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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Beautiful shot..

Please write a continuation..

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jojo21

@jojo21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

How perfectly done! The anticipation as Arnav got closer and the nervousness that Khushi felt, along with the excitement, I could just see them taking their steps back and forward respectively. And the ending...just right. Made me smile...how very Arnav and Khushi.

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LittlePrincess8

@LittlePrincess8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

A awesome cute little one..

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Sorry am late , was away .

Loved the os , thanks for the pm dear.

Always wait for your stories , please do keep up the pms .

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

This reminded me of those playful days between Khushi n Arnav..had loved them then..loved this short stint now!

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

EEE ..

So Good !

gave me a Dhak - Dhak since the start ! <3

Awesome !!

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Maybe he is as drunk as she thinks he is... Just in love ;)

Haha, bad joke. I know :P

Anyways...

I loved the OS! Nothing major happened, but that was the best part :) Capturing these small moments is beautiful :)

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 11 years ago

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Res

Edited:

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

Thank you for showing the emotional 'trauma' Khushi went through after Arnav dismissed her off after their almost Diwali kiss, hurling insults at her, wounding her with demeaning words...

In the show she cried for a night and was put off with him for a day or so and then she was back to her casual equation with him. Later whenever he tried to kiss her or even invaded her personal space too much, she turned away because she was shy of his close proximity but never because she remembered the hurt he had caused to her innocent heart.

Again, in your OS she is backed to the corner and he is flirting with her as he was wont to do during the PayAsh wedding ceremonies. But your Khushi remembers what happened the last time she allowed him to back her to a corner when he was not in his senses, the last time it was the intoxication of her beauty and today the bhaang.

This reaction to push him away was so natural.

Btw, your OS was teasing at the same time... His smirk, his desire to see her in red again and then he isnt as intoxicated as she thinks... My heart danced at the last bit. I am sure Titaliya bhi khush huyi hogi

I am your official OS fan girl ❤️

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago