my 2nd Fan Fiction---junoon(updated ch 28) - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
omh, superb superb!
pls update soon sis 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome cant wait 4 the next installment
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW!!!This chp was awesome Kaash!!!Just loved it 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG that just awesome
loved it.... i realy appreciate your hard work
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved this chapter kaash ! specially the part where they reunite.... thanx so much........... waiting eagerly for next chapter...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG....loveliii part..buh yaar..wat is this..cliff hanger....hehehe...i soo wanna read the next part..plzz update very very sooonnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
chapter----26
krishna?????
she paused for a moment and then almost pushed herself at him and clinched him tightly,almost suffocating him...it was so unbelievable for her to believe that krishna was in frnt of her eyes that she wanted to hold him so tightly so that he cud nt escape like the previous time. she thot that evn if it was her dream,she wud prefer to be asleep the whole of her remaining life.....
her cheeks flooded with tears as she cud nt stop sobbing. krishna did nt know how to make her stop,how to console her,she almost behaved like a kid.he tried to relese himself frm her tight embrace bt cudnt.....
pratigya----krishna whispered-----pratigya kya tum hamari jaan logi aab? ye saza kuch zyaada to nhi ho jayega?
his wrds made her suddenly realise wat she was doing,she loosened her grip quickly and moved away,wiping her tears,looking embarrassed. krishna moved his neck backwards and forwards. then he smiled------bapre,tum to jaan lene par tuli ho yar.....itna kaske gala dabane ki wajah?
pratigya kept quiet and clasped her knees against her chest. she was looking down at her toes.
krishna moved closer to her and said-----ka hua? kya hamare gam mein gungi ho gayi ho ka?
he was trying to lighten the heavy atmosphere bt pratigya seemed nt interested.. she cntinued looking away frm him. krishna cud easilky guess that she was terribly angry with him. although she hugged him bt that was her frst reaction wich she didb unconsciously and now he had to face her conscious temper.....he smiled-----chalo gala dabane ke bahane hi sahi,haath to lagayi tumne,warna kya pata sidha goli hi kar deti humko......kyu?
pratigya rocked back and forth in anger,she had decided to avoid him totally,as she was totally annoyed with him...as well as with herself.....
krishna moved closer and placed his hand on her knee,she shoved it away,unable to resist himself anymore,he clutched her wrists tightly and pulled her towards him gently. pratigya cud nt refrain herself and felt herself being pulled into his warm embrace wich she had been longing for so many days....se closed her eyes and filled her lungs with his drugging scent....
krishna ran his fingers into her long tangled hair,she started to breathe heavily,as if her emotions wanted to be shot out once more bt she checked her tears........
krishna whispered into her ears-----pratigya hume maaf kar do.....humna tumhe bht dukh pahuchayi hain...plzzzzz hume maaf kar do...hum aaj bhi tumse bht bht bht pyaar karte hain.......
pratigya cud nt reply,although her lips trembled,bt only few silent sobs came out...she thot------agar ye sapna hain to sach kya hain,aur agar ye sach hain to sapna kise kehte hain?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow!!!!! Amazing!! Was Smiling While Reading It =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
god!! amazing chap!! a chapter that took my heart!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
the chapter is nt yet cmplete...i will edit and update tomorrow😊

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