KriYa OS:A Perfect Family!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys,
I am extremely disappointed with teh wy how CVs are taking the show forward...Its absolutely disgusting😡...with all unwanted characters gaining all the importance😡...And my longgg wish of seeing Kriya Niwas/KriYa baby had encouraged me to write this OS...My OS will ahve two parts...😛...First Part I am updating now...will update the next soon..😉
And i was listening to the song "Abhi Mujh mein kahin baaki thodi si hai zindagi" from the movie Agneepath...Its one of my fav songs...I just loveee it soo much...and i felt it perfectly suited the situation when K would be having his baby in his arms...especially the part
"Ab hai samne,
isse choo loon zara...Mar jaoon ya jee loon zara...
Khushiyan jhoom loo,
ya ro loon zara,
mar jaoon ya jeeoon zaraa"...
(If not in the serial...atleast in My ff it would be!😉)
Just listen to the song once:
Attention:In my OS you will find few characters coming back...Hmm...Its My FF...so My wish!!And i ahve altered their characters a bit!😉😆
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Krishna knocked on the door of KriYa Niwas but to his amazement no one opened the door...He peeped in through the open windows to find noone inside and he wondered where his babu was...He became worried.

K:Arrey...where has babu gone?

Just then his phone rings and he answeres it...and suddenly his face grew dark and he gave a shocked expression..It was Chandu on the other side who informed K that Pratigya has been admited in the hospital because she got Labour Pain.On hearing this K's face got covered with Dark Clouds.He was badly worried and prayed to God that nothing should happen to his Babu.He remembered the doctor telling about the complication which MIGHT/CAN occur during her delivery.But even then KriYa dedcided not to abort th baby but to give birth to the baby.P convinced K about this and K agreed too.He closed his eyes and said,

K:Hai Bhagwaan...My babu has never ever done a bad deed for anyone...So you too Pls do only good with her and my ghudiya too!...Hi eyes filled with tears!

He rushed to the hospital and saw Chandu waiting in front of the Operation Theatre.

K:Ae chanduwa...what happened?

C:Nothing to worry bhayya...Bhabhi got labour pain and Tunna and I was there in the house at that time,so i directly took her here!

K hugged C and said :Thank You Chanduwa...Thank you!

C:Arrey Bhayya...It was my duty!

K:Where is Tunna?

C:Bhaiyya he went to get some medicines which the doctor told!

After few mins T returns with teh medicines and hand it over to the nurse.K trie to ask the nurse about P's state but the nurse hesitates to say anything which makes K even more worried...

Thakur Family has also arrived as C had informed them too...But they werent in good terms with Krishna and hence KriYa moved out to KriYa Niwas.But Amma,GD and Piyesia always wanted KriYa to stay at TN.Amma was a changed lady after all.She was found by K 6 months back and Amma was good to P too as she was the only one who helped them when KN had captured all the property with the help of menka!KriYa had moved to KriYa Niwas,two years ago.

K saw SS and he gave a disgusted look to SS.Amma was happy to see K and so was GD!Kesar and KN wa sthere too with the biggest and worst attitude!Amma walked towards K and kept her hand on Ks head and said...

A:Dont worry baba...Your partigwa,your baba and you gudiya would be absolutely fine!

K had tears in his eyes now but didnt say anything to Amma...he wanted to hug her and cry his heart off but the KST inside him didnt let him do that.He just didnt want to go week on Knees infront of SS,whom he almosts hates,by now...He loves A and GD a lot and so used to call them to ask them about their whereabouts!

2 hours passed by but still noone came out of the theatre...All this while K's heart was beating hardly...he,in every breath praying for his babu and his baby.

Amma and GD has gone to the place where the idol of Lord Krishna with Radha was placed and was praying for everything to be fine!SS and KN was sitting on the chairs provided.KN as usual was careless abou the situation and he just came there coz he had to come there with his family,not because of the brotherly feeling he had for K and so was Kesar!

T and C was standing near a worried K...

Half an Hour passed more...And now a nurse comes out with a baby in her arms saying "Pratigya's relatives"...And suddenly K rushes to the door...

Nurse:Congratulations...Its a baby girl!!

K smiled widely and for a moment he forgot everything other than his gudiya...The nurse handed over the baby to K and K took her happily...!!

K:Hai bhagwaan...Thank you sooo much...Thank you sooo much for my Ghudiyaa!!

He raised the baby a little...and suddenly he remembered about his Pratigya's condition and he asked the nurse,

K:nurse...How is my wife?Is she alright!!

N:Take Care of the baby...I'll be back after 5 mins to take the baby back...And yea...We are not able to say anything about your wife's condition...We're trying our level best!Pray that everything should be fine!

Saying this she went inside...

K's heart was broken into pieces...He raised his baby a little and kissed on her forehead,lightly!And looked at her innocent cute little face which resembled P partially.

K:Now My world is in my arms...My world...for which I longed for!!Finally My ghudiya,My world has come to her pappa...Now My world is secure in my arms...And now all what I want is My LIFE!My Babu...who is fighting with death there...I want my Life too...Aeee gudiya...Pray that your mamma shoudl be fine...You know what...God never ignores Children's prayers...Pray that your mamma should be back with you and me...You,Your mamma and me...US!!I wanted to see US since a looong time...and now when it almost happened..se how God is playing with us...

SS,Amma and GD had tears ib tehir eyes...and so did T and C...

K was crying badly now...and his baby innocently listened in his arms,with her cute little eyes closed...

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How wa sit guys...If you liked it then I'll continue!😊😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww my Neechu Jaani...this OS is Wonderful beautiful n emotional too 🤗...likeed ur love n wish for kriya baby😊...Enjoyed it... but on other side i m sad tooo😭😭Cvs r not fulfiling our demands, wishes...n we all kriya lovers r helpless cant do anything...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww conitnue it...😳
i knw prats will be f9..🤗
jsst vnna see perfect family😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArryArooj

Awww my Neechu Jaani...this OS is Wonderful beautiful n emotional too 🤗...likeed ur love n wish for kriya baby😊...Enjoyed it... but on other side i m sad tooo😭😭Cvs r not fulfiling our demands, wishes...n we all kriya lovers r helpless cant do anything...😭

Thank you sooo much arooj jaanu...
i am glad u enjoyed it...hmmm how i wish CVs cud surprise us like this!CryCryCryhate dem for that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: teenss

aww conitnue it...😳

i knw prats will be f9..🤗
jsst vnna see perfect family😛

yea...i'll ocntinue soon Tongue
acha...so u know taht P wud be fine..hmmm...den ok...OS ENDED🤣...LOL...KIDDING...THANK U SO MUCH teena dear!EmbarrassedTongue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome n Damn touchy... Had tears in my eyes... Well written Nechu...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veena.S

Awesome n Damn touchy... Had tears in my eyes... Well written Nechu...👏

Thank u soo much dii...
I am glad u like dit!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What is the need to ask to continue or not...?
Just continue... Lovely OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kabe

What is the need to ask to continue or not...?
Just continue... Lovely OS

tHANK YOU SO MUCH AKKA...
will continuee soone😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lubbly os:)update the next part soon.

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