FF:Kar Le Mohabbath!NEW- pt-66,67,68,69 pg-94 - Page 49

Created

Last reply

Replies

753

Views

89k

Users

28

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

shumi. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Shumi Diiiiiiiiiiiiii,...ouch! don't cry azi don't cry...i don't want to see any crying emoicon in your post
jz caught up with ur update...thanks.πŸ˜ƒ...i hv bin checking thru my mob y'day for ur update...oh! thanks againπŸ˜ƒ......i feel rllllllllllly bad for Pratigya😭😭😭...yep.....it was heart wrenching to read wen Pratigya cried for krishna.........i cant bear her pain...no worry no worry ...she will be happy soon.........wat an emotional chap!!!!!!!!!!!i was lyk on an emotional roller coaster while reading the chaps........THANKS aziπŸ˜ƒ
i was rlllly happy to see angad back....you are happy to see angad back!πŸ˜‰....but after reading chap 48 i was dumbstruck to knw that he was dead..let him go to hell...best place for him...πŸ˜†..i was only expecting krishna to findout about angad n beat him black n blue..i know ...all the readers were expecting the same...πŸ˜†..but wat happened was rllllly,truly unexpected!!!!!!! twist na! it should be unexpected isn't it? i knew that Krishna would take the blame but a bit relieved after reading chap 49 that my sweet angad is alive....so it is not going to be a murder case...thank god...πŸ˜ƒbut situations are not fair always.......exactly
n wat shocked me most was naina's reaction......she had lost her patience..yaar no mom like to see her son in the jail that too bcause of her bahu.,.......krishna is in a miserable condition,i think.he cant go against his mom n at the same tym,he cant leave pratigya nw....exactly...beechara......i think this is gonna put him under high tension n finally he may confess that he lubs her n is happy wit her.......am i ryt? a kind of or am i expecting too much....?..no ...not that muchπŸ˜† i got sooo much in to ur ff that i cant stop imagining wat happens nxt.......heheheπŸ˜†.keep imagining...let us see how your imagination worksπŸ˜‰
i completely lubd the part wer krishna consoles prats eventho he is behind the bars,he hides hs pain n tried to bring her back under control.....awwwww,he put his hand on the bar to avoid her hitting it!!!!...thanks for liking that scene...yep it was a cute and very emotional scene Krishna,u r deeply in lub wit her,plzzzzzz accept it,atleast nw!!!!! ...pratigya has to go some more for him to say i lub you...πŸ˜‰n it brought tears to my eyes wen Prats was crying loudly seeing Krishna dragged by his mother!!!!!!😭😭😭...maa,plzzzzzzz dont do this....plzzzzzz dont seperate them!!!!!
diiiiiiiiii,...no worry azi...she will be fine soon...😊
i want to say much more,but dont knw wat to say........coz the chap had made me involved into to it toooooooo much........u r a wonderful writer di.......i was able to feel each n evry emotion undergone by each characters..... aw...THANKS for all your remarcable comments.i jub you for that...πŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
this is from my friend"A big hai to you di....HI ...πŸ€—....heard the first twist from azi....i am very very glad to know about you and your interest in my ff. thank you so much dear.....im very eager to know wat happens to angad...guess...what will happen to angad!πŸ˜‰....plzzzzz update soooooon" yep i am...πŸ˜ƒ
nw v r having study lev n im telling the story by sending it thru messages......oh! so sweet of you dear...i lub you for thatπŸ˜›
plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooon di,i cant take this wait any longer.........im going crazy!!!!!!!!...i am updating to day inshallahπŸ˜ƒ
hope u r fine........alhamdulliahπŸ˜ƒ
n here i go.........(even tho it was a sad one it was rllllly a treat to read........rlllly gripping one!!!!!!!!) thanks πŸ˜ƒ
πŸ‘
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks...muah muah muah muah muah muah muah muah i lub you soooooooooooooooooooooo muchπŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

shumi. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

shumii diii suchh a emotionalllll updateeeeeeeee

thanks πŸ˜ƒi cryeddddd readinggggg the lasttt partttttttt.it wass so soorowfullllll😭😭😭 omg! no worry kriya is going to have happy days soonπŸ˜ƒ
plsssssssss dontt seperateeeeeee kriyaaaaaaaaaaa.cantt see pratigya andd krishnaaaa so mucchhh in painnnnnn.plsssss uniteee themmm😳😭😭...soon i will...😊

shumi. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shefads

😲😭😭😭😭😭😭 omg! i am so sad to see every one is crying...please don't cry....... Heart- wrenching Shumi ! Please don't separate kriya ! no ...not at all...krishna's confession is gearing up 😊how can Naina ji be so cruel!...yaar no mom will like to see her son in the jail that to because of her bahu... Prat had suffered so much already and the way she was clenching his shirt in jail made me cry so much! krish is her only support! I am very very heart- broken! No words to express my feelings ! no worry ...no worry...happy days are ahead for kriya πŸ˜ƒWaiting desperately for the next update Shumi! yep ...up dating now...πŸ˜ƒ!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Fabulous and awesome chapter!!...aw.,....sooooooooooooooo many stars!!!!!!!!!!!!...lub u lub u lub u lub u lub u lub u lub u lub u lub u πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
shumi. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: laks76

Hi Shumi, hi laks πŸ€— nice to see you commenting πŸ˜› the updates were so awesome. your writing is so good. u write so brilliantly. aw....thank you so much for all your wonderful appreciations...i am impressed πŸ˜ƒ u won;t believe daily i check whether u updated the chapters twice or thrice.oh! i see...i am so much touch to know that i have readers like you.... the chapters are coming so nice. thanks πŸ˜ƒplease don;t separate kriya. no worry no worry...it is all to gear up for krishna's confession...πŸ˜ƒ thanks a lot for giving us such a nice FF.aw....it is all my pleasure dear πŸ˜ƒ please keep updating promptly. sure πŸ˜ƒeagerly waiting for the next update.i will up date NOW πŸ˜ƒ

shumi. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
PART-50

pratigya nivas:

around 8pm.

lucky was chasing a remote car in the corridor.while he was passing pratigya's room he heard some one weeping.
lucky:'koon ro raha hai?!?!....πŸ˜•'he asked himself.he left the toy car and slowly peeped in to pratigya's room.he saw pratigya sitting on the bed folding her legs up close to her chest,circling them with her hands , resting her chin on her knees and crying. krishna's shirt button was lying beside her on the bed.

'...patni ka kushi tho door ki baat...maine srif krishna ko thakleef thi hai.
...' she was going on thinking naina's words and crying non stop.she did not notice lucky coming in.

lucky:'aunty...thum ro rahi ho?πŸ˜” 😲...'he claimed on the bed and sat beside her looking at her face.

pratigya:'haan...
😭'she said the truth because it was impossible for her to hide her tears.

lucky:'kyun?...dad ne thumai daanta?πŸ˜•...'

pratigya:'nahitho...😭
'

lucky:' dad kahaan hai?πŸ˜•...mai kal se unn hay nahi mila hun...'

pratigya:😭...she had no answer.

lucky:'kya firse london chalay gayeh?πŸ˜”...'

pratigya:'haan...😭'she thought that will be safer answer.

lucky: thumai chod kar chalay gayeh!!!!'

pratigya:' umm...' she nodded her head.

lucky:' arey...yeh tho dad kay shirt ka button hai!...πŸ˜›'he said grabbing the button.
pratigya:Cry
lucky:' mai le loon ? muchay kaylni hai isse...πŸ˜ƒ'
pratigya:'umm..Cry'
lucky:'tho dad kab aayen gay? πŸ˜•...' he asked her looking at her crying face. his innocent question pierced her heart.

pratigya:'nahi patha...lucky...muchay nahi pata...😭' she buried her face between her folded knees and cried loudly

lucky:'thum maat ro.dad ko achcha nahi lagay ga...πŸ˜”'he tried to wipe her tears.

pratigya:😭


lucky:'haan...rolli ko patha ho ga wo kab aayen gay...'he jumped down from the bed and brought her cell phone.

lucky:'rolli ka number lagawo...'

pratigya:
😭

lucky:'mai pooch tha hun rolli se...'he said in a very mature way.

pratigya:
😭
...she keyed in the numbers and gave the phone to lucky.
lucky:'hello..'
other end:....
lucky:'hello...muchay rolli se baat karni hai...'
other end:....

lucky:'hello...rolli...
krishna:'lucky...πŸ˜”' his tone was very low and sunken.

lucky:'dad...aap!Shocked... aap rolli kay ghar mai ho? Shocked...par aunty ne kaha aap london gaye ho?πŸ˜•'

pratigya:'wo mai ghalati se london ka number lagathi...
😭'she interrupted lucky.krishna could hear her. his sudden emotions made him weak at the knees.

lucky:'wohi tho?...aap london se kab awo gay?...😊'he asked innocently.

krishna:'ek dho din mai...Unhappy '
the cordless receiver almost slipped from his hand.he struggled desperately to gain control over his sinking feelings.

naina was watching him.even though she cannot catch what he is saying, the intensity with which krishna was speaking made her understood that it was a call from pratigya's house.

lucky:'ek..dho....tho theen huye na?...'he left his fingers and counted the days.

krishna:'ummm...πŸ˜”'

lucky:'theen din mai aayen gay...πŸ˜ƒ'he whispered to pratigya with a wide smile as if he found a answer to a very difficult question.

lucky:'patha hai thumai?...aunty bahuth ro rahi hai...'

krishna:πŸ˜”...he tried hard to control himself from bursting out his feelings.

lucky:'muchay bhi rona...rona...aatha hai...😭'he wiped his eyes.

lucky:'kuch khathi bhi nahi hai...Cry'

krishna:πŸ˜”...... naina was standing near the kitchen door and watching him.

lucky:'achchay bachchay nahi rothay na...par sunthi hi nahi hai... aap hi bolo aunty se...'he gave the receiver to pratigya.

lucky:'lo...dad se baat karo...thumai achcha lagay ga...😊'he gave wiping the corner of his eyes.

pratigya:😭...she was nervous to talk to him.

lucky:'baat karo na...😊' he encouraged her.

krishna:'πŸ˜” ...
he can feel naina's eyes on him and he tried his best to control himself.

lucky:'kuch tho bolo...i love you bolo...😊'.

pratigya:'i love you...😭' krishna gripped the phone and closed his eyes.her words pierced him deep down in to his heart. he found himself unable to respond.even over the phone,he could feel her intensity and can picture all her love and concerned. suddenly he overcame with emotion and broke down.he took the receiver, rushed in to his room and shut the door.he don't want to show his weakness in front of his mom.

krishna:'pratigya...😭..'his voice came as a whisper.he could not speak further.he leaned back on the door for support and hold the receiver close to his chest.

pratigya:😭...she sobbed into the phone.he was completely shattered.

krishna:'ro maat pratigya...ro maat...😭'it was a huge relief to hear his
voice.she could feel relief flooding through her veins.

lucky:'dho...'he took the phone from her.

lucky:'i love you too...😊'he said to krishna.

krishna:'aunty ka khayaal rakna...😭
'

lucky"kya thum bhi ro rahay ho?' he was smart enough to find out with his voice.


krishna:'nahi tho...😭'he quickly wiped his eyes and tried to sound normal.

krishna:'aunty ka khayaal rakna...😭' he insisted.

lucky:'rakhunga na mai...thum ro maat....theen din mai aajana...teek hai...😊'he end the call.

arushi's bed room:

'patha nahi aaj avi aur chandu sir kyun nahi aayeh.kal holi hai.institute ka holiday.tho kal bhi unn hay mil nahi pavoon ge...'she was going on worrying how to meet chandu again.

krishna's bed room:

the whole night krishna spend restless thinking how to convince her mom and go back to pratigya with in three days as he assured to lucky.'may be ek dho din mai mom ka kussa thoda thanda hoja yeh ga.... ' he sincerely wished and prayed for it.

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
HamiSky thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
very senti senti chapoter :-) very good!!
laks76 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
waa Shumi. Nice update. hopefully this will bring the feeling of krishna out. well written.
shahbara thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you Shumi, for this deep and emotional chapter!⭐️ ..... i bursts into tears this time... of joy for the beauty and tenderness of the relationship between Prat, Krish and Lucky!.... it was one the best scenes! A hug for lucky for his warmth and compassion despite his young age! Wow ..it was great to see him comforting Prat and relieve some of her pain! But i think it's high time Krish confessed his love! and Naina Ji should realize that prat and krish are made for each other! Simply Marvellous!! Can't wait for the next update!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈ
Edited by shefads - 14 years ago
Aziya thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lub u loads
azi

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".