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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dkmystery


I had read that post... u should not have answered him yar! this is why I didn't, if you keep answering the person, he will answer u back n it will go on. he will just enjoy it all, don't let him!
once he notices tht u r not giving him bhao, he will go for some1 else or just shut up! 😊



Yes..you are right..next time I will keep that in my mind.😊



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yakkudimag



Yes..you are right..next time I will keep that in my mind.😊




gud girl 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
I am sorry Ananya that u have to go through such nasty comments...😲😲😲
I think u know that I am BOTH Pratigya & Krishna fan 😃....Even though I DONT HATE Krishna and I dont really like to think of his love for Pratigya as lust and so far, Krishna or ny other member's explanation hasnt given me ny reason to think that its not love but lust; I still feel disappointed in him now and then 😔 and I DONT think watever he does is ABSOLUTELY RIGHT ...I mean, some of his actions can be called childish, innocent, pure and refreshing - for me as a viewer 😛 but they r just naive, insults, forceful and completely wrong - for Pratigya who has to suffer it first-hand - no excuse of being illiterate or uncivilised can justify it and make it completely right 😒!!! SO, I completely understand u disliking/hating Krishna soo much and even puting ur swearings into words for him..... Just so u know, I went as far as calling him idiot, stupid, foolish, naive jerk. mmm... I called him a goon too but HE IS ONE so dont see how ny1 can take offense in that (some still do 😆), mmm... I think I used a bad swearing when he compared women with paan, dont really remember it now BUT point is, I never put ny of my swearings to word before this comment...SO, I really dont understand how can someone use k-words (in hindi) and sometimes worse for Pratigya and defend Krishna - say he is ABSOLUTELY RIGHT and can bash u for wat u think of Krishna which I find is seriously realistic...Did u notice, we dont even start to point out Krishna's mistakes and some start to open topics saying to calm down, tis just a serial and etc.... when there is not many who say nything when Pratigya is being hated or called k-words in hindi!!! I guess, just like Krishna in denial, the Krishna-lubers had followed suit and are being in complete denial 🤣...Yea, Krishna can be excused for being illiterate and uncivilized but I wonder wat excuse would they use for themselves for being in denial - oh! may be this one - its just a serial for entertainment and dont get all serious etc....🤣 Nd whoever called u Rakhi Sawant, I bet he/she is VERY MUCH MORE SIMILAR to (may be a twin of) Rakhi than u can ever be 😆😆😆 ... Coz, wat one thinks of others is usually an indicator of wat kind of person he/she himself/herself IS... 😉
PS: ALL my words were my thoughts and also an attempt to cheer up Ananya who was bashed with nasty words just coz of her realistic serious opinion...So, other members, PLZ dont take it as an offense or insult or bashing 😳...Thanx for reading 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: limits

I am sorry Ananya that u have to go through such nasty comments...😲😲😲

I think u know that I am BOTH Pratigya & Krishna fan 😃....Even though I DONT HATE Krishna and I dont really like to think of his love for Pratigya as lust and so far, Krishna or ny other member's explanation hasnt given me ny reason to think that its not love but lust; I still feel disappointed in him now and then 😔 and I DONT think watever he does is ABSOLUTELY RIGHT ...I mean, some of his actions can be called childish, innocent, pure and refreshing - for me as a viewer 😛 but they r just naive, insults, forceful and completely wrong - for Pratigya who has to suffer it first-hand - no excuse of being illiterate or uncivilised can justify it and make it completely right 😒!!! SO, I completely understand u disliking/hating Krishna soo much and even puting ur swearings into words for him..... Just so u know, I went as far as calling him idiot, stupid, foolish, naive jerk. mmm... I called him a goon too but HE IS ONE so dont see how ny1 can take offense in that (some still do 😆), mmm... I think I used a bad swearing when he compared women with paan, dont really remember it now BUT point is, I never put ny of my swearings to word before this comment...SO, I really dont understand how can someone use k-words (in hindi) and sometimes worse for Pratigya and defend Krishna - say he is ABSOLUTELY RIGHT and can bash u for wat u think of Krishna which I find is seriously realistic...Did u notice, we dont even start to point out Krishna's mistakes and some start to open topics saying to calm down, tis just a serial and etc.... when there is not many who say nything when Pratigya is being hated or called k-words in hindi!!! I guess, just like Krishna in denial, the Krishna-lubers had followed suit and are being in complete denial 🤣...Yea, Krishna can be excused for being illiterate and uncivilized but I wonder wat excuse would they use for themselves for being in denial - oh! may be this one - its just a serial for entertainment and dont get all serious etc....🤣 Nd whoever called u Rakhi Sawant, I bet he/she is VERY MUCH MORE SIMILAR to (may be a twin of) Rakhi than u can ever be 😆😆😆 ... Coz, wat one thinks of others is usually an indicator of wat kind of person he/she himself/herself IS... 😉
PS: ALL my words were my thoughts and also an attempt to cheer up Ananya who was bashed with nasty words just coz of her realistic serious opinion...So, other members, PLZ dont take it as an offense or insult or bashing 😳...Thanx for reading 😃


exactly exactly! I've also seen this, some members so easily say that Prats is a k***, where are the moderators yar! 😲
n it is the girls who write this!!! how can u not understand the plight of a girl who was teased n she was indirectly forced by Krishna into the marriage...
just try n write something against Krishna, only a bit, n every1 will jump on you!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dkmystery


exactly exactly! I've also seen this, some members so easily say that Prats is a k***, where are the moderators yar! 😲
n it is the girls who write this!!! how can u not understand the plight of a girl who was teased n she was indirectly forced by Krishna into the marriage...
just try n write something against Krishna, only a bit, n every1 will jump on you!



As per my assumption who bash me..those people find great pleasure in these kind of fantasy..I guess they are too far from the reality..



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ananya...............plz update today!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Ananya...............plz update today!! 😊



I was busy..sorry..will update tomorrow.



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yakkudimag



<font color="#cc0000" size="2">I was busy..sorry..will update tomorrow. </font>




Ok! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago



Part 17


Kesar was pacing restlessly in her bedroom.It's 2 am in the morning and Shakti still not in the house.Since her marriage Kesar didn't get a single day of peace of mind. Her dark complexion is the main enemy of the relation of her with Shakti.She always thought about her fault.It's not that her parents imposed her on Shakti.It was an arranged marriage which took place amicably between the two families. But Shakti always gives the impression that Kesar is the main culprit when he knows very well that his father Thakur Sajjan Singh emphesized on this alliance due to Kesar's high family background.


Krishna was loiterring on the terrace when he saw that the lights were still on in Shakti's room..it means Shakti Bhaiya still hasn't returned..Bhauji has really a very bad luck..can't help..she is not beautiful..not even has fair complexion.It is her fate that her husband will not give her a second look and will spend his nights with some other woman.

Krishna went to the kitchen to get a bottle of water..he was coming out when he saw Kesar coming to the kitchen..

"Kaa baat hai Bhauji?Bhaiya toh aaj raat nahi aayenge..aap kaahe apni neend kharab karti ho?Jaao jaa kar so jaao.."..Krishna advised his sister-in-law.

"Aise kaise so jaaye Bhaiyajee..woh jab tak naa aaye..chain se so paayenge ka hum?"..Kesar answered in a melancholic tone..

"Aap ko ka pata naahi..k kahan gaye hain Sakti Bhai?Sab kuchh jaanti ho..fir kaahe apna dimag kharab karti ho..kaai k sui jaao.."..Krishna advised again..

"Baba...tu hian kaa kar raha hai?Sakti Bau..Sakti waapis naa aaya ab tak?" ..Thakurain was there..

"Hum wahi samjha rahe the Bhauji ko Amma..k Bhai aaj aane se se rahe..Bhauji kaahe apna neend kharab kare?Tab se bol rahe hain jaa k so jaaye..par sunti naahi.."..Krishna said..


"Ee ka bhi naseebva kharab hai..bhagwan ne thoda rang roop dia hota toh iski kismat naahi na foot jaati is tarha?Kaa be Kariyai,bachpan se thoda haldi chandan ghees kar zara apna rang saaf nahi kar paai tu?"..Thakurain questioned Kesar..

Kesar didn't answer but started to shed tears silently..

"Ee hi lia toh bol rahe hain Amma..humri saadi Partigyajee se karvai do..rang bhi gora hai oka..aur chehra bhi achha hai..hum baahar jaayenge hi nahi.."..Krishna said with excitement.

"Tumhara fir se suru ho gaya na?Babujee ka jutta khaaye usdin..bhool gaye na sab..Partigyajee..Partigyajee..ab tak isque ka bhoot nahi utra..aur saadi karne ka itna saukh chadha hai toh Thakuron me ladkion ki kumee nahi..sundar ladki dhundh leo..Thakuron me se..saadi karai denge..par uu Kayasth ki ladki ka khayal dil se nikaal deo...ghar me kaahe asaanti failate ho Baba..?"..Thakurain shouted..


Suddenly Shakti entered in the house..fully drunk and disbalanced..singing some Hindi song..his expression clearly implied that he had lots of fun..

"Aai gaye..kahan se padhaar rahe hain Maharaj?Tumhre Baojee ko pata laga..toh maar maar k hoolia bigad denge tumhra.."..Thakurain said..

"Itni raat ko ka panchayat laga hai hian par?"..Shakti asked in a frustrated tone.. "Soye nahi aap log?Kaa baat hai?Ee Kariya ka humri sikayat kar di?K hum ghar naahi aaye ab tak..kaa hua Amma?"

"Kuchh nahi Sakti Bhai..Bhauji paresaan thi..neeche aai..dekha hum bhi aaye hain,paani lene..aur kachhu naahi..aap bahut der laga die?"..Krishna said..

"To aur kaa kare be?Eee Maa Kali ka dhyaan kare ghar ma baith kar? Sasoor.. jindagi narak hui gayi humri..chal tu kamre ma..abhi batate hain toka..saali so kaahe nahi gayi?Nautanki laga rakhi hai..chal tu humre saath.."..Shakti dragged Kesar by her elbow and went to his room...

Thakurain and Krishna was so sure that Kesar would be beaten by Shakti..but just the opposite of their expectation..they heard a scream of Shakti...they ran to his room and saw Kesar was fallen on the floor..her forehead got blue and Shakti
was also on the floor..actually he was too drunk to walk steadily..he slipped and his head got a hit of the corner of the bed..it was a deep cut and his right leg was fractured..


"Bhaiyajee..inko uthaiye..aur jaldi se Doctor ko laaiye.."..Kesar screamed..


Due to this chaos..Komal and Sajjan also woke up from their sleep..they saw the mess..and Sajjan got angry to the highest.."Kaa narak macha k rakha hai be?Kaa hai ee sab..sala jab itna sarab hajam nahi hota..toh kaahe peete ho be?Dharti k bojh ho tum..eee..Kisna..Doctor ko laa..jaldi jaa..bhaagbo..dui dui bete..par kisise bhi jara si saanti nahi milti..behoode.."..Sajjan said angrily.

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Doctor examined Shakti..prescribed some medicines ,bandaged his legs..and said "Ek maheena aap ghar pe hi rahe..aram kare..".


"Baojee..itna sara kaam hai..ek maheena..ghar pe kaise rahenge hum?"..Shakti said..

"Kaa Babua..tumka kaam ki chinta hai yaa kothe ki?Sab pata hai..behoode nahi toh..sara kaam Baba dekh lega.."..Sajjan said.

"Baojee..hum?..Kaahe?"..Krishna said in a shocked tone..

"Ab tum bhi karo nautanki..abe besaram..Baap Bhai ka haath nahi batana tumko ..sasoor..tum chalbo humre saath..tumri majnugiri bhi humse choopi nahi hai.. Sakti ghar pe aram karega,tum chaloge humre saath..theke ka kaam dekhne.. ghar ..karobar ki taraf bhi dhyaan deo Beta,jaao..aaj chain se so leo..kal se tumhari dhulai suru..jaabo yaar.."..Sajjan ordered..

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Next day..Krishna was seated on a chair..employees were working ..sand was being taken from the river bank..filled up in the sacks..and loaded on the truck... Krishna was seated in a sad face..the sunlight became bright to brighter..Krishna was thinking about Pratigya,now she is entering in the university..attending classes ....his chain of thought was broken when he saw DCP Shinde in front of him.. Krishna stood up..

"So..Mr. Singh..we meet again.."..Shinde said..

"Aap hian?Kaa baat hai?"..Krishna asked..

"Routine check up..yehan itne log aate hain har roz..unki security..yehan aap kyaa kar rahe hain?"..Shinde questioned..

"Theke ka kaam dekhne aaye hain..baloo ka theka..sarkari kaam hai..humre Bade Bhai dekhte hain ee sara kaam..uu jara bimar hain..toh hum aaye hain dekhne.. kyun?Nahi aa sakte ka?"..Krishna questioned back..

"Nahi nahi..aisa toh maine kab kaha..jo log idhar kaam karte hain..unki security ka khayal rakhte hain aap log?"..Shinde said..

"Haan bilkul..kaam k waqt kauno bimaar pad jaaye..dhoop ki wajah se..hum turant bhejte hain uuko aspatal..hum khud kai baar le gaye hain..kai logon ko..kaam hi aisa hai.."..Krishna replied..

"Koi garbar yaa pareshaani hui toh humen zaroor batana..anyways..main chalta hoon..namaste.."..Shinde left that place..


Thakur Sajjan Singh was coming in his jeep when he saw the white ambassedor.. of Police...

"Ee Police hian kaa karne aai thi?"..Sajjan asked Krishna.

"Ee hain saher k naye DCP..Varun Kumar Shinde..kadak policewala hai Baojee.. Sangam par aaya tha..dekhne k..idhar koi garbar toh nahi na hai.."..Krishna answered..

"Tune sahi se baat ki ?"..Sajjan asked with a frown..

"Kaa..tum bhi humko ka samajhe ho?Hum me itni akal hai k kis se kis tarha baat karbo..bahut kadak hai ee admi..aaj kal jo sunte ho..hian isko giraftar kia..hian usko thok dia..ee sab k peechhe eehi mahapurus hai..Shinde..mujh par chhod
deo..dekh loonga.."..Krishna assured his father..

"Waah Beta..sahi jaa rahe ho..achha hai..apni jimmedari samajh leo..waise ee ko meethai veethai bhejna naahi hai ka?"..Sajjan suggested..

"Ee bhool kar bhi naa karbo..ee sasoor bahut imaandar hai..ghoos nahi khata.. ghoos dene jaayenge toh dui char laath aur ghoosa dega humko..suna hai mantri santri bhi ee se khauff khaate hain..thode din saant rehna hoga..ee bahut bada bawal karnewala hai...Sarkar ki taraf se ee ko bheja gaya hai..hian jaun locha hai..uuko saaf karne k lia.."..Krishna said..

"Jeea..chapua..tu toh bahut khabar rakhne laga hai Baba..kaam ki khabar..jeea.." ..Sajjan said cheerfully..

"Partigyajee humko suru me savdhan kie rahi..hum hi naa sune..par ee Policewale se mil kar samajh me aa gaya.."..Krishna got interrupted..

"Kaa bola be?Kaun?Kiska naam lia be?"..Sajjan asked in shocking tone..

"Partigyajee..Porfessor Saab ki Beti..uu din humka mili thi..wahi batane lagi..k savdhan rahe..saher me maahol thik na hai aaj kal.."..Krishna said .

"Uu Porfesor ki Betia toka savdhan kar rahi thi?Kaahe?"..Sajjan asked..

"Kyunki uu humse bahut pyaar karti hai Baojee.."..Krishna said as a matter of fact..

"Sasoor..fir se tumhara Partigya Jaap suru...fir se majnugiri pe utar aaye tum.. behooda.."..Sajjan said angrily..


Father-son conversation became interrupted because of the Superviser..who said, "Maalik..ee hisaab ka bahi khata hai..aap dekh leo.."..

"Abe..pagla gaye ho kaa?Bahi khata leke jaao Munsi k paas..humre paas kaahe laaye?"..Sajjan said..

"Hian laao..Hindi ma hai na sab?"..Krishna asked..

"Jee Chhote Maalik.."..said the Superviser..

"Hum dekh lenge..hisaab..jaao tum.."..Krishna released the employee..


Sajjan Singh was looking at Krishna with ultimate shock.."Kaa be..ee kaa nautanki hai..tujhe jodna ghatana aata hai ka?"

"Nahi aata..par humko ee samajh me aata hai k kaa likha hai..hum padh lenge.. aur jodna ghatana..uu kaam hum naahi karenge,uu,kaa kahte,uu..haan, calculator ..uu jo hota hai na..wahi sara kaam karega..humka toh itna dekhna hai..k sab
kuchh jodne aur ghatane k baad wahi dikhata hai ya naahi ee calculator..jaun in bahi khaate me likha hai..bas..asan kaam hai..kaahe uu Munsi ka doom pakdoge ..abse..adha kaam hum dekh lenge..hisaab kitab ka.."...Krishna declared.. "Aur.. sahi se jodna aur ghatana bhi sikh jaayenge.."


"Tune padhna kab sikha be?Iscool se toh phail hoke nikla tha..ab sab kuchh padhna kahan se sikha?"..Sajjan asked again shockingly..

"Angreji nahi aati..Hindi aati hai..achhe se padh lete hain,..padhai likhai toh thodi bahut aani chahie na Baojee..koi kal ko thug lia toh?Hum sikh lie..ab chalbo..hian toh sab dekh lie..ghar chalbo..hisaab dekhna hai..chalbo yaar.."..Krishna said..

Sajjan folded his palms and bent in front of Krishna asd said sarcastically.. "JEEEE.. PITAAJEE.."..





Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

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