Swaron os:Unnatural but Unconditional

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey, everyone here is another swaron OS by me. This is a request by sanju di [sweet_sanju] so i'm dedicating it to you di...😉 Sorry for the bad title, i didnt really know what to name it


Unnatural but Unconditional

"Sharon! Sharon!" his helpless voice rang through the night in the dark forests of Manali. He didn't even know whether she could hear him or not but kept calling out for her. He wasn't sure that he could meet her ever again but kept searching nevertheless. He had been wandering in the forest for god knows how many days. Somehow that hope in him would never die, the love and the yearning to be with her refused to fade away even at the cost of his life. Whatever she might say but he knew that she left him for his safety and he was determined to show her that it wasn't going to do any good to either of them. Determined to search for her till the end of his life to prove how much he needed her and how wrong she was to think that he would be happy if she leaves him. Suddenly his legs gave up and he sank to the ground. However determined he might be but he was still human after all. Pulling his hair in frustration he started whispering, " Please come back to me Sharon. I know you don't want to kill me but trust me I'm not going to live without you Sharon. Please, plea...". " I'm not right for you swayam." he heard her voice and stopped abruptly turning around. Tears welled up in his eyes as he smiled at her sight. Immediately he got up and started advancing towards her. She stood amazed looking at him come close to her so fearlessly with so much of love in his beautiful eyes. In all these years she hadn't seen anything but lust, fear, shock and pain in someone's eyes when she was close to them. But this man never seemed to show any such reaction towards her, all she could see was pure love in his eyes. Even when she had revealed to him what she actually was ,she couldn't manage to get anything more than amusement out of him after showing her fangs and snarling furiously irked at him. But even that had lasted only a second before he moved towards her and lightly touched her fangs as if examining them. Just as fearlessly as he was advancing towards her right now. " We both are from different worlds and different time swayam. We are not meant to be together."she was trying to explain before he placed his warm lips on her frozen ones and kissed her with all his love. She couldn't push him away, that would hurt him. She couldn't pull him close either, that would hurt too. She stood frozen as she was, justifying her existence. Feeling all those emotions that wasn't even possible for a vampire like her to feel. When he pulled back she looked into his eyes and resumed speaking, " I can never love you swayam. I was killed long ago before I could know anything about love. I don't know how to love. I'm just cruel, selfish, evil and " she said with a choking voice not finding the exact words that could keep swayam away from her. If it was possible for a vampire to cry she would have broken down long before. He cupped her face making her look at him, " Says who? You left me just coz you didn't want to hurt me. Now you're here coz you cant see me hurt. Do you call this cruel, selfish and evil?" "But no such thing as a vampire-human relationship exists swayam. A hunter and prey together is against the nature. Its impossible. Its not good.."she interrupted. " You don't know how good you are. You don't realize how perfect you are for me. I can prove it to you Sharon. Come with me." He wrapped his arms around her shoulder and walked for some distance until they reached a lake. The clear water of the lake was shining like a mirror in moonlight. The calm water held a clear reflection of both of them. Sharon was stunned looking at the reflection of them. They looked so perfect together. Yes, she knew that she was beautiful. That was the reason why she got killed in the first place. She had seen the lust in the ruthless demon's eyes before he had bit her. And her beauty was what she used as a weapon to kill her prey. And she also knew that he was unbelievably beautiful too. But never had she imagined that being next to him, seeing herself like he does would make her feel so heavenly. He leaned down close to her ear and started singing.

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko taraashe

Meri nazar se tu zara, haaye re

Aankho se teri kya kya chupa hai

Tujhko dikhaaun main zara, haaye re

Ik ankahi si daastaan daastaan

Kehne lagega aaina subhanallah

He hugged her from behind and continued singing pointing towards their reflection.

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah

Aisa hua, subhanallah

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa wallah

Aisa hua.

He turned her around to face him and cupped her face and kissed her forehead.

Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena

Unki dori se taarifein bun lena

Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena

Unki dori se taarifein bun lena.

She placed her palm on his cheek and kissed his forehead repeating his actions. They stared into each others eyes as words left her mouth.

Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon

Taareef meri hai khamakha

Tohfa hai tera meri adaa

Abruptly she started moving away while mumbling to herself, " No, I'm gonna kill you." She turned to leave when she heard him say, " Sharon, if my life is all I can give you, I would be more than happy if you kill me. But you wont hurt me Sharon. You love me too much to do that." She stopped on her way and turned to look at him who was now standing right in front of her. So close that she could feel his tingling breath and his racing heart beat making her wonder what the rate of her heartbeat would be if it had been beating at the moment. " Do I love you? Am I really that good?"she asked him confusedly. In reply he just smiled at her and resumed singing.

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare

Meri zubaan se tu zara, haaye re

Tujh mein chupi si jo shaayari hai

Tujhko sunaaun main zara, haaye re

Yeh do dilon ka waasta waasta

Khulke bataya jaaye naa

Subhanallah..

She smiled back at him and placed her head on his shoulder but her hands remained on her sides. He kissed her hair and hugged her. But she stood still not knowing what to do next. He pulled back for a second to place her hands around his neck and then placed his hands back on her waist hugging her again.

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah

Aisa hua...Subhanallah (*3)

They stayed in each other's arms savouring the feeling of love, for the first time. Thus beginning the story of their unnatural but unconditional and irrevocable love.

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah

Aisa hua..



This is the first time i'm trying my hand on something like this. So do leave ur comments and criticism please😳.

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-Chaitra- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res for my di😳
i'm sure u wouldnt have imagined that i'll use the song in this way😆 even i didnt, it just popped in my head🤔

Haye u dedicated this OS to me...eeks me so happy... Khushi k maare aankhe bhar aayi meri😭
Talking about OS Wow awesome OS dear I nvr thought u'll use this song on this concept.. We were just talking abt this and u wrote a OS on it... Sharon vampire 😲 I loved this OS waise bhi i like vampire stories alot..and sharon's emotions were expressed so well by u... Swaron...hayyee.. Loved ur writing as usual... Keep writing...

Thank u for dis lovely comment di🤗
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kapoormenka thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg it's truly beautiful. keep writing
sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was wonderful and beautiful os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... it ws amazingly beautiful... lud it to d core.
i luv such unnatural concepts nd prefer them more than those lovey dovey stuff.
thank god u didn't give swaron separation cz that is sumthing i hate d most.
fab os.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply magnificent 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was truly beautiful
they way this OS was written
my god i am in heaven
simply magnificent

lovely 👏
kudos to you and loved the song ❤️
thanks for the PM
Suni1986 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os nd diff too sharon being vampire nd swayam be human
surbhimathur thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so very coool chaitra :)
I really like your writings, it has been a pleasant read everytime and best part you have always and continuously written something on them. Do not ever stop that okay please!

Coming to this one it was perfect, considering what you wrote and how. Sharon being the vampire and swayam being human very good concept.
Sharon going away from swayam for his good and swayam making her believe that love makes things possible!

It was wonderful n while typing all these i remember show mei bhi toh yehi hota rehta hai, kabhi sharon vampire ban jaati hai toh kabhi swayam :/
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was a fresh concept
amazinggly penned
the best part is the way you approched tis subject
it was romantic n emotional
do write more 😊
ps you write emotional heart - wrenching sequences
or emotional romantic stuff very gracefully

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