kriyaa haal-e -dil in train

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😳😉😡After saying bye to chandu kriya proceed to their respective berth(which is not confirmed)

The berth are vacant as journey has just started .but after two station the train got crowded and a middke age couple fully desi couple arrived in kriya's compartment

.seeing kriya setting on their berth women started fightingwith pratigya

Women-yeah ladkiya uth hamri seat say.😡

Pratigya –dekhiye aap ko galatfhami hui hai yaeh hamri seat hai😊

Women- yeah sab humko nahi pata yeah hamri seat hai kyun ji😳

Man-hai yeah hamri seat hum ticket katwaya hotum utho yaha say😡

Pratigya-dekhiye bhai sahib yeah hamri seat hai Krishna tum kuch bolte kyun nahi😡

Krishna silent😕

Women-yeah ladkiya uth na re ek dum dheth hai ka.uth😡

Pratigya- apni juban sambhaliye behenji yeah hamri seat hai aur kisi aur ki seat ko apne kehna gerkanoni baat hai.is tarah kisi aur ki seat ko apna kehne main apko sharam nahi aati koi insaniyat naam ki cheej hai bhi ya nahi😡

Women-dekh yeha say uth eh hamri seat hai bas hum eh jante hai😡

At that moment TTE arrived

Pratigya –dekhiye sir yeah hame pareshan kar rahi hai aur hamri seat ko apna keh rahi hai jo galat aur gerkanoni😡baat hia

Women –nahi shaheb yeah hamri seat hai hum ticktwa katwaye hai

Pratigya – (getting irritated)kya aap tab say ek hi gana gaye ja rahi hai ki ticket katwaye hai ticket to hum bhi katwaye hai kyun Krishna

Krishna silent again😕

TTE getting angry and apna ticket dekhayiye aap dono.after seeing ticket TTe said yeah inki berth hai aapki to koi berth hi conform nahi hai

Pratigya in shock looking at Krishna and sad music in BG

Women-badi aayi gerkanoni wali humko kanon sekhyenge.😉

Krishna breaking his silence TTE babu kauno seat dedo humko paise leleo

Pratigya no lecture because she is in shock Krishna itna bada dhoka jo diya hai😲

Krishna does setting with TT and takes a seat but a single seat😉

Krishna takes a seat and calls babu aayi jayo yaar kab tak khada rehbo😃

Pratigya –tum humse baat mat karo .tum humse gerkanoni kaam kara rahe the😡

Krishna –hum ka karte babu chanduya end time pe bataya aur tum kitna phudka rahi thi jane k liye designer purswa lit hi to hum tumra dil kaise todte😭

Pratigya –jhota motha anger dikhate hua

And break laga train ko

Pratigya in Krishna 's arm eye lock all( hehehe hahaha both male and female in BG)😉

And in this way they landed in Mumbai😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice little fanfic 😊 I do hope Kriya have a tension-free trip
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one👏 dear..mmhope prats doesnt give a lecture to krishna they have a happy trip😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: elle45

Nice little fanfic 😊 I do hope Kriya have a tension-free trip


Thanks Elle,lets hope they will have tension free trip.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice fanfic kriya 2011 really loved this.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tanu,
thoda extension milega.. Pleej..

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