Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Mitaly..

😳sweety

wating for next one aww ..it will be there mitaly either today or tomorrow ....😃

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

SURBHI....AMMMMMAAZZZIINNGG YAAR!SO WELL WRITTEN SO WELL WRITTEN SOOOOOO WELL WRITTEN..thank thank thank u nechuuu.N EM SOOO HAPPY DAT PRATZ HAD FORGIVEN KRISHU(ATLEAST IN UR FF).yeahh cant see kriya driftt..EM WAITING TO KNOW WATS D PLAN OF K-C-T...N DAT COLOR ON PRAT FACE SCENE WAS JUSTTT AMMMAZING...N I JUST LUBD D WAY HW KRISHU TUKD A FOTO OF PRATZ...thankss yeah even i lubbed that scne ....quite diff 😳.PLSSSSS CONTINUE SOON SUURBHIIIII...PLSSSSSS DOO CONTINUE SOON N EM HOPIN FOR AN AWESSOME HOLI FOR KRIYA FROM U!suree nechu ..i'll try my best to make it superr romanticcc 😳 😳CONTINUE SOON!LUB U MA DARLING! lubb u too nechuu 😃

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

SURBHIIIIIIII....UPDATE SOON YAAR!EM WAITING TO READ UR STORY YAAR.nechu even i cant wait to write itt ..i have written half of it ..rest half is still remaing ....i'll tyr me bestt to updateeee todayy .....😃...HHEH JUST CANT WAIT! aww thats a bigg complimentt

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

OKIE SURBHI...TRY UR BEST TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!VVL BE DEFINITLY WAITIN FOR IT..aww nechu i m truelyy flaatered ..u r made me blushh with so much appreciationn 😳 😳.MWAAAAAAAAH FOR STARTING SUCH A GREAAAT STORY...BT EM SAD DAT ITS A 'SHORT' STORY ohhh kya karoon i have thought of the story only till holi ..if u wanna make me continue itt i need to get some good suggestion ...😃:-( ACHA SO UNTIL U UPDATE EM GONNA CONSOLE MYSELF BY READING D FIRST PART AGAIN...HEHEH...EM SO IN LUB WID UR STORY!nechuu ......now u r making me embarrass ...hahaha ...thankss a lottttt nechuuu for the supporttt 😳

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani