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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: a_uma

Good writing priya...👍🏼 but I have only one grouse...

K is a waiter ???? 😭


thanks very much 😳

he is a cute waiter 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: snigdhabd

wow nice post dear😊👍🏼


glad you liked it 😳

love you snig 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Fallen Star

WOW Priya, it's an awesome story...U've done a great job!! 👏 ⭐️
Keep up with the lovely work!! 👍🏼
Hope to read more soon!! 😉


thanks sweeets 🤗🤗

i am glad you like it 😳

planning a FF on Kriya 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: soni4eva

wow dat was totaly awsome ur a fab writer

cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon



thanks dear 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This part is dedicated to muski,snig,amit,fallen star hope you all like it😳

Waiting For You


Confession of True Love




Krishna POV

i was waiting for her..she used to come here at around 4 and now it's 4:15 she is 15 minutes and 25 second late."what if something happend to her,i hope everything is all right with her or she didn't go on a date or spend an evening with her boyfriend." he thought angrily.

i never saw her with any guy,maybe he doesn't love her as much as she does, ugh i don't understand what she is sees in that ugly, prick of a guy, who doesn't care about her and makes her wait everyday, but it's good for me even though she can never love me, i am happy that i could at least love her from afar.

love...yes love..even though i hardly know her or her name yet i fell for my babu..she is my babu who lightens up my life.

"She has Come," the manager told me. breaking my thoughts i looked at her..i was mesmerized and staring at her today she was wearing my favourite color blue with pink flowers on it and it suited her pretty well, smiling at my manager i went to take her order.

"What would you like, Miss?" I asked with a small smile.

"Pratigya" she said looking at me shyly.

"Pratigya?"

"that's my name." wow Pratigya...that's a beautiful name..it's suit her too he blushed.

"Oh my name is Kri--"before i could say her my name..someone came and hugged me.


Pratigya POV


Gosh because of Rolli and Nitin i came late to Coffee Shop...i missed 15 minutes because of those love birds..i was happy that he proposed her and she accept it then he took her on a perfect date..some times i really wish i could find a guy who loves him but i know he couldn't never love me she thought,suddenly a heavenly voice broke her thoughts.

"What would you like, Miss?" he asked with a small smile and i blushed

"Pratigya" i said him my name, i don't like him calling me miss.

"Pratigya?" he said in confusing way but i loved the way how he pronounced my name from his perfect lips.

"that's my name" i said him shyly then i noticed something unfamiliar in his face, may be i was dreaming i thought he was blushing.
"Oh my name is Kri--" before he could complete his name, a girl came and hugged him, i frozed and my whole body was numb.

"Omg! i missed you very much" that girl said and hugged him tightly and kissed on his cheek.

"i missed you too Komal" he said then hugged her back and kissed her forehead.

she felt a tear spill continuously and she got suddenly from her sit then started running to exit, she was about open the door then suddenly a someone caught her hand and she was stunned to see who it was.


Krishna POV


When i was about to say Pratigya my name,then someone came and hugged me i was kind of surprised to see that was my sister so hugged her back then kissed her forehead.

I noticed Pratigya, she looked shocked, then i noticed she was staring at me and komal continuously, tears were spilling from her eyes and my heart pained seeing her in this state,then she started running towards the door before she could open it ,i caught her hand.

"Pratigya were are you going?" i asked her while still holding her hand,

"Hmm my friends are waiting for me,so i have to leave see you later " Apritha said she began to walk but i caught her arm then pulled her towards me then wrapped my arms around her waist and kissed her, i thought she will pull away but she wrap her hands on my neck and she kissed back.i looked at my babu and there was so happiness in her eyes and i knew it's now or never.



Normal POV


"I love you ." He said pulling her close to him in a tight embrace as he placed his lips against hers and kissed her again.

"I love you too" she said to him and never did she think this would happen. Never did she think he would kiss her like this pulled back.

"but your girl friend " she asked him about komal and he stared at her then laughed whole heartedly and he called shikha who came happily jumping like a deer.

"Komal, this is my love Pratigya" he said Pratigya while blushed when he called her love,noticing her blush he and komal laughed while Pratigya pouted.

"Love, this is my kid sister komal not My Girl friend" Pratigya realized that she was his sister felt embarrassed and before she could say anything to komal hugged her and she left from there.

"Pratigya? what about your boy friend?" he asked her

"boy friend?"she wondered suddenly whom he was talking about.

"i mean you always ordered two Cup of Coffee and so i thought you are waiting for your boy friend " he spat venously word Pratigya understood.

"oh that the person I was waiting for is...YOU" he was shocked then she clasped his hand and walked out of cafe.

"The reason i came to cafe everyday was to see you" she said and pulled his collar and kissed him once again.

"i am glad to know that"he said and kissed her forehead and they sat in a bench near to the park.

"Hey" Pratigya said while resting her head on this shoulder.

"Hmmm" he wrapped his arms around her waist and laid his head on her head.

"i still don't your name" Pratigya asked while she was blushing thinking that she kissed a guy without knowing his name.

"Krishna" he said while looking in her eyes and there was innocence in his eyes when she saw that he was staring at continuously she blushed and hide her face in his chest.

"I Love You Krishna " she said then hugged him .

"Me too" he said then kissed her fore head.

She know that she finally found the person from whom she could even die and she will always love him and would wait for him to hold her till last breath.


Completed...😃

No More Continuation 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Priya superb work dear, but yet to read the second part... let me rush to pg 4 now... thank u... do write lots of oS... 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: yoga23priya


glad you liked it 😳

love you snig 🤗

love u too my angel🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kya baat hain beta tum to bohot acchi likhti ho.keep writing more my angel.👍🏼
Edited by snigdhabd - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Lubd it dear...awesome one...keep writing more OS n ya do write FF's on KriYa..i'll b waitin 4 it...keep it up dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: ramanbabitha

Priya superb work dear, but yet to read the second part... let me rush to pg 4 now... thank u... do write lots of oS... 👍🏼


thanks very much dear and i am glad you like it 😳

i will try on Kriya for sure 😳

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