FF: Precocious Rawte. chapter 26, p.67 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
addu is kidnapped...i am so happy...i know i sound like a...what ever...😉

goga is awesome...darayenge kise??😆😆

addu left clues...great but how will they trace him...

plz atisha before they get him...make the kidnapers pay for their sin...😃😃

continue soon...thanks for pm...

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god junior is way too smart much more then his dad he didnot scream to alert his mom
to save her and then he dropped the clues first that locket of jasmin and then his won toy
and now he has made his mind to sikhao sabak to these goons it will be just like
baby's day out i guess 😆 ☢️
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update... 😊
'you guys are.'.. Aage ki lyn main cmplete kr deti hun...v guys r crazy for Addu. 😃
Awww...addu is very smart... already clue chod kr gye...intelligent junior rawte... 👏 👏 👏
Haila...un kidnappers ne itna kuch plan kia...😲
Ab addu apne trh se unhe junior SYS dega... 😛
Hope Arjun jldi kidnappers tk pahunch jaye ...
Update soon dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice work
Love addu too much
Now how he is kidnap
But ver smart boy leave some clue behind for his father
Awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update
intelligent addu ke intelligent karname
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Snehajain Buckle up...the thrill is on the way...😃 stay with Addu.

@skrafty Thanks..stay tuned.😊

@jia03 Beta kiska hain??😆😆...aur asar kis kis ka hain pata hain na. Stay tuned.😊

@shreya09 Yep, me too. Feeling pity for those kidnappers.😊

@freya123 Thanks, stay tuned.😊

(I've a confusion @shreya09 & freya123 are you sisters?? Just look at your UN😆)

@laila1994 Come back soon.

@Harisree001 Thanks dear. wait and watch..

@GOLD.A Haan, yeh toh harr form ka master hain... kuch vi sikha sakta hain. Just stay with him & enjoy the fun.😉

@kunchu Haan yaar, iss shaitaan ne jo shuru kiya hain na...kuch harkatain toh sensorable hain...jo likh nahi sakti..
& hurt😆 can't promise...You know...Addu is so unpredictable.😕

@Asapom Thank you my telegram girl. stay tuned.😊

@rimi_invisible Happy!!😲 kissu koilam na!!😆...what do you think, Addu would let me do that?😉 Stay with him.😊

@sisodia_shefali Right you guys are Addu-crazy!!...Junior SYS...I'm afraid it would be dangerous than Senior's. Stay tuned.😊

@Rehana25 Thanks dear, glad to know that you liked it. Stay tuned.😊

@anitasharma Thanks..& stay tuned.😊
Edited by Shamsad1607 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 14 :

Trio was sitting inside Billu's shelter. They are waiting for their next move. Addu was sleeping on the bed.

Goga : Now what, billu vai? What should we demand for?

Billu was about to answer Goga when his phone buzzed. It was a message from his client.

Billu : Woh baad main bataunga. Jasmin bahar shor kaisa?

Jasmine looked outside from the window.

Jasmine : We should leave this place.

Goga : why?

Jasmine : Some people examining our car, may be informers of police.

Billu : Or may be police...come on, pick the baby. Let's go.

Goga : Isko chorke jaate hain...

Billu : No, he is our contract, we can't leave him here. If we do so he wouldn't spare us...you know what he can do.

Goga : But how they found our car so quickly?

Jasmine : Because of you, Goga..I told you don't touch that security guard, but you smashed him...most probably he narrated the whole story to the police...

Billu : Matlab we can't us this car now. Come, let's go.

They came out from the back door and stopped a cab.

Jasmine : We forgot something..

Goga : What?

Jasmine : Baby's belongings. Go and bring them.

Goga : let it be, we'll buy again.

Billu : No, You can't go out for these stuffs from our next hideout...

Goga : Why I should go for that?

Billu : Coz you don't have enough grey matter to handle any emergency. If any situation show up I must be there.

Goga : Don't taunt me...

Billu : (cut him between) No Goga, we can't take the risk. They already reached to our car, now they'll reach to my home. If they found those in my place, they'll be confirmed I'm behind this and we couldn't go to buy those things, It'll be too risky & they would easily nab us.

Jasmine : Don't waste time Goga, go we'll waiting for you in the cab.

Cab driver : Any problem?

Billu : No no...we forgot our baby's bag inside. I hope you wouldn't mind waiting.

Goga came back with the bags and sat inside the cab. He brought out a banana and started eating.

Jasmine : Goga? What are you doing? You ate little while ago na?

Goga : I feel like hungry, when I'm tensed. Let me eat.

Goga was about to dump the banana scale outside but Billu stopped him.

Billu : Don't Goga, Dump it in dust bean when we reach at our destination. Now, keep it to yourself. It's very uncivilized.

Cab driver : Right vaiyajee...aaj kal logon main aise samajh kahan? Pata hain ek banana scale se kitna bara accident ho sakta hain...isme phisalke...

Jasmine : Haan, haan,vaiyaa..isiliy toh mana kiya hain...(to goga) Chup baitho..

Goga couldn't understand why everyone actually stopped him from doing this, he sat helplessly with banana scale in one hand and baby's bag in another.

My small sleep disturbed with the sound of car engine and I found myself on that lady's lap. They were going somewhere. I've nothing to do now so I started looking around, when I heard that banana argument. I looked at Goga and his hand holding that banana scale. It looks not very much impressive, but may be an effective weapon, if I could use it properly. I tried to took it from his hand, but couldn't make it. Suddenly the car jerked a bit and I succeeded hold it and pulled it into my hands.

Goga was a little annoyed to hold that banana scale so when Addu held it, he let that baby to take it.

Jasmine : (in annoyed tone) Why you gave that dirty scale to this baby?

Goga : he took it, I didn't give him...

Jasmine : This baby is of 3 months, it can't do anything by itself...

Goga : Ok...ok...garam matt ho ,I'm taking it back.

Goga tried to take back that scale from Addu. But he started screaming loudly. & that scream was so loud that the cab driver stopped the cab immediately.

Cab Driver : What happened?

Goga : (Removed his hand from the scale & grinned) Nothing.

So Addu held that scale tightly, he'll use it in any crucial moment.

*************

The cab dropped them near a small lodge. Billu hurriedly booked two rooms in third floor, one for him and another for a family (for Jasmine and Goga with Addu). Jasmine was first to move to the staircase with Addu, then Goga and then Billu followed them.

Addu was watching the whole situation over Jasmine's shoulder. When they were climbing the stairs, Addu found his perfect moment, he dropped the banana scale right near Goga's feet.

Then it happened!! The centuries awesomest moment!! And it gave Addu immense pleasure. He was not this happy after peeing on that Maasi or making grounded that Moti Aunty.

Genrally it's terrible when people slip on banana scale in level ground, but when it happens in steep staircase, the intensity increases thousand folds. When Goga stepped on that banana scale, he slipped and fell on the stairs, he immediately lose one of his frontal tooth. The bags he was holding fled in the air and he started rolling down; he hit Billu who was right behind him and both started rolling downward. Within a minute, they reached to the receptionist's cubicle at ground floor.

I was sitting straight in Jasmines arms and listening to their scream, I still couldn't believe that one banana scale can do such catastrophe.

That accident occurred near third floor, & both Goga and Billu's luck was so good that haring their scream one lodge staff shut the collapsible gate of the lodge, or else they were in the road outside the lodge and some car might run over them.

All lodge staffs and boards mobbed around them to see what happened, even Jasmine came down to see them. Goga and Billu managed to sit up after a great effort. Their facial features had almost changed. Goga spitted when a tooth came out with blood. Billu had a potato on his forehead that blocked his left eye view. He couldn't even move his right hand. Goga tried to stand up but couldn't, his ankle was sprained.

I was having a big time to control my giggle seeing them in that state. It was too funny. I was feeling proud of myself.

Lodge manager : I didn't saw this type of scene in my life!! One slip and two men came directly down to ground floor from 3rd!!

Jasmine : (in heated tone) how two adult could slip like this!! Get up you morons!!

Goga : (shooting fireballs to Addu) this devil did it. I saw it dropping that scale willingly under my feet...I swear I'll kill it now...

Jasmine : Shut it, Goga !! A three month old doesn't have any motor co-ordination. They can't do anything willingly...

Goga : Moto co-ordination!! My Foot!! I can bet this Imp has Tank and Jet co-ordination along with Motor one. I'll tear it's head up...

Addu started crying loudly looking at Goga's angry face. He was hoping somebody raise a finger at them.

Lodge manager : Isn't it's your baby, sir? How can anyone speak about killing such a cute baby!!

Goga and Billu was fumbling with words, while Jasmine came to rescue them.

Jasmine : No, no he's not going to kill our baby. Just saying so...you know he's angry now...(smiled and patted Addu) no baby, he's not gonna touch you. If he even try so, I'll see him (glared at Goga).

Lodge manager : It's not fare to speak such evil words for a baby.

Jasmine : (to her partners) Can you get up or need help?

Both tried but failed.

Lodge manager : (to staffs) Help these Sirs to their room.

Two men picked Billu up on their shoulders and three picked up Goga. After then minutes, when they reach their room, no energy was existed in them.

**************

At ETF conference room.

All were waiting for kidnapper's call. Roshni was sobbing while liza and Saakshi as trying to console her. Sameer was moving his gaze helplessly to Arjun and Roshni.

Chotu's phone buzzed, he picked and listened to the caller.

Chotu : Sir, your security guard gained conscious. I'm going to ask him..

Sameer gestured him to go.

Arjun : Shree, main gate ki CCTV footage...

Shree : Sir, that white Nano stopped near your gate, I've informed traffic about it. Though number plate is not visible, but we'll find something soon...

Arjun : Hmm...

Rathod : Sakshi? Where's Aisha?

Sakshi : Analyzing those evidences found from Arjun's place. She took Ri also..

Rathod : Ok. Bass ek baar haath aa jaye...unki jaan na nikal li toh mera naam Sameer Daam Singh Rathod nahi..

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Uff...this little devil was too much...now,guys, I did my bit. It's your turn now. Don't leave this page before leaving your feedback or else...this time Addu will do evreything...& I'm not taking his responsibility...SYS.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful dear
Amazing Addu mind blowing yaar 👏👏
kya band bajayi hai tumne too good
beta kiska hai 😆😉 poor goga n jaismine
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Addu started taking his revenge...🤣🤣🤣
Poor Goga-Billu...
Continue sooon ...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
band baja di sabka
ab bones multiply hogi aur teeth ka division
loved it Addu
kya idea hai boss
hey why dont you give a face for our 3 new comers
it will funny to think their situation then
continue soon

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