FF **LoVe QuAdRaNgUlAr** Part 12 updtd on PG 95* - Page 68

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ashu, 🤗
Ankita was exceptional 🤣 🤣
My Poor Vicky Bhai. 😭 😭 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life


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<font color="#9900cc">super update!!</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Muski ko Ami se pyaar ho gaya. 😍 truly amazing ishtory 🤣 🤣 </font>
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<font color="#9900cc">Vicky bhai, tumhari koi GF nahi hai?? 🥺 🤣 🤣</font>
<font color="#9900cc">KriYa as always.. ☺️ ☺️</font>
<strong><font color="#9900cc">Overall, the Update was *just as my Viraaj says.. * Good.. Very Good </font>

Thankoo Sweets glad u liked it ...
Hmm afterall the story is about 4 lovers toh love toh hona hi tha naa 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ash_arja



@black..🤣🤣... viky bhai toh khud hi ladkiyon se bhaag rahe hai... see how he was irritated with Ankita and how he was running from her🤣

vicky ko allergy hai ladkiyoon se 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Uff.. Yeh Vicky Bhai 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vaha!! 👏Lovely uptade.😳 Hii Well I think I am not too late to comment.
Abhi story mein romance ki entry hogaye. ☺️ N pyaar ka ezzhar toh hua 😉
While reading Kriya's part I kept guessing aage kya hoga😲, interesting part. 👏Knw whos next hun Amit ya vikram🤣
Ye vikcy's sis is very clever.😈 Apne bro ko acche se guide kar rahi hai.😉
Amit ka toh bad luck hi bad hai,😆 Vicky se toh dushmani hai he ab toh uska Best frnd Krishna bhi oppsostion party mein chala gay.😲😭 Aab tumhara kya hoga amit babu. 😕😲 Oops ye Simmie ki entry 🤔 hmmm frnd , 😃uske entry ka kya raaz hai Guess next post mein raaz khulega 😆
so 😉Wating fr the next😍

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MuktaJaiswal

Vaha!! 👏Lovely uptade.😳 Hii Well I think I am not too late to comment. well done ur emos was superb 👏👏 nope u r nt late di 🤗
Abhi story mein ro mance ki entry hogaye. ☺️ N pyaar ka ezzhar toh hua 😉 hmm vo toh kabhi naa kabhi hona hi tha naa😉
While reading Kriya's part I kept guessing aage kya hoga😲, interesting part. 👏Knw whos next hun Amit ya vikram🤣 hmm enjoy this suspense then😆😆
Ye vikcy's sis is very clever.😈 Apne bro ko acche se guide kar rahi hai.😉 hmm us se durr hu mai ..pata nahi kya hoga agge😆😆
Amit ka toh bad luck hi bad hai,😆 Vicky se toh dushmani hai he ab toh uska Best frnd Krishna bhi oppsostion party mein chala gay.😲😭 Aab tumhara kya hoga amit babu. 😕 humm don't worry di hum mill kar vicky kaa band bajayenge🤣🤣 Oops ye Simmie ki entry 🤔 hmmm frnd , 😃uske entry ka kya raaz hai Guess next post mein raaz khulega 😆
so 😉Wating fr the next😍 hmm uskaa raaz apko jald hi pata pad jayegaa jii
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Thanks di ..glad u liked it ..keep reading and enjoying😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Uff.. Yeh Vicky Bhai 🤣 🤣


kya hua😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vikram0669


feeling lot better Now. i'm completely fine😊


🤣 Agr jaldi nai mane AMIt bro to phr maar to khani pare Gi 😡 😆
R ajnabi ka intezar kyuu Ankita a gae hai na 😳 Glad to know that u r fine now 😊
And yup missing my muskie bee 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari


🤣 Agr jaldi nai mane AMIt bro to phr maar to khani pare Gi 😡 😆
R ajnabi ka intezar kyuu Ankita a gae hai na 😳 Glad to know that u r fine now 😊
And yup missing my muskie bee 😭


kyu gg mai kya darta hu vicky se dekha nhi kaise pitai kari thi maine vicky jii kii😉😆😆
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Next day at the college '


Vikram came to college along with his Project synopsis, he was looking for Ankita

He looks here and there but could'nt foind her so he decided to move to the canteen to look out Ankita'

Vikram reached Canteen and sat at on of the chairs ..he was waiting impatiently for Ankita ..he continues to stare the canteen main entry door ..

He wonders "ye Ankita abhi tak ayii kyu nahi hai?? "'

he started reading synopsis ..

After 1 hour later Ankita came and sat in front of him '


Vikram: aap kahan thi last 1 hour se yahan par aapka intezar kar raha hun coffee peeta reh gaya

Ankita got angry and in anger she shout on Vikram:

"achha tum 1 hour se intezar kar rahe ho toh tumhe gussa aa raha hai ? aur maine kal tumhara pura din intezaar kiya uskaa kya? kahan the kal tum jab maine kahan tha ki morning 10:00 bajemilna kyunki hume project kee bare mai discuss karna tha ' par tum toh aaye hi nahi kyun?? samjhte kya ho tum apne aap ko VIP ho jo tumse milne ke liye tumhara intezar karte rahe bas aur tum aao hi nahi.agar tumhe mere sath project nahi banana hai ya mere sath koi problem hai toh bol do main at least main tumhara intezaar toh nahi karti rahungi.bolo kal kyu nahi aaye ?"


Vikram think in his min: ."arre baap re ye toh Durga maa nikali yaar jo mere uper hunter barsaye hi jaa rahi hai beta Vicky agar ise pata chalega ki main kal ghar pe sho raha tha toh mera toh keema hi bana dalegi. hey bhagwan mujhe bacha lo aaj isase ya kuch idea do jisase main bacha lun apne aap ko."

Ankita: maine pucha kal kahan the ' toh bolti band kyun ho gayi kal aaram farma rahe hoge janab ..aab ye kya denge jawab '.bolo naa kyu nahi aye ??

suddenly Vikram got an idea to save himseft from ankita and started doing his nautanki.
Vikram in crying tone "vo vo kal main hospital mei tha dad ko minor attack aya tha isliye".
as soon as she heard Vikram's dad was in hospital her anger vanished she asked him in soft tone:

"abhi kaisi tabiyat hai uncle ki aur tumne mujhe pahle mujhe kyun nahi bataya ye baat?? khamo khao main tum par chillati rahi."


Vikram to himself "bach gaya beta main akhir mera nautanki ne mujhe bacha hi liya".


Vikram: abhi dad thik hai aur aap toh mujh par hunter barshaye hi jaa rahi thi mujhe bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya toh kaise bolta.
Ankita: i'm really sorry vikram mujhe aise tumse baat nahi karni chahiye thi par kya karu jab main gussa hoti hun toh bina kisi ki sune kuch bhi bol deti hun please mujhe maaf kar do please.

Vikram: Its okay sorry kahne ki koi jarurat nahi hai aapke jagah agar main hota toh main bhi yahi sab kahta.
then he handed synopsis to ankita " aap isse dekh lena main iss subject pe bahut pahle se research kar raha hun toh main chahta hun ki kyun na issi subject pe hi project banaye, ab main chalta hun kuch puchna hoga toh puch lena kal milte hai. bye ".


saying this he was about to leave when ankita called him

Ankita: arre Vikram suno tum apna cell phone number de do taki kuch doubt ya help chahiye hogi mujhe toh tum se direct puch lungi.


Vikram says to himself "abey ab isse mera number bhi chahiye chal ghar ka number de deta hun"
"okay aap mere ghar ka number le lijiye main mobile nahi rakhta hun aap mere ghar pe call kar lena jab bhi aapko koi bhi doubt ho."

Ankita: okay bye kal milte hai".



It was Krishna's birthday '

Pratigya was busy to give a surprise to Krishna .. she decided to reserve a hotel for Krishna's birthday '.. moreover she decides to take help from Muskaan and Amit '

Krishna was trying to call Pratigya ..but her cell was switched off '

Krishna became tensed and he decides to go college to look after Pratigya '

Krishna reached College ..

As soon as he entered into the college's main door ..he sees Vikram there '

He stops Vikram ..

Krishna : kya tumne Pratigya ko dekha hai ?

Vikram : haan dekha tha ..vo subah Amit aur Muskaan kee saath ke saath bhaar ja rahi thi 'par abhi college mai nahi hai '

Krishna again got tensed and says to himself "ye Pratigya kahan chalii gayi bina bataye??? "'




At Hotel '

Pratigya was busy in her decorations ..she tells Muskaan that Krishna should'nt been knowning about this surprise ' Muskaan was in deep thought '

Muskaan thinks " aaj hum kisi bhi haal maii Amit koo apne dill kii baat bata kar hi rahenge ..hume is din se accha mauka nahi mil sakta " '

Pratigya shouted loudly "aree Muskaan kya hua?? ".

Muskaan : kuch nahi Pratigya '

Pratigya : accha hum tumse keh rahe the kii is surprise ke bare mai Krishna koo maat batana ..

Muskaan : thik hai '

Muskaan looks sad '


Krishna was riding his bike ..he was tensed ..

He thinks :
:kaise pratigya bhul sakti hai ki aaj humara janam din hai aur ek baar bhi phone kar hume happy birthday bhi nahi kahan aur hum soch rahe the aaj mera janam din khas hoga kyunki iss bar hum apna janam din pratigya ke sath manayenge par pratigya ko toh yaad hi nahi raha ki aaj hamara bairthday hai." ..



At Hotel '

It was an evening and Pratigya was almost done with her preparations '

She notices Amit '

She goes towards him ..

Pratigya : Amit sab taiyarri hoo gayi naa??

Amit : haan sab taiyaari ho gayi ..

Pratigya : accha humne Krishna ke sabhi doston ko bula liya hai including Vikram ..

Amit : (in anger) us kamine Vikram ko kyu bula liya ?

Pratigya : aree usne Krishna ki jaan bachai haii toh uske bhi bulana bhi jaruri tha naa'.
usse bulana hi padega ..akir Krishna bhi toh use dekhkar khush hoga naa ..

Amit got annoyed and he leaves from there '


Pratigya rings to Krishna 'who was busy sleeping in his bed '

He woked up and picked up his call ..

Krishna : kahan thi tum Pratigya hum tumhe subah se phone kar rahe hain ..tumhara phone switch off bata raha tha ..

Pratigya smiles 'and then she started doing her nautanki '.
Pratigya : hum bahut badi musibaat mai hain 'kuch gunde hume yahan utha kar le aye hain '.please Krishna hume bacha loo '.

all of a sudden Krishna got up from his bed 'he looks afraid '

Pratigya : gunddo nai hume is hotel ke kamre mai band kar rakha hai ..please hume bacha loo '

Krishna: hum abhi ate hai humare hote huye tumhe koi hath bhi nahi laga sakta hum aa rahe hai pratigya '

Krishna cuts that Phone 'and all of a sudden he rushes to that Hotel '

Pratigya cuts her phone with a smile on her face '



Krishna reaches that Hotel 'as soon as he reaches there ..he notices that the whole hotel is in dark ..
suddenly a piyano gets into play " happy birthday to u" '

Krishna gives a lovely smile 'suddenly lights takles on ..and he sees Pratigya who was playing with a piaono '

Krishna gets happy ..he got overjoyed ..and he comes closer to Pratigya where she was playing with a piaono '

Krishna : aab hume samajh aay kii tumne hume Birthday wish kyu nahi kiya '.

Pratigya : HAPPY BIRTHDAY Krishna 'tumko hamari bhi umaar lag jaye '.

Krishna puts up his finger into Pratigya's lips ..

Krishna : chall aisa nahi kehte ..

Krishna : I LOVE YOU pratigya ..

Pratigya : I Love you too Krishna .,.

Krishna was about to kiss her ..but was interrupted with peoples who were gathered there '

Everyone wished Krishna '

Krishna cuts his Birthday cake 'along with Pratigya ..




the two couples started feeding cake to each other with their eyes lock 😉

Krishna notices Vikram '

Vikram: happy birthday bhai ..

Krishna : thanku Vikram ..

Krishna says to Pratigya that " hum tumhare bahut abbhari hai kii tumne Vikram koo hamare janamdin par bulaya 'thankoo Pratigya "..

Pratigya : humne toh sirf tumhare liye ye sab kiya taki tumhe acha lage aur tum hume thank u sukriya mat kaho ye toh hamara farz tha ki aakhir hum apse pyar karte hai aur pyar ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte kya ..

Krishna started looking itno Pratigya's eyes ..

Pratigya too notices Krishna and she too started staring his eyes '

They both got busy in their eye lock '


Vikram plays some music ' and after then Couples startred their dance '

Krishna and Pratigya started dancing ..with both of there eyes goot locked '

Muskaan feels annoyed and started staring Amit who was busy in drinking soft drink '

Muskaan says to herself " aab yahi sahi samay hai Amit koo apne dill kii baat batani kii "

She goes near Amit ..

Muskaan : Amit kya um ekk minute ke litye hamare saath akale mai baat kar sakte ho ?

Amit : haan kyu nahi Muskaan ..

They both decides to move outside the Hotel '

Meanwhile Pratigya who was dancing with Krishna notices Muskaan and Amit who were leaving that hall '

Pratigya says to Krishna : ye Amit aur Muskaan kahan jaa rahe hain bhaar ..sab kuch thik toh hai naa ..

Krishna : aree tum kyu fikaar karti ho ..tum idhaar dekho hamari annkhoon mai aur kho jayo ..

Pratigya : nahi Krishna ..hume dekhna chaoye akhir vo dono bhi hamare dost hain '

Krishna : thik hai hum chalke dekhte hain '

They both followed Amit and Muskaan ..


Outside the Hotel '

Amit and Muskaan came near the parking ..

Muskaan : humee ekk jaroori baat karni hai tumse ..

Amit : haan bolo Muskaan ..

Muskaan started thinking "hum ye kaise bataye iskoo " ..

She started thinking ..

Amit : ohh madam kahan kho gayi '

Muskaan : arre kuch nahi '

Amit : toh phir kyu bulaya ..

Muskaan : Amitt 'hum ..

Amit : kya hum '

Muskaan : hum tumse pyaar karte hain ..I Love you Amit ..

Amit looks shocked 'somehow he controls himself

Amit : kyaa???

Muskaan : haan Amit ..hum tumse pyaar karte hain ..tum hamare din raat khayalonn mai aate ho aur tumhare bina nahi jee sakte ..

Amit : lekin mai tumse Pyar nahi karta '

Muskaan looks heart broken 'tears comes from her eyes '

Muskaan : thik hai toh khao hamari kasam kii tum hamari itni sib hi kadar nahi karte aur tum hum apne dost se kuch nahi smajhte ..

Amit got perturbed' he was about to cry as he too feels something for Muskaan ..but he was hesitant to say her ..so he decides to avoid her '

Amit : nahi '.(he stops himself from answering Muskaan further)

Muskaan: kyu aab kyu chup ho 'khao naa tum hamari Kasam 'yaa phir tum bhi hum see..

Amit interrupts Muskaan in between ..

Amit : aisaa haii ..tum jyada bakaitii naa karo 'aur hume jane doo '

Amit leaves from there '


Muskaan looks sad and she says to himself " Amit hum jante hain kii tum hum se pyar karte hoo ..parr tumm ek baar keh nahi paa rahe ho 'huum jaldi hii tumse kabool karva kar rahenge" ..

From Behind Krishna and Pratigya sees all this drama between Amit and Muskaan ..

Both looks shocked ..

To be continued ..


Precap :

Amit was lifting dumbles at a college gym 'Muskaan was also there who was also doing her physical exercise '

Muskaan started staring Amit 'who was busy lifting in heavy dumbles '

Amit notices her stare and accidently one dumble falls into his left foot '

Amit started shouting in pain '

Muskaan notices it and quickly rushes to Amit for medical help '

Muskaan : kya hu amit ??

Muskaan started crying 'and asks for help '

Amit in pain nbut he was also noticing her tears '



Edited by PiE-ChUcKeR_AmI - 13 years ago

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