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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaasshh

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Posted: 15 years ago
Just read both the chps.Atlast you re-introduced Pratigya!!🥳Although kaafi late tha phirbhi it's ok😛😆Anyway,both the chps were very nice.Krishna is such a jerk and a big time LOSER!!!😡👎🏼.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
😭😡 Stupid Krishna!!!!!!
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!
Poor Pratigya!
Anyways Glad Shes Back!!
Update Soon x
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Posted: 15 years ago
😲 Krishna!!!!!!!!! 😡😡😡
But atleast u introduced pratigya finally 😃
Just dont let this marriage happen plzz 😒 .. luv that Prats waited so long for him but this stupid Krishna!! doesnt realize anything!!
update fast!! cannt wait to read next chap! 😛😃 luved both updates! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
both parts were very interesting. thank GOD pratigya is back in ur ff.but what is wrong with krishna.i m so sad for pratigya.thank u for the wonderful updates.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Chp 53

Angad(angry): tum pratigya ke layak nahi ho…..u don't deserve her….u selfish, uncaring jerk

Saying this angad left the room angrily banging the door behind him. Krishna turned, a tear escaping his eye.

K: u r right angad I don't deserve her…..she is not made for me….she deserves better…a better life…a better partner…a better person…not me..a murderer……I don't deserve her love….maybe one day she will be able to forget me and move on…one day she will……that I ensure

He also exited the room slowly making his way down. He walked across the streets with the wind blowing hard against his face and leaves flying everywhere. Krishna's face showed no expressions but his mind had lots of questions. But his decision was final….no one cud stop him.

*Wedding Hall*

A: no….d wedding has not taken place

P(relief): thank god….i thought I was too late

A: u called home then u screamed on d fone…..krishna ran in search of u…he didn't come here……nor did the bride

P: is he fine…..hw is he??...has he changed over these yrs….

A: i…i..

Ko(actual): pratigya y d hell r u so worried for him……hes a jerk….i even don't feel like calling him my brother….if he wants to get married let him…..he doesn't deserve a angel like u

P: komal pls….u don't understand…..wen u r in love u will understand wat I feel

R(angry): komal is right…. Hes a jerk…..

A: stop it all of u!!!......first find krishna…

P: ya where is he????

R: wait a minute…..ok Krishna went off in search of pratigya….but arushi…..where is she???

Ko: y shud v care…d hell with arushiya and same to Krishna….lets go back pratigya…..he may come here anytime….v need to leave….i don't want to meet him

P: if u don't want to then go…I will wait for him….like I did for all these yrs

Ko(stamping her foot): fine bye…

A: wait….komal stop…..

Komal stood there making a face.

Arushi picked up the phone and dialed krishna's number. The phone ran for sometime then it went on the answering machine. Wiping her tears away she left a message.

"Krishna its arushi….sorry I …i…cant come…I'm very sorry Krishna…I just cant do it….i cant…..krishna I cant…..i cant marry u….sorry bye….hope u can forgive me"

She shut the phone and turned to face lakshman who was back. He had returned to arushi asking for forgiveness.

*ARUSHI KA CHP KHATAM*

Krishna walked on the rocks (d rocks he stood on in his entry scene) sadly. His eyes didn't have tears nor did his face have any expression. But his heart was throbbing, hitting his ribcage hard. In the temple behind, the bells rung loudly swaying continuously in the strong winds. He was looking up at the moon and stars far up, he stared at the light coming from it. Spreading his hands wide a big evil smile on his face he screamed so loud that the man on the moon itself cud hear "P-R-A-T-I-G-Y-A". He then, looked down at the river far down below. A deep dark ditch..falling into which ensured immediate death. Krishna gives a killer smirk.😈

Pratigya turned "Krishna"

A: wat??

P: Krishna….he called me

A: pratigya ur ears must be ringing….. I didn't hear a thing

P: but I heared him….he called out my name

Ko: pls pratigya….stop imagining big dreams….wen they break it will hurt a lot….i am still telling u lets leave before that ************** arrives

P(angry): KOMAL……zooban sambhalo…vo tumhara bada bhai hai

Ko: ya sure…bhai….thuuuu

A: stop it……pratigya sit down….u must be tired

P: everything later….pehle Krishna ko dhuundo….chalo komal…hame usse dhoonda hoga

Ko: main nahi arahi hu

A: komal pls chalo…..mujhe bhi fikar ho rahi hai….vo hai kaha….uska phone bhi nahi lag raha hai

P(worried): chalo jaldi…..

A: rolli yahi rukho agar vo yaha aaye toh fone karna

R: thik he

Everyone desended the stairs and crowded into adarsh's car and they sped off. They first went to adrsh's house, then krishna's parents home, they even visited arushi's home but cudnt trace Krishna. Pratigya was bitterly crying.. she kept on saying that she felt something was wrong..she cud feel it. Adarsh kept on assuring her that Krishna was fine and they wud find him soon. Slowly, komal was also getting worried. She knew that her brother was unpredictable. If he decided to do something then he wud surely do it.

Where was he????

Precap: Krishna's boot kicks a rock which falls down the deep ditch falling into the river below...speading his hands wide he bends forward
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Posted: 15 years ago

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Arushi's gone............

I hope Krishna's ok, hope he doesnt fall down the cliff............😔
Loved how you showed that Pratigya is some sort of pyschic who can hear Krishna calling her.... erm could you ask her this weeks lottery numbers😆
Cant wait for the Kriya scenes
Cant wait for the next update................................ Keep it up👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by aleena1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaasshh

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where do u get all these animations???
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

where do u get all these animations???

🤣 plain google search......🤣

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