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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have tried something on d current track, hope u all will like it. This will have 2 or 3 parts, so here it is.
PART~I

Everyone reached d city hospital.They all got down from sharon's car and started heading towards d enterance when sharon held swayam's hand to stop him.
Sw: sharon hath chodo mera.
Sh: remember swayam 12 hrs..they are over now and before we go and meet kriya i want to clear this..ki maine kriya se apne matlab ke liye friendship ki thi but now things are different..trust me swayam..
Sw: trust aur tumhe..just leave my hand..mujhe apni friend se milne jana hai.
Sh: swayam kriya meri bhi friend hai u r getting it all wrong listen to me once plz.
Sw: sharon can't u see that im not interested in having any futher converstation with u. and with a jerk he removed her hand and went inside.
Sharon started crying bitterly and sat on the enterance staircase. She didn't know how sought out things any futher,how to get back swayam's trust, when he was least interested in talking to her.
The love of her life thinks that she only feels she loves him but he doesn't know that she is truly,deeply nd madly in love him. She is dying to be with him.
Soon she realized her surronding and got up to meet kriya. She wiped her tears and went in.
Kriya saw her and she realized that something is wrong as sharon's face was too dull.Kriya wanted to know d reason so she said mujhe sharon se kuch baat karni kya hum 5 min akele reh sakte hai.
Everyone started moving but swayam was still there.
Kriya: swayam tum bhi..plz
Sw: dekho kriya..
Kriya: swayam plz..
Even he went out.
Sh: kriya tmhe mujhse aisi kya baat karni hai jo sabko bahar bhej diya.
Kr: sharon its very clear from ur face that something is troubling u.
Sh: no kriya im ok mai abhi aati hu.
Sharon turned around to move. She was not able to make an eye contact with kriya aware of the fact that if swayam's tell kriya d half truth he knows she would loose her friend.
Kr: sharon aap nahi mante na mujhe friend abhi tak.
This sentence made sharon turn back and she held kriya's hand and said no kriya aisa nahi hai..i consider u as good friend of mine.
Kr: sharon sit here and tell me kya hua?
Sh: started to cry, she was crying her heart out by now she has been actually very much attached to kriya.Between her vigrous sobs she told kriya the whole truth her motive behind her friendship and that now she actually considers her a friend.
Kr: sharon toh isme problem kya hai aap mujhe kabhi like nahi karte the and apka jo bhi purpose tha but apne meri kitni help ki and mujhe pata hai ki aap ab mujhe sahi mein friend mante ho nahi toh aap kisi se itna easliy open nahi hote. Sharon aap reason bhul jao and lets live in d present that now we are actually friends.
Sh: thankyou kriya mujhe samjhne ke liya i thought i am so bad that i can not keep any relationship safe.
Kr: aap aisa kyu bol rahe ho..aap bahut acche ho sharon maine bhi apko phale kitna galat samjha tha but from when i have returned i have discovered new side of urs and trust me sharon aap sahi mein bahut acche ho.
Sh: par kriya..nd she started to cry again
Kr: sharon aap ab kyu ro rahe..ruko mai swayam ko bulati hu..tab aap shayad theek hoge and she gave smile to her.
Sh : no kriya i can not take his hatred anymore, he is behaviour towards me is very cold after he came to know d hlf truth..n fresh tears made their way from her eyes.
Kr: what swayam ko ye pata hai..mai usse baat karti hu..
Sh : kriya promise me tum usse kuch nahi kahogi..
kr : par sharon..
Sh: no kriya..
Sharon got up and started to move aimlessly out of d door..



Precap : sharon meets with an accident.I know this has turned out to be a crap so all criticism welcomed.But fortunately if u all like it do comment nd hit d like tab.

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pooja123456 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Nice start...
Do continue
Hope things btw swaron become fine
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Nice start! Update it soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The start is good... I think if Sharon acknowledges the truth in front of Kria, the scene will be somehat like this only in the serial also.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its aswom...

sharon told kriya truth...

nd d precap...

plzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a great and good chapter... different concept and interest...
finally both have clear their doubt and are friends and the precap is scare...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey it was an awesome os ...and can you PM meif you update the next part.iam too interested in reading it.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Gud start. .
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start , continue soon :)

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