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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ssrbaqri

What???? Krishna is going to 'USE' pratigya. No, Abhishek... Ur krishna is not seedha sadha like our real Krishna. Lol.
Lovely FF.

Thanks bro...Glad u liked...😃

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Ya krishna is very daring person in my FF...

But dnt worry i will write one more FF...in which krishna will very seedha sadha like our real krishna...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant update bro 👍🏼
Bt krish playing wid pratigya feeling 😭
Update next soon 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: billaway


Well written Abhishek! Love the dialogues!

Thanks bill...Glad u liked it...😃

Nd thanks for appreciating me...i will write much better than this...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari

Brilliant update bro 👍🏼
Bt krish playing wid pratigya feeling 😭
Update next soon 😍

Thanks muskaan...Glad u liked it...😃

Everything will be fine...dnt feel bad...

I will update next part very soon...nd next part will be like a treat for u...😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhishek_kriyaa

Thanks muskaan...Glad u liked it...😃

Everything will be fine...dnt feel bad...

I will update next part very soon...nd next part will be like a treat for u...😊



will w8 for it😊😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari


will w8 for it😊 india-forums.com/smileys/smiley32.gif" />

Ok then...jst wait 2 days...i will be back with next update on sunday...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks dear...Glad u liked it...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part7 is very nice...i jst loved it...
Update next ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rahul.verma


Part7 is very nice...i jst loved it...
Update next ...

Thanks bro..Glad u liked it..

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 8



SINGHANIYA MANSION


Pratigya-"Thank you krishna!!! Par me tumhare saath nahi chal sakti...im sorry!!"

Krishna-"Its ok pratigya!! Me janta hu ki mera es tarah yahan aana aur tumhe movie ke liye le jane ki baat kehna yahan sabhi ko bahut ajeeb lag raha hoga...lekin me yahan ek friend ke naate aya tha...par tum nahi jana chahti to koi baat nahi.."

Anjali-"krishna beta!!! Ye baat sach hai ki tumhara yahan aana aur pratigya ko le jane ki baat kehna hame ajeeb jarur laga lekin hame jara bhi bura nahi laga...kyunki tumne pratigya se jo kaha wo ham sabhi ke saamne kaha...aur esse ye saabit ho jata he ki tum bahut hi ache parivar se ho warna aajkal ke ladke to ladki ke saath ghar ke bahar baat karna jyada pasand karte hain...

Krishna-"Lekin phir bhi mujhse ek galti ho gayi...mujhe pratigya se kuch kehne se pehle aap logon se permission le leni chahiye thi..."

Rajesh-"Tumhe permission hi chahiye na...mene tumko permission di... Tum pratigya ko le ja sakte ho... Hamein isse koi objection nahi hai.."

Pratigya-"Par dad..."

Rajesh-"Par var kuch nahi ...mene keh diya ki tum krishna ke saath ja rahi ho matlab ja rahi ho...bas baat khatam.."

Pratigya yahi to chahti thi ki wo krishna ke saath jaye..aur use permission bhi mil chuki thi esiliye pratigya ki khushi ka thikana nahi tha...

Pratigya-"Ok dad..aap itna keh rahe ho to me mana nahi karungi...par me vaada karti hu ki lautne ke baad office jarur join kar lungi..."

Rajesh-"eski koi jarurat nahi hai Tum office kal se join kar lena...aaj tum enjoy karo.."

Pratigya-"Love u dad!!"

Rajesh-"Love u too beta..."

Krishna aur pratigya singhaniya mansion ke bahar nikal aate hai...

Pratigya krishna ki bike par baith jati hai...aur krishna bike start kar jhatke ke saath bike ko aage badhata hai...pratigya ka balance achanak bigad gaya aur wo girne se bach gayi..

Pratigya ka balance bike par baar baar bigad raha tha..

Pratigya-"Krishna...me thik se tumhari bike par baith nahi pa rahi hu...aur tum bhi bike ko itni speed me chala rahe ho mujhe to yamraj nazar ane lage..."

Krishna-"jo bhi meri bike par baithta hai..yahi kehta hai...lekin tum tension mat lo..Tum mujhko jitna bhi tight pakad sakti ho utna tight pakdo...tumhare yamraj ji tumhare aas pass bhi nahi bhatkenge..."

Pratigya krishna ko itna tightly pakad leti hai ki road par chalne wale log apni aankho ko ragad rahe the...aisa lag raha tha jese dono ko kisi ne fevicol lagakar jod diya ho..

Akhirkaar krishna nd pratigya apne destination par pahunch hi jate hai...

Krishna ke sabhi dost krishna aur pratigya ke fevicol jod ko dekhkar apni ungliyo ka nashta kar rahe the(they were chewing their fingers)

Amrita-"vicky, ye dekho es ladki ko kaise krishna se chipak gayi hai..."

Vicky-"wahi to me dekh raha hu amrita!!! Dono ko es tarah se chipka hua dekhkar aaj mujhe inme ek heer aur ek raanjha dikhayi de rahe hain.."

Amrita-"Chup...bilkul chup...agar ab kuch bola na to mere haath se maar khayega..."

Vicky-"Ok..ab me kuch bolunga hi nahi..jab bhi kuch bolta hu...hamesha tum logo se daant padti hai..."

krishna-"Aur vicky, sabki tickets le li na...???"

Vicky kuch bolta nahi...sirf sar hilakar haan me jawab deta hai..

Pratigya dekhti hai ki theatre par bahar bilkul bheed hi nahi hai aur na hi bahar koi cycles,bikes ya car khadi hai..aur bahar housefull ka board laga hua hai...

Pratigya-"Ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi hai ki theatre ke bahar jara bhi bheed nahi hai...na kisi ki bike ya car khadi hai phir ye housefull ka board kaise laga hua hai..."

Krishna-"Haan...ye baat to hai...mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai ki ye housefull ka board kaise laga hua hai.."

"Vicky, tu to yahan bahut der se khada hua hai...ye sab majhra kya hai...!!!"

Vicky phir kuch nahi bolta...

Krishna-"kuch bolta kyun nahi hai...juban par taala kyun latka rakha hai tune???"

Amrita-"Me batati hun krishna...wo actual me aaj sab paidal hi aaye...kisi ke pass koi bike ya car nahi thi...aur abhi wo cinema hall ke andar hi hai...sirf ham log bahar khade hue hai tumhare intezar me...bas krishna ab koi aur sawal mat karna...kyunki ab tumne koi sawal kiya to movie bahut nikal jayegi...phir movie dekhne ka maja nahi aayega..."

Krishna-"haan yaar...nahi karta sawal lekin tum itni tension me kyun ho???"

Amrita-"ab agar tumhe apne dimag me ghum rahe sawalo ka jawab chahiye to ek baar andar aao...tumhe saare sawalon ka jawab khud mil jayega..."

Krishna pratigya aur apne friends ke saath andar hall me kadam rakhta hai...

Hall me bilkul andhera tha...kisi bhi tarah ki koi awaaz nahi thi...krishna ke kadam wahi par ruk jate hain...

Krishna-"vicky, ye sab kya hai...yahan itna andhera kyun hai???"

Vicky-"Yahan itna andhera esiliye hai kyunki..."

Thodi hi der me hall me charo taraf roshni hi roshni ho jati hai aur krishna ke sar par phoolon ki barsaat hone lagti hai...samne hi ek bahut badi table par cake rakha hua tha jis par likha hua

'HAPPY BIRTHDAY KRISHNA'

Jitni krishna ki age hai utni hi cake par candles lagi hui thi...

Amrita,vicky,ajay aur anurag sabhi krishna ko milkar happy birthday wish karte hai...

krishna ye sab dekhkar bahut khush ho jata hai...aur pratigya bhi krishna ka birthday celebration dekhkar bahut khush ho jati hai...

Amrita-"I hope tumhe apne sawalon ka jawab mil gaya hai..."

Krishna-" jawab to mil gaya hai lekin abhi bhi ye baat samajh nahi aa rahi hai ki bahar housefull ka board kyun laga hua hai..."

Amrita-"Kyunki mene tumhare liye es show ki saari tickets kharid li hai...!!!!!"

Krishna-"WHAT..!!!!!"

To be continued...
Edited by abhishek_kriyaa - 13 years ago

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