Swaron FF: Love or Freedom #2 *thrd 3 link posted* - Page 63

Originally posted by: kriti094

U expressed swayam's confusion very well
n d way sharon told abt her love to sam was so pure
i love d sharon n bm convo
N i also love dis caring n matured swayam
but why u had to end it at this point
plz updt soon

Originally posted by: -Chaitra-

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i liked the way swayam controlled his anger for the sake of his mom...and he didnt directly reject sharon this time😳but he's still confused😕not fair...😒

poor sharon was so hurt but still she wants swayam to be happy more than anything else

she's chooo chweet in this ff😛

and sam cares so much for his best friend😳love him for dat...

par end mein cliffhanger hi dena tha kya?😡😡

ab jaldi se next part post karo warna😈

Originally posted by: nidhi1998

awesome update

sorry i did not comment till now

but will make sure to read and comment at

every update

but coming to this update

i suddenly wish to have

a bff like sam. his protective nature has

impressed me.

sharon's selfless character

reflects her love for swayam

i hope he agrees soon

or wait

what about ganga

you kept on saying she

will unite swaron

i'm waiting for her

and the ending

why a cliffhanger

why? now i'm going to get all

tensed about whats going to happen next

update soon

nidhi

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

amazing update...loved it...😃

sharon and swayamemotionswere nicely described..

swayam confused about his feelings...hope herealizessoon dat sharon is made for him...😳

update soon dear..waiting for next part now..

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

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Yipeee you updated this FF and what an update you blew my mind with this how many times do I repeat this I Dunno but you're bloody awesome at writing and you know that right??😊.
The shocking moment when Swayam instead of removing his pent up frustration asked for time to think over his mother's proposal..😃. The caring Swayam who does value others emotions and I loved seeing this side.. This new caring Swayam gets a thumbs up..👍🏼. Then his monologue and the fight raging inside of him where he wants to share everything about Ganga to Sharon but fears that if he rejects her he may lose her again.. That entire section was penned down beautifully by you..❤️.
Then the convo between BM and Sharon and then the bonding which you showed between Sam and Sharon was shown beautifully by you..😊. I liked the care and love Sam holds for Sharon but yet again tujhe bina cliffhanger ke end na kare tujhe shaanti prapt nai hoti na angel.. Tadpana bada zaroori hai...
Abhi jaldi jaldi update karo next part I think Swayam heard Sharon and I wanna know his reactions..😊.
Update the next part soon 'kay..
Love,
Kashi..🤗

Originally posted by: -Raj-

beautifully penned!!

Shar BM convo rocked!!

you write tremendously well girl!!

amazing chapter!

sharon's dillemma was splendid !

ty for the pm.😊

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

Wow!! Wow!! Wow!!!

You know you are an Awesome writer right?!

I mean it!

Just loved the way Sharon's emotions flowed throughout the update..

Let it be with BM or with Sam 👍🏼

Swayam's confused state was confusing me too.. So there you just nailed it 😉

Sharon is crazily, madly, immensely in Love with Swayam!

I hope Swayam realises it too..🤔

You know from the time I started reading This FF I was wondering that why have you named it Love or Freedom and I guess I'm slowly getting my answer 😉

Outstanding update and yes not to forget a Master of Cliffhangers that you are.. Here comes another one..

Can't wait to read ahead so please, please, please Update soon...

P.S Thanks for the PM 😃

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

amazingg update !!!

i luved how you picked two main areas in tis update

first the confused swayam wat he wants from lyf wat are his feelings for sharon n if he feels more for her

then y do he feel for ganga

the way yu made him question his own thoughts

was very well penned

coming to another subject sharon the way you projected her feelings was phenomenal

another thing which i liked in tis update is sharon n sam's bond

it was very well penned

n the most cruel thing to do was to end the sequence at tis stage

yeh tune kya kiya buddy still i m eagerly waitin for ur next update

do update soon 🤗