mein Rajmata Kamalavati aur unki beti ajmer ki rajkumari pratha apne mahel mein rehte hai. Aur delhi......delhi mein prithvi ki absence mein prithvi ka sab se acha aur us ke dil ke kareeb wala dost arjun, prithvi ki praja ka hiyaal rakta hai, aur us ki praja ki har mushkil dhoor karta hai.




Part 1

5 saal ke baad, bal prithviraj yuva ban gaya hai, dharti ka veer yodh prithviraj chahaun.

Maharaj prithviraj chauhan ki jai!!!

Maharaj prithviraj chauhan ki jai!!!!

At night outside prithvi's tambu there is a fire lit where all his sainiks and frends are sitting around with a small innocent young girl whom prithvi saved whilst her village got burnt and she lost all her family. The girl was called bhindiya.....

Sanjham: Prithvi, ab hume wapas delhi jana chaiye

Chand : mere hiyal se sanjham teek kai raha hai, ab hume wapas chalna chahiye, waha sab humara intezaar kar rahe hai, aur aaj arjun ka sandesh aya ke maharaj anagpal diwali ke din hume waha dekhna chate hai, waha ajmer se rajmata kamalavati aur rajkumari pratha, rajmata roospundari, aur kannauj se maharj jaichand aur maharani nayantra, aur maharani ki bahen maharani naina bhi hoge aur....

As chand is about to continue Prithvi gets up and walks towards the tree trunk from where he can see the moon clearly, closes his eyes, and remembers what sanyo sed to him, that whenever he is missing her he can look at the magnificent moon and if he is well fortunate may be at that time she will be looking at the moon too.

Prithvi's eyes- closed says : Junglii billi, aisa ek bhi din nahi jab mene tumhe yaad nahi kiya.

Prithvi gradually opens his eyes and comes to his senses. He walks royaly towards his seat and announces to his sainiks " kal hi hum yaha se delhi jayege, Chand kal yaha se jane ki sari arrangements kar dena, ab mein apni ye diwali apni praja ke saath delhi mein celebrate karna chata hu. Sab sainik aram kijiye aur kal hi suba hum yaha se age barege".

All sainiks shout: jo agiya maharaj ki

Prithvi's frends chand, pundir and sanjham get up and walk towards prithvi

Chand: aur..... bhindiya??

Prithvi : tum bhindiya ki fikar math karo, wo hamare saath delhi jayegi

Prithvi turns around and gazes at the young innocent girl and says to her he will be honoured if bhindiya stays wid him in delhi. However, Bhindiya agrees to go wid him.

Early in the morning Prithvi wakes up and performs his prayers like his father taught him. He closes his eyes and pours the water over his head. After his prayers he goes to his tambu and gets dressed in his warriors outfit. He walks out of his tambu and orders a sainik to get a small palki for bhindiya.

On the other hand, in Delhi, all the villagers are very happy and eagerly waiting for their king to arrive. In the delhi palace, Rajmata Kamalavati and Roospundari have done all the arrangements for Prithvi's welcome. Maharaj Anangpal wid his wife is very happy seeing his 2 daughters happy awaiting for their sons arrival. He walks towards Roospundari and Kamalavati.

Maharaj Anangpal : Kya baat hai, aaj humari dono betiya bahot khush hai

Both the sisters look at each other and smile. One dasi comes and informs the royal family that Maharaj Prithviraj chauhan has come and is outside the delhi palace.

All the villagers are shouting Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan ki jai!!! Delhi's sun is shining brightly. There are many colours spreaded outside Delhi's mahal. Prithvi looks around and sees how joyful is people are on his arrival. He gets off the horse and takes bhindiya out of the palki, holds her hand. Behind him his three frends are standing. They all make their way to the Delhi's mahel doorway, with Prithvi holding bhindiya's hand.

Kamalavati comes running towards The Delhi's mehal doorway

Kamalavati : Prithviiii!!!

Prithvi is very glad to see his mother, and walks towards her

Prithvi : Maa....

Kamalvati : wahi rukh jao....beta

Kamalavati walks to Prithvi and does his aarthi, she continually smiles at him. Prithvi's nana and nani stand behind Kamalavati whilst she puts the tilak on Prithvi and his frends forehead.

Prithvi walks in and takes blessings from his mother and his grandparents. He walks down the aisle with his frends where everyone is shouting " Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan ki jai!!"

Prithvi makes his way to the delhi singhasan when he stops as he sees Roospundari. He walks towards her and takes her blessings.

Roospundari : kaise hai humara prithvi, bohat saal hogaye hum ne aap ko dekha nahi, aap ke veer yodh ke kisay sun kar aap se milne ke liye hum tho tharas ge thai. Waise aap bilkul nahi badhle, wahi ke wahi hai, haan thore se hum se unche hogaye hai

Prithvi : aur aap kab badhli hai, wahi ki wahi hai, sach kahe tho aap aaj bahot khubsurat dikh rahi hai.

Prithvi considered Roospundari as his mother, therefore he gave her respect and always listened to her advice. Roospundari loved Prithvi and Jaichand the same, and cared for him too. She was like a friend to him, who supported him in his sorrows and happiness.

Whilst Prithvi and Roospundari were talking, they were gathered by the royal family members and Prithvi's frends. As Roospundari was talking to Prithvi she looked down and saw someone glaring at her with big black eyes.

Roospundari : arre, yeh kaun hai?

The royal family were amazed to see a young girl, that too holding Prithvi's hand.

Roospundari : Maharaj Prithviraj, ye kaun hai?

Prithvi : ye bhindiya hai, humari choti dost, ab ye mere saath delhi me rahe gi, kyu bhindiya?

Bhindiya was very nervous and gave a small smile to Prithvi and then Roospundari. Roospundari too smiled back.

Roospundari : bhindiya, bahot hi pyara naam hai,

Tears fall out Roospundari's eyes

Kamalavati : kya hua didi?

Roospundari : kuch nahi, Bhindiya ko dekh kar hume kisi ki yaad agaye

Maharaj Anangpal and his wife understood why Roospundari had tears in her eyes, as they always so her crying and remembering someone, but never knew who.

Maharaj Anangpal : Bhindiya, hum Prithvi ke nana hai, aur ye unki nani hai

Kamalavati : Chand, pundir aur sanjham, aap sab kitna badhal ge ho.

Maharaj Anangpal smiles at Prithvi and his frend

Roospundari : Prithvi, chand, pundir, aur sanjham, kab se aye ho, aur apne dost ko mile hi nahi

Chand : haan, wo arjun ....... kaha hai wo Rajmata?

Prithvi moved to a side and left Bhindiya's hand. Everyone was aware of Prithvi's actions. Prithvi moved forward and saw Arjun's shadow

Prithvi : arjun, kaha ho tum ?

Arjun did not come forward, he stayed where he was.

Arjun : acha, tho intne saalo ke baad hum yaad kiya? Aaj thora sa aur intazaar kar lo

Prithvi : samne, aao aur phir batao ga ke tumhe kitna yaadkiya mein ne

Arjun came infront. Prithvi hugged him tightly.

Arjun hugged all the frends, and stood near Prithvi. Prithvi put his arm around Arjun's neck. He was relieved to see Arjun fit and fine as always.

Maharaj Anangpal : Bhagwan kare, in kapyaar aise hi rahe, aur kam na ho.

Roospundari : aur in ko kisi ki nazar na lage

Everyone sat down at their respected seats. They watched plays, and people playing dhandiya

It was night time. Kamalvati got up and she escorted all the performers outside till the darbar was clear and no one was there besides Prithvi, his frends, and his family.

Maharaj Anangpal : hume tho bohat bhook lagi hai kamalavati, aaj bte ke ghar anhe mein kanha nahi mile ga. Everyone started to laugh

Roospundari : pita ji, aap bhi naa

All the ladies and men of the palace sat down in a squared shape around a white fabric where food was placed to eat. Prithvi sat near his frends and nana, whilst Bhindiya was sitting near Roospundari and Kamalavati. One of the sainik came and informed Kamalavati that Jaichand and Nayantra and naina are here.

Kamalavati : is waqt, kya Jaichand aya hai, sab chaliye, hum jaichand ka welcome kar athe hai, jaldi chaliye, chalo Prithvi, warna aap tho jante hai Jaichand naraaz hojaye ga,

Everyone go and welcome Jaichand. Kamalavati does the aarthi. Kamalavati looks at Roospundari and does not understand why she is standing away from them.

Jaichand is very happy to see Prithvi back and hugs him, in return Prithvi takes his and nayantra's, and naina's blessings.

Jaichand, nayantra and naina join everyone to eat. Jaichand sits near his nana, and nayantra and naina sit together near kamalavati.

Roospundari who is in tears looks at Jaichand opposite and can understand the pain Jaichand is going through. She looks at Nayantra who behind a fake smile as many sorrows.

Kamalavati : aare didi??? Aaj kitna acha din hai, humara pura pariwar agata hai, aur aaj ke din aap udaas kyu hai??

Roospundari has tears in her eyes and replys: har saal ki tarah wo aaj bhi humare beech nahi, aaj bhi humara pariwar adura hai, aaj 5 saal ke baad socha, shayad wo bhi delhi aye hai aur jaichand ke peeche kari ho gi, likin nahi hum galat thai, us ne hume maaf nahi kiya, humse wo nafrat karthi hai, sirf nafrat.

Nayantra starts to cry and her sister tries to console her. Whilst Jaichand gets up and goes besides Nayantra and in anger wipes Nayantra's tears. Everyone get up leaving their food and stand, and is shocked at Jaichand's behaviour towards Nayantra.

Jaichand stands up, so does Nayantra and naina. Jaichand looks at Roospundari and then Nayantra.

Jaichand : maa aur maharani, agar ainda se agar aap kisi ke liye udaas, ya kisi ke liye cry kiya,

He then looks at Nayantra, "tho humse bura koi nahi hoga

Roospundari : likin... Jaichand

Nayantra : wo galat nahi hai, wo galat nahi hai

Jaichand : humne kaha na.... kuch nahi suna hume..... aaj ke din tho bas kijiye.

In a rage of anger, Jaichand leaves the darbar, and goes to his bedroom.

Roospundari who is crying goes towards Nayantra.

Roospundari : Nayantra.....

Nayantra hugs Roospundari and Roospundari takes her out of the darbar.

Maharani Naina : arre, kanha, tanda ho raha, Rajmata Kamalavti, aap sab ko kanha serve kijiye, Prithvi aur us ke dosto lambe safar se aye hai, phir unhe araam bhi tho karna hai.

Everyone sit back down to eat. Maharaj Anangpal looks at everyone, and continues eating. Kamalavati sits down. Prrithvi looks at his frends and continues to eat. Roospundari comes back and sits down to eat.

As everyone as finished, they leave the darbar and go to their rooms to sleep. Gradually all the candles in the palace were blown off. There was only one chamber in the palace that had candles lit, that was Prithvi's. He was sitting on his bed, in his night clothes, thinking where sanyo is, how she is, why she is not here, where she is. He gets up and walks near the mirror. Near the mirror there is a box, he opens the box and takes an earring out, holds it in his hand....and goes near the window to look at the moon. Prithvi talks to himself, " junglli billi, ab jo kuch hojaye, ab meri manzil tumho. Is bar mein tumhe apna bana kar rahu ga, tum sirf aur sirf Prithviraj chauhan ki ho, tum par sirf aur sirf mera haq hai"

One of the sainink informs Prithvi that Rajmata Kamalavati is coming wid Rajkumari Pratha towards his chamber.

wonderul update shona!!!wat is tis...hidden talent!!i must say u hve written it so well, its interstg...smethg diff frm other ffs..pls dea continue soon as i wnt 2 kno mre abt sanyo!!its a mystery!!love u dear...keep it up!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mirchy

awww...Rocking story yaar!!!😳loved it! keep it up!

o huney,
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Originally posted by: mehraan

wonderul update shona!!!wat is tis...hidden talent!!i must say u hve written it so well, its interstg...smethg diff frm other ffs..pls dea continue soon as i wnt 2 kno mre abt sanyo!!its a mystery!!love u dear...keep it up!

shukriya, mehr di
itni bi tareef math kijiye
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Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Shona u wrote brilliantly👏.Wonderful👏.Pls continue soon.

thanks rakhi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Di u wrote brilliantly👏.Wonderful👏
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wow shona dear..........very nice update .............liked it!!.........will wait for the next!
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whoa !! shona dear...gr8 update...starting reminded me of prc episode wen anas saves one girl at d end of digvijay...lovely...continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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shukriya, mehr di
itni bi tareef math kijiye
jo tareef ka haqdar hai uski tareef hoti hi hai...im not sayg like tis...u hve strted very well... n honestly i liked it a lot!!!pls dnt say shukriya cos u deserved 2 b appreciated... so waitg 4 ur nxt update!
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Part 2

Prithvi is looking at Sanyo's earring and at the beautiful everlasting moon out of his window, as the sainik comes in and informs him that Kamalavati and Rajkumari Pratha are heading towards his bedroom. Prithvi puts Sanyo's earring underneath the corner of the duvet of his bed and waits eagerly to greet his little sister Pratha.

Prithvi who is facing his window starts to remember when he left Pratha, how naive she was, and all the moments he spent with her. Rajmata Kamalvati enters Prithvi's bedroom.

Kamalvati : Prithvi, humara beta, aap ke liye hum ne dhood laya hai. Jaldi se ise piye warna tandha hojaye ga

Prithvi turns around and looks at his mother.

Prithvi : Maa, Pratha kaha hai? Ab tho wo bahot bari hogi na? Kaisi hai woh, aur mujh se milne bi nahi aaye.

Kamalavati just continues to smile at Prithvi and his love towards his sister. Prithvi notices that there is something behind Kamalavti and wonders what it can be. He walks towards his mother, and says... "Pratha, tho aap maa ke piche chupi huwi hai, jaldi se humare saamne aye ye, apne bhaiya se nahi mile gi."

Pratha who has tears in her eyes moves from Kamalavati and runs to Prithvi. Prithvi hugs Pratha. Kamalavati is very happy to see the love between the sister and the brother.

Kamalavati : chalo,... behen aur bhai.....agar mil ge hoge tho maa chalti hai,.... aur Prithvi dhood tandha horaha hai, aur Pratha jaldi karna kyu ke Payal tumhara intezaar kar rahi hogi, chalo hum yaha se jathe hai.

Prithvi who breaks down from the hug looks at Pratha.

Prithvi : meri Pratha, itni bari ho chuki hai

Pratha : bhaiya, hum ne aap ko bahot miss kiya

Prithvi : arre paglii, mein ne bhi, waise kaisi ho tum?

Pratha : hum teek hai

Pratha who was looking at Prithvi, suddenly so a glimpse of something daggling down from Prithvi's duvet. She walked towards Prithvi's duvet and so an earring, which she saw 5 years before when Prithvi had come from the koteshwar yatra and was completely changed. She picked up the earring and sed..."itna khoobsurat earring, kisi khoobsurat larki ka hi hoga"

She turned around to Prithvi. Prithvi who was looking at Pratha's actions was about to say something when Pratha cut him off/

Pratha : bhaiya, nandini kaisi hai, aap use mile kya, ab sab kuch teek ho chukka hai, ya phir........

Prithvi had tears in his eyes and started to remember that day when Sanyo left him heartbroken. He then came to his senses when Pratha shook him by his arm.

Pratha : bhaiya, aap aaj bhi use se bahot pyaar karte hai,...hai naa? Aap apni Pratha se kuch nahi chupa sakte......Aaj agar Delhi aur Kannauj mein sab teek hai, tho phir aap usse le kyu nahi athe.

As Pratha was about to say something to Prithvi, Roospundari walked in with Payal and sed.........."us ka koi faida nahi"

Payal who was standing near Roospundari, spoke up....":yeh aap kya kai rahi hai, aap hosh mein tho hai, aap hi chati thi ke Prithvi aur Sanyo ek hojaye

Roospundari : chaati thi..... likin ab nahi,

Payal shayad aap bhool chuki ho....jis ke bare mein aap baath kar rahi hai.... usse 5 saal hogaye Hindustan chore huwe. Aur aap ye bhi janti hai ke kin circumstances mein unu ne ye faisala kiya tha.....bhool jaiye unhe

Prithvi and Pratha look at each other wid Prithvi shocked to what Roospundari had sed. Payal who was standing near Roospundari walked to Pratha. Payal was very angry wid Roospundari.

Roospundari : raat bahot ho chuki hai Pratha aur Payal ...apne kamre mein jakar sleep kariye. Prithvi bahot tak chukka hoga, usse araam karne di jiye...

Roospundari walks towards Prithvi's bedroom door when Payal speaks loudly....... "kya aap usse bhool chuki hai?"

Roospunari, Pratha and Prithvi look at Payal and are very shocked to see the way Payal is speaking.

Payal : bholiye... jawab dijiye...... kya aap usse bhool chuki hai,........kya aaj bhi aap usse yaad nahi karthi.

Pratha : Payal... bhagwan ke waaste chup ho jao

Payal : jawaab dijiye Roospundari Devi, kya aap usse se pyaar nahi karthi. Aap ki waja se meri choti bahen hum sab ko chor kar giaye thi, aap logu ki ek galti ki waja se, jis bahen ka saath mein ne diya khushi aur gham mein, wo tho mujhe chor kar chali gaye,

Payal who was in tears and was crying sed ..... "bholiye, kya aap usse yaad nahi karthe, aap janti hai ke Maharaj Jaichand apni beti ke bina nahi re sakte, aisa ek bhi din nahi hai ke unnu ne Sanyogita ko yaad nahi kiya, haan wo usse bahot naraaz hai, likin usse wo bahot pyaar karte hai, aur Maharani Nayantra, Sanyogita tho unki zindagi thi, dadi ma hum aap ke saamne haath jaur the hai Sanyogita ko wapaas bulaye. Aap janti hai, chamki Sanyo se kitni nafrat karthi hai, uss Sanyo se ...jis ki wo best frend thi aur.......

Roospundari who was in tears continued ....... "aur kya Rajkumari Payal....... aur ye ...ke jis sanyo ki aap baath kar rahi hai, wo humse aur humare pariwar se nafrat karthi hai, jana chati hai kyu........

Payal knew why Sanyo left them but never knew why Sanyo had so many hatred towards Roospundari and Jaichand and her family. Pratha who was shocked to hear Payal expressing her sorrows today was very upset on hearing Payal's sorrows which Pratha never knew about even though they were best frends. And Prithvi who was standing near Pratha wanted to know why Sanyo hated her family and was looking at Payal and Roospundari.

Roospundari continued....... Rajkumari Payal jis sanyo ki aap baath kar rahi hai, wo ye kabhi nahi chati thi ke kannauj aur Delhi ek ho, ab kyu ke ,,,, ye bhi aap suna chati hai tho suniye ..... Kyu ke Udaipur ke Maharaj Yash nahi chaathe isliye.... Sanyo ne unka saath diya...apne pita ke dushman ka..... suna aap ne... ab hum aap se kuch nahi kehna chaate... ainda se hum Sanyo ka naam hi nahi suna chate.... aur galti se agar unka naam Jaichand suna tho... tho aap janti hai, age kya hoga

Roospundari who had tears in her eyes left Prithvi's room. Payal who was emotionally broken started to cry her eyes out. Prithvi was very taken aback to what he heard from Roospundari. Pratha was consoling Payal, when Payal sed...."tum hi batao Pratha ...kya sanyo galat hai, usne sab ki khushi ke liye hum sab ko chor diya, wo galat nahi hai, warna ... kis se chunti wo Maharani Nayantra ko... yaa Mahrani Nandini ko

Pratha : chup ho jao Payal.

Pratha took Payal from Prithvi's bedroom leaving Prithvi shocked and more heartbroken.

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