Love Story ~ KriYaansh OS

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"Wow Rey this is such a beautiful place" Kriya screamed in joy. It was a beach at the out skirts of Mumbai "really Kriya u liked it...?" Rey asked her in amazed. "I didn't like it I loved it Rey by the why which place is this...?" Rey look at her Kriya was enjoying the beauty with her sweet eyes. Kriya suddenly looked at Rey and saw him staring at her. She raised her eye brow as if asking what..?? Rey just smiled and moved his head in negation. "Rey ye konsi jaaga hai...?" Kriya again asked him this time looking at him. "This is my favorite place Kriya jab bhi me sad hota ho ya bohot khush hota ho toh me idhar aata ho" Kriya was listening to Rey patiently Rey continued "aaj tak mene idhar kisko bhi nhi leeke aaya ho u r the first one Kriya" Rey said this looking straight in Kriya eyes.


"But Rey hum idhar kyu aaye hai...?" Kriya asked very innocently. "Kyuki aaj mujhe meri life ka sabse wonderful moment hai so hum idhar aaye hai" Rey said with a smile making Kriya confused "huh...?" was all that Kriya said looking cutely confused at Rey. Aww Rey so loved her face right now.

"Kriya its being a year we both are staying together in the same house. I now before u shifting to my house we both promised each other that we will live as friends and u will pay rent for staying with me. But seriously Kriya I don't know when this friend thing changed into love I seriously don't know. Kriya I can't say anything else expect that I LOVE U KRIYA I REALLY DO" Rey said very thing in a go holding Kriya hand in his Kriya and Rey lived together. Kriya was the paying guest of Rey and Rey's friend also. Rey waited for Kriya's answer. Kriya looked at him and smiled "god Rey I thought u will never ever say it gosh I LOVE U TOO Rey" Kriya said this and instantly Rey pulled them in hug.

Rey cupped kriya's face "kriya u really love me...?" he asked innocently too which Kriya just nodded in yes. Rey inched forward to capture those rosy petals in his. But Kriya moved backed puzzling Rey. "Rey m sorry but m still not ready for it" Kriya said sweetly. Rey smiled "no problem Kriya" saying this he kissed her cheeks.

Rey remember their confession sitting on the same beach were they confessed their feeling for each other for first time.

"REY SHE IS USING U"

The words of his best friend Sharon again ranged in his head. Making his head spin. "Why did she do this to me.?? Why only for money..?? If she wants money only then she should have told me I must have given her happily but she played with my feeling. Why kriya..?? Why...?" Rey said this and a drop of tear rolled down from his cheeks. "NO I need answer for all my question. U need to answer me kriya u need to."

Saying this Rey got up and drove back to house. Rey directly entered kriya's room without knocking. Kriya was combing her hair. Rey was very angry kriya turned around to see who came. "Rey bad manners don't u know u should knock the door before entering...?" kriya said smiling at him. Expect of answering her he questioned her "why kriya why did u do this to me...?" Rey said with his anger visible in his eyes making kriya confusing and frighten due to his anger. "Rey what are u talking about...?" kriya asked him in sweet tone. "Don't act to be over smart kriya. Tumhe pata hai me tumhe kya pooch raha ho" Rey shouted at her in top of his voice. "Rey I seriously don't know what are u talking about...?"

Rey now lost his tempered and told her tightly through her shoulder and asked her "why kriya why..?? Why the hell did u used me..?? Why...?" saying this he pushed kriya back. Kriya somehow managed her balance and looked at Rey in shocked worried and nervous face. She was shocked to know that he got to know the truth of her being here. Worried for reys reaction and nervous as she somewhere will faking the relation she really started to like him and now she love him but the truth is out which today she was going to say him. But he got t know it from out.

Kriya and Rey both had tears welling up in their eyes. Kriya moved ahead and by placing her hand on reys shoulder she spoke "Rey" but Rey shrugged her hand. By this a tear rolled down from kriya eyes. Kriya closed her eyes tightly and took a deep breath and open her eyes and said "Rey ye sach hai" as soon as kriya said this Rey closed his eyes and allowed the tear to follow down. Kriya continued "haan Rey ye sach hai ki mene aapko use kiya haan me aapke saat ye relationship fake kar rahi thi only for money. But Rey trust me jab me ne aapke saat rehna start kiya tab me kidhar toh aapko like karne lagi thi. Rey ye sach me aaj 31 December ko aapko baatane wali thi kyu ki me aur ye jhoot ka bojh leke nhi rehe pati and sach ye bhi hai Rey ki me apse saach me pyaar karne lagyi thi Rey I ..." kriya sentence felt in complete as Rey pulled her in a furious kiss.

Rey kissed her showing her all the anger which was in him and the hurt which was caused by her truth. Initially Kriya was shocked by this sudden action of Rey and stiffened her body. But after sometime Kriya loss her body and reciprocated the kiss. This was Rey and Kriya There 1st kiss ever after they got in relationship. Rey broke the kiss due to lack of oxygen but dint left the contact with Kriya's face. Kriya was finding it difficult to stand on her own leg so she clutched Rey's shirt for her balance. Rey was kissing her furiously showing her all his anger on face they on nape and also giving her love bites and in return earning Kriya's moaned.

Due to Kriya's moaned Rey came backed to his sense. And moved back from Kriya in anger Rey started to moved out but Kriya hold his wrist at stopped him turned him around and kissed him till eternity. Rey too kissed her back. Both of them were having tears in their eyes. When they broke apart a small pearl of tear trickle down from Rey and kriya's eyes. "I love u Rey" kriya said and hug him tightly but Rey didn't hug her so kriya broke it and looked at Rey. "How can I believe that u are saying truth this time kriya..?? Me already ek baar tumse dhoka kha chukka ho aur ek baar nhi kha sakta" Rey said this looking straight into her eyes. "Rey me saach kehe rahi ho saach me Rey I really started for falling u and mujhe pata bhi nhi chal ki wo like love me kab change hogya I really love u Rey I really love u" kriya said looking into reys eyes. Rey could see the really love for him in her eyes and also the guilt of using him at first place.

"I love u Rey" kriya said and a tiny pearl of tear trickle down. And instant rey hug her and said "I love u too kriya" and kissed her this time gently but passionately and discovered new level for their relationship.


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So here it ends
Hope u guyzz liked it..
Do leave ur reviews nd do hit like tab.
Arya dii here finally me aapne diya hua OS likh diya
Madhu, neha, nikki, sims tum chaaro bhi khush hojao mene atlast kuch toh likha..😛
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Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres...

hayeee... pehle to Thank uh.. Thank uh... Thank uh soo much... <3

tumne mere liye... Awww...

Vaise coming to OS...

It was sweet... simple Loveable...

hayeee... Pyaar ka superb izzharrr..

Loved it... thank uh...
Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazinggg sweet os Abhi😃
i luv it<3
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reswaaa...
Unres god knows kab karungiii...
4th January ko Res..
N aaj 22th april ko Unres..🤣🤣
Ok... I realy liked d story..
Phle KR ka cutee confession..
Den kriya using Rey n den gradually falling for him.. Rey ko sach pata lagna..
Den facing d truth..
N again confession.. Woowww..
Superb yaar..
Me loved it...
Edited by Madhu_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i like your tag line .. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Way too different...kriya used him, bt thank god time pe realize kr lia...rey ka gussa..fadu...mast tha yar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res!!!
chod nahi kar rahi res...
direct unres!!!
the update hayeee it was awesome!!!!
the confession!!! Mast...
jab kria rey se questioning abt the place...
I was expecting rey bolega mereko bhi nahi malum ye kaunsi,place hai...
and the confession haayyyeee mar jawan!!! Itna sweet!!!
and den kria used? Par kria be truth bola happy!!!
and kiss hayyeee kitna kiss!!!
but loved the kiss!!!!
they were sooo sweeet!!!!
loved it!!! <3
and yipppeee finally tune likha!!!
and dekh meinne comment Kia!!! Thank u mat bol!! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I so hate this word.. used...

But anyways its good to know the truth revealing...

I like the end ka kiss..

their first kiss..

how they confessed.. confront...

amazingly put up..

good job Abhi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was awesome and sweet os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sweet And Simple One !!!!
Great Work !!

Loved it !!!

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