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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: CanadianAddict

oh u mean Hes Just Not That In To You the film- no i dont think i am following that.



yea, thats what I meant😊 I am glad because I didn't like the movie😳
aww, I am so sorry to hear that you lost the second prt😭

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i will do it again in a bit, after i finish a school assignment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg its like this fanfic wasnt meant to be a second time my internet has done it! srry guys maybe 2morrow...im too upset now :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: CanadianAddict

omg its like this fanfic wasnt meant to be a second time my internet has done it! srry guys maybe 2morrow...im too upset now :(

Hun, why don't you write the part on MS word or sumiing and then just paste it here? 😊 thats what I do...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yeaaa haha thats what i am doing now :p.

i was being stupid.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okay guys here is part 2. Thanks for all those who read. This is my 3rd attempt at it, because it kept getting deleted, as usual comments appreciated. <3

*Arushi and Pratigya walk into the school gates, other students rush in as well, there is red, pink and white as far as the eye can see. Pratigya smiles and looks down at her red suit.*

Arushi: Acha, aab tho mujhe batha hi tho, ka yeh red suit kyun?

Pratz: *smiling* agar aaj mera khwaab pura ho gaaya na...then main tumhe sab kuch batha dun gi'

Arushi: *rolls eyes* fine, keep your secrets.

*Just then we see a boy running up to Arushi with flowers, her eyes widen and she looks at Pratz.*

Arushi: AMAN! Shit! Kya aap mujhe ek din ka liye bi nahin spare kar sakta Bhagwan? Ek din.

Pratz: *smiling* Are woh itna bi bura nahin hai-

Arushi: Okay didi bye!

*Arushi runs from there as fast as she can can. We see a dismayed looking short boy holding his flowers looking for where Arushi ran off to.*

*Just then we see a girl come up behind Pratigya and tap her on the shoulder, Pratigya turns around, it is her friend Priya.*

Pratigya: Priya tum?

Priya: Haan, aur kaun ho sakta ha...waisa bi is college main mera siva tum kisa jaanthi ho?

Pratigya: Kisi ko ni *make a face* thanks for reminding me.

Priya: Are yaar, I was just kidding, but mujhe pata hai kai tum kisko jaan na chathi ho- eh tumne red pehna!

Pratigya: *smiling shyly* haan woh actually na-

Priya: Wait har saal we wear white...aaj red! Wait are you? Tum pagal ho gayi ho?

Pratigya: *giggling* kya hua? Bus is saal I wanted to wear red...so I wore red.

Priya: Oh shut up! Mujhe sab pata hai'do you even know? Tume pata bi hai who kitna player hai? Jaisa jaisa...he plays with every single girls emotions, every single girl.

Pratigya: acha? *lost somewhere.*

Priya: HAAN! TUMHE PATA HAI'LAST WEEK USKI GIRLFRIEND THI RUPALI, the week before that Nisha aur aaj pata nahin kis polly, dolly ka saath-

*Priya notices that Pratigya isn't listening. *

Priya: *shaking her hand in front of Pratz's face.* Eh hello?! Kahan ko gayi meri jaan- *notices where

Pratigya is looking* hai Ram! Yeh larkhi!

*Just then a jeep has pulled up and came to a sudden halt in front of the university gates. A large crowd of girls has gathered around the jeep and we see two boys step off the back. Finally the front door opens and we see a sleek, black, designer shoe emerge. Finally a young man steps out, he is breathtakingly gorgeous, but has a smug air around him. His eyes are mischievous and yet captivating. He is wearing a leather jacket and a red shirt underneath which hugs his muscular physique. He smiles at the crowd of girl around him.*

Priya: Oh gosh *looking at Pratigya.* Chalo Pratz!

*Pratigya is too lost in the boy to notice, her attention fixated on him. She imagines him looking at her and suddenly beginning to walk towards her, pushing the girls in the crowd away. His eyes are locked on her eyes and he slightly smiles. Finally he reaches her and grabs her red dupatta, flying in the wind and says...*

Priya: HELLO!? PRATZ!

Pratigya: *snapping back to reality* kya? Tum kuch ka rahi thi?

Priya: nahin, mujhe tho yahein aapna aap se buk buk karni ki aadat hai!

Pratigya: *biting her bottom lip* sorry-

Priya: No no don't be sorry, tum yahein karhi raho, aur maaza looto, main ja rahi hun! *walks away*

Pratigya: Priya! *looks back at the young man and then runs towards Priya.*

AT THE JEEP:

*The boy stands there and looks at his two buddies who had come off the jeep with him. He smiles at the girls and smoothly walks past them with his buddies following. The girls sigh as he passes.*

Boy 1 (Arjun): aare yaar Roshan, pata nahin...how do you have this effect on the ladies

Boy 2 (Shubankar): Yea yaar...hume bi tips-

*Roshan snaps his fingers for the boys to shut up and they do.*

Roshan: *turning around to face them* boys woh Alisha ki kya status hai?

Arjun: Alisha....alisha...

Shubankar: Alisha...Alisha Sinha?!

Roshan: *rolling his eyes* nahin duffer, Alisha Sinha nahin...woh tho sab ki behen hai! Alisha, what her name?

Arjun: Alisha Malhotra?

Roshan: *smiling* yea that's it!

Arjun: Par Alisha Malhotra ka tho boyfriend hai...

Roshan: Tho kya hua? Mujhe Alisha chahi ah... uska boyfriend nahin...and anyways it always makes the game more interesting, what say? *he smiles at them and walks off.*

*The two boys look at each other and shrug and follow Roshan.*

IN THE HALLWAY AT SCHOOL:

Priya: *looking at a textbook, walking with Pratz, every second shooting her dirty glances.*

Pratigya: Aare, itni naraz kyun ho?

Priya: Hmph. *walks faster.*

Pratigya: Priya!

Priya: *sighing and turning around* Pratigya...im your best friend, seriously I am only saying this out of concern, three years Pratz...three years. Three years you along with every other girl at this school has been dying over him, and he, he just cares to get around. He is just going to end up breaking your heart. And if you have worn red today for him...then...I don't know what else to say.

Pratigya: Priya! If I get hurt...tho woh meri galti ho gi. Please don't worry.

Priya: *rolling her eyes* whatever, lunch pe milta hain, aab meri class hai.

*Priya walks away.*

Pratz: tum dekhna priya, woh itna bura nahin hai.

CHANGE TO SCHOOL YARD

*Arushi is hiding behind a tree looking out at the large school yard, Aman comes up behind her.*

Aman: Arushi!

Arushi: AH! *looks at Aman* TUM?!

Aman: *shying away* haan main

Arushi: Listen Aman-

*Aman comes closer, Arushi pushes him away.*

Arushi: Aman maina yeh colour kaun sa pehna hai?

Aman: white.

Arushi: Acha, good you can see, aur iska matlab hai-

Aman: Iska matlab hai ka tum itni pavitaar ho, without stain, koi aur colour tume suit bi kaisa kar sakta hai?

Arushi: *confused* what?!...oh forget it. Listen this means I am single and'NOT'NOT INTERESTED!

Aman: Okay. Then we will get you interested.

Arushi: Oh God'Aman woh dekho'free ice cream!

*Aman turns around and Arushi slips away.*

Arushi: duffer kahin ka'thank God his love affair for food is bigger than his love for me.

CAFETERIA AT LUNCH

*Pratigya and Priya walk in, where there is the usual rush, kids throwing things at each other, some reading, other chatting with each other.*

Priya: Gosh I hate rush.

Pratigya: hmmm me too.

*They both make their way to a table and sit, opening up their lunches brought from home. As they eat, a ball hits Pratigya's head. Priya's mouth opens wide.*

Roshan: Hey pass the ball please!

*Pratigya turns around to see Roshan and his friends standing near the cafe door, she smiles and gets lost in thought again.*

Priya: *gets angry, takes the ball and throws it at them.*

*Pratigya snaps back to reality.*

Priya: idiot'is lunch area ko jungle bana diya.

Pratigya: *still lost in thought, gives a half smile and goes back to eating.*

*Just then Roshan marches up to their table and Pratigya notices his hand and looks up in shock. Priya looks alert and stands up.*

Roshan: Hi.

Priya: Hi!

Roshan: Tumhe nahin, isa ka raha tha.

*Pratigya opens her mouth to speak and then closes it again.*

Roshan: Tumhara naam kya hai? Sorry I don't think we have met before.

Priya: *getting annoyed* Chalo Pratigya-

Roshan: *Looks at Priya* Waisa maina tumse poocha nahin but thanks. Hi Pratigya, I am so sorry the ball hit your head.

Pratz: nahin, sorry kis bath ki...aap na jaan booj ka tho nahin kiya.

Roshan: *smirks* acha.

*Pratigya then stands up but is unable to meet his eye.*

Roshan: Odd...how could I have missed such a pretty face.

*Priya rolls her eyes and Pratigya shifts her gaze to the floor.*

Arjun: Roshan, woh dekho Alisha!

*The three boys turn their gaze and everyone minus Roshan walks away.*

Roshan: *Turning back to Pratz* agar kabhi bi you want to have a good time, tho call me. *winks*

*Priya is shocked by this behavior and opens her mouth to say something but Roshan walks away.*

Pratigya: Priya! Dekha-

*Priya puts up her hand.*

Priya: Nothing good will come of this *walks away.*

Pratigya: *smiles.*

END SORRY GUYS ITS SHORT AM A BIT TIRED. JUST KEEP READING AND I WILL MAKE SURE IT GETS INTERESTING. It's a bit slow, but I want character development. J Thanks for reading.


Edited by CanadianAddict - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
great part!! loved it =)
yes, like ania has mentioned, do try to write in the word :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Wow interesting storyline.
Liked how you introduced every character. I was thinking Pratz is getting all dreamy for Krishna par it turned out to be someone else 😆
Krishna? Where is he? 😲

But yeah amazing FF so far, do continue when ever you get time
--Asthu.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Such A Nice Chapter =)
Worth Reading!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Thanks guys =). will def update today.

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