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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: halaa

ur ff is getting more interest by each part👍🏼.both parts were superb and awesome and very well written👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👏. thankyou so much and ...this is for you ...my token of love 😃loved the song sequence.the bouqet part was mysterious. thanks for your detail appreciation 😃i think pratigya ignores him intentionally to make him more interested in her.it seems that she want to take revenge of arushi's death. you are wright...yaar you people are very easily guessing my ff...the cafe scene was very well written thanks 😃. yep...that is one sweet scene...krishna is very caring and sweet.that was so sweet of rolli that she warned pratigya .it totally shows that she is very caring and a true friend of her. yep...more over her mind is not in pratigya's state...she can think the consequences...thank you for the wonderful and lovely parts⭐️⭐️⭐️. it is all my pleasure...😃eagerly waiting for the next parts.plz continue soon.i will update today inshallah...😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: fahsaad

gr8 piece of writing thank you😃

i ust loved it thanks...i love your way of commenting
i like the concept and the story thanks for that😃
i like the way it is going thanks again😃
it is an interesting story ...hope i will keep up your interest till the end😃
would love to read to the end ...that will be my pleasure😃
...this is for you ...my token of love 😃

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PART-6

next day in the university:
it was lunch time:

as usual pratigya and rolli were sitting under the gulmohar tree.rolli opened her lunch box,and shared her food with pratigya.

rolli :'woow...paalak paratas😛....'she took one from pratigya's tiffin with out even asking her.
rolli :'i love your guniya aunty's cooking...she deserve to be a chef in a star hotel...Tongue'she stuffed the parata in her mouth while pratigya showed no interest in it.

rolli :'kya baat hai pratigya?...you are looking up set...😕' she asked her with concern.
pratigya:😔.....'she was looking sad and unhappy

rolli :'kya meri kal kay baatayn thumai bura lag gaya?Confused alignabsMiddle...'
pratigya:😔.....

rolli :'it is just a piece of advice.it is up to you pratigya.i am sorry if i would have hurt you...😔'

pratigya:'nahi roll...i myself know that i was wrong.i gone mad for few days...after you said i realized that i am putting myself in risk...'

rolli :'i don't under stand what you are sayingConfused alignabsMiddle...'

pratigya:'forget about it.baat wo nahi hai...'

rolli :' then whatConfused alignabsMiddle?'

pratigya:'yesterday i left my note books in his car...'

rolli :'omg...😲...pratigya... you are inviting problems'

pratigya:'ufff....i want my note book back.you know that tomorrow we have organic chemistry unit test.i need my note book now.'

rolli :'ab kya karayn? i think he may come today.we will tell him to bring...'
pratigya:'but i don't want to meet him again...' before they could find a solution the bell rang.
rolli :'we will discuss this later...'they collected their books and rushed towards their class.

fortunately their last period was dismissed, there was no class for them.pratigya and rolli came out of the university.they again started discussing how to get back the note books.

rolli :'if my notes were good we would have taken photo copy of it...'

rolli :'non of the student writes notes as good as you...so it is better to get back your note book...'

pratigya:'kaise?..Confused alignabsMiddle'

rolli :'last class cancel ho ne kiwajah se hamai jathi chutti hogaye. now it is hardly 3pm....'

pratigya:'what to do nowConfused alignabsMiddle...?'she was confused.

rolli :'we will do one thing...'she said looking at pratigya.

pratigya:'kya...?'

rolli :'we will go to his office...'she said cooly.

pratigya:'kyaaa!!!!...😲.thumara dhemaag kharab ho ga ya hai...😡'

rolli :'no other go.kal test hai.note book hamai aajhi chahi yeah ...'

pratigya:'Confused alignabsMiddle....i don't think it is a good way.'

rolli :'but i think it is better. we will go and get it...'

pratigya:'nahi... i am not going.already i have decided not to meet him again...'

rolli :'i know...but we have to get back the note books that too today itself.one last time...don't worry i will come with you.....'she tried to convince her.
they took a public transport and got down in front of singh music company.pratigya raised her neck up and looked at the big building standing bold and erect.
look at singh music company!

'Shocked...omg! such a big music company...rolli he is big shot...i was trying to mess up with himShocked.....'pratigya stood thinking
rolli :'don't waste time ...come in..' she disturbed her thought and went in fast.they first approached the receptionist.

rolli :'krishna singh's office...😃'she left the sentence in complete.

receptionist:'fifth floor...😃'she completed

they took the elevator and reached fifth floor.the office was in full swing.
rolli :' how to find his cabin...?' she stood still.

pratigya:'Confused alignabsMiddle...no idea..'both stood confused.

staff:'whom do you want to see?' one of the staff passing by came for their help.

pratigya:'mr.krishna singh...'she said hesitantly.

staff:'go straight ...right side, fourth cabin...'

rolli :'thank you😊...'they hurried.

staff:'uff...yeah school kay bachay bhi na...padaaye chod kay krishna kay autograph kay leyeah ghoom they fir thay hain...😡' he murmured to him self.

out side the cabine they found black name board of krishna singh written in golden letters . rolli and pratigya were already in tension.they don't have the patient to knock the door and ask his permission.rolli pushed the door and entered in,pratigya followed her.
the room was professionally designed.there was a big teak wood shinning table in front of a leather revolving chair.telephone, flat screen PC, lap top , paper weight,pen stand,stabler,paper pad,pin cushion,files etc, all are neatly arranged on the table.in one side there was a expensive black china clay flower vase with fresh yellow tulip flowers in.the walls were decorated with krishna's big blowups. on the left hand side there was a expensive double sofa with tea table.every thing pratigya captured in fraction of a second.

rolli :' he is not here...'she said looking at the empty chair.

pratigya:'let us go...'she said in hurry.she don't want to waste time.they came out of his cabin.

naina:'hi...you...what are you doing in krishna's cabin...?😡'she came fast.

pratigya:'wo...we want to see him..'
naina:'see him?...to whom?'
rolli :'krishna singh...'she said in a very feeble voice looking at her annoying face.

naina:'oh!!!.. krishna!!!...'said sarcastically looking at them top to bottom.rolli was in her jeans and T-shirt,pratigya was in her short skirt,just below her knee and long blouse.

naina:'aaj kal school kay bachchay bhi aanay lag gayeah...😳'she said to herself while checking his schedule.

naina:'ummm...3pm to 4pm...he is in rehearsal...'

pratigya:'rehearsal?...where it is?'

naina:'seventh floor is his rehearsal floor...' she showed the direction.

rolli :'chalo pratigya.last try...'they don't want to waste time in waiting for the elevator.they took the steps and reached seventh floor.at the entrance they were stopped by his guards.

guard:'ruko...he don't meet any fans during his rehearsals...'

pratigya:'it is very urgent...'

guard:'sorry...ab wo fans se nahi milayn gay..''
pratigya:'we are not his fans...'

rolli :'we are his cousins...'she said lie.
pratigya:😲...'she hold rolli 's hand tightly.

guard:'cousins!😲..ek minute...'he tried to call him on his cell.but he did not attend it.
guard:'thaykho...he is busy.not even attending the call..'

rolli :'please....'she showed a sympathy face expression.

guard:'...ummm..i will let you go on your own risk...'
pratigya:'teek hai...'

guard opened the big double door of the rehearsal hall.it was a mini theater with a small stage and seating arrangements.krishna was standing on the stage and instructing his troop.one of the group dancer saw pratigya and rolli coming and got diverted.

krishna:'where are you looking? where is your concentration?Angry alignabsMiddle' he turned back angrily and looked towards the direction where she was looking.

krishna:'pratigya....thum!!😲😃...'he was stunned.he immediately jumped down from the stage,with his two wide steps he reached them.he was on cloud nine.

krishna:'anthar awo na...Smile'he said while wiping his face with a white hand towel.he was wearing a cream baggie and a thin sleevee less white baniyaan,he removed his shirt as he was sweating while practicing.

pratigya:'wo...hamai...'both of them felt embarrassed to face him shirt less , showing his biceps and strong chest muscles.
krishna:'shankar...bring my shirt...'he said to his troop member.

krishna:' you can pack up...'he said looking at his troop.
krishna:' please sit...' said to pratigya and rolli while wearing his shirt.he put up the buttons from bottom to up,left top three buttons undone.

rolli :'iss ne kal thumari gadi mai note books chodthi ...'
krishna:'oh...i see!.i did not notice.come with me...'they came out.
he took them to the elevator which was specially meant for him.in the lift pratigya was standing between rolli and krishna.she stood leaning more towards rolli creating a gap between her and him.but the masculine smell of him intoxicated pratigya.there was a pin drop silent.pratigya can hear her own breath.when krishna looked down his sight caught at her uncovered legs up to her knees ,they were fair and smooth shinning like tusk.she moved uncomfortably and tried to cover her legs by pulling down the bottom part of her skirt.

krishna:'you should have call me before you came😊...' he broke the uncomfortable silent.

rolli :'we don't know your number...'

krishna:'note down...' while he was telling his personal number the elevator opened and they came out.krishna took the car key from his pocket and walked towards the parking.pratigya and rolli followed them.

he went to his Ford F-350 ,opened the door and checked its front and back seat. for his surprise he found nothing.

krishna:'yahan tho kuch nahi hai...Confused alignabsMiddle'
pratigya:'what?😲...'
rolli :'teek se thay kho...😕'
krishna:'you yourself can check...'he moved away from the Fort and left place for them to check.pratigya and rolli searched in and could not find the note books.
rolli :'kahan kayeah?'they looked each other with lines of worry on their face.
Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART-7

pratigya:'i think yesterday you came in toyota camry...'suddenly it strike to her mind.

krishna:'oh!!!..yep i think....par wo gadi tho ghar par hoge...'

pratigya looked at rolli.rolli looked at her watch.it was 3:45pm.

krishna:'just a minute...'he took his black berry and called his driver.

krishna:'tunna...thum camry lay kar yahaan awo..'
tunna:'abhi?😕...'

krishna:' haan...abhi...right now...'he said and slide the black berry in to his shirt pocket.

krishna:'it will take 15 minutes for him to reach.till then you can come and sit in my cabin...' he invited them .

rolli:'nahi it is ok...'she tried to refuse.

krishna:'let us have coffee...'he said the alternative.

pratigya:'nahi...nahi' she instantly refused.

krishna:'how long you will be standing in parking lawn?...'with out waiting for their replay he opened the car door for them.with no other go both rolli and pratigya got in to the car.while driving he called tunna again.

krishna:'kahaan ho thum....?'

tunna:' abhi main road pe hun...'

krishna:' thum goodie's ice cream parlor aajana...' he parked his Fort in front of the parlor.they got down and walked in.

with out asking he ordered two cups of butterscotch for them and coffee for him.while they were eating ice cream tunna called them.
look at the butterscotch ice cream! yum...😛
tunna:'saab mai goodie parlor pahoonch gaya hun...'
krishna:'peechay waali seat mai books hain.wo le awo.'

tunna:'aap kahaan ho?...'

krishna:'andther right side mai...'he gave the instructions , put back his cell in his pocket and took the tea cup for drinking.while he was drinking his eyes were constantly fixed on pratigya,keep staring at her.even though pratigya did not look at him directly she felt being watched very intensely and became uncomfortable.

for their disturbance tunna entered with note books.he looked at krishna in baggies and T-shirt sitting with two teen age girls.

tunna:'saab aap firse school join karlee????😕...' he gave the note books to him with confusion.

rolli and pratigya chuckled....his weird question made krishna to spill the tea on his shirt.

krishna:'shut up😡....notebooks yahaan rakho aur dhafa ho jawo...😡'

tunna:'e lo...'he slowly kept the note books on the table.pratigya immediately grabbed the note books and checked whether all the note books are there.

rolli:'saare note books hain?'

pratigya:'ummm😊....thanks ' she said in general.a satisfactory smile appeared on her face.

tunna:'shaayad saab evening school join karli😕...'he said to him self,still he was under confusion.
krishna:'you idiot...😡'while yelling he again spill the coffee on him.

krishna:'excuse me...i will be back..'he got up from his seat and went to wash room to clean his shirt.

pratigya:'roll...let us move...'she stopped eating and said in hurry.

rolli:'let him come....'she was enjoying the butterscotch.

pratigya:'look at the time.we are already late.if i don't go now papa aur bhaiya pare shaan ho ja yeangay..'she left the ice cream and stood up.she collected all the note books carefully.

rolli:'wait a minute...'she too got up.

rolli:'thum sahi nahi kar rahi ho pratigya...'she followed her.

soon after they left krishna was back from wash room and shocked to see the table was empty.the waiter was collecting half eaten ice cream cups.he walked fast to the table.
krishna:'yahan dho ladkiyaan thay...wo...'

waiter:'wo tho abhi abhi gayeah...'he said looking at the entrance.suddenly a huge anger raised in his stomach, in no time his face got heated up and became red.he pulled out his purse , removed few 100 rupees notes from it and gave it to the server in hurry.

server:'bill tho wo log pay karthi..😊...'

krishna:'dammit...😡'he got wild with his answer.
he kept the money in his hand and rushed towards the entrance.from distance krishna saw pratigya and rolli walking towards the main road,pratigya was walking a step ahead of rolli.he ran and reached them.he pushed rolli,leaned forward and hold pratigya's hand above her wrist.
rolli:'😲....'she was about to trip,some how manage to stand steady.

pratigya:'😲...'they never expect so soon he will be back from wash room.she turned and looked at him.his angry look made her weak and nervous.

krishna:' thum ne muchay kya samaj rak ha hai...😡?'

rolli:'😲...'she became dumb

pratigya:😔...

krishna:'what do you think of yourself...😡'his anger made his grip more strong and squeezed her wrist.

rolli:'auto...'she immediately stopped a pass by auto.

pratigya:'chodo...you ...are hurting me...😔' she said in broken voice.

rolli hold her other hand and got in to the auto.pratigya was held between rolli and krishna.

pratigya:'cho do...😭'she tried to hold her tears.her unshed tears made krishna to relax his hold.his anger slowly vanished from his eyes.

krishna:'pra...tigya...kyun...'he tried to speak but could not.his voice got chocked.
rolli pulled her in.pratigya went and fall inside the auto beside rolli.but still she was looking at krishna , and krishna at her.till the auto disappeared from his sight he could not take off his eyes from her.

krishna:'why i am becoming helpless in front of her? why i am loosing my control?😕...'he wiped his face to calm down.

in the auto:

pratigya's heart was still racing.she was trying hard to calm down.

rolli:'thum ne ussay uksaa thi ya hai...you have kindled his anger...yeh thumne achcha nahi kiya..'

pratigya:'i know... but😕......'

rolli:'pratigya... he has both man power and money power.wo chaha tho hamara college jaana mush kil kar thay ga...'

pratigya:'ab kya karayn?' she was sincerely worried.

rolli:'ab thumhara ghar agaya hai.we will see tomorrow😊...'she tried to smile

pratigya:'......'while getting down she too tried to smile but failed.they said 'bye 'to each other and moved ahead.
Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@CBrocks, see10, AKSHAYA.ISHA, arine, mushirox, shalinikanagu, fahsaad, halaa, aleena1, preeti4mehta, SadieLuvs_Suku, kaasshh, thank you so much for liking my previous posts😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shumi di, happy friendship day!!! i donno when it was, we dont have tha in US, but everyone has been wishing everyone so here i go! and you didnt wake up at 6-7 am. I was so bored in class lol.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: adilmomin786

Shumi di, happy friendship day!!! thank you and here is my wishes to you😃

i donno when it was, we dont have tha in US, bhoodu...it is first sunday of august 😃but everyone has been wishing everyone so here i go! and you didnt wake up at 6-7 am. i know...today i did not perform my morning prayer...i was feeling so sleepy...more over my husband went to saudi for a short project... so i am lazy....I was so bored in class lol...dude your summer classe were over isn't it? .

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks! Nahhh my school ends on 10th. Then the fall semester starts in 23rd. But I have finished all my assignments, i just now studying for my final exam. So its kinda slacking till the weekend now lol. I see so home alone, no husband! Shumi di, throw a party! lol. kidding.
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Originally posted by: adilmomin786

Thanks! u r welcome...😃Nahhh my school ends on 10th. oh i see...Then the fall semester starts in 23rd. so soon! in canada all the schools and universities start only on sep 9th... But I have finished all my assignments, that was the best thing👏...i just now studying for my final exam. So its kinda slacking till the weekend now lol. but don't slack untill the last day of your final exam...lol I see so home alone, no husband! Shumi di, throw a party! lol. are you crazy!...i miss him a lot....kidding. i know...for sure i will throw a party the day he is back home after successfuly completing his project ....😛

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Hahah..true. when he comes back, itll be a party of 2! 😉 nah im not gonna make the mistake again on studying last day!

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