CHRISTMAS GIFT SWARON OS: Iss Dard E Dil Ki Sifaarish

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Beautiful os..!! ❤️

Loved the way u pen down the emotions!!

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

happy belated xams to yu sans

tis is the first tym i hav heard tis song

but i must say it added a very soothing feel to ur os

the memories section was very beautifully penned

the bike ride chai date n getting wet in the rain

every memory was emotional n very beautiful

even though yu added a perfect ending to tis write up
it was very emotional n agonizing

i luved the end becoz swaron always find a way back to each other

very emotionally penned

looking forward to ur updates 😛

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

AWESOME DI !!!
BLISS OF WATER FOUND IN THE DESERT !!
just the way you put it all together in a OS ...
Your writting skills, baabh re can't appreciate you enough !

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

great OS kriti..
this song just fitted your words and swaron PERFECTLY..
i loved it.
this os was awesome..
and a belated merry christmas and an advanced happy new year to you!
keep writing..

sorry for late comment..

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Rashi Shah

@VruShanRashi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

super awesum😳❤️

loved it to d core😃😳😳

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Comment edited on page 8..😉

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Hmmm i know am late but anyways. .
Merry Christmas to u too. .
A beautiful Christmas gift. .
Loved it. .
Beautifully written. .
Loved all d emotions n pain u described. .
Confession was simple nice. .
Very well written. .

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Hey That was a beautiful Christmas Gift Sanskriti first of all... You wrote that OS very nicely and romance was just flowing everywhere in your description... I am sorry i haven't really heard the song you used for the description so i couldn't imagine what you have thought while writing this, but lyrics are amazing and the description you gave of them was apt according to lyrics and i could feel the love in between them... so very good stuff Sanskriti and hats off for creating something so beautiful and romantic...

Thank you for sharing it with me...

Pratik...