beyond love... chap 50 pg 85 *last chap*

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

It was a nice chp.I wonder if Krishna will keep his promise up.I feel sorry for Pratigya.Looking forward to the next chp.😊

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rosh-star

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

thnx alot shruthi for commenting n i feel bad 4 her 2! even though shes my character! da next chap will reveal ure answer 2 dat!!

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rosh-star

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

no comments?? guys, did u not like it??

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Sarun_wahifan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

very nice chapter 👍🏼 u described pratigya's emotions so very well........ can't wait for the next chapter but more than that i m waiting to see when & how u'll start their love - story ( i mean from prat's side too)

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Sadie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Wow! amazing chapter! thank you soo much for updating! =)

update soon :)

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rosh-star

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

thnx SadieLuvs_Suku & kriya_fan!!! guyz i really put in alot of effort into every part (trust me its not easy finding the time nd energy at the dormz!) & i would really like 2 see more comments and suggestions from your side so i could improve and it makes it all worth it if u guyz like it!! its kinda disappointing 4 me wen u guys dont gimme a feedback, i feel like no1z reading it hence no point uploading it, rite?? so plz help me out here!!

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Sadie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: rani54321

thnx SadieLuvs_Suku & kriya_fan!!! guyz i really put in alot of effort into every part (trust me its not easy finding the time nd energy at the dormz!) & i would really like 2 see more comments and suggestions from your side so i could improve and it makes it all worth it if u guyz like it!! its kinda disappointing 4 me wen u guys dont gimme a feedback, i feel like no1z reading it hence no point uploading it, rite?? so plz help me out here!!

Awhhh! Yeah I Knw What You're Trying To Say But..I Cant give a feedback properly cz for me u dont need to change anything!😃 okay all i can say is please use less of slang , i mean i can understant it properly but sometimes people who want to read your FF get confused with the words as they are in slang..u knw wht i mean..like im not saying write your whole FF in slang but like try keeping it as simple as possible for the reader who cnt exactly understand slang 😳 hope i make sense..please dont take it in a rude way i LOVE your FF!!😃

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rosh-star

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

aawee!! thnx!! don't worry i will write it in simple standard english from now onwards!! you made my day, my first reader to actually give me a suggestion without me asking!! yay!! i am a very happy kind of a person so don't worry, it takes alot for me to get mad or offended so we are cool!! and by the way, thanks again for liking my ff!! -😊

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Sadie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: rani54321
aawee!! thnx!! don't worry i will write it in simple standard english from now onwards!! you made my day, my first reader to actually give me a suggestion without me asking!! yay!! i am a very happy kind of a person so don't worry, it takes alot for me to get mad or offended so we are cool!! and by the way, thanks again for liking my ff!! -😊

😳awhhhh! dont worry im not those baddies😆 im a good girl 😳 and yeah i just love you FF! i be thinkng about it everytym i remember kriya😆 update soon 😳