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hey mandy tumhe kaise bhool sakte hai....u r a very precious prcianOriginally posted by: manatated
Hi guyz !! kahin aap mujhe bhule toh nahi??? Well aap mujhe bhool sakte ho...par apne Prithvi aur Sanyogita ko nahi...😃
Par yeh kya? mere peechle update par sirf 4 comments??ðŸ˜I know i'm verrryyyyyyy irregular wid my updates and you people must have lost interest in it.....Anyways...it's update time!I'm posting next part and if you people are interested, then only will continue.....Will reply to the previous comments after the update...Part 33 :"
Achcha,parr yeh batao tum gurukul mein?""Vikram ne hamara peecha kaha choda tha...",and she narrated how he held her and kids as captive and how he was about to marry her forcibly.Prithvi punched a tree nearby.And then she told him how she ran away from there and how jaichand arrived and saved her and killed Vikram.She was fed up of life and was depressed.so she decided to shun all the royal pleasures and went to maya maa's ashram to gain some peace.There she met Payal....and....."Aur phir tum hume yaha phirse mile....aage toh tum jaante ho..."She looked at prithvi expecting him to say something but was stunned to see tears rolling down his cheeks uncontrollably.He was making no attempt to stop the.He was just staring at her,crying incessantly."Pp..pr..Prithvi....",sanyogita called out softly looking at his state.She herself was in tears.Both were crying incessantly oblivious to surroundings letting out their grief and allowing it to flow in tears....Soon Prithvi regained composure.He walked towards sanyogita.He wiped her tears with back of his hands when his hands lingered a while on her face carressing it.Sanyogita blushed.Prithvi came out of his trance and removed his hand quickly.Both were silent.Finally,Sanyogita: Prithvi...kya baat hai? Tum itne chupchap kyun...Prithvi(cuts her in between and in heavy voice):Mujhe maaf kardo Sanyogita....har uss dard keliye jo anjaane me hi sahi maine tumhe diya hai.... Maaf kardo iss baat keliye ke main tumhare aasun tak nahi poch paaya... Balke main khud tumhare aansun ka karan bana.... Parr...meri koi galati...Sanyogita put her hand on his mouth.... and nodded her head in "no" stopping him from saying further...They were walking in silence when...Sanyogita :" Inn chaar saalon mein humne tumhare baare mein bahot suna....kis tarah tum ek se badhkar ek Raja maharajao ko harate huye aage badh rahe the....Kaise tumne apney hosle aur taakat se saare dushmano ko haraya aur sabhi rajyo ko Dilli ka mitr banaya...."Prithvi(sadly) :" Toh tumne Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan ke baare mein bahot kuch suna hai..."Sanyogita stopped at once.... She could feel the pain in his voice....She could see the pain in his eyes....Somewhere she was guilty for his suffering....But she had her reasons.....Sanyogita :" Prithvi....hum maante hai....kahina kahin humne tumhe bahot chot pahuchyi hai.... hum tumhare iss dukh ka sabse bada karan hai.....parr...."And she stopped...Prithvi knew what was coming....so....Prithvi :" Ab chodo bhi inn sab baaton ko.... Aaj iss waqt hum saath hai , bass main issi mein khush hoon.... Har kshan( every second) jeena chahta hoon main...Pata nahi hum phir kab milenge.... milenge bhi yaa nahi..."The last sentence he added on purpose ! And....it had it's effect.!Sanyogita (angrily) :" Haan... sahi kaha tumne... hum kabhi nahi milenge.... aur tum humse milna bhi kyun chahoge? humesha har samay hum museebat mein phaste rehte hai... Aur humari wajahse tum bhi.... Ab dekhona har baar ki tarah iss baar bhi hum museebat mein phase aur tumhe haume bachane aana pada...."Prithvi (hastily) :" Sanyogita...mere kehne ka matlab woh nahi tha."Sanyogita (On the verge of tears) :" Yahi matlab tha tumhara prithvi... aur ho bhi kyun nahi... hum ... hum bahot bure jo hai... hum bilkul bhi achche.."Prithvi (puts finger on her lips) :" Shshhh.... Meri junglee billi jaisi bhi hai, sabse pyaari hai... aur uss se achcha aur koi nahi hai."Sanyogita looked down....
They both had walked a considerable distance and
had come near a beautiful piece of land with the queues of multicoloured flowers."Woh hum soch rahe the...ke...hum samajhte hai tumhe utsav mein jaane ki jaldi...humara matlab hai,tumhara jaana jaroori hai....parr woh..",she was hesitant."Nandiniji.....aap bina kisi sankoch ke kahiye....",he said smiling coyly.She smiled and spoke in one breath,"Woh hume phoolon se maala banani thi...maata ke liye.""Toh usme kounsi badi baat hai? main abhi..""Nahi...",she raised her hand to stop him.Prithvi raised his eyebrows."Kehte hai ki maala chadhanewale ko khud phool chun kar laana hota hai,warna usse uska Phal nahi milta.Toh kyu na hum waha uss bagiche se khud hi phool tod laaye?""Jee rajkumari!!Jaisi aapki aagyaa !!",Prithvi bowed down folding his hands.She laughed and went in the garden.They entered the garden, and Sanyogita began collecting flowers with an enthusiasm of a small kid....She went near a flower and smelled it to her heart's content and then smiled...Prithvi was observing her each and every move and was smiling at her childishness....She had wore a greenish yellow colour lehenga and blouse with different green shades having white dots as design on it. Her blouse was open from back with all knots tied. She had set her hair open and covered her head by orange colour veil. She was looking so gorgeous and so pretty than he had ever seen her.Each time he saw a different type of beauty in her and wondered how much more should he appreciate her beauteousness. The more he did the lesser it was. Her fair complexion glowed with the dress she wore or the costume was looking good since she wore it, he could not make out. It made her look more slim and tall. Ornaments she wore were like lucent morning dew drops lying on the flower petals. She had set her hair open behind her veil. Prithvi moved his eyes as the hair bud which was dancing on her left smooth cheek.It was troubling her.Sanyogita's both hands were full of flowers. So neither could she move that bud behind, nor she could collect more flowers.She was annoyed with it and Prithvi was finding her expressions so cute.He was grinning at her annoyance.Sanyogita spared a glance at him and found him grinning.That flared her temper." Tum waha khade khade hass rahe ho? Yaha aao aur hamari madad karo!"Prithvi shook his head and went near her.He put forward his hand carrying a big Drona (container made out of stiching the leaves together with leaf stalks{basket}) and smiled at her.....She lowered her eyes, a shy smile playing on her lips.' Hamare kuch kehnese pehle hi kaise samajh leta hai prithvi sab kuch? ', she mused.She put her flowers in the basket and held it.She was about to turn to collect more flowers when Prithvi hold her free hand.He slowly pulled her closer....He raised his hand to her left cheek and softly moved the lock behind her ear while looking deep in her eyes.Sanyogita was blushing red at his gesture. She quickly freed her hand from his grip and turned to collect flowers so that he won't see her blushing.But he had already seen it and a mysterious smile played on his lips....She collected ample flowers and looked around for Prithvi.She saw him coming with some Fruits in his hands." Phool ikkattha kar liye?"" Haan.."" Achcha chalo...Ab kuch khalo. Tumne subhese kuch nahi khaya..."" Arey par humne doodh toh peeya tha na?" , She asked mischievously...Prithvi started laughing at that." Baapre !! Uss doodh ki toh yaad bhi mat karna!"And Sanyogita too joined him laughing.
Prithvi held out a fruit to her.She took it and," Tum bhi lo naa..."" Ah...nahi...mera matlab mujhe bhookh nahi hai..."" Areey....aise kaise bhookh nahi hai?"" Nahi hai. Aur tum jaldise khaa lo. Ye bade mushkil se mile hai...aur phir hame jaldi jaana bhi hai."" Tum bhi hamare saath khao." , She was stubborn." Sanyogita...Zidd mat karo. Aur jaldi..."" Dekho...Agar tum nahi khaoge,toh hum bhi nahi khayenge."" Huh...Tum Zidd karna kab chodogi Sanyogita?"" Jab tum hamari baat maan ne lagoge."" JUNGLEE BILLI !"" BIGDAA RAIIS !!"Both of them started laughing and sat under a mango tree to have those fruits.Both of them were having those fruits silently gazing each other when suddenly Prithvi looked up and saw something.He then smiled at Sanyogita mischievously." Kya hua? " , Sanyogita asked not getting exactly why he was smiling." Tumhe yaad hai? Koteshwar Yatra ki shuruvat mein tum ekbaar aisehi ek pedh par chadhi thi....Aur phir girte girte kis tarah latak rahi thi! " , He asked laughing." Woh...woh hum aisehi... woh humara Pair phisal gaya tha issliye." , She answered embarassed." Achcha? " , Prithvi laughed harder." Aur nahi toh kya? Aur tum...tum yeh hassna bandh karo...."Prithvi laughed even harder." Dekho Prithvi....theek hai.... hum abhi tumhe iss pedh par chadh ke batate hai..."" Tum toh rehne do...", Prithvi said trying hard to conrol his laughter." Agar humne chadh ke bata diya toh?"Prithvi saw some flowers scatterd around the basket, which obviously had fallen when sanyogita was putting it down....." Tum apne phool sambhalo wohi kaafi hai....pedh par chadh ke aam todna to bahot door ki baat hai...", He teased her." Theek hai...ab hum tumhe dikhate hai, ke hum aam bhi todh sakte hai aur apne phool bhi sambhal sakte hai."Saying this she got up and began climbing tree carrying the basket around her waist tied tightly with her duppatta." Sanyogita...dekho...tum rehne do. tumhe yeh sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai....main bass mazaak kar raha tha."" Nahi prithvi.... Hum bhi ek Rajputani hai...ab hum peeche nahi hat sakte!"Prithvi just shook his head in disbelief.Nothing was in his hands now, except watching her climb.She climbed and reached near intersection of a big branch.She turned around to look at Prithvi and gave him a victorious smile. Just then she lost her concentration and balance and she fell......only to land in his arms....Prithvi had reflexely moved forward seeing her fall.The basket tied around her waist had set free in her attempts to save herself from falling.Flowers from the basket fall on them and it seemed as if flowers are showered on them. Flower petals settled on their hair, face, clothes. They looked at each other. The time stopped and everything around seemed freezed. Sanyogita was as delicate as flower for Prithvi. They again got a chance to be so close. Sanyogita was wiping off the petals from her face by moving her head. Her hands were around his neck. Those petals were causing irritation on her face. Prithvi noticed that and slowly brought his face more close to her. She got goose bumps in her stomach but did not react and kept looking at him. She did not pay attention to the irritation anymore. He softly blowed the petals from her face and found her flickering eye-lashes, her half open lips so beautiful."Tum sach mein bahot khubsurat ho Sanyogita."said Prithvi staring in her eyes.He wished never to put her down. For few seconds they made no movements.He slowly put her down and both were lost in each other, their eyes hooked at each other.With the blowing breeze, her hair bud freely flew over her face, touching her cheeks and lips. Prithvi was steadily looking at her. She lowered her eyes and stood quiet. He realised that even in her simplest form she is the most beautiful woman he ever saw. He caught an influencing beauty in her Simplicity. He did not wish anyone, except for him, to notice this beauty of her.But those locks of hairs were obstructing his view of her. He slowly reached her face and gently moved those locks away while his hand lingered on her face, caressing it.She shivered at his touch. Suddenly a rabbit went pass her and she came back to reality. She understood what was going on between them and moved back and turned to leave.But Prithvi has caught her wrist,making her stop." Bass Sanyogita....bass. Ab aur nahi bhagogi tum. Kyun? Aakhi kya galati hai meri? Aisa kaunsa dosh hai mera jo tum mujhe, mere pyaar ko is tarah thukra deti ho baar baar....Main tumhari zindagi se door raha, yeh soch kar ki shayad .....shayad kisi din tumhe mere pyaar ka ehsaas hoga....Parr tum nahi lauti sanyogita.....tum nahi lauti. Toh phir aaj itna upkaar kardo aur meri yeh soch ko galat saabit kardo ki kabhi tumne mujhse pyaar kiya tha....Kehdo ki tumne kabhi mujhse pyaar hi nahi kiya...kabhi bhi nahi.....woh mera sirf wehem tha. kam se kam mujhe kam peeda hogi. Main yeh sochkar jee lunga ki jisse maine itna pyaar kiya, ussne kabhi mujhe chaha hi nahi....."His words made her cry badly....How could she say that....say such things to Prithvi, whom she loved more than her life. Tears were flowing uncontrollably and she hid her face in her palms.Prithvi went closer and tried to uncover her face. She resisted, but finally he succeed. He slowly lift her chin with his finger." Meri aankhon mein dekho Sanyogita."She slowly lifted her gaze to look into his eyes, only to see tears welling up his eyes.Sanyogita slowly lifted her hand to wipe his tears, while he leaned into her touch." Main jaanta hoon....tum aisa kabhi nahi keh sakti. Kyunki....kyunki meri junglee billi mujhse bahot pyaar karti hai..........bahot bahot pyaar."Sanyogita bit her lip to control herself from crying....but...."Kyun sanyogita kyun? Kyun apne aap ko rok rahi ho? "" Prithvi...."" Main tumse...main tumse bahot pyaar karta hoon sanyogita....mar jaaunga main tumhare bina."" Prithvi !!", there was anger in her eyes , " Agar phirse aisi baat kahi na toh hum...toh hum......"" Kyun Sanyogita? kya fark padhta hain tumhe mere hone na hone se?"" Fark padhta hai....bahot fark padhta hai prithvi."" Kyun??"" Kyunki...."" Haan Sanyogita bolo...."" Kyun ki hum tumse bahot pyaar karte hai prithvi....bahot zyaada pyaar..."And she hugged him tightly, while he hugged her back.Both were very happy and both were crying....Love is strange....Their happiness was making them cry....They forgot everything else....All they remember was only the other person hugging them.He was pulling her closer as much as possible, to assure himself that she was really there.....And the atmosphere was filled with only two names....." Prithvi...."" Sanyogita....."As they kept chanting each other's name.....*********************************
by da way ek tho bhool karthi ho aur phir kehti ho..... did we forget u.....to be honest i missed u loads....where do u be nowadays....anyways lets get cracking to ur lovely part 33's tareef.....
wow mandy i feel like decorating u wid diamonds and pearls......such a lovely update....love u loads....u added so much love and affection......aur ye kya sanyo confesses her love....such a sweet scene between prc and sanyo....i loved the part wen he stops her and says ab aur nahi....i cant live widout u....o ma gorjas prithvi....he sounded like a king of hearts........akir sanyo ne confess kar hi lia hai...ab aye ga maza......i loved the part where sanyo climbs the tree and falls into her prince charmings arms....aur haan meri jaan...tussi bhi kitne romantic ho....kitna acha little romance dikhaya...it was an adorable scene
wow mandy....we can neva forget you and we can neva forget your wonderful work
such a superb...great and an mindblowing update
it was awesome ...looking more than forwArd to the next update...my angel
Mangal Lakshmi
