Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 - Page 4

omg.. this is such a nice story!!!! lubin it alot!!!! UPDATE SOON

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

OHH MA SURBHI...PLSSSS CONTINUE D STORY...U CAN TAKE SUGGESTIONS FROM SHUMI DII NA..yeahh she is a wonderfull writerr..i'll tryy too take some from her.COZ EM VERY BAD AT GIVING IDEAS FOR STORIES🤢😆.ohh dont say thatt ...just give a try and i m suree u r gonna rockk..BUT SURBHI I TELL U..U R VERY GUD URSELF..thankss dearr..😳.!U CAN GO FORWRD WITHOUT ANY SUGGESTIONS ALSO! HMMMM EMSTIL WAITIN SURBHIohh i know i made u wait so muchh but the next part is on its wayy ..enjoy and do commentt

Originally posted by: Minnie.

sorry 4 l8 reply surbhi i got really busy these past few daysohh no probs miniie

love ur wokr thought thankss sweety

cant w8 to read more of ur fantastic stories awwwww

love reading this altohught it took me tym to read loll ahhh the next one is moree bigg ......😳 😃

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

Great start surbhi 😊 thankssnow plzzzz update the next part of this suree ..its ion its wayyyand the ff soon aw yehh ..i remember two chapetrss 😳 😃... Eagerly waiting 😊