Scriptwriter for a day - Page 3

As Pratigya goes thro' all the rituals, K receives a call from the Doctor saying that she is sorry that the report had been erroneous( no not the one with the ovary) and that he can father a child. And KST learning the truth, is overwhelmed by the depth of Pratz's love and walks out of TN with her.

Originally posted by: suk4

I agree with kriyadiwani that the truth should have been disclosed during the ME.
K would have been devastated, P would calm him down. The thakurs would accuse her of doing black magic and causing K to become infertile. A massive row, and K would say enough's enough, and kriya would leave TN, initially book into a swanky hotel, bubble bath, candlelight etc😉
Then they'd get a second opinion, some more thorough tests, and the doc would be able to cure his problem.
Then they'd find a flat to rent, but SS would create problems, try to split them up again.
P would become pregnant, and K vows never to let his family anywhere near the twins😊
Naiki would get caught red handed with radhe, who'd blurt out the truth about her past, so she'd get kicked out.
Kesar would recover, and return to TN with a handsome doctor who's fallen for her, and demand they give samar to her, they'd flip, she'd start divorce and custody proceedings, with her hottie doctor supporting her.
KN would keep having women over at night, till he caught a nasty disease😈
Arushi would have a lesbian affair with that new colleague of hers, there's a new social message😆
Tanmay would run into naiki and they'd have an illicit affair and plan their revenge on the thakurs and saxes.
Adarsh's gf would dump him and he'd have to grovel to komal who, in the meantime, gets an education and tells him where to go.

rockinggg👏👏😆😆

If i were the script writer :

i would have kesar still at TN...the pooja failed due to K's interference ...n the evil foursome planning to get P killed in the pretext of another pooja with the help of swami n simultaneously looks for a new bride ...n some of the plans they discuss in teracce thinking that kesar won't understand... but kesar remembers the past incident...slowly her condition improves ...n when on the D-day she informs K about it...n K saves P in the nick of time...blasts his family ...walkout with P...Kriya niwas 😃 then some circumstances crop up to lead K to know the truth...P supports him to the hilt... n gives him strength...takes treatment ...a natural kriya baby 😃

Originally posted by: suk4

I agree with kriyadiwani that the truth should have been disclosed during the ME.
K would have been devastated, P would calm him down. The thakurs would accuse her of doing black magic and causing K to become infertile. A massive row, and K would say enough's enough, and kriya would leave TN, initially book into a swanky hotel, bubble bath, candlelight etc😉
Then they'd get a second opinion, some more thorough tests, and the doc would be able to cure his problem.
Then they'd find a flat to rent, but SS would create problems, try to split them up again.
P would become pregnant, and K vows never to let his family anywhere near the twins😊
Naiki would get caught red handed with radhe, who'd blurt out the truth about her past, so she'd get kicked out.
Kesar would recover, and return to TN with a handsome doctor who's fallen for her, and demand they give samar to her, they'd flip, she'd start divorce and custody proceedings, with her hottie doctor supporting her.
KN would keep having women over at night, till he caught a nasty disease😈
Arushi would have a lesbian affair with that new colleague of hers, there's a new social message😆
Tanmay would run into naiki and they'd have an illicit affair and plan their revenge on the thakurs and saxes.
Adarsh's gf would dump him and he'd have to grovel to komal who, in the meantime, gets an education and tells him where to go.

Originally posted by: suk4

i know, its such a shame, i hope that after naiki gets thrown out, she doesn't just give in easily if KN even begs her. She'd be better off single rather than put up with abuse like that all her life. It always comes down to education, if she gets one, she'd probably stand more chance of being able to stand on her own feet.
If not, i'd like for her to find someone who loves her, someone who'd make KN squirm, and help her find herself.

Originally posted by: babithaj

Yestn i saw this threa whn my eyes wanted to shut so very badly..., but my heat so wanted to act just the opposite... but then i know, i cannot put them fully if i wrote my writing yest night...😆
so here i am nw..😉

Pratigya will be goin thru all the anustans, K will be fighting with himself n getting sad n irritated by all this...
he gave his full comfortness n support tht P needs whn she is with him in their vicinity of their love nest[their room]hehehe...

He head tht sumthing very difficult n important anustan has to be done the last day as a part of ritual... Kriya knows very well tht K cannot tolerate anymore, so tehy decide to give a miss, tht K shud not attend tht ... both of them come to a conclusion...

He went...as planned by them giving P instructions... tht she ned not do if she cannot do...
P agrees n gave him green signal to go to his restaurant n be in peace... she will tk cr...

P was shocked to learn tht she shud carry a mud pot full of hot coal and do pooja with tht in her bare hands...she followed all the other anustans n came atlast to this ... Whn she took them n felt sucha pain.. she literally cried... but thought of K in her mind, she gained all the strength to go on about... there she heard a voice .. "rukh P.."K was at the door step.. all was shocked n surprised.. TNsians upset n getting irritated... as though why he turned up at the wrong moment... ..
K came nea P n got tht hot coa n kept it down n he grabbe her hands n walked inside their BR n locked,...He didn't cared who called him n who all stopped him.. but he was very angry n stubburn.. tht novbody can't able to do anything...


He confronted P abt the truth n why she doing all this.. why she made him a fool abt the reports... P just cried n they both hug tightly... n cried their heart out... P got a promise tht K won't say this truth to others in the name of their true love... They went for a treatment later on...

Originally posted by: 18270fans

As Pratigya goes thro' all the rituals, K receives a call from the Doctor saying that she is sorry that the report had been erroneous( no not the one with the ovary) and that he can father a child. And KST learning the truth, is overwhelmed by the depth of Pratz's love and walks out of TN with her.

For Arushi, yes what SUK4 👍🏼suggested, is plausible. There was a movie with Shabana and Nandita Sen, 2 abused DsIL, on the same lines.

How come KN is still healthy?!!!! May be now Naiki will give him something to savour for life, before getting kicked out of TN!

Kesar should fight for Samar and property and lead an independent life.

SDS ,SS, and others I don't care!

Originally posted by: dhakarn

If i were the script writer :

i would have kesar still at TN...the pooja failed due to K's interference ...n the evil foursome planning to get P killed in the pretext of another pooja with the help of swami n simultaneously looks for a new bride ...n some of the plans they discuss in teracce thinking that kesar won't understand... but kesar remembers the past incident...slowly her condition improves ...n when on the D-day she informs K about it...n K saves P in the nick of time...blasts his family ...walkout with P...Kriya niwas 😃 then some circumstances crop up to lead K to know the truth...P supports him to the hilt... n gives him strength...takes treatment ...a natural kriya baby 😃

Originally posted by: Kabe

KST ki taraf koi nazar bhi nahi dalneka, i wl kill thm whoever it may b particularly if aarushi, he he he.

Originally posted by: starlight123

Nice logical conclusion..

What about the other tracks?

Thanks di 😃

hmmm...kesar gets better (thakur's don't know she told K about their plans) ...samar , who couldn't go with kriya slowly gets acquainted with her...meanwhile KN ignores kesar n M is in a hurry to get the property ...she finally succeeds n gets all the property transferred to her name... then KN , who still visits brothels finds out that he has AIDS ...n M n her mother takes over the rule in TN and SS n SDS n KN n GD r treated like slaves ..only kesar to look after them...K has vowed never to see his family again , but P helps kesar in helping TNs n together P n Kesar , n with a little persuation K also takes back all the property from M... finally SS n SDS realises the worth of kesar n P... n KN repents after seeing kesar looking after him even in such a worse condition... they all apologize profusily to kriya n kesar n all izzz well 😃

tanshi : prof finds about tanmay n outs him from his house ...

komarsh : komal gets divorce from adrash after seeing his real face ... prof outs adarsh from his house n treat komal in the place of him...he goes to jail as kriya sues him for treachery n deceit with the help of komal ... but komal don't want adarsh to rot in jail ...so adarsh goes back to dubai...the girl there finds out that he doesn't have anything n ditches him...he is forever stuck in dubai , with nothing ... n prof educates komal n she leads a successful life as a single mother 😃