FF:Mohabbat Part 22@Pg43 Krishna hit Pratigya

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I will update right now..but be careful,don't report to the moderators..😆

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Part 14

"Dekhiye Miss Thakur..aap is tarha rasta rok kar achha nahi kar rahi hain.."..Adarsh warned Komal.."Humen kaam hai..aur aapko shobha nahi deta aisi harkat karna..

"Saale tu toh ek dum lappoo jhanna hai..par usdin humare Baojee k saamne itna kyun garaj raha tha be?"..Komal shouted..

"Arre..ajeeb pagal ladki hain aap?Aur ladki hokar aisi baatein karti hain aap? Sharam nahi aati?"..Adarsh hit back..

"Sharam..woh gayi tel lene.."..Komal said as a matter of fact..

"Woh toh dikh hi raha hai..abhi humara rasta chhoriye..koi dekh lega toh aaphiko ghalat samjhega.."..Adarsh worried..

"Leo..ee toh bazar hai..sab log hi dekh rahe hain..aur tu itna kaahe sarmata hai be?"..Komal asked..

"Ajeeb zabardasti hai..humen aapse koi baat nahi karni..aap jaaiye na.."..Adarsh shouted..

"Nahi jaate..kaa kar lega be?"..Komal asked..

"Theek hai..hum hi jaate hain yehan se..sarfiri kahin ki.."..Adarsh left that shop.. angrily..

"Abe oo chikne..baat toh sun...."..Komal followed her..

"Ajeeb musibat hai..Thakuron k bachchon ka kya latest trend yehi hai..k Saxenas ko is tarha pareshan kare..ek aapka Bhai..jo meri Bahen ko sata raha hai..ek aap..seriously sharam nahi aati aapko..?" ..Adarsh fumed..he was feeling helpless
as a girl was on the opposite side,Komal,not being gentle or misbehaving with her is not at all in Adarsh's rule book..."Dekhiye..Komaljee..agar aapne fir se humara peechha kia..toh aapke Baojee ko jaa kar humen sab batana padega.."..Adarsh threatened Komal..

Komal bursted with a loud laugh.."Kyaa bola?Hee hee,abe,tu admi hai k pajama? Chal..mere Bhai ne teri Bahen par aashiki jhaari ..tune Baojee se shikayat kia..aur ab tu Baojee ko jaakar yeh bolega k maine..matlab maine tujhko chheda hai?Kyaa fattoo hai be tu..tujhe sharam nahi aati?k Mard hokar tu itna sharmila hai?"..Komal said..

"Exactly..yehi mera bhi sawal hai Komaljee..aapko sharam nahi aati..ladki hokar itni besharmi dikhate hue?"..Adarsh said..and walked away from the street..

Piyasia watched everything from distance,she gave the minute detail to Thakurain .."Malkin..samhal leo..baat itni si nahi hai..Betia us launde ko mauka de rahi hai.. kal ko launde ne kauno garbar ki..toh kahin muh dikhane layak nahi rahenge sab ..Komal Didi ko samjhao..aag se khel rahi hain uu..Kisna Bhaiya toh ladka hai..oke upar koi daag nahi lagega..par haan..kahin uu launde ne Komal Didi ka faaida uthaya..tab kaa karogi?"..Piyasia warned her Lady.

Thakurain became scared..what Piyasia said is absolutely correct.But Komal is too wild to be controlled.."Ek baat bata..uu ladka..Adars..usne kuchh kaha Komal se..?"..Thakurain asked..

"Naahi Malkin..uu toh jaan bacha kar bhaaga..Komal Didi ko dekh kar aise chauka jaise bhoot dekh lia usne..ee to Komal Didi hi uuki taang khinchai me lagi thi..par Malkin..Komal Didi khabsurat hai..jawan hai..uu ladka bhi jawan hai..aisa toh
naahi ..k har roj uu launda Komal Didi ko dekh kar bhaagega..kal ko agar uu launde ka mann badal gaya..tab kaa karogi?"..Piyasia asked..

"Haan...samajh gayi..tu jaa..ee ladki bhi aafat hai.."..Thakurain said with great frustration..

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Adarsh was reading,suddenly a face came in his vision..a beautiful face,with a sharp cutting,big eyes..a trace of arrogance,rudeness and over all bad manners.. bad toungue..what slangs she can use,my god!Adarsh thought about his own
sisters,all the ladies of his aquintance,never ever saw that kind of ill manners.. "Disgusting"..Adarsh cursed under his breathe..

"Bhaiya..Bhaiya..kyaa hua?Taiyyar ho jaao na..jaana nahi hai kya..movie dekhne? Aapne aur Rohli ne program banaya..humko kab se bata kar rakhe aap dono..ab kyaa hua..hum toh taiyyar hain..Rohli bhi aati hogi..aap chaliye..taiyyar ho aaiye.. Bhaiya.."..Pratigya gave him a push..

"Ohh..haan..abhi aate hain.."...Adarsh reluctantly got up..

Adarsh ,Rohli and Pratigya were waiting ,when they will enter in the hall..it was Sunday so..the cinema hall was much crowded..

Krishna and his gang were passing by the hall when Tunna said ,"Bhaiya..uu dekho..Bhabhijee.."..Krishna saw and yes..it was Pratigya.."Arre..haan be..akeli hain..kya?Nahi..humar sala bhi hai..Pratigyajee ki saheli bhi hain saath me.. cinema dekhne hi aai hongi..apne Bhai k saath.."..Krishna said..

"Kaa Bhaiya..aap bhi yehan hain..uske baad bhi Bhabhi aapke saath baith k cinema naa dekhe..ijjat khatre me hai Bhaiya...Bhabhi k paas baith kar agar aap film naa dekho toh.."..Chandu advised..

"Baat toh sahi hai Beta..chal jaa teen ticket laa..baaki unke paas kaise baithna hai..uu toh hall me ghusne k baad hum soch lenge.."..Krishna said..

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After entering in the theatre,Tunna looked at the seat beside Pratigya..luckily, Adarsh was in the middle of Pratigya and Rohli..Tunna marked the guy who was about to seat beside Pratigya.."Arre..Bhaiya..zara suno..tumko us din dekhe the..ek
baat kehni thi..hian aao.."..Tunna said that guy..

"Jee kahiye.."..the guy said..

"Uu kaa hai..jinke paas tum baithe ho..hare rang k kapdon me jaun baithi hain..uu hai humri honewali Patni..tum unke sath mat baitho..tu ee humar ticket leo..aur us seat pe baitho...humar doston k saath.."..Krishna said..

"Jee..yeh kyaa bakwas hai?"..the guy said in irritated tone..

"Beta zyada bolbachan nahi...jaisa bol rahe hain..waisa karo..varna yeh picture chhod k hum tum ko hi poster bana denge,chalo..Tunna,le ke jaao inko.." ..Krishna exchanged the ticket.."Jaao..cinema suru honewali hai..jaao be Chandu.."Krishna said..

The hall was darken after a moment,and Krishna went to his seat..and sat beside Pratigya.

"Pratigyajee.."..Pratigya heard a whisper and looked,ohh my god..Krishna... Pratigya was shocked..Adarsh was just seated next to her..no..it can't be true..film was started..Pratigya turned her head to the screen..she felt a cold shiver through
her spine..

But the film was too boring,and Adarsh cursed Rohli,"What yaar..yehi movie mili thi tumko..tum dekho..main zara sota hoon..kal saari raat padhai ki hai maine.. show khatam ho toh mujhe jagana..."..Adarsh fell asleep sitting on his seat.

"Leo..saale saab toh so gaye..chaliye achha hai..humko koi disturb nahi karega ab.."..Krishna whispered at Pratigya's ear..

Pratigya hissed,"Tum jaao yehan se..marvaoge humko..".."Arre uu launda baitha tha idhar..usko hataye hum aapke saath baithne k lia...aur aap humhi par baras rahi hain..kyaa baat hai.."..Krishna whispered again..

Pratigya sat like a statue..Krishna was running his fingers on her right arm..she felt a cool sensation..Krishna felt that..he held her palm into his fist...Krishna ran his left hand on her back..."Kyaa kar rahe ho...? Haath hatao.."..Pratigya whispered angrily..

Naturally the hall was fully dark..everyone was seeing the movie..those who came with their lovers,they started their own movie..most of the people around Krishna and Pratigya were lovers..they took the full advantage of the darkness..they started touching each other,they were kissing each other.."Ohh shit.."..Pratigya said..

"Humare aas paas k logon ne apna hi cinema suru kar rakha hai..Pratigyajee.." ..Krishna smirked..

"Shut up.."..Pratigya hissed..

"Kaa sut up..aapko achha nahi lagta k log ek doosre ko pyaar kare..aap bhi na.." ..Krishna said..

"Tum haath hatao..humare peeth se haath hatao..."..Pratigya whispered angrily..

"Lijiye..hata die haath..ab khush?"..Krishna removed his left hand from her back..

"Pratigya..arre Adarshjee toh so gaye.."..Rohli said.."Pratigya dekh na..yeh film dekhne aaye hain yaa sone aaye hain.."

Pratigya looked at his brother ,her right hand was captured by Krishna."Aisi movie dekh kar kisiko bhi neend aayengi...chalna..yehan se.."..Pratigya said..

"Arre kyaa tu bhi..itni achhi movie hai..ticket k lia itne paise die..aur bina dekhe hi chale jaaye..chal tu film dekh.."..Rohli said..

"Sahi bol rahi hain aapki saheli..itni achhi film chhor kar aap kyun jaana chaahti hain.."..Krishna said indicating a different meaning..Pratigya remained like a staute..Krishna was passing his finger through her right arm again....

Krishna got carried away by this reaction,he nuzzled her neck..while running his fingers on her skin ..and then he saw that she was sheding tears silently..Krishna left her at once.

Krishna felt angry on himself,he went too far with Pratigya..such cheapness,in a cinema hall..Pratigya glared at him angrily..Krishna held her hand and said ,"Maaf kar dijiye..hum zara bahek gaye the..aas paas jo chal raha hai wohi dekh kar.. sorry..aram se baithiye..hum aapko thungh nahi karenge.."..

Pratigya turned her head with great disgust.."Maafi maang lie na hum..aage se aisa nahi karenge..hum bhi insaan hain..yeh cinema hall me Laila Majnu k karname dekh kar..aapko dukh dene ka kauno irada nahi tha..Pratigyajee..dekhiye na humari taraf.."..Krishna whispered slowly..

Pratigya simply refused to look at him.."Aap naraj hain...humne harkat hi aisi ki hain..sorry bole na..aapki marji k khilaaf kuchh nahi karenge Pratigyajee..yakeen maaniye..Pratigyajee.."..Krishna said..

He kept saying sorry to her without even realising that the show was over..lights were on..and Adarsh was awaken...Adarsh looked at them..Krishna was holding Pratigya's hand..

"Yeh kyaa ho raha hai?"..Adarsh shouted..

Krishna left her hand and stoop up and said ,"Jo hona tha woh toh ho gaya Saale Saab..chalte hain..Pratigyajee ka khayal rakhiyega.."..Krishna left that place.

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"Kaa hua Bhaiya..cinema dekh kar maja aaya?Kaa boli Bhabhi?"..Tunna asked excitedly..

"Ab hum tumko bataye..k tumri Bhabhi aur humre beech kaa kaa hua? Saale.. sharam nahi aati tumko?"..Krishna shouted.."Jyada bolo mat..chup chaap khana khaao.."..

"Pratigya..yeh kyaa hai?"..Adarsh asked angrily...

"Bhaiya..andhere agar koi humare paas aakar baith jaaye..toh hum kyaa kar sakte hain..?Bataiye..usne haath pakda tha..chillate toh logon k saamne kya izzat reh jaati humari?Hum toh shuru se hi mana kar rahe the..k humko film nahi dekhni.. pata nahi kahan se woh aaya...hum jahan jahan jaate hain...humara peechha karta hai..bataiye..isme hum kyaa kar sakte hain?"..Pratigya said in frustration..

"Arre..toh tum kya ghar se nikal hi bandh kar dogi?Uske darr se?"..Rohli said..

"Tum chup raho..hum kis mushkil se guzar rahe hain..hum hi jaante hain..mana kie the..k nahi aana..par nahi..aaplogon ko kuchh sunna hi nahi tha.."..Pratigya shouted..."Aur haan..ghar jaakar Papa se yeh sab kahne ki zaroorat nahi..ek aur
pareshani jood jaayegi..unke list me..waise bhi kya kum pareshaan hain woh?"..

"Bhaiya..ee magajine dekho..Chandu laaya hai.."..Tunna gave to Krishna..it was a Debonair edition..

Krishna started to hit with that magazine both them.."Arre..Bhaiya..kaa kar rahe hain..aapko achha lagega yehi soch kar hum laaye.." Chandu said..

"Saale..gandegi bhara hua hai tum dono k dimag me..aainda aisa kie na..toh bata rahe hain..aankhe nikaal lenge.."..Krishna shouted..

But Krishna couldn't stop himself at night..when he began to fantacise about Pratigya.He might have said sorry to her,but he did with her,felt very good..he is not a womaniser but he is not a saint too,the darkness,the ambiance,the happenings around them,pushed him,provoked him to carry on..what he did,was the spontenaous action ,an out come of his feelings for her..she also provoked her,she had shown her care towards him,her worry her anxiety,Krishna is not totally wrong.

Now Krishna wants to kiss her..but he doesn't want to force her..he never wanted that.But yes,the most dignified way to get her is marriage.He wants to marry her of course.He wants to kiss her at their first night senselessly untill she begs to stop,he wants to touch her with full authority and right.He doesn't want to make his love a cheap thing which pushes him to do nasty things in a cinema hall..He is ashamed of himself as it caused her to cry..obviously a girl like her would never want to do such cheap acts in a public place.

But who will convince his father?Rather both the familes must be agreed..most important..who will inject some sense in the brain of that stubborn girl Pratigya? Why can't she just accept and admit that she is also in love with him?Krishna
couldn't find any proper answer..suddenly he recalled about Manorama..she also threatened Nitin to commit suicide..yes..that is the only way now..it will surely work..

Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

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AqUaMaRiN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#154

Alrite, was waiting for it soo impatiently, read the first few lines, hilarious, and I just know its gonna be another fabulous part but prob. is its almost 5 am in the morning here and I got to sleep for a while before its time to wake up again.😛 and i dont want to rush the reading.So, I will comment again after I take my time to read through it later. Thanx for the long update. Keep it up👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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mina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#155

it was lovely 👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
realy sweet part love it 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
please update sooon thanxxxxxxx alot😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

Good that Krishna atleast respects her feelings and knows when to limit his urges.What more can I say 😕

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: mimmsjaan
it was lovely 👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
realy sweet part love it 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
please update sooon thanxxxxxxx alot😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Thanks for the comment..now a days my net connection is giving me major headache..so I can't help it..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: shruthiR
Good that Krishna atleast respects her feelings and knows when to limit his urges.What more can I say 😕

Don't get so upset..I have edited this part..nothing embarrasing is there..feel free to comment..

Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: yakkudimag

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I didn't expect Krishna to get this close and intense but atleast he did realize his mistake.I thought Pratigya wuld slap him or atleast yell at him but instead she was crying.don't tell me she has developed a soft corner or started liking him.and among the last 3 paras it was written tht she was the one who provoked him to kinda get close to her.Matlab???

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: shruthiR

I didn't expect Krishna to get this close and intense but atleast he did realize his mistake.I thought Pratigya wuld slap him or atleast yell at him but instead she was crying.don't tell me she has developed a soft corner or started liking him.and among the last 3 paras it was written tht she was the one who provoked him to kinda get close to her.Matlab???

Pratigya provided the provoktion..that is the thought of Krishna of course..not mine..I am not penning down my perception..I am writing Pratigya's dilemma as well as Krishna's living in a fool's paradise..

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