my 2nd Fan Fiction---junoon(updated ch 28) - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
realy nice chapter
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i hope krish comes back 4 her
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaasshh

noone else commented?๐Ÿ˜•


don't worry about that.u just continue and comments will keep flowing in ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG, pratigya is pregnant. where is krishna when she needs him. he isnt picking up his phone, hope he is alright.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow pratigya is pregnant. congo krishna is going to be a father(babuji)๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

hey continue writing we all are loving it. c'mon dont worry about the comments." karam karte jaao fal ki ichcha mat karo"๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

u know what there are lots of silent readers also they just read and enjoy they dont post their comments. u are doing a fabulous job.so dont worry keep writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continu sooooo๐Ÿ˜ญ
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i'm dying to read your FF
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you r such a fantastic writer
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Posted: 15 years ago
plz update soon dear...i cant wait to read more.......:P
awsome ff by the way
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing chp dear!! update soon i am waiting for it eagerly!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey! well i have been asilent reader of your both the fanfics for a while and damn you are a very good writer. hope you continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

chapter-----24

aab kaha hain tumhara woh pati pratigya?----said pari in a mocking manner..

pratigya felt deeply hurt at her wrds. she knew that she was alone at a time wen she needed the most care,bt pari's wrds made her realise the hard truth again. she kept quiet. she cud nt think of any reply..

pari---aab hain kahan woh naam ka pati jisne timhe hum sab se dur le gaya tha ye kehkar ki woh tumhe sari zindagi bhar khush rakhega? kaha hain woh?

pratigya---pari plz bas karo..........

pari cntinued to argue----kyun bas karu main? kyun? mujhse tumhari ye halat dekhi nhi ja rahi hain to kyun bas karu main?

pratigya's voice trembled a little---pari plzzz.......woh hamara pati hain aur ye baat uske liye humse zyaada maine rakhta hain jante hain hum......

pari----kuch nhi janti tum...woh ek khudgarz insaan hain...use tumhari zaroorat thi aur aab usne tumhe chod diya hain kyunki tumhari zaroorat uske liye khatam ho gayi hain....mujhe lagta hain ki tumhe use bhul jana chahiye aur dusri shaadi kar leni chahiye.....

a chilling sensation ran down pratigya's spine at her wrds.....-----dusri shaadi----she thot-----kabhi nhi...aur kaise?

pratigya----tum pagal ho gayi ho kya? hum maa banne wale hain pari....is halat mein......tum aisi baatein kaise kar sakti ho? tum hamari dost ho pari.....

pari put her hands on her shoulders and made her sit down on the chair.then she knelt down before her and tried to make her understand wat she meant-----dekho pratigya....main tumhari dost hun aur isiliye ye baat tumse keh rahi hun..main janti hun ki ye saahi waqt nhi hain ye sari baaton ke liye par pratigya kahin aur der na ho jaye isiliye maine socha ki tumhe abhi bata du.....pratigya ye baat tum bhi acchi tarah se samajh gayi ho ki krishna ne tumhe istamal kiya hain aur aab tumhari zaroorat purio ho chuki hain uske liye...tum aab uske liye koi maine nhi rakhti....isiliye woh tumhe chodkar chala gaya hain...pratigya main tumhari dost hu isiliye tumhe istarah uske liye sari zindagi intezaar karte hue nhi dekh sakti....tum us insaan ke liye intezaar kar rahi ho jo khud apne lautne ke sare darwaze band karke chala gaya hain.....kya karogi uski yaadon ka tum...aur KYA KAROGI USKI IS NISHANI KA......???? huh????

is bacche ko janam mat do pratigya ye tumhare aur musibat ki wajah ban jayega....mere saath chalo..meri ek dost hain usse kehkar tumahri abortion.......

pratigya got up suddenly,pushing pari's hands away. it was the last thing that she cud tolerate... pari tried to console her bt she shoved her away... pari was shocked to see her reaction..

pratigya----pagal ho gayi ho tum....bhale hi krishna ne hume dhoka diya ho,bhale hi usne hume chod diya ho...par na woh aur nahi hum is baat se inkaar kar sakte hain ki woh hamara pati hain aur hamare baache ka baap bhi...aur hum ye yakeen ke saath keh sakte hain ki woh apna vaada nibhayega...woh lautkar zaroor ayega......hamare paas....chahe tumhe ye baat pasand ho ya na ho par hum uska intezaar karenge...agr sari zindagi hume intezaar mein guzarni pade to yehi sahi....lekin hum KRISHNA KE SIVA KISI AUR KE BARE MEIN SOCH BHI NHI SAKTE.............

pari gazed at her for a long time..it was unbelievable for her to believe that the grl standing in frnt of her was the pratigya she knew...the pratigya whu had nvr been so confident abt herself,whu had nvr been so serious,so mature and so committed.....

she was a childish type of grl whu was casual abt evrythng in the world and nothing did evr touch her heart..... pari cud nt link this new grl with her pratigya,the pratigya she knew... she sighed and concluded-----pratigya is no longer OUR pratigya...she is only and only KRISHNA'S pratigya........

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he played with the pistol in his hand carelessly...his mind was drifting away.....he cudnt decide wat to do...to return or not..... though his work was unfinished bt he was in no mood to finish it....

he thot----kya hoga ye sab karke...firse kisika khun bahana...firse koi vaada todna....kabtak karenge hum ye sab....aur kyun? aab to hume sabkuch mil chuka hain...woh pyaar jiski hume hamesha se talaash thi...woh ek chota sa parivaar...to fir kyun kar rahe hain hum ye sab...aur kabtak apni nafrat ki aag mein hum jalte rahenge aur dusron ko jalate rahenge? hum ye sab kuch chod denge.....aur nhi humse ye sab...pratigya khush nhi hain...koi khush kaise reh sakta hain ek khuni ke saath.....pratigya ke saath humne thk nhi kiya....hume kabhi bhi use apni zindagi ke saath uljhana nhi chahiye tha.....woh khush rehti apni khud ki zindagi mein.....humne thk nhi kiya hain uske saath.......

he felt like hating himself for wat he had done with her.....he banged on the wall with his fist....he intended to burst out at himself bt cntrolled his emotions. he didnt want the others to take a note of his frustration.....

krishna was in a strange sort of dilemma... his heart longed for pratigya..to see her again,to pull her into his warm embrace and wash away her tears with his smothering kisses....he wished to feel her enchanting presence,the warmth of her breath all over again...

these few days he had been frustrated like hell. he behaved badly with evrybody and had almost put himself into a big combat with Irshaan,mathur bhai's son...

wenevr he used to think abt pratigya his heart cried like hell and he almost felt like his heart was bleeding.. only he had become so stone-hearted in these long years of his life that however pain he felt he cud nvr cry,all his tears hd dried up...

pratigya's thots gave him so much pain that he wished with all his mind,he wished to shed some tears to wash away his intolerable grief bt was unable to do so,he twisted his face,hurt himself with his knife bt in vain....nt a single tear came out of his beautiful black eyes....

many a times he thot to give her a call,just to know that whether she was okay or nt,bt the next moment he restrained himself thinking----shayad woh apni parivaar ke saath bht khush hain.....kyu firse hum uske khushiyon mein aag laga de? usse accha to yehi hoga ki hum saari zindagi uski nafrat ka zeher pilate rahe apne aap ko...........aab ye humse nhi hoga.....hum dubara use ye dukh nhi de payenge......kyunki uski nafrat ke saath to hum jee lenge par uski aansuo ke saath nhi......

krishna's behavior had made his fellow mates quite worried...he had no enthusiasm in the mission and they at last decoded to inform it to mathur bhai. only he cud make krishna understand as the latter loved him vry much...

mathur bhai listened to the whole thng,wich was related by his own son and at once guessed the cause of krishna's changed attitude. he knew evrythng. he decided to find pratigya and take her back to krishna by hook or by croock........

Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Kaash!!Nice chp.keep up the good work.looking forward to the next one. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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