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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
hey im a new reader!!! i just finish reading ur ff its amezing👏 i go wid option 1 ...waiting for u 2 continue..plz continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Alright everybody! Thank you for your feedback. Since it's universal, we are going with Option !😃
Below is the post- I got fired up when I read the comments- it's all in English cause my Hindi sucks as you can see. Please let me know if there are any problems. Also Shruti- let me know if the length is good! Now enjoy, read and don't forget to comment and give feedback!

Pratigya stepped back. "What did you say?" she demanded shakily.

Krishna smiled again, casting a sinister light onto his features "I said that you are spending tonight with me- that is the deal your precious future father-in-law made"

"Deal?"

"Yes, he owe's my father- Thakur Sajjin Singh, quite a lot of money. In exchange for more time to repay the money, I asked him for you for the night, and he agreed."

Pratigya was shaking, Krishna mistook this for fear and sought to reassure her "Don't worry, I won't do anything you don't want me to- I just met you and….something about you calls out to me, and I know you have to feel it too. We're meant for each other."

But Pratigya was not shaking in fear, she was shaking in anger. 'How dare he barter me away like a sack of rice?' she thought of Jagmohan; 'how dare he play with my life? I'm his future daughter in law! Is this how he treats members of his family? And to think, everyone in my family was so happy for me, so glad that I was marrying into a good family. What rubbish! Hypocrite!! Sacrificing me, to get time.'

While she was thinking, she did not notice Krishna come nearer to her. So lost she was in her thoughts, she finally noticed when he raised a hand to touch her face.

Suddenly, she realized she was alone in a room with a person who had bargained her for the night. Pratigya was nave, not stupid- she knew what he wanted her for.

With these thoughts in mind, she stepped backwards before his hand made contact and turned around to run. Before she could even take a step forward, she felt Krishna's arms encircle her waist and stop her in her tracks. Terrified, she started struggling- there was no way she would give into him willingly!

Krishna grunted as her elbow made contact with his stomach and released her. Once again she tried to get to the door. She succeeded and tried to open it, but to her dismay it was locked from the outside.
Dismayed, she looked back to see Krishna straightening up and glaring at her. She let out a sob as she frantically tried to find some way out of the room. Looking to the side, she saw a window and ran to it, but realized a few seconds after futilely tugging on it that it was locked.
"There is no way out" she turned to see Krishna looking at her amused. "Look, Jagmohan wanted to make sure you wouldn't get out of this deal, so he gave us a room with locked windows and locked the door to make sure you wouldn't get out. Now why don't you come here? This won't be unpleasant I promise" he smiled charmingly.
Pratigya shook her head. Her voice, when it came out, was raw from holding back her sobs, but strong. "I'm not yours- I'll never be yours!" she spat at him.
He frowned at her "Ofcourse you are mine- you were mine from the first moment I saw you!"

She smiled sarcastically, hiding her fear, although tears still glittered in her eyes "I'm only yours for the night- well wasn't that the deal?"


Krishna laughed at her rejoinder- "Once we get out here- no one will want to marry you- even now your parent's must be looking for you. What excuse will you give them? Jagmohan was so desperate for respite, he didn't think things through. No, once we are done, I'll be the only one who will marry you, and that is the way it should be!"

Pratigya was quite as she looked into Krishna's eyes, which glittered with intensity as he started at her. "The way it should be?" she finally said "Nobody asked me about what should be? I came here following my future father in law. How was I to know he was leading me to a wolf? He was to be my father- he should have been protecting me. But he turned out to be the person I should have run away from!"

Krishna got tired of talking and stepped closer to her "Enough talk! Come here!"

"No!" she screamed and tried to run past him- her fear had overtaken her and she was not thinking clearly. He caught her and threw her on the bed, holding her down as she struggled.

"Stop struggling! I'm not going to hurt you!" He grunted, as she hit him with her tiny fists.

"What type of man forces a woman?" She yelled back, trying to get him off her.

He immediately got off here and backed up a few steps. "I'm not going to force you" he muttered. She immediately got off the bed. "What?" she almost screamed "Do you know what you were just doing? It's called forcing someone"

"I wanted you to be quite!" He yelled back.

"You were going to rape me!"

"I won't touch you!" He shouted, then stopped "Well, not until you want me to" he amended.

"That will never happen." Her voice was cold as she stood on the other side of the room.

Krishna smirked "Be reasonable. Are you honestly going to marry Nitin, knowing what you know about Jagmohan? Nitin will never be able to protect you- he has as much backbone as a sponge. And his mother? Hah! She'll probably say that Jagmohan was right. When news of the engagement breaks, people are going to ask why- they'll find out you spent the night of your engagement with another guy. You think anyone will marry you after that?"

She turned her back to him, knowing his words were right, knowing that in there state women's rights were few, even less so in their town. Nobody would believe her and everyone would blame her. She was helpless in this situation.

Krishna saw her despair and continued to press her buttons. "Even

worse, no one will want to marry into your family. Your brother- who'll marry the brother of such a low woman? Who would marry her sister? You parent's and dadi won't be able to show their faces to their neighbors. Your dad will hardly be able to teach, you mom…"

"Shut up!" he closed his mouth in surprise as she rounded at him, anger in her eyes. He admired her form as she stalked closer to him, fear forgotten in her anger. "Stop talking!" she demanded as she stepped close to him. He took advantage and grabbed her the same way he had when they first met.

"I'm the only one who will marry you Pratigya. By marrying me your family will be elevated. My father is a big man- your family will have opportunities that they would not even have dreamed off…"

"I'm supposed to marry a man who wanted to barter me for one night?" she interrupted him, scoffing.

"I only told Jagmohan that- I knew I was going to marry you the minute I saw you. Also," he added, his eyes gleaming, "By marrying me you can have your revenge on Jagmohan- anything you want. Teach him a lesson"

She looked at him for a long moment, searching his soul it seemed. The she closed her eyes and thought for even longer. She knew her situation was hopeless. She had to salvage what she could.

"I'll marry you." She finally said. As he began to laugh triumphantly, she added "but you will not have me, Krishna."

"My goddess, my darling," he replied "I already have you."

She looked back at him, calm now, "We will see, who has who"

The dawn broke, and the conversation ended as they both left the room.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Hello all,
Just a clarification on Chapter 4- I know Option 1 was Pratigya being forced into the marriage, and in a way she was- I just wanted to give her the opportunity to say yes, because I felt she deserved it. Just wanted to clarify in case there were any questions.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
omg i luvd this chapter n im glad she agreed on her own terms...got 2 say thou that i luv ur writing style n this ff 👏 xxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
loved it....plz continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
omg i felt a bit sacred while reading this part 😆😉 well thts good tht she agreed to marry him but am sure she'll make his life a living hell 😆😃 thanks for the update

continue soon 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
very well written! do update soon 😊
n more longer updates pls 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
that was a splemdid chapter...👏👏👏👏👏👏..loved pratigya in it......awsuuummm...bt thnk god krishna wanted to marry her...i wud hve never wanted her to marry nitin after this...😡
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Thank you- I glad you all like this chapter😃. Yeah her marrying Nitin was never part of the plan- hence Krishna becoming possesive the minute he saw her, I'll be uupdating again over the weekend, with longer chapter😆 and I'm thinking of starting a new fanfic soon. So thank you for all your encouragement and continue to enjoy!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
This chp was very good⭐️.I actually didn't want Pratigya to give in so easily but knowing how the situation would be later on I guess she had no other option.This update was long enough,so pls continue to keep your future chps as long as this one.Looking forward to the next chp😊

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