Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 - Page 7

Originally posted by: swtgrl92

cant wait till next update

this was awesome n cute thanksss ......

i lubbb it

Cant wait till next update😊 aww ..sure i'll update soonnnnn 😃

Originally posted by: zubi622

wow it was a very nice update thanksss

n thnx for it😊 my pleasureee

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

How can u say it was nt romantic???i was not satisfied with this chapter ..i know i would have done lots better than this ...It was very cute funny and romantic..thankss for appreciatinggI jus luvd how he arranged the special room for her ahhh gosh i wish i hav sum1 like him 😳 hehehe..ahhh ofcourse u'l have onee like him but not him haa ....cux he is mine .....😳.😳😉hahhahaha Well good job and plzzz continue soon 😊sure sure and my ff is too cooming very very soonn 😃

Originally posted by: shumi.

surbi...seriously...u have a great writing skill...wo kya kaha thay hai...chaagaye👏..aww thanks shumii diii .ur flow of writing is very good...romantinc nahi tho kya...waise i am not interested in kriya romance😆....keep it up👍🏼 thanksss

Originally posted by: Mitaly..

Aikdam badiya😃

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lovely sweety 😳 thank u thank u mitalyyyy ........😃

i love it keep 😳it up waiting for next one👏😃 suree sure ........

awwww thank u so muchh mitalyy ....its so nicee ..thanks for apprecitaingg and supportingg 😳 😃

Originally posted by: premprem1

omg,. such a nice chapter!! very nice actually thank uuuu😃

Originally posted by: ramanbabitha

Hey, seriously Surbi... U rocked...👏aww thank u dii Iam eagerly waiting for he next update...suree suree ..it will be there veryy soon ur precap is looking great..... u can write for kriya scenes yaar..aww i'll think of themmm 😃..just imagining these scenes happen with arja... How hot it will be...yeahh 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

SO FINALLY MA SURBHI UPDATED.yeahh how could i not ...when i knew my nechu is waiting so muchh ..IT WAS VERY NICE DEAR...I LUBD D ROOM PART!IT WAS VERY NICE...I LUBBD IT.thanksss ...SURBZZ GIVE US A ROMANTIC INTIMATE ONE!suree i m writingg itt 😉EM SOOOO EXCITED TO READ D REST YAAR!WID DA BHAANG WAALI PRATZ...OMG EM DYING TO READ D NEXT PART!PLS DNT MAK ME WAIT FOR SO LONG...OLJJJJJJJ!yeahh suree suree ..it will be up very very soonUPDATE SOOOOOOOON!LUBYYYAAA MWAAAAH!luv u too UPDATE SOON