~Dhoka Ya Pyaar~..Chap 38 Pg.56(UPDATED!!) - Page 40

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Posted: 15 years ago
okhey this one is my fav chap of this FF......only kriya and love and passion and nothing else....no1 to disturb......awww.awesome dear lemme mark out this chap....chapter 35 hmm.....thats it......😆😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nida, brilliant job yaar. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
lovely chapter😛😛😛. full of romance😛, passion😛 and love😳.i loved the entire chapter, now i want more such scenes.
update soon dear. waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww......that was such a romantic chp😳. I loved the manaoing 😉.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
👏jz lubbbbbbbbbbbbbbd d chap.u r amazn nida dr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i jz fell in lub wit Krishna f ur ff😳😳im speechless.i ws readn d chap agn n agn 4 wat seems to b 4 d 6th tym n im gonna read it agn😉 dis ws d most romantic,luvly,intrstng(OMG y dnt i gt wrds nw?!!!!!!!)i cn 1ly c KriYa n cnt evn rmbr a wrd.Sry dr.........i jz hv 1 thng 4 u🤗
MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

@halaa: thanxx alot hun..im so glad u loved it..specially the aplogizing 1
@Sadie: ROFL..u were shy..awww..lol..thanxx soo much sweet..yep finally they are back together..
@truthseeker123: thanxx so much dear..u were smiling while reading..aww..thats a compliment..thanxx soo much..so ur waiting part is finished rite..lol
@shagz: LOL...hahahaha..i was expecting that..isnt it "hyperventilating" yaar..i try my best to update soon..take too much time to think..but now will try even more to update fast
@Meeno: yay!!..so u loved it..realliii glad to knw that..and yes pratz is lucky..actually they both are lucky to have each other..its a pleasure reading ur comment..thanxxx a ton dear..
@kaasshh: thanxxx soo much yaar..i was wondering that now Kaasshh dont comment..then i thought may be u got bz..or got bored..hehehe..but yay! u r bak..and thankss yaar..soo glad u also liked itt
@Aabs: hehehehe..so far..its my fav chap too..thanxx alot KSKS..soo pleased that u also liked itt..mwa
@Preeti: thanxx soo much hun..so u liked the chap filled wid romance..there will be more scenes...keep reading
@Shruthi: thanxx hun..yay! realli glad to knw that u liked the manaoing part..
@zash_sparkling: thanxxx alot dear..hayee..u r in love wid Krishna..so am i..hehehe..OMG 6th time..thatss again a compliment..thankuuu..awww a big 🤗for u too sweett..mwaaa

thanks alot to all of u who didnt comment/pressed the like button..and other ppl..im realllii glad that u all liked the chap..thanxx soo much

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hellooo u all lovely ppl there yess..here i am wid another update..sorry for such a late update.....but i hope u will enjoy this chap too..
here is the chap Enjoy ..and do leave comments plzz!!


~Chap 36~

Pratigya getting away from Krishna: tum abhi bahar jaao..main tayyar ho kar aatee hoon..

Krishna: ok..but u plzz cum fast ok!

Pratigya nodded and Krishna left the room..pratigya who was beyond happy..started to get ready..finally there was no distances between her and Krishna..she thought..she put kajal..and then put the lip gloss..which was plain but wid a little shade of gold..matching wid gold embroidery of her dress

She was all ready to go out and have fun..as Krishna sed..she really didn't need make up too look pretty!

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People were still dancing around..sum girls were chatting sitting in corners..she was looking around for Krishna.."there he is..talking to Angad and Arushi"..she murmured to herself and walked to them

"hey Guys!" Pratigya sed joyfully

Angad: hey pratigya!..tum kahan thee

Pratigya looking at Krishna..who was mischievously looking at her..waiting her to respond..she smiled

"hmm..kahin nahi..woh aik kaam tha woh karnay gayee thee" she replied still looking at him..smilingly

Arushi: hogaya?!

Pratigya now looking at her: kya?

Arushi: tera kaam!

Pratigya: ohh woh..haan woh hogaya..

Krishna now was smiling.."yeh Komal kab aai gee.."..he asked realizing it was too late now..

Arushi: they will be here in 5 min. I guess..i checked and aunty sed Komal was all ready for the mehndi rasam

Krishna: ohh ok!

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Komal had cum to the hall where every1 was..pratigya and Arushi both were sitting on either sides..looking at her mehndi..

An aunty who was sitting around sed loudly..to all of the gurls

"larkiyon..pata hai..kehtay hain agar mehndi ka rang gehra ho..to uska pati..ya hone wala pati larki ko bohot pyaar karta hai..aur usse barhee baat agar woh larka khud..larki k haath main shagun ki mendi sab se pehle lagai..to unki shaadi to pakki..as soon as she announced all the girls started giggling and talking..Komal who was upset that Adarsh cudnt put mehndi in her hand first was sitting quietly..

Pratigya: tujhko kya huwa?..teray chehray par baara (12) kyon baj rahe hain

Komal: kuch nahi yaar..yeh baat jo aunty nay abhi boli..shagun ki mehndi agar larka..lagae..to shaadi pakki..agar pehle boli hoti ..tou main adarsh se atleast shagun ki mehndi to lagwa leti..but its too late now..she sed making a sad face

Pratigya: aray budhu..its not for u yaar..u are already getting married to him..yeh rasam unlogon k liye hai..who are just in a relationship..and wants to get married..and u are getting married tomorrow..so it really doesn't make any difference..

Komal thought for a moment..and then smiled: o yeah..yeh to maine socha he nahi..

Arushi..who was listening to them: kyonki tu budhu hai..she teased

Komal: tu mujhse bhi barhee budhu hai!..she sed to Komal

Arushi: kyon?

Komal: kyonki teri samjh main nahi aata..that woh Angad hai na..tujh par marta hai..jaa jakar shagun ki mehndi lagwa lay..ja ja..

Arushi blushed: no yaar..we are just frends..she tried to lie

Pratigya: oh hello..we all knw..that u also like him..and yaar..he really likes u..dekh abhi bhi yaheen dekh raha hai..

Arushi looked at him..who was looking at her..she smiled..

Arushi surrendered: ok ok..i admit that I also like him..but yeh shaadi waadi..

Komal: ho jaaye gee..pratigya se pooch who kitni beqarar hai..apni shaadi ko lekar..

Arushi: acha..koi hai kya..dont tell me..iski bhi baat pakki hai..

Komal: aray yaar..baat to pakki nahi huwi..lekin yeh dono aik doosre se bohot pyaar karte hain..

Arushi: OMG..pratss!..u even didn't tell me!..whoz that guy?..whos the lucky 1..she asked excitedly

Komal: tu usko jaantee hai..balke u think hez really HOT!..she sed while looking at pratigya who was shy..but telling komal to stop

Arushi: WAT!..i knw that guy and hez Hot!..omg..yaar..yeh kya ho raha hai..itna suspence..plzz tell me na

Pratigya: aray yaar..dont get too excited..hez..(there was a pause) hezz..she was purposely building the suspence

Arushi: hez who?

Pratigya: KRISHNA!..

Arushi: WAT!..then she looked at Krishna who was now talking to Angad..

"Krishna..and u..u both love each other" arushi asked surprisingly..pratigya shyly nodded

Arushi: wow yaar..kya choice hai..agar angad nahi hota na..then u wud have competition wid me..now she teased

Pratigya looked at Arushi..who was laughing..

Pratigya: ab woh tera hone wala jeju hai!..

Arushi: so wat I still think hez hot..she winked at Komal..

Pratigya: hmmm well I will agree wid that..now she winked..and all three gals chuckled

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Every thing was done..Mendi rasam was finished and every guest had left..now there were only Angad..Arushi..Krishna..pratigya..Komal ..Neha.and Mrs. Mehta..

Neha to Mrs. Mehta: aunty! Kal jiss hall main wedding ceremony hai..wahan ki sabhi preparations are completed..

Mrs.Mehta: oh that's wonderful..thank u beta..u really helped me..

Neha: my pleasure aunty!

Neha to komal: ok yaar..chal ab main chaltee hoon..its late now..

Komal: ok yaar..thanxxx a ton..see u tomorrow..

After neha left every1 went to their rooms..now Angad and Krishna were sharing rooms..Komal decided that she will go to her mom's room..so Pratigya and Arushi will have sum space..and she will get to spend the last nite in her house wid her mom..

Arushi was asleep and so was every1..pratigya texted Krishna..

"Jaldi se 2 min. k liye chat par aao plz!..only 2 min."

Krishna replied back..

"Only 2 min. tum kaho to poori raat chat par betha rahoon"..Krishna's filmy reply made pratigya laugh..

"koi zaroorat nahi..i sed na only 2 min. or itna filmy hone ki zaroorat nahi..cum on hurry up..and make sure ur room partner..Angad is asleep!" she replied and slowly walked out of the room

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She was waiting for him since 2 minutes..when she heard footsteps..She hurriedly walked toward stairs to make sure it was Krishna

"Kahan reh gaye thay..kab se wait kar rahi hoon"..she sed getting upset

Krishna: soo sorry yaar..but yeh Angad na..itnay khofnaak kharrate leta hai..i thought he was awake..but actually he was sleeping

Pratigya chuckled: ohh..

Krishna: waise itni raat ko..mujhe terrace par bulane ka reason..mujhe miss kar rahee theen kya? He sed playfully..

Pratigya: not really..she sed naughtily..aik kaam tha

Krishna: itni raat ko kya kaam tha?..aur yeh haath peechay kyon kiya huwa hai? Kuch chupa rahi ho!..he sed while trying to look wat was in her hand..that she was hiding behind her back

Pratigya who was hiding the mehndi in her hand.."hmm..Mehndi" she sed showing him a mehndi cone

Krishna: Mehndi???

Pratigya: haan woh aaj shaam aik aunty nay bola..k agar aik larka shagun ki mehndi larki k haath main lagai..jiss se woh pyaar karta hai..to unki shaadi pakki..

Krishna who was listening to her carefully laughed..which made pratigya angry

Krishna: acha..and u believe in all that..??

Pratigya: haan..kyon?

Krishna: nahi kuch nahi!..laao main mehndi lagadoon

Pratigya now upset and thinking to leave: nahi koi zaroorat nahi..tumhare liye to yeh mazaq hai na..hanslo..jee bhar kar hanslo..nahi lagwaani mujhe koi mehndi..wid that sed..she began to walk toward stairs..to go back..but Krishna hurriedly got her..

Krishna: aray yaar! I was just kidding..tumko kya lagta hai..main inn rasmon par hansoon ga..

Pratigya looked at him.."Remember..jab Komal uth kar gayee thee..after the haldi rasam..aur neha nay kaha tha k jo larki dulhan ki jagah par sabse pehlay bethay gee..uskee shaadi jaldi hogee..to maine he tumko wahan push kiya tha..and tum waha par beth gayee thee..i swear I do believe in these customs and respect them as well..i was just pulling ur leg rite now"..he clarified

Pratigya who was convinced..finally smiled.."Krishna..tum or tumhara stupid mazak"

Krishna: acha..give me mehndi..i want to apply it!

Pratigya handed him the cone..they both sat on the stairs..and Krishna beautifully wrote

"Be mine Forever..and made a heart..and wrote his and Pratigya's initials..

Pratigya was feeling out of the world..

"Thank u"..she whispered..and placed a soft kiss on his cheek who was staring at her..

"cum on now lets go..warna koi aajaiga.." she told Krishna..and began to leave

Krishna who was loving the moment..held her hand..and stopped her..he moved close..and leaned to her ear.."tum iss chandni raat main itni khoobsoorat lag rahee ho..k chaand ki khoobsoorti bhi pheeki lag rahi hai" wid that sed..he also gently kissed her cheek..and went downstairs..pratigya saw him going..he stopped and looked back at pratigya..his deep and sparkling eyes made pratigya fall in love wid him all over again..she smiled and slowly walked down the stairs..

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Posted: 15 years ago
Haaaaaaaaaayeeeeeeeee Soooooooo Romantic!!!😳
Lovelyyyyyy Chapterrrrr! I Was Smilingggg And My Sista Kept Staring At Me Rofllll
Update Soon x
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Posted: 15 years ago

very well written as usual....

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Posted: 15 years ago
Soooooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeetttttt and romantic haiiiiiiiiii
😊😳😍 So dreammmmmmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Absolutey loved both chapters hun👏👏
Very well written😊
cant wait for your next update..... keep it up hun👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was so romantic . the mehndi part was very cute. i hope they will get married soon.thank you for the lovely update.plz continue soon.

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