CHEHRA THO DIKHAO...(updated chap7 pg29) - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

ill be there today .probably at 7...bye dr.....lub u....
@ramona.....bye dr....lub u.tc......

lub yaa too ...hope we meettt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Bye Azi. Surbhi Im already in D chat club.. Wil cum in 5 mins
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Azi, that was very nice..! ⭐️
the Pre-cap seems so so interesting!! cant wait 😳 update soon.
i hope that guy is Krishna 😳
Edited by Filza.T - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
hii azi
i read all the chaters ....and i have to say they r awesumee ..quite mystreious too ......i think that guy is krishna right ..aww he lubbs her so much in the startingg onlyy ......
pratigya's dream is so strangee ......
updte soon

hey there is no chap 5 on pg 10?????????/
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Guys,
im writing the next chap nw.it wil be posted in half an hour...
in the meanwhile,if anyone want a PM regarding the next update,plz tell me so i can do it nxt tym.i was confused last tym for whom all shall i send PM.so plz comment here......
i'll try to update it in half an hour..
lub
azi😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Azi..🤗write write honey. take ur own sweet tym. Half an hour na... ok Im goin to watch MKAP on Star Utsav..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Azi..🤗write write honey. take ur own sweet tym. Half an hour na... ok Im goin to watch MKAP on Star Utsav..

ramona.....🤗
lucky u..u get star utsav?i miss it.coz i dont get the channel....k wait..let me complete..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98

Hey guys….

So here is the next chap.actually this was a part of chap 4.but I cudnt post it coz of some unexpected stuff.again i typed the whole chap in one hour …but my behooda net spoiled everything….it was not posted.so Im jz rethinking it..plz bear with me…

Ok enf of my bakwaas.here u go…..

CHAPTER 5

They had reached the main gate where Chandu was standing alongside his Mercedes.He was turned to the otherside.Pratigya n Rolli approached him silently.

When Rolli was about to call him,suddenlt he turned making both pratigya n rolli jump

C:woh!!u got me scared also!y r u standing beside me chup chup ke?

R:now it was u who scared us!i was about to call u.but ur sudden turn frightened us.i thot u r gonna hit me!!

C:ok ok..im sorry.i jz heard something n turned jz in the wrong tym…

He spotted pratigya standing silently,a lil scared,a nervous smile on her face which was definitely directed towards him.

He was confused whether to smile back or not

Meanwhile,pratigya was a lil hesitant about how to start.The events of morning flashed on her mind. "He wont talk to me" thot pratigya.and his confused expression increased her suspicion.More over she was having the same feeling of uncomfortability which she felt that morning.Her mind was telling "someonez watching me…"

Atlast,Chandu started hesitantly.

C:erm..then wazzup?heading home already?

R:yaa,btw,pratigya feels so sorry for her behaviour this morning.she want to apologize..

C:hey,no need for that..i have forgotten it there itself

P:I didn't know wat happened to me at that time…im extremly sorry.the thing is that,I was a lil upset…moreover,its my very first day at college…new college,new environment..i was a lil scared too..otherwise I dint meant to offend you…

C:kaha na..its ok…I didn't mind..i can understand….so can I have that handshake back?

He smiled n extended his hands towards her…eventhough,she felt uneasy,pratigya didn't want to fuss up about the stupid dream again..so she extended her hands too.

C:"friends?"

P:yaa…friends..smiled pratigya

Pratigya was seeing him more closely for the first time…actually,he is not so bad…no,HE IS HANDSOME!!!hie is fair,with a cute innocent smile at his face,completely contrast to his rough features….

Hmmm…a best match for my dear friend..thot Pratigya..

Chandu turned to Rolli..

C:erm..rolli..i want to talk someth…

But before he could complete his sentence,rolli cut him off..

R:OMG!i forgot my lunch box in the classroom itself…have to take it…ill come in a min..

She rushed towards the classroom…

P:Rolli..luk at the time..its already 4:30..u knw,the bus reaches at 4:40…

R:Prats,I'll be back in a sec..told rolli while running towards the classroom..

Pratigya turned impatiently…Chandu was standing there,sad at face…he tried to smile..

C:so…r u ok nw?wats the problem….

P:wat?

C:u seemed too disturbed…wats bothering u?if u don't mind sharing with me…

P:hey,nothing lyk that..im absolutely fine…a lil overstressed…that's all..no problems…btw,Rolli told about u only nw…

Chandu whose face was lyk zero watt bulb turned on lyk a CFL(loll!!!)

C:wat?wat did she say?

P:she said that u r her brother's friend..n u r a nice guy…n..

C:n…

P:n u r very helping…

C:then?

P:then wat?thats all?

C:didn't she say anything else?

P:nothing else..wat?is there anything else?

Pratigya tried hard not to smile.Chandu was nw stammering n searching for words…

C:no..no.. nothing else..erm..i was…jz…asking…

P:ok ok…nw wer is this rolli?

She jz wanted to get out of here asap…as she was feeling rlly weird nw… she was becoming restless nw…she started to sweat slightly..

Just in time,Rolli came running towards them…

R(panting):sry Prats..chale?

P(fake angry):hmm…lets go..its getting late…

R:bye..Chandu bhaiya,wil meet u tomorrow…

P:ya,it was nice meeting u Bhaiya…wwil meet u soon….

C:bye…

He waved his hand at the girls …He luked at the rushing Pratigya n Rolli until they r out of his sight..He smiled,luking at them n got inside his Mercedes..

Pratigya n Rolli wer rushing towards bus stop

Suddenly Pratigya stopped Rolli pulling her hand..

P:Rolli,y did u lie to him that u have forgot to take ur lunchbox?

R:Lie?no,I was telling truth…

P:don't play with me…I knw very well that it was a lie..cz I saw u putting ur lunch box inside ur bag after lunch..

R:u found out it na?ha…I was lying…u knw na,he was trying to talk with me…I knw very well wat he wanted to talk…I don't want to give him any chances of hope before I decide something…

P:u behoodi!u must have seen his expression at that time!bechara..was lyk he had a powercut on his face….

RLsad):is it?

P:oh ho!feeling bad for him?OMG!!kya kya dekhna padtha hai….hey bhagvan,hamein bachaaooooo!!!!

R:I will kill uuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!

P:very sorry….i have to reach home soon…lets postpone ur mission another day…hehe…

Rolli tried to catch her as Pratigya began to ran towards the busstop,smiling…

Chandu get inside the car to find HIM smiling inside,impatiently waiting for him to enter…

Chandu:Happy?Gosh!u almost made me fall out of the car!!thank god they didnt see me tumbling out.otherwise wat wud they have thot about me?they wud think that i was waiting for them..r u determined to spoil my image infront my girl?

The guy:oops....!!sorry yaar..after seeing her crying,i didnt get peace of my mind.So wen i saw her coming,nothing crossed my mind..i dont knw wat is her problem.but i want to know whether she is fine nw or not...U r the only person who could help me in this...kya ek dosth ke liye tum ithna hi nahi kar sakte?

C:hmm…always flatter me with this word..FRIEND….teek hai..teek hai…maan liya…(smiles)

Btw,I want to ask u something…..y don't u jz go n tell her that…

Guy:Kya karein yaar…its not that I don't have the courage to face her.by nw,u knw that hw she is scared towards the strangers…I don't knw wat is bothering her…something is there…but for nw,she is fine..its enough for me…there is time for everything…a day will come…wil have to wait…

C:I think..u have to meet her by urself…Don't keep a mediator in ur lub…

Guy:I knw yaar…but,for that I need ur help…I have helped for ur lub…wont u do the same for me??

C:KRISHNA.……….!!!!!!!!.tum bhi na????

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Plzzz do comment guys……

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Me.. *Edit* Azi Im Getting Angry On U.. In The Last U Added My Krishna.. But still Cant get Angry Wat to do ?? Afterall Ur My Sweethrt. But this doesnt mean U Dont Update on Time... Jaldi Se UPDATE KARBO. PLS.
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very Sweet Chapter!😃 But I want to know more about Krishna.... why is he so mysterious?? Please update soon ! Thanks!

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