Love heals (FF) ch2, Pg 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guys!!
For someone who sucks at writing, I decided to write gibberish.
But before I start my lecture, thanks all my wonderful friends, in no partiucular order😆, Shabz, Mima, Limitwa, Mrithula, Aaliyah, Ania, Samira, Shumi di, Divya, Priti, Mimi and everyone else!!
If I haven't mentioned your name, it's only because the list was getting long and people would run away, love you all😳
Its you guys who have inspired me...
shabz, it's your ownderful analysis
Mima, its your hilarious analysis
Limitwaa how can forget your essays
Mirthula how can I forget your awesome comments😳
Ania and Samira, what can I say to these wonderful writers😳
of course Shumi di, Priti, Divya, Aaliyah, and Mimi, my behooda friends😆
Thank you everyone for the love😃

I love you guys. Honestly, you guys are the reason that I was able to write this, because I know that you would support me😳

I am really sorry for the mistakes, this is my first ever attempt at writing some like this. I don't know how it has come out, I couldn't even bring myself to proof-read it, I am nervous.😳 Actually, I am shocked that I could write something😳

This turned out to be longer than the actual part đŸ€Ł and if you guys are STILL reading this and haven't skipped to the actual part, pat yourself on the back for surving this far👏👏
PLease let me know how it is.

Part 1:

"Good afternoon, how can I help you today?" the lady was already irritated because of the rude customers who had come in earlier this morning.

"Oh hey, how are you today? Can I get one boston cream donut and one small iced capp, please" The girl who was busy reading her favourite book for the 100th time, finally looked up at the interruption.

"Sure mam, that would be $2.90 please" happy to see a cheerful customer.

"sorry, can you make that large iced capp" she said, a few more calories is not going to make a difference.

"Sure, that would be $3.90"

" and oh can also get one chocolate chip muffin" The girl was oblivious to the impatient stares from the customers standing in the line.

"anything else" she had jinxed it.

"well, make that two iced capps" she took out a 20 dollar bill to pay.

"'.."

"Don't curse me, I am just nervous and preparing myself for tomorrow.

"It's fine" The anger vanished as soon as she girl sweetly explained the herself.

"So you were cursing me?" the girl giggled.

"well, your order will be ready in a few minutes"

"Thank you so much, have a wonderful day" She had to get over her nervousness and all this thinking was making it worse. She decided to give a rest to her brain for the rest of the day.

"You, too" the lady said with a smile.

Oh, she shouldn't have ordered just about everything that they had at Tim horton's. She was trying to carry everything that she had ordered in one hand and her precious book in the other had. While busy keeping herself from spilling the iced capp, she pushed open the door with her arm. And before she could take her second step'bump..

"what the" the girl couldn't help but scream seeing the sight in front of her. The iced capp had spilled all over her favourite book. The book that was her one of the best birthday gifts from her parents.

"what the yourself!! Before that, go to an eye specialist to get your eyes checked because you wouldn't go around breaking people's nose" the guy was busy checking to see if he were bleeding.

"well, look who's talking? Mister I-can-see-everything-to-not-bump-into-other-people. "

"I was on the phone and- wait, you ordered all this for yourself?" he said, looking at the spilled contents on the floor.

"no, I ordered all this for you, I was just going to give all of this to you!" the girl couldn't understand why she was still standing here, talking to this rude guy. One usually meets guys who hold the door for them and here this guy was arguing with her when she was the one who had lost her book.

"oh Miss I-will-eat-all-the-junk-food-in-the-world. Why am even wasting my time arguing with you? But, stop crying, you can order that again and I can pay!!"

"I am not crying and what are you gonna order again? Can you order the book for me? Even if you get a new book for me, is it going to have those memories and feelings attached to it? Just forget about it and carry on with your useless life. Bye!" The has had enough'.and to think of it, she had just promised to give some rest to her brain.

"Useless life? What-" the girl was gone before he could complete his sentence.

The started her car and blasted the music. She was just going forget everything and prepare herself for tomorrow, the most important day of her life. But one thing she didn't realize was that, thanks to that guy, she had got over her nervousness. Here she had been anxious for days now and after her encounter with the guy, it had vanished into the thin air, only if she would have realized it.


Comments, criticism, advice to stop writing this, gaalis to tell me how pathetic it was...everything is welcome!!
Please comment!!


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Xxxjrae thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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first to post yay and my name is mentioned second
ok let me read the thread now😆
Edited by mima190587 - 15 years ago
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me second... first place just missed......will be back to you later😊
my name is no where in the list...😭...any way...😔
boston cream donut, two cup large iced capp, chocolate chip muffin... abey yaar kithna khawo gi ...Gadothgajan ho ka?😡
iced capp had spilled all over her favourite book...tch...tch...tch...who the hell bumped on her?😡
she said "no, I ordered all this for you...đŸ€Ł
she said to him to carry on with his Useless life?...đŸ€Ł
wonder what for she is preparing for tomorrow...
nice start dear. thanks for the same😊
Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mima190587

first to post yay and my name is mentioned second

ok let me read the thread now😆



lol, I said no particular order!! and guys, if I haven't mentioned your name, it's only because the list was getting long, love you all😳
Edited by anchal2 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritirays

My second post! đŸ„ł


Dhattt behooda third post ho gaya! đŸ€Ł

And Anchal all the best for your FF!đŸ‘đŸŒ Let me read it now! 😊
Edited by pritirays - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritirays

My second post! đŸ„ł

behoodi me second...one two three nahi aatha kya?😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritirays


That behooda third post ho gaya! đŸ€Ł

And Anchal all the best for your FF!đŸ‘đŸŒ Let me read it now! 😊



thank you!!😃 I need it😳
lol, guys this is not a behooda chat thread...so you don't have to compete to post😆
Edited by anchal2 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Anchal, just read it, i loved it, no lie I LOVE IT 😃
very western which i like and love both their attitudes😛
this is going to be great i can tell, please do continue😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritirays

My second post! đŸ„ł

nahi yaar third😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: anchal2



lol, I said no particular order!! and guys, if I haven't mentioned your name, it's only because the list was getting long, love you all😳

😆 i know no order, just being behooda

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