Parineeta Kriya SS Last Part Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Parineeta Part 1

Pratigya and Krishna were two lawyers.They fell in love.A mature love.
Once Krishna suggested:We both love each other and every evening after parting our ways we tell each other that we miss each other.Then why don't we live together?
She was wondered:Suddenly..how is it possible?Marriage is not easy.We both are so busy.
K:Do you think that lovers can live together only after marrying?Is sindoor on the forehead is needed for a lady to live with the man she loves?
P:No.I don't think so.
K:Then what's the problem?
P:Society..
K:Forget about others.We will live together.When we get time we will get married.
She smiled:What you said is true.
They took a house for themselves.
They entered the house together holding each other's hand.
He took her to the puja room.They prayed.He opened a small box and took vermillion from it and put it on her forehead.She was surprised.
K:This is enough for me to make you mine.Now you are a Parineeta.
She became emotional:Yes,now i am a Parineeta.
They shared a beautiful eye lock.
A beautiful song flowed from their eyes.
'hoth tere mai ke pyaale
kajrare naina tere
maathe par sinduri subaha
julfho main raina base
saansein yeh teri hain
dhadkan bhi teri hain
jeevan yeh tera hua
tere hi choone se
tan man saja mera
hui main parineeta

jiya dole haule haule
kyon yeh dole janu na
jiya dole
kyon yeh
janu na..'

A fine morning...
Pratigya wore a red saree.
Krishna could not take his eyes off her.

She was shy:Krishna..why are you staring at me?

K:I have to admit that my wife is very pretty.

She blushed.

P:I have a surprise for you.
K:What?
She closed his eyes with her hand.She closed her eyes also to feel the romance in them.

She led him outside.She took her hand off his eyes.
He was surprised to see a simple break fast arranged on the table outside.
K:Wow!I admire you for arranging an open air break fast.We can have fresh air and have break fast.
She smiled.
He tried to feed her:Eat it Pratigya.

She ate it.

She fed him back.
She held his hand:I never thought i would get a soul mate who is so loving.Krishna...thank you for making me a complete married woman without marriage.

He held her hand tightly:When we both are together we are complete.

She smiled.

Pratigya started going high in her profession which created problems between her and Krishna.They both had to do the same case.Pratigya's client won the case.
That day Krishna did'nt talk to her at all.
At night Pratigya got inside the room with milk for Krishna.But he was already slept.

She caressed his hair.

P:Krishna...i know that you are upset.But please don't be angry with me.You only told me that i should do my job well.Then now why are you cut up with me?

She was very upset.
The milk glass got tilted and the milk fell on her saree.So she changed her saree and lay next to him.She looked at him.
He was in deep sleep.
She closed her eyes.
Krishna opened his eyes.
He said in his mind:I heard everything you said Pratigya.I am not angry with you.In fact I am happy for you.

The next morning...
She woke up.She did'nt find Krishna around her.She went to the balcony searching for him.
She saw Krishna going on his bike.

She became upset.

P:Without even biding bye he left.

After some time Krishna returned.
P:Why did'nt you even tell me that you are going out before going out?
K:Pratigya...this is not court to question me like this.Don't order me.If you think that you can rule over me let us part our ways.

She was shocked.

She shed tears:Krishna...i did'nt expect this much from you.I thought you will come back with a smile.But you broke my heart.Is our relationship that weak?

Without answering he went inside.
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow tats juz awesome Dear...😛 Love the way u implemented with the pics... 👏
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Jas, ver well used the pics to tell a neat story... Great reading... do continue.. what was his problem?
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Wowww...What an imagination...I trulyyy Loved it...and those pics...that was just tooo perfect for the situation!Continue asap jasmine...I am waiting for it!Pls give us a happy ending!
ArJa KriYa rockss!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant
Welcome to forum hope,to see u active,here
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Absolutely fantastic! Keep it up 👍🏼
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WOW... gr8..👏 New concept on this forum.. a pic-tory... please continue... 👍🏼
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GR8 ⭐️story love reading,do continue😃
Welcome to Pratigya Forum:))
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Thanks Jas, loved it👏
Update it asap, you used lovely pics😊
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wow awsome👏👏keep rocking👍🏼

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