Fan Fiction: Kidnap ( Last chp on pg 60)

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serialmaniac

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Posted: 15 years ago

Where am i? that was the 1st question that came in her mind whn she woke up. "I dont remmem ber......... wait thats it yes i know. Yesterday, when i had gone shopping i went to try a dress and ..........those eyes... i saw them in the mirror and then some1 stuffed something in my face and i fainted 😲".........here she am lying on the sofa of sum house.

Pratigya: oh my god . i ..i ..i.. where the hell am i? i shdnt b here . She got up immidiately and looked around there was no one. There was a kitchen behind her, a store room on the right and left there was a bedroom and the main door in front of her. "The main door, i hv to get out " She ran to it and turned the handle but it didnt bulged. She pulled with all her might, . "hey bhagwan, yeh khul khu nai raha hai?"

"Bcse its locked" said a voice behind her. pratigya turned and saw there at the door of the bedroom stood a man, jeans white shirt short hair clean shaved and DASHINGLY HANDSOME. He had a smirk on his face and he continued " soo wat wud u like for breakfast?" he said while walking towards the kitchen. Pratigya: (angrily)open the door right now. " NO" came d reply. "do u know who i am? .... do u know who my father? i will........ He cut her short by saying "yr name is pratigya yr dad's name is sajjan singh the mp of d state. so egg or bread and butter??".

" what???" she asked.

"for breakfast eggs or bread and the stuff" he replied,

ya that reminds me the towel is in d cupboard and the washroom is attached to d bedroom. Go clean yr self up there is toothpaste and brush for u in there. I'll make breakfast meanwhile".

Pratigya: who r u??

He walked out of d kitchen leaned agst d door frame smiled and said "

KRISHNA.

Edited by serialmaniac - 15 years ago

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Sana

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice beginning!!! really an amazing fan fic!!

plzzz do continue soon!!!!!!

btw i am the first to post😉

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Sana

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiR
Interesting chp.

hmmm shruthi tum phir baazi le gai na!! maine socha i will be the first to post...ye kya kia tum ne...main type kar rahi thi aut um ne post bhi kar dia~!!!!!!!!!!!!

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SANARHAAN

hmmm shruthi tum phir baazi le gai na!! maine socha i will be the first to post...ye kya kia tum ne...main type kar rahi thi aut um ne post bhi kar dia~!!!!!!!!!!!!

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serialmaniac

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 2:

he turned and went bk 2 d kitchen returning with 2 plates of egg and toast followed by two cups of tea ( professor saab jaldi aaye chai pyaari milgai). He placed them on the table which was near the wall between d kitchen and bedroom. sat down looked up at her and said "bon appetite". Pratigya was dumbstruck she was standing still. She cudnt understand what was happening , was it a dream. slowly raising her hand she pinch herself "aaah". she then looked at him who was eating, when forward and with a commanding voice asked "how did i cum here?". Krishna raised his fork, slowly munching the bread as if deep in thought then put his fork down picked up his cup took a sip. Pratigya was abt 2 burst out when he said with sarcasm " luks lik u walked from d sofa to d table hence are standing here". Raised his cup above his head and said "cheers" laughed picked up his plate and walked back into d kitchen. P now boiling with anger "i mean here in this house ..................... i mean with u ..no...no ....i mean....that.....whatever(angry). She entered d kitchen, he was washing d plate and cup pulled him by his collar and said "i want an answer who r u? why am i here? and how did i cum here?. "hmmmm.... well u c yr dad is in d middle of d election campien and ur missing. In short kidnapped, he will cry make a huge hullaboo in d media and thus (spreading his hands wide and winking at her) get lots of sympathy votes. Yr his election ticket." p was confused she resorted back " and u????". Krishna; "d kidnapper!! duh!!! .......have d breakfast its getting cold and yr dad will kill me 4 giving his darling daughter cold cold breakfast and tea (with a funny expression)".

She sat and had d eggs while he sat on d sofa and read a magazine. she was abt to drink d tea that she suddenly remmembered something. "urm...urm..urm...kris.............................krishna, " He looked up from d magazine and she continued " i want to talk to bauji, he must b worried ".

Krishna (irritated): " u call home d police trace d no. they cum here u go to home sweet home i go to jail, kidnapping idea flop. (raised his hand over his head and acted as looking far away) there i c d sympathy votes go down d drain. u hv been only a night here lady have patience when all this fiasco is over i will personally c u home."

P: "what do u expect me to sit here and do? i'll b bored".

K: " now that u started d topic, do these things clean d house, cook, wash..............d usual women stuff."

P:" u expect me to do all this, whats bauji paying u for"

K:" kidnapping u not being yr lady in waiting.

P:" i want sum fresh air open d door and windows"

K:" sure u no wat i'll call d neighbours to get a glimse at u and also u need yr manicure pedicure also princesess no..no.. dont worry i'm there no for doing that. u just put yr leg up sit on d sofa and order me around 'humph'. He turned around and went back to reading. Filled with anger, she got up and entered d bedroom. It was a small neat and tidy room. A bed, desk and chair, 2 cupboards and a door to d washroom . There were 2 windows on either side of d bed. She went and opened 1 then d other but both faced a half constructed building thus constricting her veiw. she barged back in d hall and screamed at him.

Krishna: "a house with a veiw ask yr father to get u one ".

p:" i'll die. how am i supposed to live here. huh........ atleast on d a/c its hot.

K got up and said " there is no a/c in this house. yeah!! and if u bug me more by yr silly complains....... i promise u that.......d hell with yr father i'l give u a tight slap agst yr pretty face". He picked up his book walked inside d bedroom and slammed d door shut.

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

ok.it's a political stint.Boy this Krishna is really rude!!BTW Nice chp. 😊

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serialmaniac

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 3:

She stood there in disbelief. How cud he dare to shout at her. who was he? She sat on the floor and started crying. She was very sensitive and wud cry at every small thing. All her life she was supressed. Bauji's darling daughter not at all. For him he only cared for his son Shakti. She was nothing only a burden for him. Since childhood her elder brother use to bully her. He had everything he wanted a new toy, rides in d mela, etc. Shaktibhaiya wud taunt her, and sometimes wud also hit her. His anger wud always b directed towards her as he found no 1 else to remove his anger on. This continued til his marriage. Now her bhabhi was his target. Now they had fixedher marriage with nitin thakur who she had heard was a cruel person. His first wife had died under mysterious circumstances. She had argued that how can i spend rest of my life with sach a person. But,

bauji: kya teri ma aur maine aik doosre ko dekha tha nahi. kya tere bhai aur bhabhi bea se pehle mile the nahi. to tu kyu milna chati hai. bas bol dia maine teri shaadi uus sai hi hogi. aur beta hum thakur hai ekbaar zaban dedi toh bas.

aur vaise bhi iis bea se meri party ko bohut faida hoga toh soch teri bauji ka kitna faida hoga". She started crying trying to make her bauji understand but shakti had pulled her from her hair and dragged her to her room. All the shaadi preparations were in full swing. She had prayed " bhagwan, aap sab kii sunte ho to aaj meri bhi sunlo. maine aaj tak aapse kuch nahi maanga aur sab kuch sehti aarahi hu. lekin ab meri yea zindagi ka faisla hai. aap mujhe madad kijia main kya karu?"

That was yesterday, today here she was locked up in a house alone with a total stranger, all for a few votes. She was so depressed that she didnt notice that the bedroom door had opened and he was standing right next to her. When she realised she immidiately got up turned around and started wiping her tears.

Krishna(nervous): urm.......do u want a tissue? i'm sorry i shouldnt hv shouted at u but ......well... u were a little irritating....... and i...i.. u know... i am a little short tempered. I am really sorry. i'll get u a tissue. He walked away and returned with a small tissue box which he offered her. She took a few tissues and started wiping her face and said:"its ok.......i mean....i mean i'm sry i shdnt hv shouted at u. I was just a little depressed.... u know ... this kidnapping thing and all.

Krishna:" u were bored right ...... take. (giving her a bundle of magazines) these ar e allthose girlish magazines.... u know..... d type u girls read. Yr father asked me to get sum incase u got bored"

He turned around and started to go. Pratigya's face became filled with fear then she shouted out "bauji nea ye kaha..............WHO ARE U? WHY HV U BROUGHT ME HERE? WHAT DO U WANT FROM ME?"

He luked confused "i..i.. told everything...yr father had..."

Pratigya:" agar bauji nea yea sab karvaya hota toh wo tumhe zaroor batate ki main anpar hu. main yeh sab par nahi sakti"

His face changed suddenly like his lie had been caught.🤢

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

WHAT!!??Pratigya is unpad!!! 😲 and the last sentence means that he's actually kidnapped her,it wasn't SS's orders.Oh God!! I pity the Pratigya of ur ff.BTW it was a nice chp.

Edited by shruthiR - 15 years ago