KriYa OS : The Feeling : Update - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi all ,

decided to write an OS on current scenario...will write the OS on mumbai scene later 😉

Promo : Morning ...P is sleeping , a smile on her lips ... K , lying close to her is awake , as the sun's rays pour in ... he , lovingly looks at his babu ... he lays on his side, props up on his right elbow , n wanders his hand along her beautiful face ...brushing off a strand of silky hair from over her face ...Pratigya slept on ...





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Posted: 13 years ago
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y promo...
u hv taken so much time alreadyy...
come up with os now

lovely promo😉
Edited by teenss - 13 years ago
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Lovely promo Dii now waiting for romantic OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Promo sounds awesome waiting for romance to begin in this os :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Big fan of your OS's...
Waiting for another brilliant OS..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely promo dhanya impatiently waiting for updates
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Its sounding good already👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cool. Carry on. Waiting 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dunno how it turned out ...😕 with a worried mind , I am not able to think straight 😭

Continuation :

Krishna looked at her beautiful face , her rosy red lips n slightly flushed cheeks tempting him….he wanted to know why she was smiling ……………. Pratigya was having a beautiful dream (he last dream about K n her their kids , if anybody remember my OS 'the dream' ) , but this time she was also with them at the fountain , secure in Krishna's hug , her head resting on his broad shoulders as they watched their kids play , running around them…… Krishna bent closer to her face , the sheer serenity n bliss on her face enchanting him…………….


He kissed her forehead , with all the love in the world , his lips lingering on her temple a few sec ……………… Pratigya , sighing contently ,snuggled closer to him , still asleep ………………… krishna smiled at her , trying to pull the cover more securely over her , but stopped ……………. Instead he removed the sheet a bit to reveal her chest n belly …………… his eyes locked on her belly n he slipped his hand inside the drape of her sari, touching , feeling his child ……………. His fingers wandered ever so lightly n caring over his child , through her belly n he felt a lump in his throat , his eyes moistening with sudden emotion …………………… he looked back at his wife , his hand still trying to feel his kid , n felt Pratigya stir ……………… he suddenly withdrew his hand n although he knew he can't feel a child at this early stage , he thought he felt his little babu …………….krishna remembered the agony they had gone through when the negative reports came ...


He sat up, dabbing his eyes , n made to get up , but just couldn't resist from kissing his child , through her belly …………… he said , happy, his face inches from her belly ' I presume u got my kiss , my chutki babu ….. afterall ur mother is my post office who will deliver my love to u ……………..' Pratigya opened her eyes , as she heard his voice ……… she saw him , talking to her belly , no their child n she smiled even broadly………….. krishna , not realizing that Pratigya is awake n was gazing at him with love and amusement , continued ' come to me soon , my little babu …………….i can't wait to hold u forever in my hands …………' Pratigya reached down , her hand caressing his hair , as she said' so has papa-beti started their kich –kich the early morning itself …' krishna looked up surprised ' u r awake ! no….go to sleep …..its a secret between me n my precious little babu …isn't it ?', he patted tenderly over her belly ……………..


Pratigya looked in his eyes n felt he was crying a moment ago n she wanted to tease him …………….. she turned her face away saying 'hmmm… so it' s all about ur little babu now , what about ur 'babu'? u started ignoring me this early' ………she looked at K's slightly alarmed face n turned her face to the opposite side, trying not to giggle , as she continued 'n u r telling me to go to sleep ? hw could I ? with ur chattering? N once she comes I will be ignored like a piece of furniture n ofcourse I won't be able to sleep at all , as papa n his daughter will turn my world upside down ………………hmmm looks like I have to learn to endure more sleepless nights n dawns from now itself …………….'


K , confused , lay down beside her , pulling her to face him, his face above hers …. 'what do u think ? that I will ignore u once our child comes ? how could u think like that babu? Actually I will love u 3-4 time more ………….'n he gave her a quick smooch on her cheek……. Pratigya pouted 'just 3-4 times …………! Ha , u r showing misery even now …………..' 'Miser now , am I ?' krishna said , perturbed …………. Then he noticed the naughty glint in her eyes , which pratigya was too slow to hide …………… 'so , Miser , u call me ………….' Krishna , tightening his grip over her …………….pratigya , realizing that the game is up , giggled , trying to free herself, but still said 'yes, Miser ….. any doubt ……?' …krishna brushed his nose over her left jawline , trying not to lose his control n straddle her , as he said 'I think I ought to show u that I am not a miser , especially when it comes to love my babu….' Pratigya , breathing heavily now , involuntarily turned her head to give him more access to her throat n neck as she whispered huskily 'Oh , yeah ……show me then…..' krishna , looking up n chuckling, said 'are u sure ...? because i remember someone telling me to keep control over my heart n stay away from u ...' Pratigya blushed scarlet , her right hand playing with his collar , but couldn't say anything ... 'eh, tell me what exactly do u want , babu ...' Krishna teased her,his left hand caressing her chin... Pratigya lowered her eyes , shy n stuttered ...'do everything need to be told ...' blushed crimson , n reached up n hugged him , hiding her face in his chest ...


Krishna , smiling in delight, hugged her back for some sec n slowly lowered her head to the bed , his eyes teasing her... krishna said ' I have heard that women have weird wishes when they r pregnant ,but this is just great ...' his nose tracing her cheeks ...Pratigya kept her eyes closed , too shy to meet his ...


krishna bent his mouth to the curve of her neck n kissed her passionately , his hands tenderly snaking up her hands n back …………………pratigya turned fully to his side , melting in his kiss , her fingers finding the back of his neck n hair ………………. That was it ………….krishna , just forgot to be gentle as her pulled her more to him , his lips now capturing hers in a sweet kiss , taking care not to pin her down ………he controlled his urge to go further, with difficulty... He gently sucked her lowerlip, reluctantly releasing a erratically breathing pratigya , his eyes raking her flushed face ………………… their eyes met n they smiled , happiness overwhelming them …………… pratigya reached up n kissed him on the side of his lips , her sore lips trembling ………………… krishna caressed her cheeks n brushed her hair out of her forehead n kissed her tenderly on her temple once more ……..he laid back n pratigya placed her head on his chest , both reveling in each others love , as Pratigya reached sideways to place his hand over her belly …………….. krishna said 'oh , my little babu , this kiss was only meant for ur mother …………….. I will give u loads later …………..' pratigya nudged him on his ribs as she giggled , embracing Krishna more to her ………………..


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Edited by dhakarn - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dhanu chechiii...just superbbb...mwahz for being such a sweetheart...i love this os like something...so pure and lovrly with kriya and their kid...sooo cute...andyes ur prev os...the dteam...thats my fav os of all time...superbbb...love uuu...keep us entertained with such brilliant stuffs!!!

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