My Fan Fiction on current Track(Future Story)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey friends thanx to neechu for the written description for new promo...now after reading to what neechu had written...now i'm sure that Amma will throw out pratigya this time nd she will be sucessful😡...by looking towards her attitude,agressiveness in the promo i'm sure this time she will be sucessful.😡...
Nowi 'm starting my fan fic...:
if i would hv been in cv's place i would have done the same...now when pratigya will move out of the thakur Niwas...then krishna would miss her very badly...she will miss her so much that he will find pratigya at each nd every corner of the house in his dreams.though he will consider that pratigya was wrong in accusing his mother badly infront of krishna...but it's his love that will allow him to miss her very badly😛😛...he will remember the past loving moments of him with pratigya😛...and pratigya as usual will cry in her maika i.e the green house😭...though she will make some plan for reavaling amma's infront of krishna.
..thus some how pratigya would fail to do so may be twice or thrice nd thus this will will make krishna to hate pratigya more nd more😡...though his love for her will never end😛akhir pyar pyar ki baat hai😃..
.now after that when pratigya tried to reveal amma's truth infront of krishna ,and somehow she manages to do so😛as man or women r sucessful when they fail twice or thrice in their life...
or if pratigya failed to do so...then there is another method...krishna somehow came to knw abut amma's truth or he overhears frm somewhere...thus after that krishna come to knw about it was amma then he accusses amma in anger he will say that"ab hum ja rahe hai apni pratigya ke pass"😛yahan par hamare apna koi nai hai , tumko ye nahi pata ki hum us se kitna pyar karte hain aur tum hamara rishta todne chali thi,arre pratigya vo auraat hai jisne hame gunda,mawali se ek accha adni banaya aur tum apne ladke ki kamyabi nai dekh sakiAngryAngry...arre tum jaise maa hoti hi nahi toh accha hota😃😃,akhir hume aisa din dekhna nahi padta...aaj hum pratigya ki nazaroom ke samne gir gaye sirf tumhari vajah se he will point out his finger infrnt of her mother...pratigya hamara jeevan hai.,aaj se hum uske pass vapas ja rahein hain...aaj tumhara aur hamara rishtay khatam"
..,.after hearing these words frm his child amma will break nd will try to stop his baba...nd baba as usual will nt listen to her...then suddenly krishna reaches to pratigya...pratigya as usual ask krishna what happened?...krishna in teary eyes will say that "hame amma ki sachai ka pata chal gaya hai...humne tum par vishwaas nhi kiya...tum sahi thi,sahi ho aur hamesha sahi rahogi..."hume maaf kardo pratigya"..
And after hearing those words pratigya will begin to cry...nw both krishna and pratigya cryin very badly in the arms of each other...then a tight hug between them😛.
Then pratigya says to krishna ki aisa mat bolo hame pura vishwaas tha ki tum vapas aaoge hamare liye ,aaj hamare pyar ki jeet hui hai😛...nd thus kriya re-union takes place nd thus kriya will unite.😉
plz share ur thoughts too.😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wah kya baat hai... Aisa Agar ho Jaye to bohothi maza aayega
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👍🏼very well written bahut achay bus i dont wanrt prats to forgive krishna soo easily
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww... cnt see prats thrown out... so sad luv u prats😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oieee... Yaar tumho ekdum badhiya kaam kiye ho.. Lekin Thoda extension dena chahiye tha na.. Well done..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!!bohut badiya bro...👏
bt i dont want K to hate P...ya,i was thinking along the same line...that K overhears something n that dialogues...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
wah!n Prats dont forgive him so easily...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow very good story...😛👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow kya prediction hai bro.luvd it.i wish ur words come true.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow brilliant bro amazing bs aisa hi ho jae bas ak dum bindass ho ga lovely...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: telstra

👍🏼very well written bahut achay bus i dont wanrt prats to forgive krishna soo easily

well di i does'nt think that is me naaraz hone ki baat hai😃
pratugya already knows that it was amma who is playing the game...so in front of pratigya krishna is innocent
so i think she will forgive him easily
well kuch toh naaraz hoyegi kyunki krishna ne uska vishwaas jo nahi kiya😃

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