Fan Fiction ' You are mine ' NEW! Ch 26 pg 141 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kittens123

Wow Amazing where do you get your ideas ?

Thank you LOL, well you see i happen to LOVE reading romance books. I literally have a library in my place. And also i have a tendency of imagining situations in which i would really like to see the couple in the show be placed in.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NZ_rockx

that is simplyyyy Awsomeee...
u r too gud yaar...
plzz update soon....love ittt...n thanx for acceptin the request...n keep putting alot of romantic scenesss😳

thank yoou, no worries :) ill keep on putting alot of romantic scenes.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Miketa



Glad to know cause I was worried for you.
Friends?

lol thanks for the previous comment, am glad its no longer confusing. And thank yoou for your concern 😊. Yep friends :😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Meeet

OH MY GOODNESS. You are immensely talented. I have just read the whole ff one shot and i am hungry for more. The emotions ..... the thrill....it beyond words.....i would not be surprised that if you were the creative head of Pratigya the seriel will shoot up in their TRPs . Keep up the good work. :) Looking forward impatiently for the next post.👏👍🏼👏😃

😃 Thank you so much for appreciating the fan fic. LOL LOL if i were the creative head of this show id put in so much romance and unreal situations that people would complain that theres far too much romance in this show !
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: siinnce.09

😃 Thank you so much for appreciating the fan fic. LOL LOL if i were the creative head of this show id put in so much romance and unreal situations that people would complain that theres far too much romance in this show !


no no, no 1 would dare complain! see, you have got so many fans here... pls write the next chapter soon! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh, and yes, do take of yourself dear!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dkmystery

oh, and yes, do take of yourself dear!

thank you love :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thank you everyone for your lovely comments 😃, here is the next chapter. Hope you enjoy it xo

Chapter Eleven

Pratigya desperately attempted to maintain a straight blank expression. Alas to her despair she could not cease the frantic beat of her heart in remembrance of his kiss.

Krishna's gaze lingered on her face, tenderly. However the pain was still apparent on his chiseled face.

"Let me go" Pratigya hesitantly whispered, hoping that he felt remorseful enough to grant her freedom.

" Never" he calmly replied. Pratigya almost staggered at his response, "B-but w-hy?" she questioned.

Krishna completely ignored her question and turned to walk towards the small kitchen. "Are you hungry?" he asked.

Pratigya whirled around in sudden anger, "First you take me here against my will, then you incarcerate me, then you hurt me and now after all this, you can calmly stand there and ask if I'm HUNGRY!" she shouted.

Krishna raised his eyebrows mockingly, not the least taken aback by her passionate outburst.

"Pratigya jee, if you are not hungry than simply say so." Frustration swallowed her words as she stood gaping at him in shock.

Before she could think of a rationale yet cutting response, the sound of lightening crushed into her ears. It started raining heavily; each drop of water personified her feelings. The wind was so strong that its impact crashed open the wooden door, bringing a chilling breeze into the room. The fire was no longer burning, leaving Pratigya and Krishna chilled to the bones.

Another burst of thunder rocked the sky, followed by an earth shattering lighting which caused the power to shut down. All the lights of the cabin instantly turned off, leaving Pratigya in the foreboding darkness.

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Sweat glistened on her forehead as a sense of familiarity overwhelmed her senses. She glanced frighteningly around at the shadows playing on the walls, laughing at her. Laughter ringed in her ears, laughter so evil, so familiar. She placed her hands over her ears hoping to shut out the noise, "Stop" she whispered to herself, "stop."

Pratigya felt someone moving around the room as if in search of something or someone?.someone like her. Pratigya quickly leaned against the wall and huddled in the corner. Rocking herself back and fro as she muttered to herself, "He will find me, he will get me, he will hurt me, he will touch me!"

She was back in the same dreadful room where she had been help captive 9 hateful years ago. Her kidnapper was wondering around the room, playfully searching for her. "Little girl" he purred drunkenly, "Where are you my pretty little girl."

"Got you" he shouted victoriously as he grasped her arm and pulled her small body roughly against his scrawny chest. Pratigya frantically fought against him, scratching and kicking. But to no avail, the man laughed at her struggles as he aggressively shoved her onto the cold concreted ground. With a shriek, Pratigya continued to kick him but he held her legs, slowly caressing it. She sobbed and pleaded, but his lust deafened him as he leaned closer?.and closer.

"Nooooooooooo!" she shrieked in terror, crying uncontrollably "Please don't touch me" she sobbed, "No!"

She heard someone rushing towards her in the darkness, kneeling down in front of her. "Pratigya" the voice worriedly whispered, "What's wrong?"

In her state of apprehension, Pratigya failed to recognize the voice, "No" she continued, "go away, don't touch me?..I'll kill myself." She vowed.

She felt him grabbing her shoulders and shaking her, "Pratigya, hosh mein aoh."

"Ill kill myself" she continued, "I will kill myself!"

Pratigya heard a small shuffling sound and suddenly her vision brightened a trifle. The fire from the lighter illuminated the face of the stranger. To her relief, the flame revealed Krishna's handsome but terribly angry face.

She slowly stood up, her back still pressed against the wall. Krishna angrily leaned towards her, the fire stood as a barrier between them.

"DON'T EVER SAY THAT AGAIN!" he shouted, "AS LONG AS I'M ALIVE, NOTHING AND NO ONE CAN TAKE YOU AWAY FROM ME, NOT EVEN YOU!"

Pratigya tried to explain but Krishna stopped her, "HOW COULD YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT KILLING YOURSELF? HOW!" he literally roared.

"If something happened to you, what will I do?" he asked, "I'm only going to say this one Pratigya."

"Agar Pratigya hai toh Krishna hai" he said harshly, "And if theirs no Pratigya than their will be no Krishna."

Krishna shook her again, his jaw clenching tightly in his anger, "understand?" "If you even think about killing yourself again, than I'll kill everyone including your family." Krishna threatened, "Your families lives are in your hands, so think carefully and believe me I won't take your feelings into consideration."

Pratigya paid no heed to his threatening words. She was still shaken from the immense relief she had felt when she had seen Krishna in the light. The foul man wouldn't hurt her anymore because Krishna was here to protect her.

With a cry, Pratigya flung herself into his warm arms and cried her fears into his shoulders. Relief poured out of her as she clung onto him tightly, feeling safe for the first time in 9 years of her life. "Thank you" was all she could muster to say, "thank you."

Krishna wrapped his arms protectively around her waist and inhaled her sweet scent. He gently caressed her hair, soothing her. "That's the first time, someone has thanked me for threatening their parents" he whispered playfully into her ears.

Despite herself, Pratigya smiled through her tears at his words. Krishna leaned back and cupped her face gently into his hands. He moved his face forward and slowly but ever so gently kissed her stinging tears away.

As he murmured words of comfort and continued to kiss her tears, Pratigya stood motionless. He will love you despite your flaws, he will kiss away your tears, he will protect you.

No longer did it matter that he had forcibly taken her into this isolated place. No longer did she care that he had hurt her constantly either by his words or his actions. Nothing but him mattered anymore to her. She will forgive him for everything, not just because he had kissed away her tears but because she had at last finally found her prince charming.

Edited by siinnce.09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kash aisa ho jaye yar.................... kash tum suddenly pratigya ka director ban jao....................... o god....u r so mindblowing ...........it feels sooooooooooooooo wonderful reading ur fan fic..........cntinue writing....superb,fantastic,outstanding and.........and...........well am short of words................👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.............Honestly my heart is just chanting one word ..... MORE MORE MORE MORE. Your fanfic is addictive. Love it!👏👏👏

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