Shaam-E-Bahaar Aayi !!

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From this day forward,
You shall not walk alone.
My heart will be your shelter,
And my arms will be your home.



Krishna is banging on the door and entreating Pratigya to open the

door..Hearing the commotion, Kesar steps out an inquires the

reason..Krishna gives a lame excuse and realizing the lameness of it,

he hurriedly sends off Kesar to her room..The shy and timid Kesar

returns to her room..Pratigya is all smiles listening to the clumsy

excuse..Kesar leaves ..Krishna again turns towards the monumental

task of getting Pratigya to open the door..but Pratigya refuses

to..defeated..Krishna moves away from the bed room..Intrigued by the

silence..Pratigya cautiously open the door and takes a peek, finding no

one there , she slowly glides to the hall , all the while her eyes seeking

the sight of her handsome husband ..but she does not find him..True to

his reputation ,The naughty Krishna has hidden himself in the Kitchen

and is now watching the anxiousness of his beloved from a hiding

place..Pratigya spots the open Main door, thinks that Krishna has really

gone out ..dejected and dispirited ,she turns back and shuffles back to

her Bedroom..followed noiselessly by Krishna..Just when she is on the

verge of going in , A hand snakes out and spins her.Pratigya whirls

into the arms of Krishna....The radiance of billion sun lights up on the

visage of Pratigya,Pratigya opens her mouth to speak and is hushed by

Krishna...He inquires triumphantly "who will save you now ?{ as if she

wants to be saved] ..bends and lifts her and slings her across his

shoulder's and marches on like a victorious general who has finally

subjugated a warring tribe and won a hard fought victory ...


He carries her to the terrace and slides her gently to the

ground..Pratigya wants to know ..but before her mouth can form

words,Krishna softly closes her eyes with his hands ,He turns her

around and takes his hands off her eyes....Pratigya is spell bound...

she is at the gates of the enchanted land..there a million stars twinkling

and illuminating her path, a soft gossamer like clouds shimmers and

envelops her in its warmth, Fountain is gushing and sparkling and

quivering in joy ...right in the middle bedecked with fragrant flowers

stands the bed , flowers , all the colorful flowers have come to greet

her and welcome her to her realm ..The KRIYA WORLD ..Behind her ,

delighting in her surprise and enjoying her happiness stands her King..

Krishna gently touches her hand and strokes it,and gently ,smoothly he

runs his hands up her shoulders , Instantly a tingling awareness flows

through Pratigya like a molten fire,flaming and fanning the fire is her

wildly beating heart, and her gasping breath..Krishna sidles even closer

and tenderly holding her chin turns her towards him..Pratigya looks up

at him and sees the fires of desire burning in its depths...Krishna

bends to kiss her ...but Pratigya overcome by shyness and inhibition

turns her face away, he insistently turns her towards him again..Pratigya

looks into his eyes ,and is intoxicated by the potency of his eyes ,he

bends to kiss her again, but Pratigya starts like a nervous colt and is

ready to bolt, and is held by her arms and slowly pulled back and is

enveloped, in his arms,for a second or two,she lay silently in his

embrace,valiantly trying to quieten her clamoring heart . Pratigya

looks at him again and the sleeping woman which had been lying

dormant burst out into full bloom by the power of his looks and is now

ready to meet him..Krishna acknowledges the change , smiles in

comprehension and lift hers and softly places her on the bed..He lies

alongside her ,places his lips on her throat and sensuously wanders

down to her feet..The besotted Krishna caresses her feet ,gives a

featherlight kiss on her lotus feet ,Pratigya ,with a sigh surrendered

herself to this surging passion,so powerful that it was beyond her to

control ,Ardent Krishna giving a smoking hot look at her brushes his

lips against her back,pratigya quivered in desire,scorched by the

passion..she is overcome by this new and strange emotion ,exhilarated

and petrified by this powerful,Primal emotion, unable to control it, she

surrenders herself willingly and is swept on the tide of growing

ecstasy....

Krishna rolls her towards her and she is irresistibly drawn to hug

him,Krishna clasps her closer to him and his nimble fingers unties the

knots of her dress,trails a feathery kiss on her throat ,his lips linger on

her own and is fired by an passion that completely engulfs them and

submerges and melting them into one soul .............KRIYA...


All my happiness goes out to you:
Pride and pleasure, joy, sweet tears, and love!
Reason, hope, and faith together move
In harmony to bless all that you do.
Let this beginning be the golden dawn
At which all dew-drenched nature sings its glory!
Nor should the darkness shrouding every story
Dim the blue-eyed beauty of this morn.
More of life will come than you can hold:
A flood no mortal witness can withstand.
Rest, then, within a quiet, gentle hand,
Knowing where love is as you grow old.





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Yemi-IF thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi 🤗
now let me go read 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yemi3006

hi 🤗

now let me go read 😆




Hi Yemi ,🤗

Glad to see u out the blanket !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: belalakhani2483

hiii tanthyaaa lemme read




Hi Bela,

of course Hun !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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:inlove::inlove::inlove::inlove::inlove::inlove:

i'm not sure how many times i've re-watched it already :rolls:
Arja did a great job of depicting what Kriya was going thru in that moment for each character
Some peolpe seem to have problems with it but i ithink thats mainly becasue even though we expected passionate from Kriya, it was a different type / level of intensity thats a bit difficult to process....and they they asking should it have more romantic, less in-your-face sensual because its for TV etc etc
Edited by yemi3006 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yemi3006

:inlove::inlove::inlove::inlove::inlove::inlove:

i'm not sure how many times i've re-watched it already :rolls:
Arja did a great job of depicting what Kriya was going thru in that moment for each character
Some peolpe seem to have problems with it but i ithink thats mainly becasue even thoug we expected passionate from Kriya, it was a different type / level of intensity thats a bit difficult to process....and they they asking should it have more romantic, less in-your-face sensual because its for TV etc etc



Kiddies here...cant watch !!

I liked it ,for me it was real ...unlike other soaps where u have

chandelier,candles,champagne,cakes,heart balloons,shower of petals and a slow waltz...this just got down to business, and kept it real ....u r having a SR..not having a seduction/romance party ..and MKAP gave us a SR y'day... an intense SR ...which definitely stirred a reaction in us...it did not leave us cold ...and I don't think it was in ur face ...it was done quite aesthetically although Pooja could have worked on her expression's ..initially I felt that she went overboard but stabilized in later parts.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tanthya.....Ita a great feel reading ur post sweeto,U r a gift🤗 what selection of words...."A hand snakes out and spins her" & The KRIYA WORLD.⭐️ Whats ur thought of it...I couldn't read ur POV abt Kriya's SR....I LUBED it..ARJA had a great understanding....but felt really bad for them personally....Poor krishna,na Arhaan esply.I salute their dedication.what say...?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautifully written👏
yeah it must have been very difficult for actors to do these kind of scene.
but now i dont believe arhaan is a shy guy, not anymore😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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vow tanthya ---awesume --lubbed the way you hve presented it like a poem as beautiful as the SR ITSELF👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely tanthya! You have so beautifully described the night.

I enjoyed reading your description of the sequence as much as I had enjoyed watching the scene. Then was lost in kriya and now in your words! Too good 👏👏👏👏

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