Some criticism!!

sonia

@lachii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1

They are showing more masala and the story of abused has been sidelined for sometime but not properly, as questions in mind as to why shlok not helping jyothi even though he knows the torture she receives daily...i doubt if they will be able to show any proper answer to that later when they do decide to show it...or would they just brush it under the carpet...

in their quest to show masala, and fulfil demands of ppl, they have ignored and pushed to background all the imp things in this show...namely the abuse, esp jyothi, avdoot's inquiry, income tax raid, swati related issue of shlok etc

i know they want to keep the pace fast but they are going too fast about some issues and too slow about the others...kinda lost their balance...

indian drama industry aka bollywood has so many resources but they still lack in proper treatment of story...they add so many distractions, misunderstandings, making it complex in hopes to keep audience involved, making riddles inside riddles, kinda pisses me off...its a typical indian show kinda thing...

on the other hand i feel the story itself is so strong, it could have been fabulous if they pursued it steadily..took time to build one track and gave it proper treatment and when that track is going to resolve to positive, they could in background brew the parallel track to its negative high, so kinda balance the show negative and positive, keeping the audience in enjoyment of positive yet the audience afraid in anticipation of the other negative one brewing in the background...not so fast not so slow and taking time to develop one facet at a time..like in real life, one event leads to another...its not all negative at one time and all positive at one time...happiness is always marked with sorrow and sorrow always brews happiness somewhere somehow...

the direction, crew , script all is strong, but somehow, something is lacking...and i am feeling it , unable to put my finger on it...

i love EBP

Please only healthy discussion

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mayabharathi

@mayabharathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#2

I believe ebp will come again on track very soon

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Operaqueen

@Operaqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#3

Sonia,

You are right in saying that a lot of the tracks have not be pursued completely in a quest to follow the love hate aspect of the story.

But Can I say that we expect too much from a fictional serial that is meant to entertain . If the story followed a very logical course, shlok and Astha should not even end up together, but obviously they will. It is obvious that these stories are not planned well in advance and things change at the last minute according to TRPs. So even if the cvs may have wanted to show other things besides masala, I doubt they would have the creative freedom to do so. And we as a audience would also complain when we don't get to see the lead actors track , how many of us care to see abhay turned over a new leaf? I bet very few,

And I am not even expecting them to give the abuse issue a rational conclusion. I don't think these serials are made with a intention of making any kind of social statement. And I don't expect them to either,

My logical thinking takes a back saet when I watch any hindi serial, I seem to enjoy it more. Having said that, EBP has very strong characters , interesting plot, awesome chemistry and fast paced storyline that makes up for me not having to challenge my neurons too much.😊

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jia.astk

@jia.astk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#4

I n a rush..will check back Lachii...

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multiDimensions

@multiDimensions

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Posted: 11 years ago

#5

i think once they set the pace again for astha and shlok in new situations, some people think that we will see office track and some think NA will bring astha back, but wethinks we will get office track with new developmetns, they will focus again on the background stories,i agree completely they need to balance the episode with main track and background tracks, not to mention they still need to show us what shlok feels, thinks and why he behaves the way he behaves

instead of just showing the story from astha's POV they need to start showing from shlok's pOV as well,

i think the cv is a woman they need to bring a man on team, so that we get balanced views from not only woman's perspectives but also from man's perspectives

we girls will then get the knowledge how a man thinks when he behaves in a certain way

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Prani08

@Prani08

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#6

They are showing more masala and the story of abused has been sidelined for sometime but not properly, as questions in mind as to why shlok not helping jyothi even though he knows the torture she receives daily...i doubt if they will be able to show any proper answer to that later when they do decide to show it...or would they just brush it under the carpet...

in their quest to show masala, and fulfil demands of ppl, they have ignored and pushed to background all the imp things in this show...namely the abuse, esp jyothi, avdoot's inquiry, income tax raid, swati related issue of shlok etc

i know they want to keep the pace fast but they are going too fast about some issues and too slow about the others...kinda lost their balance...

indian drama industry aka bollywood has so many resources but they still lack in proper treatment of story...they add so many distractions, misunderstandings, making it complex in hopes to keep audience involved, making riddles inside riddles, kinda pisses me off...its a typical indian show kinda thing...

on the other hand i feel the story itself is so strong, it could have been fabulous if they pursued it steadily..took time to build one track and gave it proper treatment and when that track is going to resolve to positive, they could in background brew the parallel track to its negative high, so kinda balance the show negative and positive, keeping the audience in enjoyment of positive yet the audience afraid in anticipation of the other negative one brewing in the background...not so fast not so slow and taking time to develop one facet at a time..like in real life, one event leads to another...its not all negative at one time and all positive at one time...happiness is always marked with sorrow and sorrow always brews happiness somewhere somehow...

the direction, crew , script all is strong, but somehow, something is lacking...and i am feeling it , unable to put my finger on it...

i love EBP

Please only healthy discussion

No haters

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jonee

@jonee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#7

yout know lachii - i am not quite able to understand what yr real concern is

i think compared to any other serial, ebp is not only fast paced , but telling us so many

things in just four months - if you look back - so much has happened -

since it is a serial, they can only show so much in 20 mins - and tracks will have to be taken in due course and have some connectivity -

so the HM track is now being related to the MU track ...

and meantime, whenever possible , they are showing jyoti abuse / na anjali relationship/sojal varad stand off and re-entry of abhay as main villain ( from earlier being only jyoti's abusive

husband etc -

i dont think people would find it well conceived or edited if the HM track was interspersed with other aspects more than what was already shown -- and the avdhoot plot

is also being slowly revealed - he has also gone to jail and is on bail - this is a show which

we hope will go on for a long time - so why the hurry ?/ - let things unfold - i am not at

all unhappy with the way it is going - especially if one compres it with other run of the mill

offerings on tv - so much pains are being taken in execution, shooting, attention to detail, not to

mention acting by the leads and cast - i am in fact all appreciation for the show -

and i believe more than any other show, ebp may find some conclusive note in the end for

the abuse - the writers i am sure have not taken up this issue only to give it a lame ending

i have a strong gut feeling on that ...

in the meantime, i plan to enjoy this show as an excellent show that could well make

history for its leads/ cast and director😛

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Neelum.drashti

@Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#8

lachii nice points👍🏼

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dsr11

@dsr11

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#9

i agree partially lachii. i also feel that there is lack of balance in terms of pace sometimes but i forgive minor flaws readily as i am happy with the show on the whole😃. probably a lot of things affect the pace of any track in the background which we don't know about. regarding shlok's behavior in jyothi issue, it takes time to unfold it completely for us. best thing for us would be to wait, i think. its just 4 months since the show started and there is more than a year and a half left(my guess) for the show to end. lets wait a few more months before judging shlok. they just started to unveil him for us.

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Aas2727

@Aas2727

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Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: jonee
yout know lachii - i am not quite able to understand what yr real concern is

i think compared to any other serial, ebp is not only fast paced , but telling us so many
things in just four months - if you look back - so much has happened -
since it is a serial, they can only show so much in 20 mins - and tracks will have to be taken in due course and have some connectivity -
so the HM track is now being related to the MU track ...
and meantime, whenever possible , they are showing jyoti abuse / na anjali relationship/sojal varad stand off and re-entry of abhay as main villain ( from earlier being only jyoti's abusive
husband etc -
i dont think people would find it well conceived or edited if the HM track was interspersed with other aspects more than what was already shown -- and the avdhoot plot
is also being slowly revealed - he has also gone to jail and is on bail - this is a show which
we hope will go on for a long time - so why the hurry ?/ - let things unfold - i am not at
all unhappy with the way it is going - especially if one compres it with other run of the mill
offerings on tv - so much pains are being taken in execution, shooting, attention to detail, not to
mention acting by the leads and cast - i am in fact all appreciation for the show -

and i believe more than any other show, ebp may find some conclusive note in the end for
the abuse - the writers i am sure have not taken up this issue only to give it a lame ending
i have a strong gut feeling on that ...
in the meantime, i plan to enjoy this show as an excellent show that could well make
history for its leads/ cast and director😛

I agree to your words jonee

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