Fan Fiction ' You are mine ' NEW! Ch 26 pg 141

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: dkmystery

hm.. nice thought, I understand!
buy maybe, you could show that atleast not in front of Krishna but when alone, Pratigya's mom repents that she couldn't do anything for her child... just a thought 😊
I remembered DDLJ, how Farda Jalal told Kajol about her life n how she crushed her feelings n wishes...
once again, u r doing a fab job, I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter! n moderators pls make this sticky, the effort shouldn't go waste. 😊

Hm you have a point. I could atleast make her moms portrayal a bit better. Thank you for your suggestion :) I'll be sure to put a part in that showed her mom regretting her actions.

Thanks :)

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Supriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Wel agaijn a superb part yaar..love you serissly...KRISHNA MARRIED PRATIGYAA.......well that should be good newzz but in case of parts its a bad newz she married to guy whom she loves but he doesnt...all her dreams shattered...KRISHNA is very unpredictable.....he is rigid bad but yet calm n loving.......wanna to read more..btw wats ur name.....😆.sorry actually i noee i should sked u firstly but now..miine is supriyaa.........n u r afb wirterrrrrr

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423728

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: sups2222
Wel agaijn a superb part yaar..love you serissly...KRISHNA MARRIED PRATIGYAA.......well that should be good newzz but in case of parts its a bad newz she married to guy whom she loves but he doesnt...all her dreams shattered...KRISHNA is very unpredictable.....he is rigid bad but yet calm n loving.......wanna to read more..btw wats ur name.....😆.sorry actually i noee i should sked u firstly but now..miine is supriyaa.........n u r afb wirterrrrrr

haha thank youuu love. LOL yes krishna married Pratigya, unlike the show 😡 felt like going to the tv andsmashing it due to Shyaam jee saxena ! LOL yes Krishna is very unpredictable, just like the show but 😳 Wasnt it unpredicatable how he touched pratigya's feet ! 😍

LOL its okay, hello Supriyaa :) My name is samira.

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kasturika ghosh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

yar it was too gud....really i feel lik doing that to shyam ji myself.........after wat he did in kriya's wedding....buddha kahika......😡 loved both the chapters...really rocking and fantabulous👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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kasturika ghosh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

hiii samira am kash......😊😃

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423728

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: kaasshh
hiii samira am kash......😊😃

Helloo kash 😛

LOL yes i feel your pain ! Not only him but the whole family is currently getting on my nerves ! 🤢 Throughout the whole wedding ceremony they had a constipated expression on.