FF: Kriya made for each other pt18 updtd pg#72 - Page 28

Created

Last reply

Replies

656

Views

39.3k

Users

27

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

abhiloveriya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rahul.verma

very nice update...i loved it...plz update next..

cant wait ...

thanks bro...glad u liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ i will update very soon.๐Ÿ˜Š
abhiloveriya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago



Krishna-"What!!! Amrita tum pagal ho gayi ho...!!๐Ÿ˜ก Tumhe kuch andaza bhi hai ki tumne kya kiya he...!!" ๐Ÿ˜ก

Amrita-"Haan...Main pagal ho gayi hun kyunki mujhe tum jaisa friend mila hai jisne buri se buri situation mein hamesha meri help ki hai...tum sirf mere dost hi nahi ho...mere sab kuch ho...aur main ye kabhi nahi bhul sakti.." ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Krishna-"Lekin amrita tumne kuch jyaada kar diya mere liye..!!"๐Ÿ˜ณ

Amrita-"Maine tumhare liye es show ki saari tickets kharidi...ye koi bada kaam nahi kiya maine...aur wese bhi tumne mere liye jo kuch bhi kiya hai...ye to uska half bhi nahi hai.."๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ณ

Krishna-"ok...ok...ab mujhe batao ki tumne es sab ke liye kitna kharcha kiya???" ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Amrita-"Dnt ask me ok!!!๐Ÿ˜ก Aaj tumhara birthday hai...to tum sirf enjoy karo aur sab kuch bhul jao.."๐Ÿ˜ณ

Jo kuch bhi amrita ne kiya tha usse Krishna bilkul bhi khush nahi tha lekin party me sabko dikhane ke liye khush hone ka drama kar raha tha

Krishna-"Thik hai amrita...jaisa tum chaho..!!"๐Ÿ˜Š

Krishna party me cake par lagi hui candles ko bhujata hai aur phir cake ko kat ta hai...

party me sabhi milkar taaliyon ke saath krishna ka birthday celebrate kar rahe the...ek jashn ka mahaul ho gaya tha...sabhi bahut khush nazar aa rahe the...

Krishna cake katne ke baad sabse pehle amrita ko apne hatho se cake khilakar uska muh meetha karta hai...


Pratigya ko yeh sab bilkul acha nahi lag raha tha...krishna aur amrita ke beech badhti nazdikiyon ko dekhkar pratigya man hi man jalan mehsoos karne lagi thi...

Pratigya krishna ke thoda kareeb jati hai..

Pratigya-"Many many happy returns of day!!! May god bless u!!!"๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Krishna-"Thanks pratigya...maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera birthday itna special hoga...kyunki maine kabhi bhi apna birthday es tarah se celebrate nahi kiya...Sach me main bahut lucky hun ki amrita jaisi friend meri life me hai.."๐Ÿ˜›

Pratigya-"Krishna ab mujhe jana hoga.."๐Ÿ˜ณ

Krishna-"kahan aur kyun...!!!"๐Ÿ˜•

Pratigya-"Actually DAD ne mujhse kuch jaruri kaam karne ke liye kaha tha to me soch rahi hun ki abhi wo kaam kar leti hoon ..."๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ณ

Krishna-"Lekin mere saamne tumhare papa ne tumko mere saath enjoy karne ko bola tha na to tum kaam ko lekar achanak itni tension me kyun ho???? Aur yahan se kyun jana chahti ho??? Kya tumhe yahan hamare saath acha nahi lag raha hai...!!!๐Ÿ˜•"

Pratigya-"Nahi krishna...aisa bilkul nahi hai...mujhe sach me yahan aakar bahut khushi hui hai aur esi bahane mujhe pata chal gaya ki aaj tumhara birhday hai..aur DAD ne jo kaha wo sirf esiliye kyunki wo mujhse bahut jyada pyaar karte hain..aur unhone hamesha mujhe khulkar jeene ki azaadi di aur abhi bhi dete hai...lekin ab main unse aur azaadi nahi chahti ...hamare parents hamare liye kitna kuch karte hai na krishna ...lekin ham young generation ye sab bhul jate hai sirf aur sirf enjoy karne ke liye,...krishna hame ye nahi bhulna chahiye...hame kuch karna chahiye esiliye mujhe ye party chhodkar jana hi hoga..."๐Ÿ˜ณ

Krishna pratigya ki jubaan se ye lafz sunkar shock reh jata hai...

krishna man hi man khud se baat karne lagta hai ki-

"Main kitna bura insaan hun...badle ki aag mein main kitna neeche gir gaya...Main pratigya ke saath kitna galat karne ja raha tha...๐Ÿ˜กPratigya ka dil to bilkul shudh sone(pure gold) jaisa hai...aur me usi dil ko dard dene ja raha tha...mujhe pratigya ko dhokha nahi dena chahiye..."๐Ÿ˜ณ

Pratigya-"Krishna tum kya soch rahe ho ...??"๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜•

Krishna-"Kuch nahi pratigya!!! Agar tum jana chahti ho to me tumhe bilkul bhi nahi rokunga...bas do minute ruko me abhi tumhe tumhare ghar chhod deta hoon."๐Ÿ˜Š

Pratigya-"Thanks krishna...!!๐Ÿ˜Š Lekin aaj tumhara birthday hai...tumhari yahan party chal rahi hai hai..tum apne friends ke saath yahan khub enjoy karo...main khud se ghar chali jaungi."๐Ÿ˜ณ

Amrita-"Pratigya..krishna sahi keh raha hai...tumhe krishna ke saath jana chahiye ...ye tumhe safely ghar chhod dega..."๐Ÿ˜›

Krishna-"Amrita mujhe lagta hai ki ham sabhi ko ab yahan se chale jana chahiye...tumne aaj ka din mere kiye itna special banaya ki ye din hamesha mujhe yaad rahega...ese main kabhi bhi nahi bhulunga...thank u very very much for all this wht u have done for me..."๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Vicky-"Lekin krishna ..Amrita ne itne pyaar se tumhare liye poora show book kar diya..aur tum ho ki movie bina dekhe hi ja rahe ho.."๐Ÿ˜•


Krishna-"Sorry amrita...lekin abhi me movie nahi dekh sakta kyunki party hi itni shaandar ho gayi ki movie dekhne ks mood hi off ho gaya..."๐Ÿ˜›

Amrita-"Its ok krishna...no need to say sorry...!! I understand ur feeling...aur tum sahi keh rahe the ki ab hame yahan se chale jana chahiye..kyunki wese bhi ab hamara yahan koi kaam hai nahi..tumhara birthday celebrate karna tha wo hamne kar diya.."๐Ÿ˜ณ

Krishna-"Thik hai phir main pratigya ke saath jata hun...ham shaam ko milte hai..."๐Ÿ˜Š

Amrita-"Ok krishna...u may go nw...ham pakka shaam ko milenge.."๐Ÿ˜ณ

Krishna aur pratigya cinema hall se bahar nikal aa jate hai..

Pratigya krishna ki bike par baith jati hai..lekin es baar wo krishna se dur rehne ki koshish karti hai...krishna apni bike start kar pratigya ko lekar wahan se nikal jata hai...

Raste mein Kuch gunde badmaash aapas me ek dusre se baatein kar rahe the...tabhi unki nazar krishna ki ati hui bike par padti hai...

unme se ek kehne laga-"Bhaiyo wo dekho ek item bomb ja raha hai...

Dusra kehta hai-"sahi keh rahe ho bhai...sach me wo ladki nahi...patakha hai...๐Ÿ˜ก

Teesra kehta hai-"To chalo phir ham sab milkar es patakhe ko fodte hai.. ๐Ÿ˜ก

Teeno badmaash apni bike nikalkar krishna aur pratigya ka peecha karne lagte hai..

Jab teeno badmaash krishna aur pratigya ke kareeb aa jate hai to sab milkar pratigya par comment karne lagte hain...

"Aur chhamiya kahan ja rahi ho...hamein bhi saath me le chalo.."๐Ÿ˜ก

"Ham kaa mar gaye the jo tum is launde ke saath ja rahi ho.."๐Ÿ˜ก

"Aur bulbul...meri bike tumhare liye bilkul khaali hai...aajao hamari bike par baith jao...jahan kahogi wahan chhod denge... "๐Ÿ˜ก

Krishna ko ye gande comments sunkar gussa aa jata hai...aur apni bike ko ek jagah rok leta hai...teeno badmash bhi apni bike ko wahin rok dete hai...

Krishna bike se utarkar un teeno ke pass jata hai...

Krishna-"Haan to bandaro tum kya keh rahe the...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†tum us ladki ko chamiya aur bulbul kehkar bula rahe the aur tumhe uske saath ghumna hai...to gandhi ji ke bandaro tum tyaar ho jao..๐Ÿ˜†main tumhe aaj jannat ghumane wala hun..."๐Ÿ˜†

Teeno ek saath bole-"jannat!!! Kaisi jannat!!!! ๐Ÿ˜•

Krishna-"abhi batata hun..."๐Ÿ˜†

Krishna teeno ko ek saath pitna shuru kar deta hai... laat ghunse khakar teeno ka bura haal ho jata hai...last me unki haalat aisi ho gayi thi ki wo chal bhi nahi pa rahe the..

Krishna unko wahin chhodkar pratigya ke saath nikal hi raha tha ki achanak unhi teeno me se ek ne bike ke tyre par goli cnala di jisse krishna ka balance bigad gaya ..aur dono hi jameen par gir pade...

Pratigya bike se girkar ek bahut bade gadde me jakar fas gayi ..pratigya sirf ek haath se gadde me latki hui thi...wo krishna krishna jor se chillati hai...

Krishna pratigya ki awaaz sunkar us gadde ke pass pahunch jata hai...

Pratigya-"krishna , plz mujhe bacha lo...mera haath chhutne wala hai..."

Krishna apna haath aage kar pratigya ke haath ko tightly pakadkar jor se khichta hai...

pratigya gadde se bahar aa jati hai...aur gadde se bahar ate hi krishna ko jor se hug karti hai...

Pratigya-"Krishna tumne aaj mujhe nayi jindgi di hai...love u krishna...i love u very much..!!!!"๐Ÿ˜ณโค๏ธ

Krishna-"i Love u too pratigya..."โค๏ธ

Krishna aur pratigya ek dusre ki aankho me kho jate hain...dheere dheere unke lips pass ane lagte hai...aur last me dono ke lips mil jate hai...krishna aur pratigya lip kiss ka mazaa lete hain..

Krishna aur pratigya ke milan ke saath hi baarish bhi hone lagti hai...
dono apne lips ko alag karte hai...
aur baarish me dono khulkar bhigne lagte hain...

Edited by abhishek_kriyaa - 13 years ago
billaway thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Abhishek! Very well written! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
hussainramso thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
K ne Amrita ke liye kya kiya hai jo woh itni shukar guzaar hai???
Khoob pyar baazi bhi chal rahi thi.
Good update!
abhiloveriya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: billaway


Lovely update Abhishek! Very well written!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Thanks dear...Glad u liked it...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

abhiloveriya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meanreds

K ne Amrita ke liye kya kiya hai jo woh itni shukar guzaar hai???
Khoob pyar baazi bhi chal rahi thi.
Good update!

Thanks di...Glad u liked it...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Krishna ne amrita ke liye kya kiya hai eska raaz next part me khulega jab pratigya krishna se es baare me puchhegi.
Bruce_L thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one Abhi...
Loved last part, please update soon, dont take this long ๐Ÿ˜ณ
abhiloveriya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kabe

Nice one Abhi...
Loved last part, please update soon, dont take this long ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thanks kavi...Glad u liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I will try 2 update very soon...๐Ÿ˜Š


Veena.S thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Wah! Ekdum filmy ๐Ÿ˜†, i guessed it half right na Abhishek, Pratz jealous hogayi... So now Krish truly loves Pratz... i juz loved it..!!..๐Ÿ˜›
abhiloveriya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena.S

Wah! Ekdum filmy , ๐Ÿ˜†i guessed it half right na Abhishek, Pratz jealous hogayi... So now Krish truly loves Pratz... i juz loved it..!!..๐Ÿ˜›

filmi๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†

Ya u r right..it is little bit filmy...bt mujhe pata tha tumhe ye pasand ayega...

Thanks for liking this part...๐Ÿ˜ƒ




Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".