Scriptwriter for a day - Page 2

Originally posted by: suk4

I agree with kriyadiwani that the truth should have been disclosed during the ME.
K would have been devastated, P would calm him down. The thakurs would accuse her of doing black magic and causing K to become infertile. A massive row, and K would say enough's enough, and kriya would leave TN, initially book into a swanky hotel, bubble bath, candlelight etc😉
Then they'd get a second opinion, some more thorough tests, and the doc would be able to cure his problem.
Then they'd find a flat to rent, but SS would create problems, try to split them up again.
P would become pregnant, and K vows never to let his family anywhere near the twins😊
Naiki would get caught red handed with radhe, who'd blurt out the truth about her past, so she'd get kicked out.
Kesar would recover, and return to TN with a handsome doctor who's fallen for her, and demand they give samar to her, they'd flip, she'd start divorce and custody proceedings, with her hottie doctor supporting her.
KN would keep having women over at night, till he caught a nasty disease😈
Arushi would have a lesbian affair with that new colleague of hers, there's a new social message😆
Tanmay would run into naiki and they'd have an illicit affair and plan their revenge on the thakurs and saxes.
Adarsh's gf would dump him and he'd have to grovel to komal who, in the meantime, gets an education and tells him where to go.

Originally posted by: Mitaly..

I always wants TO see Kesar to find someone 👏I also req long back to Shantiji about it ..

i know, its such a shame, i hope that after naiki gets thrown out, she doesn't just give in easily if KN even begs her. She'd be better off single rather than put up with abuse like that all her life. It always comes down to education, if she gets one, she'd probably stand more chance of being able to stand on her own feet.
If not, i'd like for her to find someone who loves her, someone who'd make KN squirm, and help her find herself.

Originally posted by: suk4

i know, its such a shame, i hope that after naiki gets thrown out, she doesn't just give in easily if KN even begs her. She'd be better off single rather than put up with abuse like that all her life. It always comes down to education, if she gets one, she'd probably stand more chance of being able to stand on her own feet.
If not, i'd like for her to find someone who loves her, someone who'd make KN squirm, and help her find herself.

Originally posted by: starlight123

If you were a scriptwriter for this Kriya track? How would you salvage it? What would you have done differently? What would you have kept and what you would have discarded?

How would you proceed with the future track? What will you add to it or not add to it?

Wildest and craziest thoughts welcome...😛😆

A chance to take control...😊

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Originally posted by: suk4

I agree with kriyadiwani that the truth should have been disclosed during the ME.
K would have been devastated, P would calm him down. The thakurs would accuse her of doing black magic and causing K to become infertile. A massive row, and K would say enough's enough, and kriya would leave TN, initially book into a swanky hotel, bubble bath, candlelight etc😉
Then they'd get a second opinion, some more thorough tests, and the doc would be able to cure his problem.
Then they'd find a flat to rent, but SS would create problems, try to split them up again.
P would become pregnant, and K vows never to let his family anywhere near the twins😊
Naiki would get caught red handed with radhe, who'd blurt out the truth about her past, so she'd get kicked out.
Kesar would recover, and return to TN with a handsome doctor who's fallen for her, and demand they give samar to her, they'd flip, she'd start divorce and custody proceedings, with her hottie doctor supporting her.
KN would keep having women over at night, till he caught a nasty disease😈
Arushi would have a lesbian affair with that new colleague of hers, there's a new social message😆
Tanmay would run into naiki and they'd have an illicit affair and plan their revenge on the thakurs and saxes.
Adarsh's gf would dump him and he'd have to grovel to komal who, in the meantime, gets an education and tells him where to go.

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Originally posted by: starlight123

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But I think leave th milkman as K has been in that avatar when manoofying P...don't want Arushi to dream of K ...🤢😆

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Yestn i saw this threa whn my eyes wanted to shut so very badly..., but my heat so wanted to act just the opposite... but then i know, i cannot put them fully if i wrote my writing yest night...😆
so here i am nw..😉

Pratigya will be goin thru all the anustans, K will be fighting with himself n getting sad n irritated by all this...
he gave his full comfortness n support tht P needs whn she is with him in their vicinity of their love nest[their room]hehehe...

He head tht sumthing very difficult n important anustan has to be done the last day as a part of ritual... Kriya knows very well tht K cannot tolerate anymore, so tehy decide to give a miss, tht K shud not attend tht ... both of them come to a conclusion...

He went...as planned by them giving P instructions... tht she ned not do if she cannot do...
P agrees n gave him green signal to go to his restaurant n be in peace... she will tk cr...

P was shocked to learn tht she shud carry a mud pot full of hot coal and do pooja with tht in her bare hands...she followed all the other anustans n came atlast to this ... Whn she took them n felt sucha pain.. she literally cried... but thought of K in her mind, she gained all the strength to go on about... there she heard a voice .. "rukh P.."K was at the door step.. all was shocked n surprised.. TNsians upset n getting irritated... as though why he turned up at the wrong moment... ..
K came nea P n got tht hot coa n kept it down n he grabbe her hands n walked inside their BR n locked,...He didn't cared who called him n who all stopped him.. but he was very angry n stubburn.. tht novbody can't able to do anything...


He confronted P abt the truth n why she doing all this.. why she made him a fool abt the reports... P just cried n they both hug tightly... n cried their heart out... P got a promise tht K won't say this truth to others in the name of their true love... They went for a treatment later on...

Originally posted by: babithaj

Yestn i saw this threa whn my eyes wanted to shut so very badly..., but my heat so wanted to act just the opposite... but then i know, i cannot put them fully if i wrote my writing yest night...😆
so here i am nw..😉

Pratigya will be goin thru all the anustans, K will be fighting with himself n getting sad n irritated by all this...
he gave his full comfortness n support tht P needs whn she is with him in their vicinity of their love nest[their room]hehehe...

He head tht sumthing very difficult n important anustan has to be done the last day as a part of ritual... Kriya knows very well tht K cannot tolerate anymore, so tehy decide to give a miss, tht K shud not attend tht ... both of them come to a conclusion...

He went...as planned by them giving P instructions... tht she ned not do if she cannot do...
P agrees n gave him green signal to go to his restaurant n be in peace... she will tk cr...

P was shocked to learn tht she shud carry a mud pot full of hot coal and do pooja with tht in her bare hands...she followed all the other anustans n came atlast to this ... Whn she took them n felt sucha pain.. she literally cried... but thought of K in her mind, she gained all the strength to go on about... there she heard a voice .. "rukh P.."K was at the door step.. all was shocked n surprised.. TNsians upset n getting irritated... as though why he turned up at the wrong moment... ..
K came nea P n got tht hot coa n kept it down n he grabbe her hands n walked inside their BR n locked,...He didn't cared who called him n who all stopped him.. but he was very angry n stubburn.. tht novbody can't able to do anything...


He confronted P abt the truth n why she doing all this.. why she made him a fool abt the reports... P just cried n they both hug tightly... n cried their heat out... P got a promise tht K won't say this truth to others in the name of their true love... They went for a treatment later on...

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Originally posted by: riyya6

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Thanks riyya, but I think i became a scriptwriter for a week or month...😆😳 sooo carried of😆😳
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Originally posted by: Filza.

make Krishna use his brain.. make him go to doctor to get the reports re-examined. get K to the truth all by himself.. confront P about it.

later after the initial shock sinks in, will show how a man like him feels after knowing he is infertile. K in inferiority complex.. avoiding P. thinking he is not worth someone like her.. she on the other hand be his strength and support.

make them go to a sensible doctor, (not like the one who gets all hopeless right on patient's face)

start the treatment.. Krishna getting disappointed and hopeless at times irritated and frustrated too while the whole process continues..P being by his side always. show KriYa bonding.