'Asha ki kiran' (parts 1-49)

Hey everyone for a long time now i've been enjoying reading some great ff's on our forum which inspired me to try writing one myself. Please let me know how it is and weather i should continue with this one or not. Thanks for reading.

Part 1

It's a full moon night, sky is covered with tinkling stars, a girl is sitting out on the porch looking at the sky, trying to figure out something when a gush of wind blows through her hair and covers her face, slowly she moves her hair behind and someone calls out to her… "Bani" she hurriedly gets up and almost trips, Bani kitni baar kaha hai sambhal ke chala kar, hur baar mein nahi hoonga tughe sahara dene ke liye.

Bani: Jub mera bhai hai mere saath toh girne ka kaisa daar, aaur rahi baath ki aap hamesha mere saath nahi hoonge, toh meh aapko bata doon ki mujse peecha choorana itna asaan nahi hai..

Kunal: Matlab tujhe zindagi bhar jhelna parage… baap re, kya musibat hai

Bani : kya kaha, mein musibat hoon… mein.. With that she started running after her brother Kunal who had made the comment and was now trying to run before she threw some thing at him. They both made their way inside the house, still laughing with Bani trying to catch up with her bhai who was more dear to her than anyone in the world. They were going around the sofa when suddenly Bani stopped in her tracks, she looked at her hand which was still up in the air and slowly brought it down and looked down at the floor. It was silent, Bani tried to open her say something but shut her mouth as soon as she saw a hand go up in the air, it was her mother Kiran Dixit.

Kiran: Kitne baar kaha hai ki mujhe yeh sub pasand nahi hai, agar bhaagne ka itna hi shauk hai to mere ghar ke bahar ja ke karo…Kunal tried to interept : par maa Bani toh

Kiran: Kunal koi zarurat nahi hai iss larki ki tarafdari karne ki, mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Aur beta tu yahan kya kar raha hai ja jake sau ja kal subah office mein meeting hai na, tere Papa bata rahe the, tu ja aur jake aram kar aur haan mene doodh rakh diya hai tere table par yaad se use pee lena.

Kunal looked over to Bani who was standing there like a statue with tears threatening to fall but with great effort was controlling them, Jee Ma.

As soon as he left Bani made a turn to go to her room only to be stopped by Kiran, Kahan jaa rahi ho?

Bani: jee woh apne kamre mein.

Kiran: sarcastically, apne kamre mein aur kitchen mein bartan kaun dhoega mein? Khane keh waqt to bari jaldi neeche aa jate ho aaur zara kam karne ka time ho toh apne kamre mein jana hai. Jao jake bartan karo, aur haan awaz nahi honi chaiyey, tumhare papa so rahe hain. As Bani made to go towards the kitchen she was yet again interrupted, ekk aur baat Pia abhi aye nahi hai jub tak woh nahi aa jati tum yahin rahogi uske paas chabi nahi hai, jub woh ajayeh toh darwaza theek se band kar dena.

Bani : all she could manage to say was jee, and Kiran walked towards her room, Bani walked in the kitchen to see a dozens of utensils in the basin to be washed it was almost a routine for her to wash dishes which caused her skin to break as it was sensitive to the detergent, but she accepted this as her fate with a smile on her face knowing that tomorrow will be a new day and perhaps even bring a new ray of hope with the rising sun.

It was well past 1 AM and Bani was still waiting in the living area for Pia to return, the clock ticked 2 and there was a slight knock on the door Bani opened the door to find Pia standing at the door wearing a very revealing low cut blouse and a mini skirt, seeing her like this Bani couldn't control herself and said: Pia yeh sub kya hai?

Pia: Kya kya hai?

Bani: Pia tumne kya pehen rakha hai aur waqt dekha hai, 2 baj rahe hain kahan thi itne der raat tak tum.

Pia: Ek minute aap hoti kaun hain yeh sub kehne wali, mein jahan bhi jaaon aapko isse kya, aur ek baath mere dress bahut achii hai latest designer collection hai.. magar apko kya pata ki designer kapre kya hote hain, yahan America mein itne saal rehene ke bawajood bhi backward ho.

Bani: she raised her voice a little Pia

Pia: Khabardar jo mujhpe chilane ki koshish ki, and she walked off

It hurt Bani every time Pia or her mother made a comment at her, she didn't know what was wrong, why she was always treated like a doormat. With tears running down her face she made it to her room and closed the door.

To be continued..

Kripa.

This ff is dedicated to Vangirl

Part 2 page 2

Part 3 page 4

Part 4 page 7

Pary 5&6 page 8

Part 7 page 10

Part 8 page 12

Part 9 page 15

Part 10 page 17

Part 11 page 20

Part 12 page 22

Part 13 page 24

Part 14 page 27

Part 15 page 28

Part 16 page 31

Part 17 page 36

Part 18 page 37

Part 19 page 39

Part 20 page 40

Part 21 page 42

Part 22 page 45

Part 23 page 46

Part 24 page 49

Part 25 page 51

Part 26 page 54

Part 27 page 55

Part 28 page 58

Part 29 page 60

Part 30 A & B page 62

Part 31& 32 page 64

Part 33 page 66

Part 34 page 68

Part 35 page 69

Part 36 page 71

Part 37 & 38 page 74 & 76

Part 39 page 79

Part 40 page 80

Part 41 page 82

Part 42 page 83

Part 43 page 85

Part 44 page 86

Part 45 page 90

Part 46 & 47 page 93 & 95

Part 48 page 97

Part 49 page 99

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yay im first......very nice start to the ff...cool to see bani have an older brother...😃😃😃...so sweet...aare yeh kya...yeh ma hai ke musibat 😕...why is she so mean to bani...problem kya hai uska...😡and pia...reptile...iss ff mein bhi reptile...🤢...kuch nahin hoga uska 😉...cant wait for update 2...hope our hero jai comes soon and rescues bani from this horrible family....well maama and pia at least...haila...humara knight in shining armor...😳...great job👏...update soon please...😃😃😃
JAZ

good start please cont soon...........

Originally posted by: jnawaz

yay im first......very nice start to the ff...cool to see bani have an older brother...😃😃😃...so sweet...aare yeh kya...yeh ma hai ke musibat 😕...why is she so mean to bani...problem kya hai uska...😡and pia...reptile...iss ff mein bhi reptile...🤢...kuch nahin hoga uska 😉...cant wait for update 2...hope our hero jai comes soon and rescues bani from this horrible family....well maama and pia at least...haila...humara knight in shining armor...😳...great job👏...update soon please...😃😃😃
JAZ

Thanks Jaz for the comments glad that you liked it.. Pia toh Pia hi hai.. well put Reptile😆 as for our hero he'll come itni jaldi bhi kya hai😳

Thanks again for the comments ..........Kripa.

its nice

continue sooon

😊

fabalous start,very interesting.the sweet and caring relationship between bani and her bro protrayed really well.loved it.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

awesome start!!! plz continue soon!!! 👏 👏

Originally posted by: ash9

its nice

continue sooon

😊

Thanks..

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

fabalous start,very interesting.the sweet and caring relationship between bani and her bro protrayed really well.loved it.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

Thanks a lot.. will post the next part in a few minutes..😳

Part 2

Behind the closed door Bani sat down on the cold floor in front of a murthi of Krishna her 'Gopalji' , she shivered from the chills she was getting and the wind blowing in from the open windows was not helping any either but too tired to get up she sat there till sleep took over and took her in a different world,
On the other side of the world sun rays had engulfed the darkness and spread light over the city of Mumbai and within it a huge palace like house surrounded with beds of flowers and trees in the garden. It was the Walia mansion, the house of Jai Walia, a business tycoon, a ruthless businessman with looks that could kill and the most eligible bachelor of the country.
Morning in the Walia house started with the sounds of aarti in the background.
Sahil : subah subah yeh awaz oh no phir se aarti, not being able to sleep he put a pillow on his ears but to no avail, so he got up with hair all ruffled up and walked out of his room towards the stairs rubbing his eyes when he heard someone laughing … it was Anu his twin sister.
Anu: she came close to him and said while ruffling his hair further, kya hua munne intne saj dhaj ke, kahan ja rahe ho ? She looked at him top to bottom and burst out laughing, Sahil who was still not fully awake couldn't get the jest of it but seeing Anu staring at him he could sense that something was not right so he looked down at himself and found everything alright and then again looked at her almost screaming… Anu whats so funny, paagal ho gayi hai kya, mujhe aise deekh kar kyu has rahi hai? Anu with great difficulty tried to talk … Saahil woh woh… Saahil: kya woh woh laga rakha kai ? Anu: Ja ke zara sheesha dekh le and with that she went downstairs..
Sahil went back to his room and looked at himself in the mirror and turned around and suddenly he turned back to the mirror and screamed:ANUUUUUUUUUUUU.. His hair was pink and his face was green…aah Anu ki bachhi tujhe toh mein dekh loonga, tune yeh theek nahi kiya, Saahil se panga aab tera kya hoga behna…thinking out loud he went to go clean himself.
While downstairs in Massi was arranging for breakfast, as Jigyasa came into the kitchen and seeing Masi already there smiled and went towards her and said : yeh kya Massi aap yahan kitchen mein kya kar rahe ho, Doctor ne mana kiya hai na, Jai bhaiya ko pata chala toh daant mujhe parege ki meine apko andar kyun ane diye.. Massi: aree beta tu chinta mat kar Munna tuhge kuch nahi kahega aaur fir mujhe accha lagta hai bachoon ke liye khana banana.
Jiggs: haan massi lekin.
Massi: lekin wakin kuch nahi chal aab tu meri madad kar jaldi se sub karlete hain Jai neeche aata hi hoga.
A little later everyone is assembled in the dining area except for two people who are just now walking down with files in their hands discussing something, as they descend the stairs and get to the dining table Massi says : Maine kitne baar kaha hai ki subab subah yeh filen lekar mat baitha karo Jai Adi….
Adi: aree Masi mein toh Jai ko khud yehi keh raha tha ki yeh sub hum baad mein discuss kar lenge kyun Jai
The focus shifts on Jai who is wearing a black suit, rolex watch on his wrist and a half open file in his hands covering his face slightly. He slowly puts the file down and looks at Adi and then Massi, hugs her and says sorry Massi zaroori file hai aaj iss per hi discussion hai toh seeing Massi giving him a stern look quickly adds Massi bahut bhook lagi hai.. Hearing this Massi being massi takes him to the table and serves him while Adi is still standing there , Jai looks back to where he is standing and winks at him.. back to you brother… and eats his breakfast as Adi walks down and sat next to Jigs and ate.
To be continued…
Thanks everyone for the comments, i really appreciate them.
Kripa.