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Posted: 11 years ago
too long and little boring 😲 😲 ? dont you dare say that 😡
it superb and amazing 👍🏼 👏
and i just love long update 😃
Addu got his baby friends.
the baby activities were so soo sooo cute.
"Arjun : Don't tell me you want me to chase criminals having a baby on my backpack." 😲 🤣 🤣
i was trying to imagine the scene 😆
but seriously... i would like to see Baby Rawte's mischievous activities in etf office 😃
excellent writing.waiting for more 😳
Edited by shreya09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved this update...

no wonder addu is reckless..her mom is another like him...and dad..uske bare mein alag se kiya kahu?

addu spending time at mom's office...omg 10 babies together...addu loves them...great...

continue soon...thansk for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
too long? I was looking asif khatam ho gaya?? oh no...
bacha party mashallah bohot khoob chal raha hai
kya kya karthe hai yaar ye log
wish to see Addu in ETF too.
continue soon aat...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...
oye hoye my kaddu ladu enjoy attention !!
well to see kids or say infants activities must watch scenes lol...
loved it..
ps. uff my eyes paining itna lamba update lol..
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for late comment was busy
read all updates loved addu's day out of shopping with mom and masi's 😃
all ladies asking addu for his opinion then chotu coming for his rescue
next addu going to office with mom and enjoying with rest of the kids
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 12 :

A dark room in a corner of a slum. The room is dirty and messy, a small light is on which seemed increasing the darkness instead of enlighten the place.

Two men was sitting around a small table, playing cards and drinking some cheap alcohol. From their physique and appearances, a two year old can say that they are criminals.

Fisrt one was Goga, a thief, but he says himself a master of burglary. He is an expart of locks, in the crime world of Mumbai, it is said locks dance on Goga's tune.

And second one is Billu, a well-known criminal. He does anything on contract, extortion, kidnapping, robbery anything. He only cared about the money, not the type of work.

Goga : Why you called me here? It's been two hours we're playing this silly card game and it's the 50th time I'm asking you, but you are sitting with a sealed mouth.

Billu : Hava patience, Goga. In our works, patience is a great virtue. So keep practicing on it.

Goga : Patience my a**.

Billu : Language, Goga. I hate bad words. I know our work is dirty, but there's no logic to worsen our tongues.

Gogai : F*** that tongue.

Billu: Goga, another foul word and you're out of this contract.

Goga : But what's the contract actually?

Billu : Let our third partner come, I'll tell you.

Goga was about to ask about the third partner, but a soft knock grabbed his attention.

Goga : K..k...k...kaun?

Voice : Teri Maa. Open the door.

Billu opened the door and a girl came in.

Goga was looking at the girl, there was nothing girly in her. Hair tucked in a big woolen cap, black geans and red check shirt, three buttons open. A black turtleneck shirt was visible from the open buttons of the shirt. She must be beautiful once, but her crimes left a reflection on her face, she doesn't look good at all.

She took the third chair of the room.

Girl : Kaam ki baat karo, mere paas time nahi hain.

Billu gestured Goga to take a seat and sat down on his chair. The girl lit an cigar and started smoking, keeping her legs on the table.

Billu : Jasmine, we are here to talk about a contract, would you please concentrate?

Jasmine : ( she sucked her cigar)I'm doing so Billu, start.

Goga : Women shouldn't smoke, it looks bad.

Jasmine : Utter another word about women, & I'll burn your lips with this ciger.

Goga : Maine galat kya bola? Auratein smoking karte acchi lagli hain kya?

Jasmine : Toh tujhe kya laagta hain, aurton ka eklauta kaam hain acchi dikhna?

Billu: stop it. Kaam ke beech main jhagro matt!!

Goga sniffed & Jasmine adjusted her legs on the table.

Billu : (Caughed to clean his throat) ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte, 2nd in command ETF. No. one problem of our business. Mumbai crime world is under threat because of him.

Goga : Yeh sab hume pata hain. Last month I survived at the nick of the time, or else I would be in jail today.

Jasmine : Saale ne meri dhandhe ka vi almost band baza dia, I lost my best men last week. But uss manhoos ka naam yahan kyun le rahe ho?

Billu : He's our contract...

Jasmine : (jumped on her chair) Don't tell me we're gonna kill him.

Billu: Not actually, we're gonna teach him a lesson. This time he troubled my client and he wants us to make him pay for it. Not only him, but also ETF.

Goga : For that we have to hit on their weak point.

Billu : Good Goga.kavi kavi tumhaari moti dimaag se kaam ki baat nikal hi jaata hain...

Jasmine : But generally this type of people have no weak point, I know what you want to say, but their family or friends are equally stubborn like them. Woh kya hain? haan, duty comes first...they are always ready for any type of sacrifices...

Goga : Aur pura team ko sabak sikhan keliye hume sab ki ghar se ek ek ko uthana parega...itna saara logon ko kais manager karnge?

Billu: pehle meri baat pura suno, phir kuch bolo, plan is prepared by our client, & he'll monitor everything. According to him, ETF have one weak point, which is Arjun's weakest point also. We're going to hit that.

Jasmine : Can I ask what is that new weakest point? Of ACP Arjun!! This man has no weak point...he only cares for his so called duty...

Billu : Jasmine, tum duniya ki koi khabar rakhti ho ya nahi? Arjun has a wife...

Jasmine : Toh? Hum usko biwi ko uthayng, who hum sabko utha denge...aur biwi ka kya, dusri shadi karga toh naya aa jayga, big deal!! Aur iski biwi ko uthane se pure tam ko pharak kyun pardne lagi?

Billu : I told you Jasmine, don't interrupt...

Goga : Aurat logon ka yhi toh problem hain...

Jasmine : Kya?

Billu : Arre, baat suno mera... baad main lardai karna..,,haan ..toh kahan tha main...

Goga : Arjun ki biwi...

Billu : Haan, toh uski biwi ne ek baby ko janam dia...

Goga : Marr gaye...aab hamari khandaan hi khatre main parr gayee..

Billu: (ignoring Goga) hum uss baby ko uthaynge.. aur humari client ki bataya gaye ransom mangenge...

Jasmine : Accha? Itna aasan? What do you think? Tum uska baby uthaoge aur kuch vi demand karoge toh ACP Arjun Rawte khushi khui tumhe woh de dega?

Billu : Haan, kyun kii uss 3 month old baby main sirf Arjun nahi, puri ETF ka jaan basta hain. They regularly visit Arjun's place to see that baby. They can do anything for that child. Koi aur kuch kare ya na kare ek baap ke emotions ke aage ACP Arjun jhukega Zaroor.

Goga : Baby ke umar kya baataya?

Billu : 3 months...

Goga : Kuch aur plan karo Billu Vai, yeh baby nahi...

Jasmine : Kyun, baby hi toh aasan pacage hain...

Goga : Nahi hain, ek chota baby 10 adult kii barabar hota hain, bare log samajhdaar hota hain, do dhamki se chup chap kisi kone main baitha rahga, but itna chota bacby kuch nahi samajhta, usko hum samhaal nahi payenge. Mere ustaad hamsha mujhse kaha hain, "Kuch bi karo, but 5 years' se chote bacche aur bewkoof insaan se kavi deal matt karna, they're unpredictable, Kuch na kuch garbard zaroor karga."

Billu : 3 month ka baby, jo hardly aapni haath, payer hilata hain, kya garbar karga be?? Itna chota baby sirf teen kaam karta hain, khana, sona aur..

Goga : Aur?

Billu : Wahi, jo tum toilet main karte ho...

Goga : (confused) main toilet main kya karta hoon?

Billu : Yeh vi main bataun?

Jasmine : Arre yaar, kaam kii baat karo, aag kya karna? Iss bacche ko uthayeng kaise?

Billu : Mere paas jo information hain uss hisaab se, dono pati patni subha 8 baze nikal jat hain. Aur yeh baby ek lady ke paas rehta hain. Hum ghar main ghusenge, uss aurat ko do lagayng aur baby ke saath bahar aa jayeng. Filhaal woh aurat yahan nahi hain, toh baby maa ke sath office jata hain. Toh hum uss lady ki aan tak ka wait karnge...

Jasmine : Who lady kab aaynge...pata hain? Nahi toh aisa na ho ke hum wait karte reh jaye...

Goga : Toh kya kare, subha subha darwaja torke andar jayee aur baby ko utha laye...

Billu : Paagal ho? Uss ghar kis ka pata hain? Sidhe sher ki haat lag jaoge..

Jasmine : Toh kya kare?

Billu : Generally ACP pehle nikalta hain, uski 15 min baad uski biwi..toh we have 15 minute to attack her.

Goga : Haan usko maarke, baby ko leke aa jaynge...

Billu : No, Goga, no killing. Maar daalenge toh bekar ka musibat khari ho jaygi...just sarr pe gun rakhke daraoge aur washroom main le jake bandh karr denge. Phir baby ko leke yaha aa jayenge.

Jasmine : Bass aa jaynge...koi dekh lega toh?

Billu : Toh kya ? kuch nahi. A baby in a mother's lap is the most innocent scene in the world. You'll walk normally with the baby in your arms. Nobody gonna doubt you. And Rawte's house is a single villa, so nobody gonna see us at that hour, uss waqt log sab aapne aapne kaam main busy hota hain.

Jasmine : & the escape plan?

Billu : I'll be ready with the car. You'll act like the baby's mother & Goga will do the father. I'll be your driver.

Goga : Billu vai, aap dikhne main zyada acch ho, baap ke roll aap karlo na?

Billu : Nop. The car is the most important part of our plan, if we can't escape properly, it'll destroy everything. So, I'll take that responsibility. Yeh main kisi aur ko nahi dee sakta...

Goga : (Grumbled) Matlab agar koi problem hui toh tum aasani se hum dono ko wahan chorke vaag sakte ho...

Billu : Goga!! If you can't trust your partner, then quit this business. This business is all about mutual co-operation and trust. This is about...

Jasmine : (barked) Yeh sab nautanki chorke thik se plan bataoge, ya main chali jaaaun?... (both became silent) Ok, Goga & I will go inside, threat the women and pick the baby up, is it?

Billu : Haan.

Jasmine : You'll stay in the car?

Billu : Haan.

Jasmine : We won't leave any ransom note?

Billu: No.

Jasmine : We'll call from here?

Billu : Yes.

Jasmine : Ok, let's go in the details... How we'll be ornamented during action? Any dress code?

Billu : You'll carry your guns. A cell phone and decent dresses.

Goga : (in low voice) Decent mans Suit?

Billu : Nahi, no suit. Format shirt and geans for you & Sharee for Jasmine.

Jasmine : Sharee? If we have to run?

Billu : Then you should run.

Jasmine : In sharee !!! Tum aaj tak kisi ko sharee main daurte dekha hain?

Billu : No, I didn't. But if we have to kidnap a baby in daylight, we must make it rational. Costume is important there. It's not just a ruckus, not an ordinary kidnapping, it's bigger than that. It's an art!!

Goga : (sniffed) ART !!

Billu : Yes, Art. We have to rehearse it before executing, like people do for drama or film. We have to remember there's no place of mistake. It would be a perfect masterpiece, It would be a perfect crime, remember we're dealing with the best crime investigation team of the country, so we should be extra careful..

Jasmine dropped her cigar, smacked it under her heels and looked at Billu with disgust.

Jasmine : (in annoyed tone) Billu, you talk too much.

Billu looked at her, shocked.

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First update of this year of PR without Addu. let me know how it was.

Happy new year guys.

Edited by Shamsad1607 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
these Idiots are Planning Addu's kidnapping🤣🤣
Waiting to see what Addu will do to them🤪
They forgot "Sher ka bacha bhi sher hatoe hain, chota ho ya bara"
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg they are planning to kidnap addu
dekhte hain how they handle addu
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
now that is something to look ahead
Addu ke kidnap??
wrong move dear goons.
I wish that they actually kidnap him. thab ayega maza.
bechara... sab apne hi pav pe gulati mar raha hai!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Addu Kidnapping plan 😲 😆
Addu will teach them a very good lesson... in his own way 😃
looking forward for the Addu action special part
lovely writing 👍🏼

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