KRIYA DATE Emotional athyachar

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All english version on page 4
At the Restaurant
An excited Krishna was completely in awe with the restaurant surroundings. He told Pratigya "Eeh ka bonderful hai, kaa samjiyo, Munna Bhai ke Pithajee bhi eeyan achukey hain".
The Waiter came and asked Kriya
"Table for how many sir?" Pratigya quickly replied instead.
Krishna questions her "Eeh kaa bakhraha tha bey, ka matlab, ooh ki ankhein hai yaa bujee hui lalten? kaa ganslet dalna parey ga? dikh nahin raha kaa?"
Really loudly making everyone turn and stare at them.
"kono theesra tho abo naina, par jub ayega tho hamri godh mein betey gaa jakey kono aur ki plate mein thoda naa mooh marey ga?".
They went to the table where the waiter helped to seat Pratigya. Krishna scolded the waiter "Array kursi
kahan lehkey jarahey ho, ghar lekhey jawbo kaa? Kahan matlab kahan betey gi woh? Chodo, chodo, haan eeyan beto tum".
He tells the Waiter to read the menu
for him, but as the waiter read it in English . Baba didn't understand a word of it. and scolded the waiter again holding his neck. "Tum INDIA mein rehte ho aur basha kaa angraisy bakbo kucho samaj nahin par tha!, Angraisey nahin bakbo tho kaa biwi baag jayegi tumri?. beta apni basha mein baat karo bohot anand miltha hai sunkey" .
He then ordered "Jawbo aur bohot bohot bariya adha dozen hadi waali murgi lawbo, aur hamri shudh shakahari biwi ke liye gass boos, jaldi jaldi lawbo aur ek dum mast,bilkul master chef ke level ka, Pantastic item leyana kaa samjey?"
He also ordered for candles to be put at the table. The waiter replied "Sir par abhi tho din hai, raat nahin!". To which replied "Oh eeh pareshani hai, koi baat nahin, bas bathi kam kardo aur mombati jalaiy diyo bas bhat khatam".
Pratigya replied "Krishna other people are also eating, disturb hoga".

Thoughtful krishna thinks hard and stands up addressing everyone
"Sab log hamri baath diyan se sunno, eeh hamri biwi hai aur eeh kaa kehthe hain, haan candle light dinner karna chahthi hai..." and pleasantly told then to allow having the lights switched off and have candles put out. "Din mein raath ka maza lo".

Pratigya asked Krishna "I didn't ask for candlelights, then why did you tell everyone i wanted it?"
replied "Hum kono moti kitaab nahin par skatey lekhin tumrey dil ki baath zaroor par lethey hain, kaa samji?"
The Food
for Krishna and Pratigya arrived and Kriya enjoyed it soo much that Krishna took off his shoes + so he could play with Pratigya's feet under the table and told her not to worry,
"Eeh tumra hi pala huwa sher hai kono chuiya nahin".

At the civil lines mall Aman
and Aushi had gone to buy an engagement ring with . Komalia kept showing Aushia expensive rings and Arushi loved it . Aman was worried about the bill and tried showing Arushi a cheaper ring instead but Arushi and Komalia insisted on the big one.
She advised him "Jeeju ne iss se bhi bari angooti didi ko dee thi, tum humein yeh nahin de sakthey?" Embarrassed Aman didn't want to be the smaller man - but he didn't have a money tree like Krishna.
So he told her "Hum dekhthey hain".

Back at the restaurant......


Pratigya admired
Krishna whilst he ate
He asked her "Kaa itney katilana andaaz se kaa dekh rahi ho? pyaar atha hai kaa. Hum ko bhi atha hai... khud pe. Kaa karey hum cheej hi aisi hain. Dekhney wala bas tang ho jatha hai dekh ke.
Pratigya teases "Acha?"
Krishna carried on "Haan humo bilkul hero hain, hamrey dost sub log eey kehthey hain, kahey hum actor nahin ban jathey filmo ke. Subo ki chutti kardheingey".
Pratigya playfully giggled
and Krishna continued..
"Tumo patha hai ham ka dekh ke sari ladkiyan bidh jaathi hain ek doosre ke saath,Tum ooh kaa India Forum nain dekhthi? Woh Aleena, Nisha, Gees, surbhisachwani, Ramanbabitha, Pragati, Elle, kushboo, shefads, Asp, Uma, mushirox, lady rose, joey-zaza, Carisma, Mera, Pragati, Tivo, Ashwini, td.dhoom, dreamy girl, Duniya, Tanthya, Shefali, krishnabhavna, glitter, Yemi, Pia, abida, Sachee aur woh Arhaina tho ek dum jaan chirak thi hai hum pe! Ek doosre ki ankhen podh dehthi hain hum ka dekh dekh ke, bilkul ek dum se. Ab kaa karey, karey kaa hum batowo, sub ko rokh tho nahin sakthey naa?".
Prathigya
replied "haan baba aap tho barey sharmeeley hain naa?".
As they left Krishna paid the waiter lots of money
and he told the waiter
"chootey ke saath mitai khana, kachi math peena kahey ke sehaath ke liye barbaad hai".
BUT then
Baba started walking out
barefoot and Pratigya started laughing .
He said "kaa has rahi ho? dekha eeh Munna tho bilkul barbaad hua darling tere liye".

Outside the restaurant from behind someone tried to steal Krishna's purse. But Krishna held his hand
and started hitting him really hard. He turned the thief over and realised that it was Amanwa!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Krishna got really angry at Amanwa "Wakeel ho ke tum ek chotey se chor ho!". He started hitting him again until Amanwa got .
Krishna promised "Aaj beta tum ko nahin chodhon gaa...... bas bhaat khatam!"

That's all folks , sorry if i haven't mentioned the names of other fans)

I hope you enjoyed it and it lived up to your expectations.
DOSA (DIRECTOR OF STORY ANIMATION)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh my god dosa--๐Ÿ‘--superbly hilarious n simply wunderful-๐Ÿ‘--am laffg like crazy--๐Ÿ˜†--hats off dear--๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
-n must say this one took the cake---๐Ÿ‘
DOSA (DIRECTOR OF STORY ANIMATION)๐Ÿคฃ

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

BAHOOT HI BADIYA ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was mind blowing carisma
there are no words to mention how beautifully it was wriiten
lubbbed each and every part of it
the teesra vala,chicken pic,the mention of india forums
glad that u made amanwa a chor and got him beaten by my handsome krishna .aman isi layak hai

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: gees

oh my god dosa--๐Ÿ‘--superbly hilarious n simply wunderful-๐Ÿ‘--am laffg like crazy--๐Ÿ˜†--hats off dear--๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
-n must say this one took the cake---๐Ÿ‘

DOSA (DIRECTOR OF STORY ANIMATION)๐Ÿคฃ

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

BAHOOT HI BADIYA ๐Ÿค—

Thankyou gees, this one is my favourite aswell, i have edited your name in the list of fans krishna tells pratigya about.
thanks again
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

it was mind blowing carisma

there are no words to mention how beautifully it was wriiten
lubbbed each and every part of it
the teesra vala,chicken pic,the mention of india forums
glad that u made amanwa a chor and got him beaten by my handsome krishna .aman isi layak hai

Thank you, i love the twist in the end aswell, am glad i could end their note on a more happier ending for kriya fans.
i have edited your name into the post aswell.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg๐Ÿ˜†--omg--- i jus saw it-๐Ÿ˜›---thankooooo๐Ÿ˜‰i think i can now go for his swayambar๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณthankooo so much๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰if only baba wuld read it๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: carisma2

Thank you, i love the twist in the end aswell, am glad i could end their note on a more happier ending for kriya fans.

i have edited your name into the post aswell.

thanks carisma for adding my name๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A super post! Truely hillarious! ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ

Love each and every bit of it...This is a keeper for sure that will go into my bookmarks!

DOSA You Rocked Sweety.... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Love your creativity ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: td_dhoom

A super post! Truely hillarious! ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ

Love each and every bit of it...This is a keeper for sure that will go into my bookmarks!

DOSA You Rocked Sweety.... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Love your creativity ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Thank you , am glad u all liked it. i've edited your name in the animation aswell.
hhehehe.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: gees

Omg๐Ÿ˜†--omg--- i jus saw it-๐Ÿ˜›---thankooooo๐Ÿ˜‰i think i can now go for his swayambar๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณthankooo so much๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰if only baba wuld read it๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

you are welcome. we should post this link to arhaan's facebook

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