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chapter-----3

to tum estate ka kaam samhal sakte ho...kyun?----asked thakur shakti singh to krishna...

he nodded----ji.....

shakti singh-----thk hain fir...hum apne manager se baat karwa dete hain tumri....uu tumko kaam samjha dega.....

he got up,wich indicated that krishna shud take his leave now...bt krishna looked a bit cnfused... he had been there for almost an hour....conversing with shakti singh bt he didnt evn get a single glimpse of kanya...his actual reason to be there.....

"ahem"----krishna turned at shakti singh whu said-----aab...chale?

he lowered his head and sighed----hmm.....

shakti singh took him to the office...where he met the manager and converesed with him..the manager was equally shrewd and sarcastic like shakti... he was nt at all happy at the fact that shakti singh was bringing him a helping hand.....he thot that now krishna wud nt let him steal frm the estate like he had been doing for all these years......and he did nt evn try to hide his disappointment.. well,his wishes did nt stand as the thakur himself had chosen krishna to assist him and he didnt have a voice over him.....and his decisions... thus krishna was appointed....and the assistant manager of the estate.....

shakti singh shook hands with him and handed him the keys of the guest room-----to...kisanwa...tumhri naukri pakki...tum guest room mein raho....kaam karo mann lagakar,khane pike ki koi dikkat nhi hogi....chinta mat karna....humko bas accha kam chahiye....aur tumko uske liye pagar milega.......tum bas sari chinta chod do aur dhyan se humra estate samhalo.......

krishna-----ji......

his mind was still occupied with kanya's thots....he wondered why cudnt he get evn a glimpse of her....was she okay? has she been kept somewhere else? his thots bugged him and tortured him cntinuously.... he was abt to return to the mansion wen suddenly shakti singh called him frm behind------ee kisna....ek min.....

he turned-----huh?

shakti walked over to him and said in a low whisper------tumre liye ek badiya khabar hain...aaj raat ko humne ek jalsa rakha hain ee haveli mein...aa jana...ek saath baithkar maza karenge......

he winked......

krishna's whole body shook in disgust-----oh my god!! he was inviting me to share a drink with him? no way.....

he tried to smile-----thakursaab hum pite nhi hain......

shakti tried to persuade him-----are peete nhi ho to ka hua? ek gilas peene se tumri halat nhi bigdegi...aur waise bhi...humne ek mast item ko bulaya hain.....ekbart usko dekhoge na...to saala dekhte hi reh jawoge.....daawa hain humra....aaj raat hum to uske saath khub aish karenge.......

krishna felt like crushing his head on the wall.......bt he cntrolled himself...his heart cried for kanya.....-------ye kiske saath reh rahi hain humri kanya..? ee to insaan kehlane ka bhi layak nhi hain.....!!!!!

he smiled agen-----nhi thakursaab hum....

shakti's smile disappeared and his face became evil...he raised his finger and him and said in a hissing voice------thakur shakti singh ne kaha hain to iska matlab tumko uski baat manni padegi tumhe accha lage ya na lage.......samjhe?

krishna realised that there was no point in arguing....and he had to obey him in either ways..... he agreed-----thk hain thakursaab jaisi aapki marzi...hum....hum aa jayenge.......

shakti slapped on his shoulder and said cheerily------ee hui na baat........shyam ko jaldi niche aa jana...hum toko ee waava kar sakte hain ki tum ee shyam zindagi bhar nhi bhuloge.....

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krishna walked up the stairs,in slow steps,head held down... he didnt know for how long he wud be able to tolerate the thakur.. evrytime he met him,his interiors boiled in hatred and he felt like killing him straightaway... bt he knew that he cudnt do that..coz it wud destroy the sole purpose for wich he was there.... he needed to meet kanya...he needed to talk to her and take her away....for that he had to keep up with the thakur's disgusting actions.....

he walked along the corridor....to find the guest room...wen suddenly an idea hit his head.. he thot-----woh shakti singh abhi officeroom mein hain...to hume koi nhi dekhega...yehi sahi mauka hain kanya ko dhundne ka......

he looked around him to be sure that noone was watching...then he started searching all the rooms...... most of them were empty,indicating that not much people lived in the mansion... he kept on searching until he noticed another corridor obliquely linked to the frst one...leading to a series of more rooms.. he took this way and started searching once more... these rooms were big,and lavishly decorated.....he pushed open the doors of the frst and the second rooms,they were empty...his heartbeat started to race as he came to the third room.. he pushed it..it didnt bulge....he started sweating out of excitement...he slowly knocked on the door.......

a voice came frm inside------kaun?

krishna's heart leaped in joy....he remembered this voice....how cud he forget? it was KANYA.......

he knocked harder,his heartbeat almost racing to infinity.....

he heard someone walk towards the door...and after some moments,the door creaked open.......

krishna lost his power of speech......in frnt of him stood that grl,whose thots once used to refrain his eyes frm resting......whuse voice once used to ring in his ears for hours........whuse love and whuse innocence had filled his life with glee...and whuse absense had made him soo grief-stricken......

KANYA?-------he exclaimed........

kanya's eyes were wide too...as if she thot that she was dreaming------tu....tum.....? krishna?

a cheerful smile spread across his face as she took his name...

within a second..she grabbed his hand and pulled him inside..then she closed the door immediately......

she turned at him------krishna,tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

he was a little surprised at her behavior.. he had expected that she wud run into his arms and shed her long drawn tears.....

krishna-----kanya hum yahan tumhare liye aye hain.....

she lowered down her eyes and said-----krishna.....accha hoga ki tum abhi yahanse chale jao......agr unhe pata chal gaya to bht bakhera khada ho jayega.....

krishna was stunned...he forgot to reply..he wondered----wat this MY kanya? she has changed so much...she didnt evn smile at me...!!!!!!! doesnt she love me anymore? did she marry him for his money? oh no...this cnt be happening with me......!!!

he held his head....kanya came towards him and touched his hand------krishna? tum thk ho?

krishna-----kanya tum....kya tum hume dekhkar bilkul bhi khush nhi ho?

she looked away frm him....

krishna-----kanya hum yahaan sirf tumhari wajase aye hain.....warna hume kya zaroorat thi acche acche naukri chodkar yahaan is haveli mein ek assistant manager ki naukri karne ki?

kanya----tum...tum yahaan naukri kar rahe ho? krishna tum pagal ho gaye ho? kyun istarah apni zindagi barbad kar rahe ho?

he smiled sarcastically....-----ye tum puch rahi ho kanya? hum apni zindagi ko yahaanse le jane ke liye aaye hain.....

her eyes became wide in fear and her face looked pale------krishna.....!!!! ye kabhi nhi ho sakta....hamari shaadi ho chuki hain...aur hum....hum....khush hain...

krishna dint evn let her complete----jhut bol rahi ho tum...ekdum jhut.....tum humre sive kono aur ke saath kabhi khush nhi reh sakti....hum jante hain......

kanya dropped down on the bed.....her eyes became moistened....krishna knelt down in frnt of her and put his hands on her knees-----hum sach keh rahe hain na? batao na kanya....tum khush nhi ho...hum jante hain.......

kanya-----nhi....hum khush nhi hain....par krishna jo tum soch rahe ho wo bhi sach nhi hain...

krishna-----matlab?

kanya------krishna.....jab bauji ne ye faisla liya humara dil tut gaya tha.....hume ye shaadi karni padi....lekin krishna....humne apne aapse waada kiya tha ki is shaadi ke saath saath hum woh sari yaadein..un sare palon ko bhula denge jo humne tumhare saath bitaye the...kyunki hum ek aurat hokar apni shaadi ke saath bewafayi nhi kar payenge...hum unko apne dil se apna pati man chuke hain krishna...ye alag bat hain ki hume is rishte se koi khushi nhi mili hain aabtak...lekin hum akhri saans is rishte ko puri imaandari se nibhayenge.........

she looked up at his shocked face and said slowly------krishna...chahe hume koi khushi mile ya na mile.......HUM AAB PICHE MUDKE NHI DEKHENGE.......

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chandni was getting ready for the jalsa...wen aarushi burst into her room... she was fuming in anger.. she stood in frnt of her di and started shouting-----jiji.....aap...aap aisa kaise kar sakti hain?

chandni-----kyun? aab humne kya kiya?

aarushi-----jiji aap wahaan kaise ja sakti hain...woh bhi akele? kya aap nhi janti usdin aapke saath kya honewala tha agr hum nhi aa jate? jiji hum aapko jane nhi denge....aap wahaan mat jaiye..plzzzzzzzzz...

chandni smiled at her angry sister-----tujhe ye kisne keh diya ki agr usdin tu wahan nhi aati to hum apnbe aap ko bacha nhi pate? aarushi tu mujhe janti hain...hum kabhi aisa kuch hone hi nhi denge apne saath.....tu bilkul chinta mat kar aur apne padai par dhyan de...samjhi...?

she pressed her cheeks.....

aarushi was far frm being assured-----par jiji...woh uska apna ghar hain...aap apne aapko kaise bacha sakti hain...? aapko....

chandni------wo hume pata nhi ki hum apne aapko kaise bachayenge...par hamara Krishna hamare saath hain....agr ajtak usne humri rakshya ki hain.....to age bhi karega......

she took out a small idol of Krishna frm behind her dupatta and showed it to aarushi......

her eyes became moist-----jiji ye to........

chandni nodded-----haan...ye ma ne hume diya tha.....jab wo apni aakhri saasein le rahi thi........aajtak hamare krishna ne hamare saath kuch bura nhi hone diya hain....aur hume unpar pura bharosa hain........

aarushi hugged her sister and cried....she was nt at all willing to her go in that hell...bt she knew this that if she didn't go there...then rohini mausi wud nvr forgive her.......

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krishna wiped his tears and said-------thk hain...agr tumne ye sab apni marzi se ki hain....to aab hum kya kar sakte hain....... kanya replied straight-----tum yahan se chale jao krishna.....hum nhi chahte ki unko is bare mein kuch bhi pata chale.......

krishna turned at her-------nhi.....HUM YAHAAN SE NHI JAYENGE.....

kanya stood up------krishna tum kyun nhi samajh rahe ho....aab hum...aab hum...... she turned away frm him and completed the sentence-----aab hume tumhari koi zaroorat nhi hain.....

her wrds hit him like arrows..he sighed------zaaroorat? oo...to hamara rishta ek zaroorat ka rishta tha? kyun? tumne hamari puri baat nhi suni kanya......

kanya------kaisi baat?

krishna------hum yahaanse tabtak nhi jayenge jabtak hume hamari hasti muskurati kanya na mil jaye......

kanya-----ye mumkin nhi hain......

krishna------kyun? tum to apne pati se bht pyaar karti ho na? to wo kyun tumse pyaar nhi karta?

kanya--------kyun woh kisi aur se pyaar karte hain......

krishna-----kya? kisi aur se? apne patni ke rehte hue....woh....kisi aur se pyaar kyun karta hain? aur agr karta bhi hain to usise kyun nhi shaadi kar liya? tumhari aur hamari zindagi barbad kyun kiya usne?bada mahan hain tumra pati,manna hi padega.....

kanya cudnt tolerate his sarcasm....her eyes welled up in tears...and she sat down on the bed...

krishna cudnt bear to see her cry...bt he controlled himself and said gently-----kanya ....ro mat...tum janti ho humse tumhari aansu bardasht nhi hoti......kanya tum hume sabkuch khulkar batao...hum tumse waada karte hain.....jo tumhara haq hain....woh hum tumhe dilakar hi rahenge.....patni ka haq hota hain pati ke pyaar mein...hum tumhe woh pyaar dilayenge.....chahe uske liye hume kuch bhi karna pade......

kanya,struggling with her emotions,started relating him the truth------humari pehli raat ko hi unhone hume sabkuch sach sach bata di thi....aur hume is baat ki khushi hain ki hamare pati ne hume koi dhokha nhi diya....unhone hume bataya ki woh kisi aur se pyaar karte hain...lekin usse shaadi nhi kar sakte.....KYUNKI WOH EK TABAYEF HAIN.......KOTHE PAR NACHNE WALI.....

krishna cudnt help shouting------KYA? kanya tum pagal ho? woh tumhe bewaquf bana raha hain...are...are koi ek kothe par nachewali ladki se pyaar kaise kar sakta hain aur wo bhi thakur shakti singh jaisa insaan?kanya woh ek bht bara dhokebaaz insaan hain........aur.......

kanya-----kyun? woh kaise kharab ho gaye? unhone to hume sabkuch sach sach bata diya hain...humse kuch nhi chipaya hain......unhone humse ye bhi kaha hain ki agr woh us ladki ko bhul pate hain...to woh hume hamare haq ka pyaar zaroor denge.....

krishna shook his head-----kanya,kanya.....kanya...tum pagal ho gayi ho....tum andhi ho gayi ho....woh tumse kabhi pyaar nhi karega...haan par tumhara istamal zaroor karega........

he came over to her and shook her hard by her shoulders-------kanya...abhi bhi kuch nhi bigda hain.....wapas chalo hamare saath.........iss dhokebaaz admi se dur......

she shoved away his hands and said-------tum itne swarthy nikloge humne kabhi socha bhi nhi tha..... tum abhi bhi apne bare mein soch rahe ho? agr tum sachmein kuch karna chahte ho hamare liye to unhe us churayel ki jaal se nikalo......woh nachnewali ladki...usine usko pyaar ke jaal mein fasa rakhi hain......unhe usse churwayo....tumhari bht bht meherbani hogi humpar......

she was abt to fold her hands to him wen he caught him....the corner of his eyes glistening with tears... he said------kanya.....is duniya mein aisa kuch nhi hain jo hum tumhare liye nhi kar sakte......... hum ye bhi karenge.....apne aapko sabid karne ke liye nhi......balki tumhe khush dekhne ke liye......

he left her hands and went out of the room.......

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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was a very nice chp Kaash.Hmm........I wonder what Krishna is going to do now???Looking forward to the next chp,pls update soon😊
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Amazinggg! Wonder What Krishna's Gnna Do Next...
Update Soon =)
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nice update.
waiting for next one.
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chapter-----4
are kahan ho kisna????? jaldi niche aa jao------shouted shakti... he was half drunk by then... krishna heard him shouting..bt he was in no mood to go down in the degrading atmosphere.... he lay still on his bed,hand on his forehead.....
shakti shouted to one of the servants------ee...ja...upar ja...aur us krishna ko khich ke niche le aa...jaaa......
the servants walked upstairs to the guest room..... before he reached there he saw krishna coming towards him...he said------hume bulane ke liye aapko bheja gaya hain kyun? iski zaroorat nhi hain...hum khud chal rahe hain..... he walked passed the servant and started descending the stairs..... the big hall was wonderfully decorated....musicians playing the sitar,tabla,santoor,sareng...and others occupied a place at the corner of the hall..... and the middle area was left for the dancer.....there were other guests too...all in shakti's state more or less,eagerly waiting to see the beauty.....
shakti walked towards krishna,with outstretched arms------aa kisna...tumhari hi kami thi.....he hugged him.....krishna's face twisted in disgust as he was stinking with alcohol....
he released himself frm his grasp and tried vry hard to smile....
shakti took his hand and made him sit down with the other guests... then he whispered into his ears-----aab dekho...kaisa maza aata hain.....
the curtains were raised....and grls were seen with their dupattas drawn over their faces,all in similiar types of lavishing dresses except one...whu seemed to be the main dancer.... she was wearing a green coloured lehenga... her versatile ways....her antics...her small dancing feet were really attractive.... although krishna did nt evn glance at her for once... he kept looking away frm the performance all the time...evn wen the thakurs jumped up,clapping their hands,showering money on the dancers,and shouting on top of their lungs..... he felt so irritated that he wished to get up and leave the place at once...bt then he recalled that he wasnt there in his own wish...he was there becoz that shakti wanted him too.... so he sat there witnessing all the indecent drama......until it was quite late and the JALSA ended.......
krishna got up and was abt to leave..wen shakti called him-------ee kisanwa.....idhar aao.....
he turned at him....and wat he saw made his stomach churn in disgust....
shakti was holding the hand of the main dancer...whu still had her dupatta drawn over her face.....and was looking probably......
krishna----bataiye thakursaab.....
shakti------pehle idhar to aao...
krishna-----hum yehi thk hain.....
shakti left her hand and walked towards krishna.... then he took his hand and led him to her.....
krishna,at frst did nt look at her face....bt wen she spoke to him,unconsciously,he had to turn.....she had a beautifully innocent voice......
the grl(chandni) folded her hands to his surprise and said in a beautiful floating tone-----namastey.....
krishna cudnt help smiling in return....he looked at her face...and was surprised to see that her eyes were lowered....she was looking down at the ground and nt at him......
he observed her carefully,she was beautiful all ryt,bt above that....she looked soo serene and innocent...he cudnt take his eyes away frm her for some moments......
suddenly he came back to his acute senses wen shakti slaaped lightly on his back------ka hua? bolti band ho gayi ka? MERI CHNADNI KO DEKHKAR?huh?
krishna turned at him,shocked at his wrds..... shakti laughed out loudly to see the expression on his face-----are bhai.....kuch galat kaha kya humne? hum chandni se piyaar karte hain....dekho na isiliye hi to hum baki sabko chodke isko ye anmol tofa de rahe hain......
he took out a vry expensive necklace frm inside his pocket and without waiting for a single second....put it around her neck.........
krishna clenched his fingers into fists....he cudnt take it anymore... he remembered kanya's wrds--------woh ek nachnewali se pyaar karte hain......
krishna thot----oo...to yehi hain woh ladki jiske bare mein kanya humse keh rahi thi...agr hume kanya ko khush dekhna hain to sabse pehle is ladki ko uske raaste se hatana padega.......
shakti's wrds agen disturbed his thots....--------are krishna....kuch to bolbo....ya sirif yehi keh do ki humri pasand kaisi hain.....
he was abt to say somethng wen chandni spoke------thakursaab....hume abhi jana chahiye......
shakti-----aise kaise chali jaogi....janeman!!! aise hum tumhe thodi na jane denge.......ee krishna tum hi batao na......
he was abt to move closer to her wen suddenly krishna caught his hand... he shot an angry glance at krishna...how dare he stopped me!!!
krishna smiled------thakusaab...hume lagta hain abhi aapko aaram karna chahiye...aapki halat thk nhi hain....inka kya hain...aap to inse baad mein bhi mil sakte hain......
shakti looked at chandni and then smirked-------haan ye sahi baat hain...
he touched her cheeks lightly,chandni cringed at his touch...------isse to hum baad mein bhi mil sakte hain.......kyun?
the question was for chandni whu tried to smile bt cudnt....quickly she nodded her head......
shakti shouted out to his guards-------ee...idhar aao.....idhar aao jaldi....
two of the guards came to him and bowed...
shakti------isko ijjat ke saath kothe mein pahucha do......ye humra hukum hain........
the guards----ji thakursaab....
after finishing his so-called duty he trodded towards his room,humming a happy tune on his way......
chandni heaved a sigh of relief as he left....she felt grateful to this unknown man...whu had indirectly helped her.....
krishna stood like a statue in frnt of her, all he felt for the extreamely gorgeous grl standing in frnt of him was sheer hatred.....he cudnt bear to see evn her face...... becoz,he knew that she was the one responsible for his kanya's ill-treatment..... becoz of her shakti wud nvr accept kanya as his wife......
chandni didnt know whether to thank him or nt bt then she felt that it was best to be quiet...he did nt evn seem interested to look at her..... she said-------hum chalte hain..... she turned....
krishna------huh!!!!! ek min.....rukiye.......
chandni stopped......
krishna rubbed his hands together,unsure whether to say it or not...then at last decided------hume....baat karni hain...apse.....
chandni thot-----he bhagwan...kahin ye bhi.....
she turned back,her eyes wide in awe...evn krishna saw it...and smiled mockingly------ah!! aab aap ye mat sochiye ki humpar bhi aapka jaadu chal gaya hain...... he took a step closer to her and said in a low tone------aapke jaankari ke liye bata doon...hume aap jaisi ladkiyon par taras bhi nhi aata....sirf ghin aati hain......
his wrds were so harsh and so heart-renching that tears came to her eyes....she turned away frm him in time and said-----bataiye aapko kya kehna hain.....
krishna was abt to say somethng wen the guard interrupted them------chaliye......chandni...thakursaab ka hukum hain...aapko wapas pahuchane ke liye unhone humse kaha hain.......
chandni glanced at krishna whu was quiet and then said to the guard------chaliye... she walked away with him,her anklets making soft sounds as she walked......
krishna hissed under his breath--------itni asaani se tumhe hum hamari kanya ka khushiya chinne nhi denge.......hum tumse baat karke rahenge.....
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JIJI!!!!----cried aarushi as she hugged her sister....chandni smiled----are tum to istarah pesh aa rahe ho ki jaise hum kisi jung se zinda wapas aaye hain.....
aarushi giggled----aur nhi to kya...woh thakur villa kisi jung ke maidan se kam hain kya?
chandni laughed too......
bt suddenly she stopped laughing and pushed aarushi with her elbow...
aarushi-----kya hua?
she whispered-----rohini mausi......
aarushi bit her lip and stopped giggling at once.....
rohini mausi walked over to them and said to chandni-------chandni....tumse baat karni hain...aarushi tum andar jao....
aarushi nodded and left......
rohini mausi-------chandni....hum tumse puchna chahte hain...ye sab kabtak chalega?
chandni-------kya? matlab...hum kuch samjhe nhi....
rohini-------tum samjhi nhi? ya samajhna hi nhi chahti...... hum keh rahe hain...ki tum is kothe ki shaan ho.....bade bade thakur tumhe pane ke liye hume kitne paise dena chahte hain janti ho tum? sari zindagi mein tumne itni daulat kabhi dekhi nhi hongi......
chandni understood wat she menat to say...she lowered down her eyes and said politely------mausi ji....hum aapki bht izzat karte hain...lekin hum aapse ye kehna chahte hain ki hamare liye hamara sabse anmol daulat hain hamari aatmasamman......use khokar hum nhi jee payenge...... maafi chahti hun.....
with that she slowly walked away.......
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krishna's feet shook as he ascended the steps.....the sounds of sareng and tabla came to him.....and he realised that he was in the midst of the night enjoyments..... he detested it.....bt he had to do this for kanya...to see her all smiling and happy in her married life.......
he ascended the last step....the big door,with dazzling curtainsd hanging all over it....stood before his eyes... he walked inside.....
as usual the jalsa was going on in full swing...and all the dancers were playing their parts.... krishna cudnt bear to see around him....bt he had to...coz he was searching for chandni......
there she was!! his eyes fixed on her,dancing in the middle.....while all the thakurs were passing comments and throwing money at her.......
without evn thinking for a second...krishna walked towards her in quick steps and grabbed her hand...he felt too furious to thnk logically
evryone in the hall,including chandni were shocked at his unexpected appearance as well as his behavior....
chandni recognized him at once--------tum??????
krishna------hume tumse baat karni hain.....ABHI ISIWAQT.........
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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Phew!!Good thing that Krishna saved Pratigya or should I say Chandini indirectly!!😊I wonder what this zaroori baath is??I gues he'll threaten her or something.It was a nice chpe.Looking forward to the next one😊
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thnk GOD Krishna saved pratigya from that thakur.
cant wait for next one.
plz update soon.
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Ufffffff!! Hate Shaktiiii Grrrrrrrr! Thanks For Updating!
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chapter-----5
chandni was shocked.. she tried to release her hand frm his strong grip...she felt her bones will break... a thakur came to her rescue,toppling on his feet,as he was drunk.... he put his hand on krishna's shoulder..(actually supporting himself on his shoulder😆) and said------ee....kaun hain be tu? eeha humra maza kharab karne ke liye aya hain?
krishna replied,bt nt to the thakur...he said to chandni in slow,strict wrds-----hume-tumse-baat-karni-hain.....chalo....
he started dragging her out wen rohini mausi blocked their way......
he looked at krishna and said politely,though her fuming anger was clearly understood in her voice------dekhiye...aap istarah ise yahan se nhi le ja sakte......
krishna----hume isse baat karni hain....
rohini-----agr aapko baat karni hain....ya jo bhi karna hain......wo sab aap jalse ke baad kar lena......yahaan se ise le jane ki koi zaroorat nhi hain.......
krishna-----hume abhi baat karni hain....
rohini started to lose her temper------aap baat ko samjhiye...abhi jalsa chaloo hain...aur aap istarah chandni se baat bhi nhi kar sakte....bina ek footi kaudi ke aap uska chehra bhi nhi dekh sakte......
krishna snapped-----hume koi shauk nhi hain use dekhne mein......
rohini raised her hand-----jo bhi ho.....aap use NHI le ja sakte bas......
krishna-------aur agr humne aisa kiya to?
rohini looked back and pointed to the guards------to ye log aapko yahan se dhakke markar bahar fekwa denge.......
krishna swallowed his anger.... he looked at chandni whu was struggling hard to get free... he released her hand... chandni looked at her wrist,she noticed red finger marks on her tender skin...she nursed her hand......
krishna turned at rohini-------kitne paise chahiye aapko?
rohini------sirf baat ya........ a twisted smile appeared on her lips...chandni felt her stomach churn to see the smile...she looked at krishna.....her eyes pleading to him........
to her relief,krishna said-------bas...baat karni hain...lekin akele mein......
rohini-------thk hain......4000....
krishna took out 4 thousand bucks frm his pocket and handed it over to rohini..... she called out to someone-------radhika.....idhar aao....
another lavishly dressed and gorgeous grl came running towards them-----haan masi bataiye...
rohini pointed to krishna and pratigya-------tum in dono ko chandni ke kamre mein le jao......
radhika looked at them suspiciously and then said to chandni in a mocking way-----oh!!! to chandni ne akhir apna vrat tod diya kyun? he moved closer to krishna and seductively traced her finger on his face...he pushed her away.... bt she only smiled at his reaction------kyun nhi......banda itna........ she giggled........
krishna felt soo disgusted in that place..it was just for kanya he was doing all these otherwise...... HE HATED SUCH PEOPLE....HE HATED THEM....BLOODY HONOURLESS.....🤬
radhika motioned for chandni to move-------chaliye madam...apne bande ke saath ayiye..... they followed without a wrd.....
radhika made them enter the room and locked the door frm outside.... chandni didnt know wat to do....wat to feel.. she cudnt guess his intentions at all....bt she thot....that if his intentions turn out to be bad...she wud have to find some way to protect herself.....
krishna walked towards her..she moved a step back.... her action amused him.... there stood in frnt of him,a grl whu sleeps with evry singla man she lays her hands on for money and she is trying all these stupid actions with HIM? why? aha.....just becoz he paid less money of course......
he smiled......
chandni------baat kya hain....
he looked at her...she was in herself agen,looking down at the floor.....
krishna-------dekhiye......hum saaf saf baat karna pasand karte hain......aur hum aapse ek baat keh rahe hain...sun lijiye...hum ye baat apse dubara kehne ke liye nhi ayenge.......
he paused for some seconds and then cntinued------THAKUR SHAKTI SINGH SE DUR RAHIYE PLZ......
chandni cudnt help luking at him--------kya?
krishna-----uski ek patni hain......jise woh pyaar nhi karta kyunki wo aapse pyaar karne ka dawa karti hain.......isiliye plzz usse dur rahiye aap....
chandni------lekin aap ye sab humse kyun keh rahe hain? thakursaab se jakar kyun nhi kehte jo harwaqt yahan pe mandrate rehte hain?
krishna--------hume kya karna hain....kisse kya kehna hain...ye hum tay karenge....bas aapse jo kehrahe hain...wo sun lijiye aur samajh lijiye.....ye baat hum aapse dubara yahaan apna waqt barbad karke kehne nhi ayenge..
chandni----agr aapko lagta hain aap apna waqt barbad kar rahe hain...to jaiye na...jakar thakursaab se baat kijiye....humse baat karke aapko waise bhi koi fayda nhi honewala hain......
krishna------dekho..... he corrected himself-------dekhiye...hum aapko firse keh rahe hain.....
chandni interrupted him in between------hume lagta hain aap apna waqt barbad kar rahe hain......
krishna cudnt tolerate it anymore... he walked towards her and caught her by her shoulders... chandni got terribly scared...his eyes were burning in rage......
he said to her in a hissing voice--------tumhe jo kehrahe hain...tum bas wohi suno.....aur hamari baat mano.... sharam nhi aati? ek shaadishuda insaan ko apne khubsurti ke jaal mein fasakar rakhi ho? are uski ek biwi hain....jise sirf tumhari wajase apne pati ka pyaar,jo ki uska haq hain...woh naseeb nhi ho rahi hain...... sharam aani chahiye tumhe...are ek aurat hokar tum aisa kisi aur ke saath kaise kar sakti ho?
chandni released herself with her jerk......she pushed him away-------haan....sach kaha tumne...nhi aati hume sharam.....hume ye sab karna bht ACCHA LAGTA HAIN.....aur kyun mane hum aapki baat? aap hain kaun? koi nhi.......hum aapki baat kyun manenge? NHI MANENGE HUM AAPKI BAAT...AAPKO JO KARNA HAIN AAP KIJIYE.....
krishna's fingers clenched into fists......he raised his finger at her-------tum pachtaogi......
chandni------jaiye......ye dhamkiyan jakar kisi aur ko dijiye...... waise....... a strange smile appeared on her lips------hgume ek baat samajh mein nhi aa rahi hain....aap ye sab kiske liye kar rahe hain? thakursaab ke liye? huh!!!1 aisa to nhi lagta hume.....ya fir.....uski khubsurat biwi ke liye......kyun?
krishna lost his power of logical thnking..... he caught her by the back of her neck and with his other hand...he held her face in a twisted manner-------bas....bht sun li tumri bakwas......aab hamari baat suno......agr humne tumhe firse thakur villa ke aas pass bhi dekhe...to humse bura koi nhi hoga.....samjhi?
he let her go....... then he walked towards the door and pushed it hard------are....koi khol ise.... he kicked on the door..... it opened slowly.... he noticed radhika smiling at him......he turned his face away frm her and walked out.......fuming in disgust and hatred.......
chandni dropped down on the floor......tears rolling down her eyes....... it was nt the frst time that she had been thru this kind of treatment....bt she didnt know why.....she felt so unhappy and grief-stricken at his behavior,his harsh wrds still ringing in her ears------sharam aani chahiye tumhe...ek aurat hokar.......apni khubsurti ke jaal mein fasakar rakhi ho?
she clutched at the bedsheet and hid her face in it,her whole body shaking due to her uncontrollable sobs.......
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aarushi walked up the college stairs slowly....it was her frst day in college... her sister had always taken great care to provide her the best education..she cud.....and thus wen she passed out school she made her join the college for higher studies......
aarushi felt a little odd...she had no frnds...evn she didnt know anyone out there..... she closed her eyes and prayed to god as she ascended the last step------plzz bhagwan..sabkuch thk thak karna.....aur plzz koi musibaat aye to usse nikalne ka rasta bhi dikha dena......
she looked around for the principal's room... unable to find it she asked a gang of boys whu was sitting there and gossiping-------excuse me....kya aap hume principal ka room bata sakte hain?
the person she asked the question to stared at her face in a manner as if he had seen a ghost.. one of his frnds poked him------ee..ye wohi ladki hain na?
another guy replied------haan...lagta to wohi hain...us nachneganewali ki pyaari behna...aur hamare college mein?
aarushi felt goosebumps on her skin...oh my god..these people knew her sister?
she decided that it was best for her to leve...she was abt to walk away wen the frst guy stopped her------ek min.....zara aapna naam to bataiye.......hum aapko principal ka room bata denge....
the second guy----haan haan humne kab mana kiya hain.....
aarushi said promptly----aarushi saxena.....
the guy-----ohohoho.....aur aapke behen ka naam?
aarushi paused for sometime and then said------PRATIGYA SAXENA........
the guy laughed out loudly and clapped hands with his frnds whu were also laughing... then he turned to her and said-------ye wala naam nhi....doosra naam....tum samajh rahi ho na? jis naam se aapki behen is poore seher mein mashoor hain..........CHANDNI......kyun? yehi hain na uska naam?
aarushi looked down at the floor...her eyes welled up in tears.... she never liked this name...wich rohini mausi gave to her sister....to her...her sister's name was...and will always be PRATIGYA.......-----wich their mother gave her........
tears rolled down her cheeks...she started weeping silently... the boys were still laughing away..... suddenly she heard a voice behind her-----abey ye kya ho raha hain yahan? tumlogo ka class wass kuch hain ne nahi? sara din bas baithe baithe..batiyate rehte ho.....jao..apne apne class mein jao.....
the boys stopped laughing at once and their grup broke up......they walked away towards their classes.....
aarushi wiped her tears and looked back...the guy whu stood behind her was fair,strong and his eyes were hazal green in colour.....
he asked her-------tum....isi college ki ho? tumhe pehle kabhi nhi dekha?
aarushi-----humne aaj hi join ki hain.....
the guy------o...to yahan kya kar rahi thi?
aarushi looked down-------woh....hum....ye log....
the guy stopped her midway------oh...samajh gaya....dekho...aab ye sab to chalta hi rehta hain...tum plzz bura mat manna....aur jitna ho sake....try to avoid......
aarsuhi nodded.. the guy smiled and let out her hand-------hamara nam chandan hain....log hume chandu bulate hain.....third year....physics honours.....
aarushi smiled back and shook hands with him...he noticed her eyes and asked------are? tum...tum ro rahi thi? pagal ladki....ro kyun rahi thi tum? itni choti choti baat par rona thk hain....
aarushi wiped her eyes agen and said-----aap thk keh rahe hain.....accha chandu kya aap hume principal ka office dikha sakte hain?
chandu------han han kyun nhi chaliye.....
she followed him.........................................
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pratigya(frm now on i will use PRATIGYA instead of chandni) lay on her bed,with her little krishna idol....deep in thoughts.... wen aarushi came frm behind her and put her arms around her neck-----JIJIIIII!!!!!
pratigya jumped up,shocked at her sudden behavior------uuff...aarushi...mar dalogi kya hume?
aarushi----mare aapke dushman.....waise yahaan istarah lete hue kiske bare mein soch rahi thi?
to her biggest surprise pratigya's cheeks flushed and she looked down.....
aarushi touched her chin and raised her face-----jiji.....aap.....aap sharma rahi hain?
pratigya pushed her hand away and giggled-----nhi to?
aarushi-----jiji kya aap sachmein kisike bare mein soch rahi thi?
pratigya-----haan..... she showed her the small idol------inke bare mein.....
aarushi----dhet....ye to kishan bhagwan hain......
pratigya------wohi to........
aarushi pushed her-----kya wohi to....bataiye na kiske bare mein soch rahi thi.......?
pratigya smiled and hid her face in her palm....aarushi moved her hands away-------bataogi ya nhi?
pratigya--------kahan na tumse? KRISHNA KE BARE MEIN SOCH RAHI THI..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Has Pratigya started to develop feelings for Krishna?😕I liked the way Arushi and Chandu meet,it was very sweet.It was a very nice chp.Looking forward to the next one😊

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