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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

Mints...

What can I say...I am so in awe of you...this was nothing short of brilliant.

The concept and the idea were just amazing...this was something that we hoped the show would deal with but we never saw it...but just the way toh wrote it made me visualise this as if it happened in front of me...

The way Anjali takes control of her life...surprising everyone and instead of everyone bowing to her stupid whims and fancies...you made her strong and smart ...

Khushi knew she feel in love with her Arnavji, but putting her feelings aside and leaving him and her emotions behind I like that she makes a new start.

This time and distance apart from each other will make him realise as well...and give her equal footing in the relationship...

The hurt, the heartbreak and the suffering, they both go through...was written so perfectly ...him realising that she was his life his Khushi...their hearts best together...

I loved that he puts two and two together and realises his mistake and rightly repents for it...his guilt for making the biggest mistake of his life for not trusting her and their love enough...and for jumping to conclusions...

I like the steps he has taken...her being in her turf, picking up the pieces of her life ...learning to live again...independently, learning to be happy or content without him ...even though she loves him...all knowing that he is not far away from her...catching glimpses of each other...drawing comfort from each other..silently ...

Loved how he uses his money and stature indirectly earning her respect and reiterating his love by donating to the hospital and just being there...

And loved how her family keeps him updated and knowing she is once again the girl she used to be is like a personal accomplishment ...

Loved how her family talks to him saying that he and Khushi need to sort out stuff between them so she can move ahead and finally get on with life...and the way she feels when he calls her name...I got goosebumps...

And the ending where she knows that he will never let her fall...her trust her love and her belief in him and their love their moment of realisation that they belong to each other...hamesha...

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN 👏👏

AWESOME 👏👏

SUPERB OS 👏👏

LOVED IT 😛

ENJOYED READING IT 😊

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nt so late

Apne khamoshiyan yaad dila di 😳

D pain nd hurt .. D shame nd Guilt u shown after so many mnths was awsm

Frm d strtng to the end .. I loved arnav more nd more..

Bt sabse pehle awsm song ..One of my fav 😳

For dat a hug to u 🤗

Nw back to OS..

I loved how much arnav did for gttng d forgiveness of khushi..

He nt only left delhi bt hell he stayed Three freaky mnths in lucknow..

She knew for whom he here frm d strtng she knew yet she was testing him his patience his love his sincerity ...

D things he done for her

His watchng her all d tym

Beautiful dii 👍🏼

I loved d last part were dey were united ..

Nd specially were she falls in his arm again 😳

Dat was awsm

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome 👏

wow you are too good in writing redemption stories.👍🏼

superb OS.👏

Khushi and Arnav both redeem.I like that Arnav give space to khushi so that she could go back o her real life and could over think calmly about her life.

Anjali too finds her soulmate and this was a sign for him for the perfect moment for a second chance from his love lady.

I love it when Arnav indirectly give donations to the hospiatls where shashi was treated. In this way he was making amends of his mistakes.

Khushi too wanted to give Arnav another chance, sh wants to fell in love again and what better would be to start their love story by landing again in his arms. Love overtook hate in his eyes and he didn't let go her once he hold her, he embrace her, cherish her presence.

The ending is beautiful, so lovely. I love it❤️. That's should be how a redemption story should be end.

Love finds its way back.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago