Swaron FF: Love or Freedom #2 *thrd 3 link posted* - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti094

U expressed swayam's confusion very well
n d way sharon told abt her love to sam was so pure
i love d sharon n bm convo
N i also love dis caring n matured swayam
but why u had to end it at this point
plz updt soon


Thank u dear
I m glad u like sharons confession
N mature swayam
Because i wanted to 😆
Will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chaitra-

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i liked the way swayam controlled his anger for the sake of his mom...and he didnt directly reject sharon this time😳but he's still confused😕not fair...😒
poor sharon was so hurt but still she wants swayam to be happy more than anything else
she's chooo chweet in this ff😛
and sam cares so much for his best friend😳love him for dat...
par end mein cliffhanger hi dena tha kya?😡😡
ab jaldi se next part post karo warna😈


Yup this time swayam is considerate for both his mom n BFF
She is sweet n poor :(
True sam cares for her a lot
Cliffhanger k bina maza thodi na ata hai 😆
Yes maam will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nidhi1998

awesome update

sorry i did not comment till now
but will make sure to read and comment at
every update

but coming to this update
i suddenly wish to have
a bff like sam. his protective nature has
impressed me.
sharon's selfless character
reflects her love for swayam
i hope he agrees soon
or wait
what about ganga
you kept on saying she
will unite swaron
i'm waiting for her

and the ending
why a cliffhanger
why? now i'm going to get all
tensed about whats going to happen next
update soon

nidhi


Thanks dear
N its ok
Yeah plz try to comment regularly
Lol yeah who doesnt want a bff like him
N dont worry ganga will bring them together in the end :)
Lol cliffhanger k bina maza thodi na ata hai 😆
Dont worry will update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

amazing update...loved it...😃


sharon and swayamemotionswere nicely described..

swayam confused about his feelings...hope herealizessoon dat sharon is made for him...😳

update soon dear..waiting for next part now..


Thank you so much dear
Hope so
Will update soon dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

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Yipeee you updated this FF and what an update you blew my mind with this how many times do I repeat this I Dunno but you're bloody awesome at writing and you know that right??😊.
The shocking moment when Swayam instead of removing his pent up frustration asked for time to think over his mother's proposal..😃. The caring Swayam who does value others emotions and I loved seeing this side.. This new caring Swayam gets a thumbs up..👍🏼. Then his monologue and the fight raging inside of him where he wants to share everything about Ganga to Sharon but fears that if he rejects her he may lose her again.. That entire section was penned down beautifully by you..❤️.
Then the convo between BM and Sharon and then the bonding which you showed between Sam and Sharon was shown beautifully by you..😊. I liked the care and love Sam holds for Sharon but yet again tujhe bina cliffhanger ke end na kare tujhe shaanti prapt nai hoti na angel.. Tadpana bada zaroori hai...
Abhi jaldi jaldi update karo next part I think Swayam heard Sharon and I wanna know his reactions..😊.
Update the next part soon 'kay..
Love,
Kashi..🤗

awe thanks a lot kashi and yes i know 😳
lol i didnt know i portrayed a mature n caring swayam until i read the comments 😆
i glad u liked it
phew i thought everyone will b mad at Sam for his convo
but glad they arent n u r not either 😃
bina cliffhanger k maza nahi ata 🤣 aur ur "headline" joke b toh yaad ata hai 😆
about swayam heard well may be may be not [:p]
will update soon 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Raj-

beautifully penned!!

Shar BM convo rocked!!
you write tremendously well girl!!
amazing chapter!
sharon's dillemma was splendid !
ty for the pm.😊

thanks a lot dear
awe i m glad u like my writing style 😳
u r most welcome
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

Wow!! Wow!! Wow!!!

You know you are an Awesome writer right?!
I mean it!
Just loved the way Sharon's emotions flowed throughout the update..
Let it be with BM or with Sam 👍🏼
Swayam's confused state was confusing me too.. So there you just nailed it 😉
Sharon is crazily, madly, immensely in Love with Swayam!
I hope Swayam realises it too..🤔
You know from the time I started reading This FF I was wondering that why have you named it Love or Freedom and I guess I'm slowly getting my answer 😉
Outstanding update and yes not to forget a Master of Cliffhangers that you are.. Here comes another one..
Can't wait to read ahead so please, please, please Update soon...


P.S Thanks for the PM 😃


awe thanks a lot
it really means a lot to me ❤️
yeah i never showed her emotions a lot so this time i showed it alll 😆
i m glad u liked his confusion
hope so
i m glad u r getting the point behind that name 😉
hehhehehehe lol i didnt know i was master of cliffhangers 🤣 thanks though
will update soon dear
and u r most welcome
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

amazingg update !!!

i luved how you picked two main areas in tis update
first the confused swayam wat he wants from lyf wat are his feelings for sharon n if he feels more for her
then y do he feel for ganga
the way yu made him question his own thoughts
was very well penned
coming to another subject sharon the way you projected her feelings was phenomenal
another thing which i liked in tis update is sharon n sam's bond
it was very well penned
n the most cruel thing to do was to end the sequence at tis stage
yeh tune kya kiya buddy still i m eagerly waitin for ur next update
do update soon 🤗


thank u dear
i m glad u liked both Swayam's confusion and sharon's feeling
yaay u liked their bond
hehehhehehe i know i m cruel 😛 😆
lol yeah yeah mei nein kya kiya 🤣
aage aage dekho hota hai kya
will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
tasha, it was a mind blowing update
loved sharon and bm
and pls do update soon

PS sorry 4 late comment and short comment
bz these days

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